datadogie said
Sorry if I'm acting a little bossy. It's just that that character seems a little overpowered.

KillamriX88 said
Well, I don't run this RP, but here's my opinion...No. Just no. It's been a long time since a character sheet has screamed "Mary-Sue" at me badly. I mean seriously, every time you come close to describing some sort of weakness or personality flaw, you immediately go back and describe how he isn't that bad. He's arrogant, but not above praising opponents, he's cold and careless but gains respect through his actions, he has no martial arts training but he's amazing at hand-to-hand anyway... while also having crazy powerful magic.

Oh, and he's super smart and stuff.And are you "Despite not knowing other magic styles he does have enough knowledge to tutor others in their magic style. He can also identify magic from seeing it's effects making investigations a relative breeze."And all at the young age of 23... .I may have overstepped my bounds here, and if so I apologize... but I really think this character needs a looooot of work. Starting over might even be better.

Edit: OK, went back and saw the post you made where you explained what you wanted to do with your character. Makes SOME of what you put make sense, but for the most part my opinion still stands...

datadogie said
I agree. Plus, we've already got the three lost magic users, so the magic type would have to be changed to just Caster. Plus, that's like, what, three different types of magics you have? Repair, Magic and Heavenly. I also can't help but notice that Heavenly Body magic appears to have lots of different types of magic hidden in, such as fire magic, not to mention that Supernova produces almost the same amount of power as a Fire Dragon Slayer, a bit OP. You've also got a bit of Gravity magic in there, and a lot of other things.Sorry if I'm acting a little bossy. It's just that that character seems a little overpowered.

MysT3CH said
Lol, better to be blunt here. It's OP

Kal-El said
Cept it's not cause he's the right power level for an A-Class mage.

Kal-El said
4. 23...do you know how powerful most of the Fairy Tail Wizards are by just the age of 20? 23 is reasonable within the world of Fairy Tail. Plus he's not an average mage.

Not even 23 [+]

Rune_Alchemist said
The only problem I have with your character Kal, is his number of spells. Seems...to be an excessive amount. If all A class mages could be that powerful, I'm going to go back and revise Acacia's spells. And no one wants that....keke.

KillamriX88 said
My problem isn't with any one thing, it's the fact that he's an all in one package. He's smart, has crazy powerful magic, and lost magic, and he has his own martial art style or whatever it is, and... *sigh* Well, it's up to Marc. Maybe he'll be better in practice than he looks on paper. This is just my opinion.

MysT3CH said
He just seems more S-Class than A-Class. I mean, if Marc's happy then go with it, but in comparison to the characters that have been previously accepted, including our current S-Classes he seems powerfull enough to be a wizard saint. Just cause canon characters are immensely strong albiet being young in the anime, doesn't mean your character should be. I mean down the road sure, but to begin, i feel he should be dialed down. But Marc's choice

datadogie said
I talked to Marc earlier. Everyone settle down. When the backstory is finished, Marc said he would judge it. He also thought there were a few things that needed to be changed, but I'll let Marc say the specifics, as he may have changed his mind. For now, let's just all relax, and have fun!

BrassOtter said

MysT3CH said
Added the spells to my CS, i'll start working on a post now.Edit: Nice Sig btw Kal.

KiltmanBagz said
Yesh...so far this thread had been free of unpleasant conversations and needless arguments. Please don't make this a habit people.