xD reminds me of an old movie I watched where there was those two submarines duking it out. One was brand new and highteck it had a snack shop on board xD

Down periscope by a chance?

And I thin there'd be more someone along the lines of Sgt. Gardner from ME2. We decided that every crew member will ahve their own room to provide comfort and privacy on the lengthy trip, but that means other facilities would probably suffer from lack of space. The hangar would take most of the ship if you look at it realistically, and the dropship has to be docked outside. I'm thinking no dedicated officer's mess (Black don't like those anyway) and the rest pretty clustered together.

dunno and I see. ^_^ So just out of curiosity what number of people are you guys going for for players?

Down periscope by a chance?

And I thin there'd be more someone along the lines of Sgt. Gardner from ME2. We decided that every crew member will ahve their own room to provide comfort and privacy on the lengthy trip, but that means other facilities would probably suffer from lack of space. The hangar would take most of the ship if you look at it realistically, and the dropship has to be docked outside. I'm thinking no dedicated officer's mess (Black don't like those anyway) and the rest pretty clustered together.

The rooms won't be that luxurious either to accommodate lovely lab space.

Considering crew number is anywhere up to 200, less than full compliment :D 2 others from the earlier iterations of this RP seemed interested, that is if one can stop playing games >_> I would like for this to start soonish, but this does need some number of players not to die immediately.

I see.*nods nods*

im still hear just fixing my history and taking my time so it is formatted better

@Sep I never knew that there were books for Stargate. I'll get a character up tomorrow sometime.

@Sep I never knew that there were books for Stargate. I'll get a character up tomorrow sometime.

Yeah theres a hell of a lot. The only Stargate Media still being released. Theres a couple of SG-1 ones and some Atlantis ones. I'll be the first one to say though that they all aren't good. Some are pretty naff and you read them and go "How the hell did this get approved?" But I mean the Stargate Atlantis: Legacy books are beautifully done, with a great story.

Also look forward too it.

I will be bringing a Jaffa to the party, will likely do that tomorrow.

Also speaking to @Forsythe about sorting out dimensions so that the whole ship isn't hanger. So watch this space our fighter compliment may decrease or the ship could be made slightly bigger. I want to make sure this is settled before the IC starts just for consistency though ;)

Name:Masaru Tanaka
Race:Human
Age:25
Appearance:Tanaka stands at 182.88 Centimeter tall and has a lean muscular build with a jet black Crew Cut and focused Hazel eyes. He has broad shoulders and bares a fading horizontal scar under his right eye. He usually wears a slight grin across his face hiding his excitement for all of the new surroundings around him. He is Commonly in his nations fleckturn combat uniform and uses the equipment of the ship.
Rank:Second Lieutenant
Nationality:Japanese
Organization:Homeworld Command
Skills:
Military Trained
Direct Action
Air Assualt
Unconventional Warfare
Reconnaissance
First Responder qualified
History:Masaru was born in Osaka prefecture of the Kansai region of mainland Japan to a middle class family in of English interpreters. During Masaru’s childhood he was taught both Japanese and English languages by his parents to better succeeded in his future. Days before his fifth birthday well they were in Kobe visiting his aunt the Great Hanshin earthquake struck Kobe in the early hours of the morning, Masaru was still in bed when his aunt’s apartment collapsed. He and his mother were lucky they were sleeping on the ground during the collapse killing his father and aunt, three long days they were trapped in the ruins of the apartment before they were rescued by Soldiers of the Japanese Ground Self Defense Force. Returning to Osaka after this unfortunate event and a grieving period the young soldier at the time that had rescued Him and his mother visited and this formed a lifelong bond and filled Masaru with the aspiration to become a soldier and help people in need like he was.

After Masaru’s Graduation from high school and ignoring his mother’s urging to not join the self-defense force and go to college he joined and began the first steps of his career, His first assignment was the 37th Infantry Regiment in Izuma, Osaka. Months of training begun in breaking each recruit down and building back and teaching them every skill needed they wound need on the battle field. After teaching them how to be soldiers and how to survive on the battlefield, they taught them in the ways to help their country in a disaster and enough medical skill to treat injured until a medic could arrive. During joint training operations between United States Marines and the 37th Infantry regiment he proved a valuable asset due to his bi lingual skill and leadership skill had earned him the rank of sergeant.

