@Xen
Right now I can't accept this character. There just isn't enough here to make her accepted. The personality is little more then two sentences, and the biography is two short. It's also formatted a little bit messy.

@Darkwolfsoul010
Her test reminds me of Angel's from Maximum Ride XD She's accepted regardless. I like her :)

@ViolentViolet It's has been a very long time since I've read those books, I should re-read them! Thanks for reminding me :) I'm glad you like her.

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@Darkwolfsoul010
I still haven't read the latest book. It's so entertaining though, the series I mean. I really should get to work on my own character at this point. Ugh. So much work.

@ViolentViolet Is the latest one Fang? Or did one come out after that? I think I'm a bit behind in the series, but I remember LOVING those books.

@Darkwolfsoul010
You are indeed quite behind. After Fang was Angel, then Nevermore and now Maximum Ride Forever.

@ViolentViolet Oh wow! I am very behind it seems. I think a re-reading is in order.

@Darkwolfsoul010That it is. But this role play isn't based on it or anything so don't worry about that. It's partially inspired by it and various other random musings of my own. That's all.

You can let me know if anything needs changing.

Appearance
"When do I get paid?"


Name: Hawkins, Victoria, Rose
Nickname(s): Vicky, Hawk, Misfit
Age: 25
Sex: Female
Sexual Orientation: Openly straight, closet lesbian
Occupation: Mercenary

Appearance Details
Hair color: Blonde
Skin tone: Fair
Scars: Gunshot scar on her abdomen and up in her left shoulder
Tattoos/Piercings: Tribal tattoos all along her arms, jump wings tattoo on her back with the "AIRBORNE" insignia patch tattooed just above it
Height/Weight: 5' 10" 166 lb.

Fears: Dying a slow and painful death alone, overly pitch-black places, hospitals
Talents: Knife work, hunting, singing, drinking

Personality: Blunt, very rough around the edges, and a general hardass. A vengeful person. Sticks to her guns and tends to jump to them first at the sign of trouble.
Biography: Victoria was never a normal girl. Her father never openly stated it, but he cursed her mother for not providing him with a son. And instead of trying again, he decided to mold Victoria into something that fit his bill. He took her out hunting and fishing, trying to get her to enjoy all the things he did as a kid. She never felt forced, even when her mom obviously disapproved of it. She wasn't brainwashed into liking these things, but it just so happened she took to them more than her father had hoped. It was a great way to get outside.

She hated school all the time and never wanted to be there. Days spent in education may have been good for her, but she was always one who liked the outside. She also had a case of bad attitude when it came to teachers and other classmates. Never a bully, but she tended to get wrapped up in more than her fair share of fights. She liked to talk back with her fists rather than her mouth, and so eventually other students stopped messing with her. Still, her mother enrolled her in the women's choir at a young age against her will in a desperate attempt to breed some shred of femininity into her daughter. Victoria took to it only to really keep her mother off her case about being an outrageously tomboyish girl.

After graduation, she snuck over to the recruiter's office and enlisted for a six year contract in the United States Army. Not one to be outdone, she willingly shot high for Ranger School despite her parents wishing she would keep herself out of danger. She didn't make the cut for Ranger, but she still managed to make the 101st Airborne. After six years and a couple tours around Afghanistan and other places in the middle east, she found her reserve life boring and the worst and most boring two years of her life she ever spent. After she got out, she snagged a nice job with Academi working security for a lot more pay then she was getting from the Army. She was called up to help do some rather unusual game hunting by some high-up and well-paying people in the scientific community. She didn't care, as long as the pay was good.

Extras​:
Theme song (to drive the point home)

@Karos Would it be okay if I make my character attached to your character, someone who spends all of his time with your character, almost like a dependant partner? (He's a child experiment, 10 years old.)

@KaelRavenheart Sure thing, that sounds quite fitting for Kat, I can't imagine if she saw a 10 year old out on their own that she'd leave them, especially not another project.

/Who, me? I'm just a poor little boy without a family. I couldn't possibly have inflicted all that suffering.//



Name: Dolor "Sweet Poison"

Project Number:

Sex: Male

Age: 10

Species:
Inland Taipan 15%
Chameleon 5%
Jumping Spider 10%
Box jellyfish 5%

Appearance Details
Hair color: Black

Skin tone: white, pale

Scars: N/A

Tattoos/Piercings:N/A

Height/Weight: 4'5, 75 lbs

Significant Markings:
Leathery skin on back, back of legs and back of arms, also has two extra sets of eyes on the side of his head, giving him 6 eyes in all, the side ones are invisible when closed.

