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In fact, forget the OOC!


If I did that people would be unhappy with me.

I already kinda forgot about it when I was writing my char for this :P
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I'll just go ahead and throw in my go-to X-Men character. Bloop.

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@Angel Eyes, we really l... DANGIT! You've changed your powers again lol. New review coming soon.

@Pirouette, In regards to your current power set there's a lot of overlapping with other characters and Hillan and I feel that this new set makes your character a little too well rounded. Our preference would be for you to revert to the Density shifting but if you're set on the new flashier powers I'm sure the three of us can find a way to make the new power set fit better.

@Stein, well since you poured your heart and soul into that backstory I suppose we could accept you. That and I'm pretty sure FantasyChic would never forgive us if we didn't.

@Universorum, Hillan and I have been debating back and forth on this one. Ultimately we've both agreed that intangibility seems to clash with everything else about your powerset. We'd be cool if you wanted to keep the Psionic Armory and the Telepathy but we think the intangibility undermines your character, specifically his 'squishy'-ness. However we'd be cool if you wanted to have the Psionic Armory, Telepathy and Telekinesis and maybe you could work out another way to get close to everyone's favourite 'Hot for Teacher'.

@Sep, only thing Hillan and I have taken an issue to is the shield of air. It seems a little too durable since no matter how fast air was going it wouldn't stop energy based attacks. I'd even go so far as to say the shield shouldn't be able to stop bullets, that said we'd be cool if the shield was fast enough to shift the bullet's path. Other than the shield I believe everything was good.
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@Lord Wraith Much prefer having something flashier.
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@Lord WraithI'll probably just remove the Kitty bit, then, she is kind of a generic one to be crushing on, huh? Well, maybe if the arc where Kitty gets possessed by Lord Ogun is still a thing? Maybe I can go that route, with her training him in combat, or something. I can change his fighting style from a fencing-esque thing to a more traditional Japanese style.... That might work?
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@Lord WraithI'll probably just remove the Kitty bit, then, she is kind of a generic one to be crushing on, huh? Well, maybe if the arc where Kitty gets possessed by Lord Ogun is still a thing? Maybe I can go that route, with her training him in combat, or something. I can change his fighting style from a fencing-esque thing to a more traditional Japanese style.... That might work?


Yeah that would work well.
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@Lord WraithKay, I'll just go with that then. Should I throw him on the char tab now?
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@Lord WraithKay, I'll just go with that then. Should I throw him on the char tab now?


Yep that should be fine!
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@Lord Wraith So... Recommendations or should I take a shot?
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@Lord Wraith So... Recommendations or should I take a shot?


Honestly I was waiting to hear back from Hillan but he's ignoring me again lol.

I personally think the problem with the current powers comes from how she expels the energy, I think the crystal pillar is the most unique method and I think that's the one you should focus on and drop the energy beams and the armor explosion.
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<Snipped quote by Pirouette>

Honestly I was waiting to hear back from Hillan but he's ignoring me again lol.

I personally think the problem with the current powers comes from how she expels the energy, I think the crystal pillar is the most unique method and I think that's the one you should focus on and drop the energy beams and the armor explosion.


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Nobody likes a needy girl on prom night.


My Amaretto doesn't find me needy!
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<Snipped quote by Pirouette>

Honestly I was waiting to hear back from Hillan but he's ignoring me again lol.

I personally think the problem with the current powers comes from how she expels the energy, I think the crystal pillar is the most unique method and I think that's the one you should focus on and drop the energy beams and the armor explosion.


What about the energy drain aspect?
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What about the energy drain aspect?


I liked that part since it can also be a limitation. No energy to drain, she has no offensive abilities.
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I liked that part since it can also be a limitation. No energy to drain, she has no offensive abilities.


So keep the energy drain, crystal body, and ability to create crystal formations, but nix the energy beams and exploding crystal bit.

Sound good?
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So keep the energy drain, crystal body, and ability to create crystal formations, but nix the energy beams and exploding crystal bit.

Sound good?


Sounds good to me!
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Then I shall make the necessary edits and slip it into the accepted page.
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Throwing this down just for you two to see the basics of the power write-up. More depth can be made available if needed, otherwise it's just the bio I need to write.




| BIRTHNAME: |
Penelope Boyle

| NICKNAME(S): |
'Penny Dreadful'

| ALIAS(ES): |
Viscera

| SEX: |
Female

| AGE: |
17

| APPEARANCE: |
As above. Her hair is naturally a deep orange, though she dyes it to a richer reddish colour that she finds a tad more bearable. She dresses very casually, mostly jeans with baggy tops and jackets.

| ABILITIES: |
Biokinesis - Penelope wields a low-level but potent form of biological manipulation - the complete control of her own biological matter, makeup and shape. Using this, she is able to change her biology rapidly and at will. Though she still has a lot to learn to wield her abilities to the fullest extent, she is still capable with the transformations she has managed thus-far, which include sprouting talons and spikes from her hands, spliting her face from the corners of her mouth into a fanged maw, and erupting barbs of bone from her skin.

The extent of Penelope's biokinesis is dependent on the available body mass to manipulate. The mutations mentioned above are 'low-resource' and easy to achieve - but she is yet to accomplish anything along the lines of extra limbs, tentacles, or greater eruptions of bone and/or muscle. Additionally, her powers are yet to afford her any durability or physical enhancements beyond her 'accessories'.

| BIOGRAPHY: |
A short biography describing where you came from, how your life has been and how long you've been at the school. There's no need to write a novel here as we're all students barely into adulthood.

| MISC. NOTES: |
Probably Monster these days. The yellow one.
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My character's in the tab.

Now, to wait.
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