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In the world of Abadon, humans have been engaged in a nonstop war for many year against angels. This unending war has been named "The Angcrial war". It started when angels had started to appear more and more to humans. The humans had learned to accept this and did not think too much of it. Eventually, the angels started to reveal the true reason as to why they were appearing before the humans. They wished to be free from the shackles that bound them to God. They wanted free will, just like the humans. Some took pity on them, while others believed that God knew what was best and that they shouldn't mess with holy affairs. Eventually, however, the angels had slowly worked their way into the innocent minds of the younger generation. When that generation finally became in charge of the world, the angels asked them to assist them in a war against God, they accepted, believing that God had become corrupt. The angels needed the human's free will in order to bring down God. The war was extremely short due to God's love toward the humans and his unwillingness to harm them. This event was called "The Retrearcle Capture". Since it was impossible to kill God, they simply sentenced him to hell. There, he is unable to hold any grasp over the angels.

At first the angels and humans celebrated, however times changed. Ten years later, the angels realized that their freedom could only last as long as the humans would allow it. They were also bitter at the human's lack of appreciation for their free will. After some research, the angels found a holy artifact created by Satan and a high ranking angel. It had the ability to strip God of his powers, however, they were never able to use it due to the high ranking angel being eliminated as soon as God received notice of it. God had locked away the artifact since he was unable to destroy it because of Satan's existence. In order to retrieve the artifact, angels need to gather enough "Inhera" that is emitted by humans when they die. The humans grew furious at the angels for killing their kind when they had helped them, so a large scale war broke out.

It has been 196 years since the first battle broke out. Since then, many advancements have been made. A material called "Auren" was chemically produced to damage the holy beings. It is produced in a liquid form and can be used in a variety of ways. "Proticans" are the soldiers who are trained to fight angels. Each Protican is trained at a specialized academy where they create a specialized weapon that is derived from two classical weapons. The two weapons are combined to create a weapon that the student will one day go into battle with. All weapons incorporate Auren in some way. The academy and the teachers give students 6 months to train with all the available weapons. Then they give recommendations as to what weapons to choose, however the ultimate choice is up to the student.




Dear future students of Freymont Academy,

My name is Malrain Hilfox, headmaster of Freymont Academy, one of the most notable and skilled academies in all of Abadon. I welcome you to participate in our annual initiation for all interested first year students.
Freymont academy focuses on the most important skills needed to join the ranks of our nation’s military hunting down our nation’s one common enemy, angels. It is critical that we stand together in order to win this atrocious war. That is why we need eager students like you, the generation of our future, to train and join our forces.
In order to test if someone is ready for such a task, all first years must pass our initiation. Students will be placed inside an arena full of dangerous challenges and creatures for a full 24 hours. They will receive no outside aid but should they choose to surrender, medics will be awaiting them outside the arena.
Once you pass this daunting challenge, you will be accepted into our academy and welcomed to our first term. Students will be split into different houses, all co-ed, where they will spend the rest of their four years of training at. Class attendance is of the most important and any absence without genuine proof could be at risk of expulsion. Here at Freymont academy, we take training very serious and hope you do as well.
I can promise that you will find your time spent at Freymont academy both beneficial and enjoyable and I look forward to meeting you at our initiation.

Sincerely,

Malrain Hilfox





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Ages 17-18 = 1st years
Ages 18-19 = 2nd years
Ages 19-20 = 3rd years
Ages 20-21 = 4th years

There will be 2-3 main houses where most of the characters will be staying, depending on how many people end up joining.



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Quick warning, when reviewing CS's I show no mercy and am a little blunt, so BlueAjah and I will discuss together and she'll give you the run down of our thoughts. Cause she's WAY nicer.
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Quick warning, when reviewing CS's I show no mercy and am a little blunt, so BlueAjah and I will discuss together and she'll give you the run down of our thoughts. Cause she's WAY nicer.


I assure you I will take nothing personally as everything is a learning experience (:
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Could we have a bit more information on the initiation and the weapon aspect of the RP? Just so I can get a better idea ^_^

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Sure, I'll post up the headmaster's CS tomorrow as an example for the weapons, if you still have questions after that, I'll answer them then.

