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All of my money is down on Yuna, who else is thinking Yuna is gonna mop the floor with Elise ? I'm taking bets.


By the way, since the fight ended in draw, you've lost. So... where's the money?
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By the way, since the fight ended in draw, you've lost. So... where's the money?


Speaking of which....

I'm surprised Windel isn't going off about the possible love triangle between Elise, Yuna, and Izumi.
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Speaking of which....

I'm surprised Windel isn't going off about the possible love triangle between Elise, Yuna, and Izumi.


Shhh... he's gonna hear you. That was supposed to be a secret ending.
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Speaking of which....

I'm surprised Windel isn't going off about the possible love triangle between Elise, Yuna, and Izumi.


It's cause my mast broke.
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Okay, tried and failed to read the I.C. Can you summarized what has happened and what is going on?
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@Crimson Raven Basically all the magical girls have met up with each other yesterday afternoon. There was a fight between Akame and Elise, then Several Primordials appeared in the city. The girls dispersed to destroy the enemy. After that battle, the girls met up again organized into teams. The girls then went their way for the night. Izumi and Elise had an interesting time at Rose's batcave. During the night, Emiri was murdered in cold blood. The next morning the girls went to school and planned to meet up at lunch. Rose went to check on Emiri and found her dead. Primordials attack school but magical girls fight it off. Yuna appears. She aids in fight vs Primordial. Rose just dropped the bomb shell that Emiri is dead. Yuna and Elise have a fight to a draw. Basically that is it.
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@Crimson Raven Basically all the magical girls have met up with each other yesterday afternoon. There was a fight between Akame and Elise, then Several Primordials appeared in the city. The girls dispersed to destroy the enemy. After that battle, the girls met up again organized into teams. The girls then went their way for the night. Izumi and Elise had an interesting time at Rose's batcave. During the night, Emiri was murdered in cold blood. The next morning the girls went to school and planned to meet up at lunch. Rose went to check on Emiri and found her dead. Primordials attack school but magical girls fight it off. Yuna appears. She aids in fight vs Primordial. Rose just dropped the bomb shell that Emiri is dead. Yuna and Elise have a fight to a draw. Basically that is it.


Seriously, when you put it like that, i makes all those 143 posts seem like just a bunch of purple prose. But yeah, that basically what happened, save for a few unimportant details.
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Got it, CS up now. I might have gone a little overboard, so criticism is welcome.


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@Crimson Raven

I like the idea of her being able to call on spirits to essentially possess her, but only with their permission. What I don't like is how she can summon up pretty much anything that's dead. A suggestion would be to have her only able to summon dead humans as opposed to animals and monsters. And even then, perhaps she can only summon people that have died within a certain time limit, eg. she can only resurrect people who've died in the last three days. Furthermore, I would suggest getting rid of the regeneration as it seems tacked on.

On that note, I totally support zombie Emiri making an appearance.
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On that note, I totally support zombie Emiri making an appearance.


Why, you...

Anyway, for your pleasure:


Can you give me your brains,please?
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@Crimson Raven

I like the idea of her being able to call on spirits to essentially possess her, but only with their permission. What I don't like is how she can summon up pretty much anything that's dead. A suggestion would be to have her only able to summon dead humans as opposed to animals and monsters. And even then, perhaps she can only summon people that have died within a certain time limit, eg. she can only resurrect people who've died in the last three days. Furthermore, I would suggest getting rid of the regeneration as it seems tacked on.

On that note, I totally support zombie Emiri making an appearance.


Okay regen gone, but I feel like I didn't explained her power better. One thing is, she needs the remains to summon any sort of zombie. May I keep the animals thing to make her power more humane? And how about, instead of a time limit, she can only summon undead whose spirit has not 'passed on'?
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Okay regen gone, but I feel like I didn't explained her power better. One thing is, she needs the remains to summon any sort of zombie. May I keep the animals thing to make her power more humane? And how about, instead of a time limit, she can only summon undead whose spirit has not 'passed on'?


Summoning spirits who haven't passed on are fine, since those aren't abundant. Are you asking to have her summon both animals and humans? Or just animals? I would prefer one or the other.
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Summoning spirits who haven't passed on are fine, since those aren't abundant. Are you asking to have her summon both animals and humans? Or just animals? I would prefer one or the other.


Yeah, I was thinking both. I thought it was balanced since humans required blood, that would limit how many she could call, but were very powerful, while animals are much less powerful so they are easier to call up.

storywise, I was thinking she could fight on horseback or travel with a horse she called from a petrified hoof. And heck, wile I'm at it, in a tight spot she could call up a dinosaur or something and go to town.
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Yeah, I was thinking both. I thought it was balanced since humans required blood, that would limit how many she could call, but were very powerful, while animals are much less powerful so they are easier to call up.

storywise, I was thinking she could fight on horseback or travel with a horse she called from a petrified hoof. And heck, wile I'm at it, in a tight spot she could call up a dinosaur or something and go to town.


Hmm. Seeing as it requires actual once living parts, I'll allow it then, if only because it would prove difficult for her to actually retrieve those remains. I expect most people would look down on her for grave robbing their dead pet's remains. And I doubt she'd be allowed to take dinosaur bones from the museum.
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Cool, of course, she could always pull a Mari. XD

Edit: @TheWindel I made the changes, check it out.
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Cool, of course, she could always pull a Mari. XD


Shh. No one here should know about the Corpse Collector....
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Why, you...

Anyway, for your pleasure:


Can you give me your brains,please?


Now that I think about it, Zombie!Emiri would be a perfect yandere, when you stop to consider how obsessed she was with Miyako and Nanako when she died, it would make perfect sense. I wonder if dying and coming back again would have any influence on her powers?

Also, I'd like to ask if it's ok for me to move on to the following day on my next post or if I should wait a little more? I can do another late night post as Yuna if I have to wait in until others pick up, even though Akame and Rose are more or less in the same time frame. Actually the only one that's really behind is Miyako, since Nanako and Izumi were with the other girls the whole day too.
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You should probably wait a little more for others to catch up. Also, I don't recall Emiri being obsessed with anyone in the IC, let alone Miyako and Nanako.
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Hey guys
So I finished my exams, and am currently reading the IC
Should get my first post up some time tomorrow (or tonight, if I read it all by then)
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You should probably wait a little more for others to catch up. Also, I don't recall Emiri being obsessed with anyone in the IC, let alone Miyako and Nanako.


Ok, I'll wait. It's not like I was gonna post now, anyway. But the past about Emiri was a joke, didn't you see?
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