@Crimson Raven @Turboshitter As c3p-0h said, looks like you each grabbed my drawing. Maybe each of you found a half of it? Might lead to something later.

So, question, because I like feedback.

How does the lack of contracions in speech make the character sound? I.e. Formal, polite, weird ect.

For example:

"I'm sorry, but I can't do that."

vs.

"I am sorry, but I cannot do that."

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As a rule of thumb taking out contractions almost always adds formality to anything. It makes your character sound formal, stoic, and almost 'regal' sometimes.

Could be formal, but depending on the character it can sound stiff or socially awkward too.

I see, has anyone noticed that thats how I have been typing Kelsier's speech?

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*writes down*

I see, has anyone noticed that thats how I have been typing Kelsier's speech?

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I'm not sure I follow what you mean. :) Using contractions in speech is a very small detail when it comes to how a character is portrayed. Are you concerned about the way he comes across as a first impression?

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Well, I think the formality of no contractions is offset by the coarseness of threatening to spank a young woman with her own sword. lol.

I think it may be time to arrive at our destination. Any objections? :D

I think it may be time to arrive at our destination. Any objections? :D