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I feel like I'm 24, and that there are people I've role-played with on this site that never had to rewind a VHS tape.

so old...
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I've not only had to rewind a VHS tape, but I had one of those shitty clip-tunes keychain things in first grade. We can start an almost-middle-aged club.
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Lol, if it makes you feel better, i've had to use both. xD

They don't make things like they used to anyways...
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Damn it Mystech, quit your talking and get working on a post xD

*Is impatient*
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Can't agree with the clip tune thing but i can agree with the VHS.

@Mystech: Stop teasing Rune and post, that goes for me as well
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lol, ok ok. I'm done anyways. :) just fact and spell checking.
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Hey guys!! Hopefully I can have more inspiration for posts as we go on the mission. I'll have better posts when Charlotte arrives.
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I'm still alive. Had an assignment due so I avoided the guild for a bit.
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*Tackles Marc* NO MORE ASSIGNMENTS FOR YOU

Edit: Kilt, I gotta know, What is your GIF. from? What show XD.
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Let's see two hours behind? Meh. Good idea avoiding the guild when there things to do, this place has the ability to eat free time when you are aren't looking
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RowsOfDeath said
Edit: Kilt, I gotta know, What is your GIF. from? What show XD.


Oh oh! I can answer that. Kill la Kill.

One of the best, most absurd anime I have ever watched xD
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RowsOfDeath said
Edit: Kilt, I gotta know, What is your GIF. from? What show XD.


It is from the anime Kill la Kill, specifically episode 4 Dawn of a Miserable Morning.
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I was tempted to reveal the wyvern myself in my post... but I wasn't sure that's what we wanted to have happen yet. I can always go back and edit it to have him detect the wyvern if you prefer though.
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Sorry, I'd have a post up myself but I got distracted with some assignments >_<
I'll try to have one up sometime tomorrow after I run some errands probably.
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KillamriX88 said
I was tempted to reveal the wyvern myself in my post... but I wasn't sure that's what we wanted to have happen yet. I can always go back and edit it to have him detect the wyvern if you prefer though.


I'm happy either way. It's your call rune.
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Well, here's what I'll do:
Option 1: Have me edit my post.
Option 2: Both of you reply, and THEN I'll post again and find the damn thing.
Option 3: You take very limited control of Rurik and have him detect it in YOUR(Rune or Mystech) post. (basically, say something like "Rurik would hear, blah blah blah and pointed blah blah/so-and-so noticed his head turn and look blah.")

Also I still want Rurik to have the first crack at the thing. Don't worry, I won't do anything huge... but I have a scene in my head I REALLY want to write...
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Well now I have to go watch this anime, because that GIF is absurdly hilarious and I don't know why XD.
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Not finished as you can see with the backstory and other section but, so much what I have.



Name
Drake Vermillion

Nickname/Alias
Ares

Age
23

DOB
29th of June

Gender
Male

Sexuality
Heterosexual

Appearance


Other Details
Left arm - Since he was 10, Drake has been infected with an unknown magic-based ailment that dominates his left arm from elbow down to his hand. Besides the magic it awards him, it is inhumanly durable. The arm is able to survive a multitude of damage due to the magic being solidified throughout his entire arm.

Personality
Drake possesses an incredible self-control of his emotions. He only showed surprise when opponents proved more powerful or skilled than he had expected, and even then he doesn't lose his composure. He possesses arrogance, and fully justifies any statements he may make about his power, even complimenting his opponents at times on their abilities. However, he still has a habit of joking around and dis-respecting those around him. There are only a handful of exceptions that he admires, the most prominent being his grandfather. Despite his arrogance, he isn't above praising his enemies.

In conflict, or arising conflict, this particular warrior will diligently fight and with a concentrated, intense mind set he will strike those before him with patient, tactical attacks that steadily cripple his opponent. He can be straightforward in order to lead the opponent into a trap, and like what he stands for, he will do a variety of things to disengage the foe and give them a false sense of security and power. His true style of combat is elusive, and because of his peculiar magic he can strike in both a standard and very unorthodox manner that can take the edge off of battle in order break down his opponent. From time to time, he can be seen as plainly cruel, and dark, however his calm attitude during normally tense situations calls a sense of ease in those on his side and gives them a feeling of immediate empowerment, as if they have a wall of security defending them at all times. Although he may be cold and careless at times, his desire to act and do rather than talk strikes respect into his comrades.

Drake does not have any apprehensions to killing enemies. If someone is a threat to his well being, he can take their lives without a second thought. Some call this a case of being desensitized to killing, however, Drake takes it for what it is, doing what's necessary to survive in an efficient manner. As a result, Drake has killed scores of men, more specifically, Dark Mages, in self defense over the course of his career as a mage, starting from his late teens. He believes that a person who is too scared to kill their enemy is a fool as you never know what could happen.

