[OOC] The Uncanny X-Men: The Next Evolution

[Sep]

In fact, forget the OOC!

@BlackSam3091

If I did that people would be unhappy with me.

I already kinda forgot about it when I was writing my char for this :P

[Angel Eyes]

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[Heathen]

I'll just go ahead and throw in my go-to X-Men character. Bloop.

Danny Green

_{"Life doesn't need to hand me lemons. I can just make them myself."}

| BIRTHNAME: |

Daniel Aiden Green

| NICKNAME(S): |

Danny

| ALIAS(ES): |

Chlorophyll

| SEX: |

Male

| AGE: |

18

| APPEARANCE: |

When you first look at Danny, he might seem like he doesn't really bring anything to the table as far as athleticism goes but he can definitely hold his own. The boy has a slender to average figure with muscular lines showing on his shoulders and torso which indicates that he's no athlete but he does enough to stay fit. Most of his curves seem to be on the lower half of his body, having bigger thighs and a bigger butt than most boys his size. It's nothing over the top, but he has more of a female shape if one sees him from behind. He's average height being approximately 5'10 and weighs about 140 pounds, but he doesn't exactly weigh himself everyday. Moving away from his stature, his features are what really define him starting with his natural phoenix red hair. He tends to get mad when people all him a ginger since his hair is more of an auburn color than orange and doesn't have any other features that a typical ginger person would have. However, his hair is his most notable feature next to his eyes which are a piercing green color which tend to glow when he's using his power to an extreme. He has average to above average attractiveness about him that he doesn't really see he has. His features are more on the pretty side than handsome which prompts the names "twink" or "flower child" to be thrown his way that don't really bother him. Lastly, he's not exactly the most tannest individual. Even though he's required to get plenty of sunlight, his skin betrays that aspect as he looks like a typical white boy when in fact he's half Hispanic. Overall, he has a very decent appearance with some moderate sex appeal, but it isn't anything to make anyone awestruck.

As far as his clothes, he always wears things that are not from animals due to him being vegan. All of his clothes are either cotton, polyester, or some other type of plant or synthetic material. He'll tend to wear things from American Apparel, Urban Outfitters, or Forever 21. He achieves more of a hipster and preppy look but with more fashion as he makes sure he's up to date with current trends. However with anything he decides to wear, he'll always have something green on which is more of a signature item because of his ability.

| ABILITIES: |

Plant Manipulation - Danny is a powerful chlorokinetic who can grow, animate, and manipulate all plant life. He can create, shape and manipulate plants, including wood, vines, plants, even moss and (for practical reasons) fungus, and parts of the plants, such as leaves, seeds, fruits and flowers. Danny can cause plants to grow, move/attack or even rise from the soil and "walk", mutate plants by rearranging DNA structure and revive withered or dead plants. Danny can "speak" to plants and use their power for defense and support by growing them from the ground and make them sprout seeds/fruits/berries. He can even use plant chemicals to heal people or objects or manipulate their properties for a wide range of effects. He tends to use his knowledge of Botony to achieve this as average plant movers are unable to do this. Though he is more of a passive user of this ability, he can deal a series of offensive techniques on a target. Using the plants as weapons enables him to grasp and strike continuously with vines and roots, project thorns at a distance, and quickly regenerate the withering weapons at the his will. Danny can make vines grow and climb around a targets, causing choking/squeezing, or even strike with plants. It is unknown how powerful his plant abilities can go. Not only can he manipulate plants, but he can manipulate the toxins and pheromones they carry. He can make subtle moves by poisoning, paralysis, or inducing sleep to other people depending on the plants.

Contaminant Immunity - Danny can neutralize all existing detrimental contaminants in his body. His immunity, digestive, and other organ systems are enhanced or evolved far beyond that of a normal human's. Danny is completely immune to every form of contaminant known to man. He is immune to all known poisons, toxins, venoms, viruses, bacteria, alcohol, radiation, drugs, gases, and diseases. Basically his body is completely healthy and he is unable to get sick from any contaminants.