After two years of continuous training and joint operations with Japans allies Masaru applied and was accepted for the elite 1st Airborne brigade and after another intense training period pushing him past his limit he was awarded his Ranger qualification. Teaching these soldiers how to operate behind enemy lines and wage war with guerrilla tactics and how pass on valuable information to his allies to better turn the tides of battle in Japans favor. He spent many hours working hard and finally applied for a Second Lieutenant commission and earned his commission on his first try.

Masaru now nearing twenty four years old and with a stellar record was placed place with fifty other selected soldiers for a top secret mission in a series of trials and evaluations and selected with one other soldier for the mission due to both of them being bi lingual. These two were sent to SGC and briefed on the Operations and protocols. They were sent to Daedalus-class battlecruiser and sent Atlantis to bolster security and search and rescue away teams. With their arrival they were thrown into the fire with Queen Death’s fleet closing on Atlantis.Following the resolution of Queen Death’s fleet Masaru quickly worked to earn his place and gained a team after a daring rescue of a fellow team after a daylong intense fire fight aboard a crashed Ancient ship against rouge Genii faction seeking weapons. After Drawing away a portion of the rouge faction Masarus and the other Japanese soldier followed orders, They Lead the Genii into multiple troops they set up and slowly picked them apart in the day long guerrilla war in the ship.

Several months after the Genii mission Masarus’s Combat/ search and rescue team walked into a wraith trap when they answered a distress call from a allied tribe when they were ambushed by wraith well searching a small hamlet. During a long rolling battle and the loss of two of his men, he had finally run out of ammo and turned away another S&R team.He began crawling across fourteen kilometers and losing wraith pursuers over a period of two days he finally got himself back to the star gate dragging his last injured teammate the whole way back.

Better.

They were sent to Daedalus-class battlecruiser and sent Atlantis to bolster security and search and rescue away teams. With their arrival they were thrown into the fire with Queen Death’s fleet closing on Atlantis.Following the resolution of Queen Death’s fleet Masaru quickly worked to earn his place and gained a team after a daring rescue of a fellow team after a daylong intense fire fight aboard a crashed Ancient ship against rouge Genii faction seeking weapons. After Drawing away a portion of the rouge faction Masarus and the other Japanese soldier followed orders, They Lead the Genii into multiple troops they set up and slowly picked them apart in the day long guerrilla war in the ship. Masarus’s Combat/ search and rescue team walked into a wraith trap when they answered a distress call from a allied tribe when they were ambushed by wraith well searching a small hamlet. During a long rolling battle and the loss of two of his men, he had finally run out of ammo and turned away another S&R team.He began crawling across fourteen kilometers and losing wraith pursuers over a period of two days he finally got himself back to the star gate dragging his last injured teammate the whole way back to the star gate

Something about this doesn't seem quite right. I think, it is just the way it reads. I think maybe the way to fix this is separate the Genii and Wraith missions into separate paragraphs?

Pretty sure Forsythe has already signed me up for this...

So here I am.

Ariadne/Idalia revamp to come soon.

ok i will
re edited the earlier post

ok i will
re edited the earlier post

Okay now I see. You go from Gennii then suddenly search and rescue team to do with Wraith. Is this the same mission... a later mission?

it was something i overlooked on accident due i wrote it out on a different program and when i transferred it on the Reply for here it turned all the Bio into one big blob, Diffrent ones

it was something i overlooked on accident due i wrote it out on a different program and when i transferred it on the Reply for here it turned all the Bio into one big blob, Diffrent ones

Can you tweak it so that's obvious? :P

Once that's done it's good.

yeah tweaked and fixed something else I caught

yeah tweaked and fixed something else I caught

Alright, throw it over to the CS tab.

k thanks