Arsenal
Magic Headphones: Drake also has a set of magic headphones which play his favorite type of music. He normally has them around his neck. By pressed and dragging the two tiny skulls on the arms of the headphones Drake can turn them into a set of magical speakers.

Magic Type
Caster/Lost

Mage Rank
B-Class

Magic
Crash Magic- Crash magic is a highly advanced caster-type magic which gives the user the ability to crush/destroy things through physical contact. If done on an object, the object is reduced to small rubble by transferring magic power from the user's body into every particle until it has enough force and pressure to cause it to explode. The larger the object, the more magic power needed to destroy it. It is so destructive that even the slightest touch can lead to huge results. That's why this is considered a highly advanced magic because it requires proper concentration to be effective and control in order to avoid accidentally destroying objects, something even the strongest users of this magic somewhat fails at.

If this magic is used on living things, it is impossible to crush them. Instead, this magic creates enough force to cause damage and push the opponent away. This is done by firing concentrated magic after physical contact. At its weakest, a technique like this will cause some light bruises, but at its strongest, it can break bones or even crush them through magical pressure. Crash magic also works on spells. It can be used as a deflective barrier with enough power to reduce the power or even negate a spell.

As this magic is such a great offensive power there are limits on the level of defense capabilities it has besides the straight forward approach. This magic also has very little, if any, potential for personal buffs and attribute enhancement because its nature is so externally oriented, there is barely any room for self-effect. Lastly it is quite a dangerous magic; if the person is unfocused, he/she could destroy objects such as houses unintentionally.



Madness - A magic lost to the world and what is binded within Drake’s left arm, it is able to apply itself through touch through said arm. Madness delves deep into a person’s psyche to turn them insane, completely destroy them mentally or even turn friend into foe. It is like a poison as it attacks the neural synapses, creating a never-ending pain but whats truly worse is the way it subjects the person into sanity. Sometimes it can even subject itself upon him. What Drake holds is only a taste of the what Madness can do.

Repair Magic - If his clothes are damaged, instead of having to buy new ones or pay to get them repaired, Drake has learned Repair Magic to fix any rips, tears and other forms of damages to his clothes and armor.

Other Specialties

Brawler: Even though Drake has never done any professional training in his younger days, his unorthodox style of combat can often surprise any type of opponent that comes up against him. Even with his arsenal of attacks, his techniques are often based on strong offense and powerful defense moves due to the fact that at times opponents, who might have more specialized training under their belts, might have more precise attacks than Drake. So far, it has been shown that Drake's fighting type is that of quick strikes and heavy hits, often being able to deal strong attacks and leave opponents in a daze, which gives him the chance for a possible finishing blow. In terms of defensive techniques, Drake uses his strong muscle density and arms to block attacks coming from most directions, allowing him to absorb it more effectively.

Enhanced Strength: Drake has constantly shown remarkable strength which is capable of sending grown men flying a considerable distance and able to break down a wall with a couple punches. As he follows his family's philosophy of destroying his opponent, his attacks are shown to be powerful and lethal. With a single hand, he could demolish a tree trunk and crush the door of Guild Hall. In terms of upper body strength, he can easily pick up and throw a man twice his size across a room.

Historian: Drake is also a great historian tutored in the history of the world by Pollux. His skill is so great he can state events in great detail from the top of his head.

Biology: Mainly a self taught skill but Drake has great knowledge on the biology of various creatures and monsters that populate the regions in and around his home.

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Well, I don't run this RP, but here's my opinion...

No. Just no. It's been a long time since a character sheet has screamed "Mary-Sue" at me this badly.

I mean seriously, every time you come close to describing some sort of weakness or personality flaw, you immediately go back and describe how he isn't that bad. He's arrogant, but not above praising opponents, he's cold and careless but gains respect through his actions, he has no martial arts training but he's amazing at hand-to-hand anyway... while also having crazy powerful magic.

Oh, and he's super smart and stuff.

And are you serious? "Despite not knowing other magic styles he does have enough knowledge to tutor others in their magic style. He can also identify magic from seeing it's effects making investigations a relative breeze."

And all at the young age of 23... what a prodigy.

I may have overstepped my bounds here, and if so I apologize... but I really think this character needs a looooot of work. Starting over might even be better.

Edit: OK, went back and saw the post you made where you explained what you wanted to do with your character. Makes SOME of what you put make sense, but for the most part my opinion still stands...
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I agree. Plus, we've already got the three lost magic users, so the magic type would have to be changed to just Caster. Plus, that's like, what, three different types of magics you have? Repair, Magic and Heavenly. I also can't help but notice that Heavenly Body magic appears to have lots of different types of magic hidden in, such as fire magic, not to mention that Supernova produces almost the same amount of power as a Fire Dragon Slayer, a bit OP. You've also got a bit of Gravity magic in there, and a lot of other things.

Sorry if I'm acting a little bossy. It's just that that character seems a little overpowered.
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