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Reaciver


Name:
Lucis Gonjake

Age:
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Gender:
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Personality:
On the surface, Lucis comes off as a rather silly and lighthearted person, frequently engaging in comical behavior and retaining his oft-present grin even while making threats. He displays a child-like amusement for new situations whether or not they prove adverse or even potentially fatal, he has a penchant for wandering off his own only to get into some sort of trouble. Even with all these idiosyncrasies, he is extremely personable and has a particularly complimentary nature that easily gains him the friendship and trust of those surrounding him.

Of course, these aspects only hide the complex and determined young man underneath. On the reverse side of his frivolous nature is his considerable shrewdness, which makes him quite capable of reading people and situations. He is particularly observant, taking into consideration even the smallest details of his surroundings in order to better understand and deal with challenges and is not above using cheap tricks or questionable tactics to ensure his own survival. He has a considerable pride that will not stand for having his being insulted or condemned by others, but is also capable of shelving his pride if it becomes something that will stand in the way of his objective.

He is very protective of his family and friends, refusing to allow any harm to come to them and often deeming their safety more important than his own in spite of his own personal ambitions and goals. He has to be reminded several times that his own safety is something upon which many people depend on and uses his loved ones as his primary motivation when all hope seems lost. As such, he becomes furious when observing those who willingly or remorselessly cast aside their own friends or brethren and is sickened by the idea of those who reject their duty to those who trust them.

Skills:
-Athletic (Basketball Player)
-Good at reading others
-Good with technology
-Basic fighting skills

Brief Backstory:
Lucis was born in Albany, New York. His mother was a head chef at a local restaurant, and his father a SWAT Officer. Most of his childhood was spent here, creating mischief and trouble wherever he and his friends went. Unfortunately, he had to leave his friends when he hit 16. His parents were part of the Receiver Creation Program, he was the result of another successful procedure. He was to attend Akiyama-Kreuz Academy in Japan, a land of culture, one that he did not understand. He left his parents and began schooling there, only to begin to resent the hand that fate dealt him. The world of a Receiver was boring, never able to fight like a Tuner. He admired, even envied their ability to manipulate the Aether that he provided for them. An attitude he needed to soon change.

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@SeaFoamDaisies: I'd... recommend using something like intangibility by moving out of the current space partially rather then literally vaporizing yourself. In part because that's... kind of what Static do to people in the process of removing them from existence.

@Slendy: I'd... have to see what you mean by possible villain. As noted in the OP, villain characters who are around all the time aren't really practical for this RP.

@Ichypa: Akiyama-Kreuz is a Japanese highschool, albeit one with a lot of foreign students since they come from all over the world, so it's three years, and your first year starts when you're fifteen-sixteen.

@LokiLeo789: The final field should be Tuner since he's a Receiver, but otherwise he works. Accepted.

@Xeronoia: Image is kind of pixel-y. ^^; Character-wise, my concern is her ability, but it does seem difficult to use at least. Tentatively accepted, though I do recommend finding a less pixel-y image.
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@SeaFoamDaisies: I'd... recommend using something like intangibility by moving out of the current space partially rather then literally vaporizing yourself. In part because that's... kind of what Static do to people in the process of removing them from existence.


Air Mimicry is a variation of elemental intangibility- maybe "vaporize" wasn't the right word to use...- she remains, but has a physical body made up of air.
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@Xeronoia: Image is kind of pixel-y. ^^; Character-wise, my concern is her ability, but it does seem difficult to use at least. Tentatively accepted, though I do recommend finding a less pixel-y image.


Alrighty, swapped the picture out for a nicer, if smaller, one.

As for the ability, I'm perfectly willing to change it up - Either change what it can and cant do, or change the ability entirely to something else. I do like that one though, since i think it has a good level of room to slowly grow in strength while also having fairly potent weaknesses no matter what. Just being in a negative mood would be a problem, or thinking an opponent was too strong for her to possibly do anything to. That also provides a more active option for whoever her receiver ends up being, since they could also serve as a backup source of DETERMINATION to try and keep her in the proper mindset.

Also, and this is mostly just for reference/fun discussion, the idea of the power is based mostly around a very watered down version of a power a guy in A Certain Magical Index has. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7ESNaRPtr28 Basically his thoughts shape reality, but he can't control it beyond controlling his thoughts. He uses tools to help shore up the weaknesses, focusing his mind with sharp needles and stating what he wants to happen out loud in order to focus. The fun thing about the clip, though it thankfully can't happen to her in this manner because of how aether and whatnot works and since she can't create things with her power, is how horribly it backfires on him as a result of his opponent being good at mind games.
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^-^ On second thought I'll make a character to balance out whatever isn't.
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@SeaFoamDaisies: Well, I suppose I should get into my problems with it a bit more deeply.