Initiation is where you are basically thrown into a cage with a wild animal I can throw up a list of frequently used animals for this part. The cage is very large, about a 75x75 yard base square. The height depends on the biome. The biome of the cage is programmable, it's usually set up in the natural biome of the wild animal. The bars on the cage are made of reinforced steel and are cylindrical, about an inch and a half in diameter. The spacing between the bars depends on the size of the animal, however, the max spacing is 2.5 inches apart. Not many people can squeeze out, but if they do they are disqualified. The point of this initiation process is to create a school that will train students who have the capability to be great. Even if the student is injured during this process, they still have the opportunity to be let in. The ultimate decision is up to the headmaster with some input from his assistant. Initiation tests the resourcefulness of a student, their mental strength, and physical strength. Also if a student happens to get into the school, the information learned during the process can be used to teach a specific student to their strength, using processes that the student can best understand. (Sorry for the rant)
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Sure, I'll post up the headmaster's CS tomorrow as an example for the weapons, if you still have questions after that, I'll answer them then.

Initiation is where you are basically thrown into a cage with a wild animal I can throw up a list of frequently used animals for this part. The cage is very large, about a 75x75 yard base square. The height depends on the biome. The biome of the cage is programmable, it's usually set up in the natural biome of the wild animal. The bars on the cage are made of reinforced steel and are cylindrical, about an inch and a half in diameter. The spacing between the bars depends on the size of the animal, however, the max spacing is 2.5 inches apart. Not many people can squeeze out, but if they do they are disqualified. The point of this initiation process is to create a school that will train students who have the capability to be great. Even if the student is injured during this process, they still have the opportunity to be let in. The ultimate decision is up to the headmaster with some input from his assistant. Initiation tests the resourcefulness of a student, their mental strength, and physical strength. Also if a student happens to get into the school, the information learned during the process can be used to teach a specific student to their strength, using processes that the student can best understand. (Sorry for the rant)


No, it's fine, it's very enlightening. (:
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@Knight of Doom:
For the 'initiation' section of the character sheet - is it just a summary of how it was completed? Or should it be written as if it was an actual post? E.g. Caleb cursed. This creature was twice his size. If you understand what I'm getting at, aha.

Also, would a whip count as a classical weapon?
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@Jin
I'd like to have the initiation written as a summary to keep things shorter.

Also a whip could be counted as classical. What I meant by classical was that the weapon was not already combined with another weapon, such as a bayonet. You are allowed to use guns and such, but nothing over the top (lazers, nuclear weapons, ect.).
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Some questions- (perhaps dumb ones)

1) Would we have used our weapons during the initiation period?

2) Did you have any requirements for the animals or is it okay if I just do my own?

3) How should we go about doing our biographies? Since we kind of live in a war stricken world, I wouldn't imagine any of us live in a little home with a dog and an addiction to Instagram filters. Is being recruited a part of life as a teenager or is this a special thing saved for special people? :) Thanks!
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1) No, you would not use your weapon during initiation. Students do not get a weapon until after they have been enrolled for 6 months.

2) For the most part, you can do your own. If I have and issue, I'll inform you and you can change it.

3) Normal life I'm this world means that many people's parents are/were Proticans. This, combined with the school's stress for more Proticans drive many students to become Proticans. Choosing to become a Proticans is common, however there may be times where a draft is used if the next generation doesn't have enough students. Other jobs exist to keep everyone alive. There may be some entertainment aspects to day to day life, but it is rather minimal since many resources go to the war.
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Thanks a lot :)
I'll have my character up here soon- been messing with her all morning!
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▪ Name ▪
Louise Lowry. Lou saved for friends and the lazy.

▪ Gender ▪
Female.

▪ Age ▪
Seventeen.

▪ Year ▪
First Year. Eight months.

▪ Appearance ▪
Louise is of French and Irish descent, giving her a pale complexion all year round. She was born with dark brown eyes and dark brown hair, but prefers to dye her hair various shades of blonde. She is around 5ft 9 tall, making her a bit above average for height for a female. She weighs around 150 lbs, keeping relatively muscular and lacking in curves. She doesn't have any tattoos or piercings, and isn't very interested in either.




▪ Likes ▪
- The winter season
- Spoiling her friends
- Team sports
- Soups and stews
- Trying brand new things

▪ Dislikes ▪
- Swimming
- Bullies
- Her height- sometimes
- Not offering a hand to help
- People who don't have a bit of mystery to them

▪ Biggest Fear ▪
Drowning.

▪ Weapon ▪
Retractable Spear & Ice Axes

The spear tip and the blades of the ice axes are covered in Auren making any stab wound to an angel debilitating if not fatal. When the spear is retracted it can be split in half releasing the ice axes' blades. Turning the one weapon into two small weapons. The range for both parts of the weapon are very limited to how far the person wielding it can throw it, but at close range deals heavy blows.





