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@Polybius

Out of curiosity, what exactly is the tone of the story?
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Am I still able to get in on this?
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Am I still able to get in on this?


Yep.
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@Polybius

Out of curiosity, what exactly is the tone of the story?

Serious. Not overly dark or anything. More sarcasm and cynicism than goofy humor.
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I changed the background a bit, but I don't really know how it was goofy. Was it the "bad crowd" thing?
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I changed the background a bit, but I don't really know how it was goofy. Was it the "bad crowd" thing?


Oh sorry Otomos, I wasn't directly refering to anything in your CS. I'm going to give it a thorough read right now and send you some notes PM.
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A WIP, it's not done yet.

Name: Dex Slipstream

Race: Human (Homo Sapiens)

Appearance: Dex stands at 5'8" tall, with a narrow skeletal structure indicated by his small waist and thin shoulder width. His body is enmeshed in a tough layer of muscle, not built up in any specific area but providing enough coverage to appear muscular but not freakishly so, despite this many still characterize him as a little man due to his stature. Drawn over his muscle is a layer of white, lightly browned skin, defined by multiple scars and marks criss-crossing and dotting mostly his torso but also his arms and to a lesser extent his neck. He has a straight, angular jaw with a prominent slightly cleft chin, he has a bow shaped upper lip with the lower lip straight (entirely his lips have a slightly pursed appearance). Dex has a roman nose, thin and with a straight bridge, flanked by a pair of small, round nostrils; underneath his left nostril, on his upper lip he has a small scar, Descerned easily due to his facial hair not growing there. He has shallow cheek bones, emphasized by his large brown eyes and a defined eyebrow ridge. On top of his head he has a course mat of blonde hair, it's color comparable to that of hay, dull and yellow; The sides of his hair are shorter then the top, with the hair on top all drifting in the general direction of right.

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Name: Дуака (Pronounced Du-a-ka) Can be spelled in english: Duaka
Race: Previously Human, was turned into what is now called the Тень (based on their Russian Heritage) by the Ygar.





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Holy shit! Someone kill that thing!
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@Jpp188 Love it. It's cool if you use the Ygar as the ones that altered Duaka, but it seems likely that he would have no idea who or what did it too him. Looking forward to reading more.

@Voltus_Ventus I like Dex a lot. Perfect characterization for a gun-for-hire. I'll be sure to keep rhino-like aliens in mind for future reference.
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@Jpp188 Love it. It's cool if you use the Ygar as the ones that altered Duaka, but it seems likely that he would have no idea who or what did it too him. Looking forward to reading more.


I just finished my CS, if you would like me to change anything just let me know and I will be happy to oblige. Thanks.
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Stealth based Hacking character is in the works. Hopefully will be done tonight if not tomorrow :)



(It's nearly done I promise.)
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Oh man, I'm so excited!
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Azir is here to slay the day!
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Just waiting on a few CS's guys! This should be fun.
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It will be done within the next 24 hours, just got one more exam to do then I'm free.
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Name: Aaron Floyd a.k.a. ‘Glitch’

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So do we just wait for everyone to be accepted, or can some of us make a post, or...?
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So do we just wait for everyone to be accepted, or can some of us make a post, or...?


Been wondering the same thing.
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<Snipped quote by OtomostheCrazy>

Been wondering the same thing.


I'm waiting for another CS. Would you guys like to start anyway? Meet up in the south bay hangar. Captain Erek us there.
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