Not quite sure whether or not i've actually been accepted into this role play, however if I am, I decided to edit my CS to give my character a bit more of a nomadic mountain man sort of feel rather than what he originally was. Got a sort of wasteland wanderer vibe from the previous version that didn't quite sit well with me considering the nature of this RP.
Good news! Everyone is accepted. In addition, I really like the changes to your CS.