| WEAKNESSES: |

With controlling plants and basically nature itself, there is sure to be drawbacks. Yes nature is a powerful force, but plants are very fragile in nature. Harsh weather conditions such as ice, heat, and even electricity can easily harm vegetation and reduce it to withering nothingness. A lot of the times, Danny must be in the right climate for his powers to even work. If he's in an area with harsh blizzards, most plants he can make will be unable to grow there, same with him being in the tropics, a desert, etc. He would only be able to grow plants native to that area that can actually sprout from that ground. That's why he prefers to be in a moderate environment where he has more freedom with his powers. Also, it takes a lot of energy and concentration to make several plants and vegetation. He is limited like all mutants to what he can create so if he strains to much, he'll suffer from nosebleeds to headaches to unconsciousness. However one of his most significant weaknesses is his body himself. Prior to his X-Gene manifesting, he suffered from a skin diseases that hindered him from going out into the sun. Now a mutant, his diagnosis seemed to have reversed. Yes he is a immune to every contaminant, but he suffers from one. His body is like a plant. He needs more water and sunlight than the average human. If he doesn't achieve this, his skin will turn an ugly green color, he'll get sick and possibly die if not exposed to water or sunlight for too long.

| BIOGRAPHY: |

Danny grew up as an only child to a white father and a Mexican mother. Just about his whole life, he's always trying to validate that he isn't some pasty white boy despite his skin color and bright red hair. Since he was born, he was diagnosed with Solar urticaria, a rare skin disorder that prevented him from going out into the sun or he would get red blisters that appeared on his skin almost instantly. He would have to dress up like it was winter outside just to play, so ultimately he just stayed indoors all day and developed pale skin. Because of his condition, he was home-schooled and was denied a normal childhood for the majority of his life. He never knew what it was like to play with other kids or have issues that all kids face. When he was about 11 or 12, puberty kicked in and that's when his life was changed forever. After the manifestation of his abilities, his Solar Ulticaria mysteriously vanished and he was able to be outside just like everyone else. It was a medical mystery to doctors but he was completely cured of any prior illnesses he ever had. Because of this, Danny felt the need to enter public school to be with other kids his age. At the age of 14, he decided to enter public high school to be with other kids his age. At first it wasn't a very pleasant experience since he had never interacted with others his age. It took him awhile to get the swing of things and in no time he was fitting in with everyone else. During this time, he was discovering himself and learning his sexual desires, something he never even gave a thought to before. Other than his social life, he was a very intelligent person making straight A's and being in the top 10 percent of his class. Science was his favorite subject and specialized in studying toxicology and plant life.

After joining the Green Club in his school freshman year, he turned to veganism after educating himself on animal cruelty and the consequences of global warming. After his abilities had manifested, he was even more inclined to join the club as he felt it was his duty to protect the Earth. During high school, he developed a lot of like minded friends who would go on retreats and protests to fight against people who destroyed vegetation, trees, and animal homes for construction. He also joined a Peace Core and went around growing gardens and feeding the homeless with his powers. There was an incident when they were at a protest and one of the bull dozer technicians decided to get bold and start fighting some of the students. In a fit of rage, his eyes began to glow bright green and commanded the trees to attack the man. This was the first time he ever lost control of his abilities and it scared him. Around this time is when they discovered the Xavier Institute. When hearing there was a place that helped people like Danny, he was more than willing to attend.

| MISC. NOTES: |

Danny is a bit of an Eco-Nazi and is a bit 'extra' when scolding people about protecting the environment to save the planet. (Oh and Vodka Cranberry for me.)

[Lord Wraith]

@Angel Eyes, we really l... DANGIT! You've changed your powers again lol. New review coming soon.

@Pirouette, In regards to your current power set there's a lot of overlapping with other characters and Hillan and I feel that this new set makes your character a little too well rounded. Our preference would be for you to revert to the Density shifting but if you're set on the new flashier powers I'm sure the three of us can find a way to make the new power set fit better.

@Stein, well since you poured your heart and soul into that backstory I suppose we could accept you. That and I'm pretty sure FantasyChic would never forgive us if we didn't.

@Universorum, Hillan and I have been debating back and forth on this one. Ultimately we've both agreed that intangibility seems to clash with everything else about your powerset. We'd be cool if you wanted to keep the Psionic Armory and the Telepathy but we think the intangibility undermines your character, specifically his 'squishy'-ness. However we'd be cool if you wanted to have the Psionic Armory, Telepathy and Telekinesis and maybe you could work out another way to get close to everyone's favourite 'Hot for Teacher'.

@Sep, only thing Hillan and I have taken an issue to is the shield of air. It seems a little too durable since no matter how fast air was going it wouldn't stop energy based attacks. I'd even go so far as to say the shield shouldn't be able to stop bullets, that said we'd be cool if the shield was fast enough to shift the bullet's path. Other than the shield I believe everything was good.

[Pirouette]

@Lord Wraith Much prefer having something flashier.

