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This is still a work in progress, more info to come.



It is a time of great fear in the galaxy...

The Galactic Empire, following the call to Order 66, killed the Jedi they once regarded as allies, leaders, and friends. Now that their rule is absolute, so must be the genocide of the Jedi and not just the Jedi, but any force user that would dare oppose them. The strikes came quickly, many different force sects came under attack by Imperial Storm Troopers. many were killed, just like at the end of the Clone Wars. To preserve the ways of the force, a few Force Masters came together and formed a safe haven on a small moon far from Imperial territory. This place was to be called Sanctuary, where any force user might find refuge and continue the training and the traditions of their order. This is where you come in, you are the new generation of your order, a padawan who just performed their final test against the very master who trained you. Once you complete this test, you will be a knight of your order and a banquet shall be held in yours and the other padawans who complete their test, honor. This is where your story begins.

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Appearance:(post an image and/or write a brief description of your character)
Name:
Age:
Race:
Gender:
Force Order (if force user)/Occupation (if non-force user):

Weapon:(pictures are optional)
Armor:(if any)
Force Powers:(General powers are to be expected from most anyone push, pull, etc., this is reserved for your order specific powers, PS, only applicable to force users *legasp*)

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Background:
Destiny:(The force is strong in all of us, each of us has a destiny that the force desires us to fulfill, whatever that destiny may be we desire it just as much as the force does and if it is completed a hidden power may be unlocked from within and a new destiny shall befall you.)

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Appearance:
Name: Valhalla Avita (Val)
Age: 19
Race: Human
Gender: Female
Force Order: Jedi

Weapon: Duel goldish light sabers (appearance picrure)
Armor: N/A
Force Powers: Force Push/Pull, Force Jump, Force Levitation, Force Blinding, Force Teleport (5 feet until mastered when it becomes any place user can clearly see) (More to be learned after achieving Master rank)

Personality: Val is always very serious, even more so now with the Jedi and all force users being hunted down, she's light on her feet and immensely agile, she does a lot of spins, flips and twists when she fights preferring to always be advancing,. Though she's serious she has a soft affectionate side especially toward kids and animals, she likes to be in charge and has a leaders personality, she likes to speak up for those who cannot or won't.
Background: Val grew up on Dantooine, constantly watching and hearing of the struggle between the Dark Side and the Light, she watched her father work a farm that produced next to nothing, she watched him barter and sell items to keep her alive, her mother had died in childbirth with Val's little sister who had also passed away, Val cleaned the house and cooked food and tried to help her father as much as she could, when she was little she'd run around with a stick pretending it was a light saber and that she'd slay bad guys. Growing older her desire to help the Jedi win the war grew stronger, she often went with her dad to the small town to sell his gathered items, there she ran into a real Jedi, begging him to let her help and teach her the ways of the force the Jedi stayed with them a while, teaching her small things here and there, then when he'd made up his mind he took her with him to start her Jedi padawan training.
When order 66 was executed her and her master were able to escape and make it to Sanctuary.
Destiny: To help bring back the Jedi and restore balance to the Force.
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WEll someone is on top of things at least haha. (Working on mine in a PM right now haha)
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I'm a little confused haha, are the masters with us? Since my girls a Jedi does that mean her and her master made it to sanctuary and he's gonna test her? Or has she already been tested and her master died? *rubs head slightly confused*
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The masters are with us, and your respective masters will be teaching you, if you do not have a master you will be assigned one for your test. Your intro post shall detail your test (the test being a duel) and conclude with the start of the celebration banquet. As for IC posting that'll probably start after Thanksgiving or the weekend after. CS approved wolf, post in character section at your leisure.
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-PURGED-
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Yeahhhhhhhh.....

I'm bowing out after that.

Apologies @BeastOfDestiny, all the best.
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I fear I may have misinterpreted the power list. Are they the powers he uses or that the Order over all uses?
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I fear I may have misinterpreted the power list. Are they the powers he uses or that the Order over all uses?


I think this rp wanted some canon involved, and as far as I am concerned, order of the grey does not exist within star wars canon. Secondly.. Mandalorians hate jedi, so I doubt one would ever become a jedi, though possible, highly unlikely. Secondly you list several force powers for one character who is just 21, who I doubt has really mastered all those force powers. The character seems to have mastered everything several jedi masters/sith lords would be unable to.