It seems like it'd probably kill her since it coverts her body into air. ^^;

Secondly, um... I guess I'd like abilities to be able to be applied to a fight somehow? The RP's not all about fighting but I'll be honest and say that fighting will be a part of it(including the mock battles held between students) and you have to remember that Ability-Type Tuners do not get physical buffs unless it's part of their power.

@Xeronoia: I'm actually a fairly big fan of Raildex! And honestly the ability's looking better now. I'd suggest being careful and probably limiting how effective it is on living things(Living Static, if and when they appear, are a different matter when it comes to en masse slaughtering them).

@Slendy: Okays.
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@Ichypa: Akiyama-Kreuz is a Japanese highschool, albeit one with a lot of foreign students since they come from all over the world, so it's three years, and your first year starts when you're fifteen-sixteen.

All right. I'll make Sean and Kagura 16 then, since I wanted them to be new.
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@Xeronoia: I'm actually a fairly big fan of Raildex! And honestly the ability's looking better now. I'd suggest being careful and probably limiting how effective it is on living things(Living Static, if and when they appear, are a different matter when it comes to en masse slaughtering them).


Ahah, nice!

Also, will do. It makes plenty of sense for it to be limited on living things anyways. Living beings are REALLY complex stuff. It's not like a rock or a hunk of metal at all.
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@SeaFoamDaisies: Well, I suppose I should get into my problems with it a bit more deeply.

It seems like it'd probably kill her since it coverts her body into air. ^^;


Ok
but is simply going invisible implausible as well?

@SeaFoamDaisies:
Secondly, um... I guess I'd like abilities to be able to be applied to a fight somehow? The RP's not all about fighting but I'll be honest and say that fighting will be a part of it(including the mock battles held between students) and you have to remember that Ability-Type Tuners do not get physical buffs unless it's part of their power.


You do have a point there...
Erm how about Aerokinesis then? Cel would be able to create, shape air and attacks would include blasts of wind/ air blades.

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@SeaFoamDaisies: Aerokinesis works out great. But don't feel like you're limited to obvious-use direct abilities, just keep in mind that they should have some way of fighting using the ability.

@Ichypa: Accepted.

@SeaFoamDaisies: Accepted.
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Alright~
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Put a more detailed description of her abilities in the bio, please. ^^;
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Added it now :D
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And accepted.
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O(≧∇≦)O So far it looks like I might be a Receiver!
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Keep in mind, you need to make both.
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@LokiLeo789: The final field should be Tuner since he's a Receiver, but otherwise he works. Accepted.


Thank you for reviewing and accepting my character, looking forward to this RP.

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Tuners:
  • Name: Yukimura Yuri
  • Age: 18
  • Gender: Female
  • Personality: Yuri is a relaxed and easygoing girl who tends not to worry too much about how things are going... generally to the point of slacking off in lessons. Her attitude, nonetheless, makes her quite good at being someone to look up to with her juniors, especially because she holds protecting people in the highest regard and thus takes any training regarding combat quite seriously. The only other thing she holds in as much regard is keeping a good relationship with her Receiver, which can lead to some rather poor decisions on Yuri's part.
  • Type: Weapon
  • Weapon: Arms. That is, Yuri's generated weapon is... simply a pair of arms, albeit obviously rather... unusual and blatantly artificial--and for some reason given the name 'Pillars of Hercules'. Given how fundamentally useful this is given the alternative, she gets far more mileage out of her ability as a Tuner than almost anyone else. It does, of course, have its downsides in that her participation in sports is entirely being unable to fully take part... or being far too good.
  • Skills: Yuri's pretty good at managing despite the fact that... well, even with her ability, she's without arms a lot of the time. With them, she displays a disturbingly comprehensive knowledge of martial arts, apparently having a natural talent and being extremely capable of picking up where she left off--perhaps aided by the exact nature of her Weapon. She's also extremely flexible, and about as good of a dancer as she can be.
  • Brief Backstory: Yuri's early life was particularly uneventful, aside from being identified as a possible Tuner. That rather changed when the young girl found herself in what should clearly have been a fatal situation: alone with Living Static. With no more ability to fight it off than anyone else and a childish bravado, she tried to get it to back off... and only succeeded in losing both her arms. To this day, she's still not sure if something else distracted it, or if she was actually rescued... and if so, who should she thank?
    Being paired up with a Receiver definitely ranks as the best moment of her life so far.
  • Receiver: TBD





Got the picture and personality for my Receiver, but won't have them up until tomorrow.
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