[Hey Im Jordan]

@Lord WraithI'll probably just remove the Kitty bit, then, she is kind of a generic one to be crushing on, huh? Well, maybe if the arc where Kitty gets possessed by Lord Ogun is still a thing? Maybe I can go that route, with her training him in combat, or something. I can change his fighting style from a fencing-esque thing to a more traditional Japanese style.... That might work?

[Lord Wraith]

@Lord WraithI'll probably just remove the Kitty bit, then, she is kind of a generic one to be crushing on, huh? Well, maybe if the arc where Kitty gets possessed by Lord Ogun is still a thing? Maybe I can go that route, with her training him in combat, or something. I can change his fighting style from a fencing-esque thing to a more traditional Japanese style.... That might work?

@Universorum

Yeah that would work well.

[Hey Im Jordan]

@Lord WraithKay, I'll just go with that then. Should I throw him on the char tab now?

[Lord Wraith]

@Lord WraithKay, I'll just go with that then. Should I throw him on the char tab now?

@Universorum

Yep that should be fine!

[Pirouette]

@Lord Wraith So... Recommendations or should I take a shot?

[Lord Wraith]

@Lord Wraith So... Recommendations or should I take a shot?

@Pirouette

Honestly I was waiting to hear back from Hillan but he's ignoring me again lol.

I personally think the problem with the current powers comes from how she expels the energy, I think the crystal pillar is the most unique method and I think that's the one you should focus on and drop the energy beams and the armor explosion.

[Hillan]

<Snipped quote by Pirouette>

Honestly I was waiting to hear back from Hillan but he's ignoring me again lol.

I personally think the problem with the current powers comes from how she expels the energy, I think the crystal pillar is the most unique method and I think that's the one you should focus on and drop the energy beams and the armor explosion.

@Lord Wraith

Nobody likes a needy girl on prom night.

[Lord Wraith]

Nobody likes a needy girl on prom night.

@Hillan

My Amaretto doesn't find me needy!

[Pirouette]

<Snipped quote by Pirouette>

Honestly I was waiting to hear back from Hillan but he's ignoring me again lol.

I personally think the problem with the current powers comes from how she expels the energy, I think the crystal pillar is the most unique method and I think that's the one you should focus on and drop the energy beams and the armor explosion.

@Lord Wraith

What about the energy drain aspect?

[Lord Wraith]

What about the energy drain aspect?

@Pirouette

I liked that part since it can also be a limitation. No energy to drain, she has no offensive abilities.

[Pirouette]

<Snipped quote by Pirouette>

I liked that part since it can also be a limitation. No energy to drain, she has no offensive abilities.

@Lord Wraith

So keep the energy drain, crystal body, and ability to create crystal formations, but nix the energy beams and exploding crystal bit.

Sound good?

[Lord Wraith]

So keep the energy drain, crystal body, and ability to create crystal formations, but nix the energy beams and exploding crystal bit.

Sound good?

@Pirouette

Sounds good to me!

[Pirouette]

Then I shall make the necessary edits and slip it into the accepted page.

[Roman]

Throwing this down just for you two to see the basics of the power write-up. More depth can be made available if needed, otherwise it's just the bio I need to write.

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| BIRTHNAME: |

Penelope Boyle

| NICKNAME(S): |

'Penny Dreadful'

| ALIAS(ES): |

Viscera

| SEX: |

Female

| AGE: |

17

| APPEARANCE: |

As above. Her hair is naturally a deep orange, though she dyes it to a richer reddish colour that she finds a tad more bearable. She dresses very casually, mostly jeans with baggy tops and jackets.

| ABILITIES: |

Biokinesis - Penelope wields a low-level but potent form of biological manipulation - the complete control of her own biological matter, makeup and shape. Using this, she is able to change her biology rapidly and at will. Though she still has a lot to learn to wield her abilities to the fullest extent, she is still capable with the transformations she has managed thus-far, which include sprouting talons and spikes from her hands, spliting her face from the corners of her mouth into a fanged maw, and erupting barbs of bone from her skin.

The extent of Penelope's biokinesis is dependent on the available body mass to manipulate. The mutations mentioned above are 'low-resource' and easy to achieve - but she is yet to accomplish anything along the lines of extra limbs, tentacles, or greater eruptions of bone and/or muscle. Additionally, her powers are yet to afford her any durability or physical enhancements beyond her 'accessories'.

| BIOGRAPHY: |

A short biography describing where you came from, how your life has been and how long you've been at the school. There's no need to write a novel here as we're all students barely into adulthood.

| MISC. NOTES: |

Probably Monster these days. The yellow one.

[Hey Im Jordan]

My character's in the tab.

Now, to wait.