Really? I felt like that particular post was a bit flat, mainly because for the majority of it I was just repeating what had happened while adding Aldric's thoughts.

@Lionheart I was looking more toward structure than content- your sentences varied. A lot of people on this site tend to lean heavily on run-on sentences because they want to say so much. Varied sentences provide the pauses for the reader to take in a lot of info in small bites- meaning faster reading and an easier understanding of what you want to get across. And for that my brain thanks you xD

@Lionheart Loved the Aldric and Alixanna back story you put in your post!

@Snarl I'm having tons of fun with this rp too. I'm pretty new to this site and every other rp I have applied for hasn't ever seemed to get started. I was honestly starting to lose hope. But this one seems to be going well! :D

I think it's about time for Alixanna to go back to the clinic and have an interaction with Atlas. I was wondering if you were still going to be able to play him? I really like your portrayal of the other parents, and I was hoping to see what you could do with the doctor. I understand if you have too many character and can't do it, I was just checking.

Also, in your post Gareth calls my character 'Ali' when he's thinking about her, or something like that. I actually loved that, because I was thinking her dad might call her 'Ali' or Ali-girl', and that the mayor used it too shows how close he is with Atlas and his family. I don't know if you used that pet name on purpose or not, but I thought it was neat.

This roleplay is awesome.

I like Aldric's opinion on Varric. It makes sense that Aldric, the more responsible, protective, "big brother-ish" sort, would have a problem with the assholr charismatic prankster. Plus I like the begrudging respect for his magical ability.

@Narcotic Dollie I'm so glad you're enjoying it too!

And about Atlas- I can still totally roleplay him, there's no problem there c: About the pet-name, also, it was to show how close the mayor was to the Ashgrave family and I'm glad you caught on/are okay with it. I really like the sound of Atlas calling Alixanna his "Ali-girl" too!

So once others get their replies in I'll post as Atlas c:

Alright I've written out the action portion of the plot- I want you guys to approve of it and add any little details or changes that you'd like to see.

People have been mysteriously disappearing from the Vale these past few months. Only to return a few days after their disappearance- with no recollection of what happened. These same people have reportedly had horrible night terrors ever since- dreams they cannot recollect when they wake. The supposed perpetrators of these kidnappings are the bandit group known as the Splitscars.

However- no one has ever seen a Splitscar enter the Vale and physically kidnap anyone. So it is rumored that someone in Vale is working for the Scars. What will the heroes do to stop this evil and protect their home, the people they love, and ultimately themselves?

This plot line will began just before the flowers bloom- when one of the heroes is kidnapped.

What do you guys think?

That sounds really cool actually. I would totally be down for that.

@Snarl

I love it. :D

I'm curious as to who gets kidnapped. :p Can't wait.

Nice glad you like it guys c:

@ViolentViolet Not to be that guy- but could you post today? Tomorrow morning, even. I just want to move on with Ezra.

@Snarl

That looks awesome!! I'm also super excited to see who gets kidnapped. This RP has come to be my favorite! I love the plot and the people involved in it too. You guys are the best :)))

I'm working on a post for another RP right now but I'll post on here right after I finish that.

@Snarl
I'll try my best for tonight but I can't promise anything right now because I don't know when I'm going to get home from work.

Everyone is awful quiet tonight!

I've been hella busy cuz I'm doing a going away party before I go to Oregon.

Baking cookies from scratch is hard

True, baking cookies from scratch is hard, but now you get to eat cookie dough, so...worth it!

All is good when cookie dough is involved- no worries @Adorabadass, enjoy them xD

I'm not too worried about one day of inactivity- everyones been fairly active given that half of us are in our final days of school/ are graduating- and from what some of you let on it seems like other important things are going on as well. Honestly I'm impressed with the level of activity up to this point.

That being said- I finished the @Narcotic Dollie Doctors portion of my reply. And I'll post it once Lionheart or ViolentViolet reply, so I can reply to one of them as well. I'm trying not to machine gun the rp and give everyone a chance to keep up while they're busy/away.

Did anyone else experience difficulties with the guild a little bit ago? It kept saying 'service error'.

I'm still having that error on and off again. @BlueAjah Glad it wasn't just me!

@Snarl Understandable, I need to let a few more people post before I go again as well. :)

@Narcotic Dollie Yeah, it keeps happening! Urg :(

@Snarl Maybe we should start that action part soonish, just to make sure everyone stays interested.

Yeah I was planning on having it start the night of the first day in game? I'm thinking of having some sort of time skip.