Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by TheWinchester4
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Edited the appearance description for my character. Also, what changes should I make to make my character viable for play as a hero? I don't like playing villains too much. ):


Your character seems kind of OP for this setting, tbh. From among the wind powers, freezing breath, and paralysis breath, I'd suggest only keeping one of those.

Ice breath makes the most sense to keep, given his weakness to heat. I'd get rid of the paralysis breath for sure. Think about it: oh no, bad guy! Just breath in his general direction. Problems solved without killing the poor dude. Not even Solid Snake would approve of such a thing.
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@DocTachyonedited it, how dose that look
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Hmm, okay. Think I have an idea for what to say, though it's not about an accessory. Editing.
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Made the recommended edits. BTW ROFL on the solid snake line. That was hilarious!
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Edit: Oops! Meant to put the mention in my previous post. Sorry!
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@DocTachyon I edited my CS and defined Simon's weaknesses a bit more to show the extent of his powers and added a more in depth description of his candy mimicry ability
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Made the recommended edits. BTW ROFL on the solid snake line. That was hilarious!


I am so frikkin ready to deliver all of the cheesy jokes in this.

Also, bump. Everyone in the world should join this RP because it's going to be awesome.
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Hidden 9 yrs ago 9 yrs ago Post by Defacto
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Defacto Okay, so who's going to carry the corpse?

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Declaring my interest.

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Edits made to Kiko's bio. In the character tab version. ^^;
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I have finished my character.

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Just out of curiosity, how many others are we waiting on before we begin?
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I still haven't got my character looked back on after some edits I made.
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Terribly sorry for the lateness of my post. And I do realize it says I've been on the thread this whole time. I think I may've left my Ipad open to this thread. Also, I'm reading from the last page up so... Everything will be in backwards order from when it was posted.

I still haven't got my character looked back on after some edits I made.


Still quite a bit powerful, and you're gonna want a bigger personality and biography sections if you want to approach that power level. I'd recommend cutting his strength down some, perhaps make him a tad shorter(25 ft? 20?), make his silver scales resistant to bullets/lasers, but not entirely immune to them, and cut down his endurance, too. Even then you could probably afford to add to his personality and history. The bigger and better those sections are, the more comfortable I am with letting people have powerful characters.

Just out of curiosity, how many others are we waiting on before we begin?


When the character applications start to slow down a bit more and/or when we hit 6-7 accepts. Though, even when the RP starts, I'm planning to keep applications open pretty much forever, unless you guys otherwise object. Also, I still need to post some information about some villains and heroes that are notable in the OP, and I'm considering a character of my own.

Kennith Archibald Archer


Assuming this is WIP?

A Hathoway


Accepted! To the characters tab, with ye.

@DocTachyon I edited my CS and defined Simon's weaknesses a bit more to show the extent of his powers and added a more in depth description of his candy mimicry ability


You're good to go, accepted.

@DocTachyonedited it, how dose that look


Just add a couple more sentences to personality. Also, how strong is the lightning? Can he, like, blow up a car in one shot? Less powerful than that? More?

I edited my CS, and updated the broken pics.
Let me know Thanks.


If I'm going to allow you the power level you're at now, I'd like to see a high-casual sheet for something like this(and even then, I dunno if I can allow being bulletproof.)

Otherwise, axe the adamantium claws and go for something more earth-metal(you can make it cut through a lot, but I dunno about adamantium. And, inf addition to all of his other abilities, I don't think Spiderman level dexterity is appropriate. I mean, Spiderman can dodge bullets pretty casually. And like I said before, I don't think being bulletproof will fly, sorry.
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I'm working on my character off and on at the moment, have to decide on a selection of powers...
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Defacto Okay, so who's going to carry the corpse?

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It would be easier to have something on the CS like "alignment", no?
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It would be easier to have something on the CS like "alignment", no?


Yes, that is a good idea. Adding it. Those already accepted don't have to add it, though.
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Oh right, been trying to figure stuff out but for some reason inspiration is hard to come by these days. :( But I think I might have a few workable ideas now so we'll see how things turn out.
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@DocTachyon
I'm out sorry. Good luck guys.
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I'll try to get my character done today, I'm fighting a headache and a long day of classes. >.<
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