Abilities/Mutations
Camoflauge- Is able to blend in perfectly with any surroundings, so long as he remains motionless

Sinewous-He is able to contort his body to wriggle through small spaces and out of restraints, to a certain extent.

Enhanced Vision: His eyesight is 20/20, and he has superior peripheral vision, able to see i every direction except right behind him at all times, he also has perfect night vision.

Cling: He is able to cling to and climb any solid porous surface, even upside down.

Venom: His inland taipan genes give him a very potent poison in his bite, able to kill in half an hour, and debilitate in 10. It is also incurable as of yet.

Sting: He also possesses a venomous touch, but unlike his snake venom, this venom causes excrutiating pain, but is nonlethal. The touch venom can be administered from anywhere on his arms or legs.

Jump: He is able to jump about 20 feet high, or 30 feet across.

Personality:

Dolor is highly intelligent, but emotionally unstable. Most of the time, he behaves innocently, acting like a sweet 10 year old boy. However, in reality he harbors a deep hatred for normal humans and enjoys inflicting pain on them and even killing. He sees nothing wrong with taking life, if the person in question deserves it. He is easily frightened by displays of anger, but will react violently if threatened. He is in awe of the world around him, but often is apathetic and cold towards living things who he doesn't know. His unique blend of innocence and malice, as well as his abilties, have earned him the nickname "Sweet Poison" among the other experiments.

Weaknesses
He has imprinted on Kat, and follows her around everywhere, even when she doesn't want him to. She is the only one who he trusts implicitly, and he is completely loyal to her.

His love of pain and death often causes him to draw attention to himself, though he can avoid that if he wishes, but refraining for too long makes him irritable and eventually he will kill to satisfy his need. He has a pathological need to cause pain.

He is very susceptible to cold, it debilitates him rather quickly.

Biography:
Dolor sticks right by Kat's side, and had followed her wherever she goes in the outside world. He finds it fascinating, and desires nothing more than to stay with Kat and help her with whatever she might need. He does foray out by himself now and again though, in search of someone to torture. This is a habit that has caught the attention of the local police, as his victims tend not to remember what happened, because of the level of pain they experienced, and some even go mad. He doesn't feel any remorse for his crimes, seeing the people he hurts as toys.

Optional Information
Likes: Kat, Inflicting pain, experiencing new things, killing, playing, pulling tricks on others
Dislikes: Humans, doctors, needles, cold, loneliness
Crush(es): N/A
Relationships: Kat, friend/guardian

@KaelRavenheart@ViolentViolet

I've made a modification to my character to incorporate that, are you okay with what I've put?

I don't have a problem with it, but I should mention that "vindictive" isn't quite the word I'd use to describe Dolor. Sadistic is much closer. Hope your character can handle it.

@KaelRavenheart

Noted, I'll make sure to look at that slant.

She's not one that would really tolerate those sorts of actions, at leat not openly. Try to be subtle with it so that Kat won't notice too much. So don't just poison someone whilst you and her are walking along, in a fight that'd be different, but you get the idea.

About the only time he would willingly leave her was when he goes hunting, for pain rather than food. He is very careful about when he does it so that she won't notice. Though, his demeanor is still alarming when he's around her from time to time.

That sounds about right, as I said in my passage she has noticed he's slightly off.

@Karos
Yes it's fine. Don't worry about it.

@KaelRavenheart
I have a few concerns regarding your character.

• Why is it that he's so psychotic at such a young age? He is a success after all.
• I need more limitations to make his abilities acceptable.
• In my first explaination of the effects of the grafted DNA, the more animals, and the higher percentage, the more they'll look like an animal and the less likely they are to be a success. Having 30% animal DNA, from four different animals makes that highly impractical.
• He also needs more weaknesses that aren't his instability if I'm going to accept that many abilities this early in the game.

@NightmareInd I feel like Fury and Bernard would have been pitted against each other often in the facility. Perhaps Fury is the source of most of Bernard's claw-scars?

If/when your character gets accepted of course :3