Force fire is not a "family power", as it is not limited to your non-canon family.

This is what I see as issues, from my limited knowledge of star wars.

It also seems like the character is turning into a mary sue, where they master every single force power, not taking into account on how long it actually takes to master basic force powers, let alone advanced ones like you say he knows. You might take this the wrong way, but if you can't see why he's not OP I think I will leave with Sep.

Edit:Force Storms are just fucking broken. Go look at the star wars wikia on why a 21 year old shouldn't have that force power.
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If it's going to kill the RP, then consider me gone. But for future reference, remember that not every one is going to write out the finite details of the abilities and such. You canon mongers are a pain in the ass though, no imagination at all.
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If it's going to kill the RP, then consider me gone. But for future reference, remember that not every one is going to write out the finite details of the abilities and such. You canon mongers are a pain in the ass though, no imagination at all.


Maybe because a lot of SITH LORDS AND JEDI MASTERS cannot do even half of the stuff your character can do? I am all for imagination but your character would literally would be able to kill anything that could stand in his way. For god's sake, if you can't see why having a 21 year old make a hyperspace wormhole that would tear apart the entire surface of a planet is wrong, then fine. Sorry if I wanted it to be realistic to canon somewhat, but apparently that means I have no imagination. Goodbye, I am sorry Destiny. I will withdraw my interest now.
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Maybe because a lot of SITH LORDS AND JEDI MASTERS cannot do even half of the stuff your character can do? I am all for imagination but your character would literally would be able to kill anything that could stand in his way. For god's sake, if you can't see why having a 21 year old make a hyperspace wormhole that would tear apart the entire surface of a planet, then fine. Sorry if I wanted it to be realistic to canon somewhat, but apparently that means I have no imagination. Goodbye, I am sorry Destiny. I will withdraw my interest now.


To assume that he had mastered all those just because I only listed them is ignorant. The CS asked for a list, I provided them. No further embellishment was asked for at the time. Not that you're using your common sense.
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To assume that he had mastered all those just because I only listed them is ignorant. The CS asked for a list, I provided them. No further embellishment was asked for at the time. Not that you're using your common sense.


Okay. I'll just use my common sense and leave. Good luck destiny with the rp.
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Okay. I'll just use my common sense and leave. Good luck destiny with the rp.


Look, I apologize for how I responded. But when you see something you know isn't canon and immediately set upon it with "It's non canon therefore it doesn't belong here," it's going to get under my skin. Force Fire listed as a Family Power was to clarify where he learned it. Every one of his family before that had used it and taught it to their children and it's taught within the order. Don't leave this because of me. That's far from fair to the GM. I am bowing out, and I would rather you have a good time doing an RP you had wanted to enjoy than leaving because of a disagreement.
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...I think we just lost all three of them.
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Wow, hostile much. Couldn't just put your two cents nicely Nyt. Well then how many characters do we currently have now xD
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Wow, hostile much. Couldn't just put your two cents nicely Nyt. Well then how many characters do we currently have now xD


It's just that if you don't put this down at the beginning, it just creates an issue later. I myself was guilty of this when I threw an AT-ST with the force once in an rp. Yes I know, it was a pretty fucking horrible idea in hindsight. In star wars rps, I have seen too many characters go down this OP road. It was from personal experience that I decided to be harsh, since leeway in the capability to be OP usually leads to OP.

How someone would know how to make a force storm when Palpatine was the only real recorded user, and his character didn't seem like he had the hatred to be able to conjure up a force storm. It's also a sith method, how jedi outcasts would condone it as well, leads to many issues.

I assumed this rp would be canonical somewhat. If this wasn't the intent, I will gladly leave if it makes people happy. But if you are still willing to have me, I will make a character and try to put this behind us.
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-sigh-

I'll wait and see what other people put. It depends how much Destiny chooses to deviate from either Legends or current Movieverse canon. I know @Assallya personally likes to stick to OT-Material Canon (Or at least did last time we spoke on SW).
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OT-MC? sounds like a droid designation. ^_^
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