▪ Initiation ▪
Louise vs The Cougar

As prepared as Louise thought she was for her initiation, nothing could have prepared her for the fear she felt when she was caged with the bright eyed beast. Though the feline barely outweighed her by several pounds, the hunger for fresh meat was enough for the cat to attack in an ambush fashion. Louise struggled to get the cougar off her, it's claws sinking into her abdomen as it tried to sink it's teeth into her neck for the kill. Giving heavy blows with closed fists to the cat's face, one good hit to the eye dazed the cougar enough to give Louise the chance to trade positions with him. She climbed over him, pinning him to the bottom of the cage. She continued to wail on the cat until it was not breathing, her hands shaking and covered in blood.

▪ Skills ▪
Powerful. Manipulation. Team Player.
Like a modern day valkyrie, Louise stands as a tall and powerful woman warrior. What she lacks in speed and flexibility she makes up for in giving and taking hard hits. She can be a dirty trickster using her wits and charm to outsmart her enemy when the time calls for this type of battle. Louise can do great on her own but works even better when she has a trusted partner or an unified team on her side.


▪ Personality ▪
Sturdy. Charming. Nurturing. Overbearing. Secretive.

Louise is that person in your life that you feel is your second mother because she will make you your favorite food and bring it to you while you're sick in bed, but will also let you know that you should probably do your laundry soon because your room is starting to smell. A little bit of mystery in life is a good thing to Lou, she enjoys trying new things and enjoys the excitement of learning anything that she didn't know before hand. You can always rely on Louise to be there for you, and have someone to go to when you need to talk.

▪ Biography ▪
As a child of war, the fate to become a Protican was intertwined with Louise's life from the day she graced Abadon. She is the daughter of Lou and Karen Lowry and the younger sister to the now deceased; Phillip Lowry. Both of her parents had gone through training at a lower class academy (The place they had met, and fell in love with one another) and fought for the human race until both decided to retire their weapon and settle down to raise a family. Their oldest son finished all four years of school at the same academy as his parents and was sent off to battle to be shortly after killed. Though he was a strong student, the realities of the real world were far too great.

When their remaining child and only daughter became of age to be sent off to an academy, they had their worries and fears. To give her a better chance, they sent her to the more established and renowned Freymont Academy with hopes that she would fair much longer and harder than her brother before her.

Louise has been attending for a little less than a year and she feels she is doing pretty well for herself, and enjoys writing back and forth to her parents of her experiences. She takes her parent's advice into heavy consideration when prompted but knows that they don't always know what is the best for her.



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Hello! :) Knight of Doom and I talked about your Cs, we really like Louise but we just have two concerns. One of them being her weight ratio. Your character is like a tank fighter, able to beat a cougar to death, so she should be really strong and muscular but you state she's very slim and small. Could you maybe clarify a little on that? Also, we really like how she's a mother figure and has a mystery element to her. Does she have maybe a secret that she keeps herself? We kind assumed the reason she's so motherly is because she'd rather keep the attention off herself and on the person talking to hide something. Could you explain a little bit on that too?

On a side note, I really love how you formatted the CS. All the pictures and gifs were really fun to look at! I look forward to having her in the RPG! :)
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Ah yes, to be fair I kind of was changing her as I go- placing her together in bits and pieces. You're right that it doesn't make sense for her to be so small in weight. I think I might make her weigh a bit more- I want her like a tree trunk- sturdy and put in place. haha. I didn't really think she had much to hide, as a huge "secret" but I feel she wouldn't want many people to know some of her inner emotions and workings so that they'd have the chance to knock her down or use her.

Thankyou :)

I'll change some things now ^^;
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I do plan on finishing my CS today, I just need to make her bio and skill set.

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Also, I didn't know if I should make it clear in the Initiation part that Hero was able to take down the crocodile on the basis of knowledge that all the strength in a crocodile's jaw is in biting rather than opening, thus it would be easy to keep the mouth shut. There was no clear transition to put it in, so I didn't, but I don't know if that'll be a really important tidbit later.
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Ah yes, to be fair I kind of was changing her as I go- placing her together in bits and pieces. You're right that it doesn't make sense for her to be so small in weight. I think I might make her weigh a bit more- I want her like a tree trunk- sturdy and put in place. haha. I didn't really think she had much to hide, as a huge "secret" but I feel she wouldn't want many people to know some of her inner emotions and workings so that they'd have the chance to knock her down or use her.

Thankyou :)

I'll change some things now ^^;


I think you're good to put it in the CS tab now :)

EDIT: Ms.Stern is up! I kind of copied how you did the font because I loved it so much!! :)
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