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Anyone have an idea of where I can stick Alex? Kinda unsure where to place him at the moment, or who to have him run into.


Maybe something with Veronica? I've been itching to do some more dirty deeds with her.
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I'm up for it, should b interesting. I'll get something either tonight or tomorrow, most likely the later all things considered but I'll try my best to get something up soon.
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I'm up for it, should b interesting. I'll get something either tonight or tomorrow, most likely the later all things considered but I'll try my best to get something up soon.


Tell me if you need anything - I can always do a collab or something.
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I swore it was teleportation for the longest time, but eh.


So whats the verdict homie

In my humble opinion, its the same school of though but not the same power. It's just like how opening portals is different from teleportation -- one cuts holes through objects, one is manipulation the spatial plane to travel through space and / or dimensions.

To be frank if it's any issue at all Ill just change the power as it's not that big a deal to me and I'm very flexible.
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So whats the verdict homie


Well for starters....

Dimensional Manipulation Also known as Dimensiokinesis


This doesn't really explain what the power is, and one sentence isn't going to cut it for a power section. :P

Try writing the power section like you're tryna explain it to someone who doesn't know what it is.
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Well for starters....

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This doesn't really explain what the power is, and one sentence isn't going to cut it for a power section. :P

Try writing the power section like you're tryna explain it to someone who doesn't know what it is.


I have no idea what happened there, I wrote an entire section on it and I guess I accidentally cut it out somehow...? Don't worry Im not that stupid haha
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I have no idea what happened there, I wrote an entire section on it and I guess I accidentally cut it out somehow...? Don't worry Im not that stupid haha


I don't think you're stupid, but a lot of people have thought that was an acceptable way to describe a power.

lol
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I don't think you're stupid, but a lot of people have thought that was an acceptable way to describe a power.

lol


Looking back at my CS my entire power section is still describing Umbrakinesis. Oh Lord, I must have forgotten to save. This is very embarrassing, my apologies
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Here you go good sir, my CS is updated. I believe this time around I've fleshed out the power a lot more than last time. Oh, and sorry for the double post. @Mr Allen J

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@Inuyasha You should first limit the range a bit, because teleporting to the other side of the planet (without dying) is just silly. :P

The other half of his ability is basically creating another dimension...? Interesting.

The last criticism I have is when people use "the user" as pronouns in their power section because it just makes it look like you lifted it straight from powerlisting. lol

Otherwise, the power seems fine with me. Just make those edits.
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@Inuyasha You should first limit the range a bit, because teleporting to the other side of the planet (without dying) is just silly. :P

The other half of his ability is basically creating another dimension...? Interesting.

The last criticism I have is when people use "the user" as pronouns in their power section because it just makes it look like you lifted it straight from powerlisting. lol

Otherwise, the power seems fine with me. Just make those edits.


I don't know what powerlisting is; although a quick google search tells me its some form of wiki describing powers. That's just my writing style, I'll change it to Wei however. And yes, edits incoming, brace yourselves!

EDIT: Bam, done. Made it so he can't do crazy traversals (see bottom of Weakness)
Hopefully thats all in order.
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@Inuyasha Accepted.
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youtube.com/watch?v=bF41FHPztpk When you get accepted

Where should I start?
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Where should I start?


First, by moving your character to the character tab. :P
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I'll try respond asap but im kind of in Spain with unfortunately bad internet. So so sorry, but hopefully I'll get something done tonight
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I'll try respond asap but im kind of in Spain with unfortunately bad internet.


You have unfortunately found yourself in a foreign country.

@Inuyasha Step two would be to introduce your character somehow. Idk, message someone who isn't doing something and get some interactions arranged.
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You have unfortunately found yourself in a foreign country.

@Inuyasha Step two would be to introduce your character somehow. Idk, message someone who isn't doing something and get some interactions arranged.


Ight, Imma go read up on the IC and see where I can penetrate into *wink wink*
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Ight, Imma go read up on the IC and see where I can penetrate into *wink wink*


Oh bby

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@FernStone How come you "kind of" in Spain? Makes it sounds like you weren't meant to go there but accidentally booked a flight or something.
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Hmm, so Wei literally has the same ability as Bleu, yes? As long as the Admin is fine with this, I am, I guess.

Also, sorry about my absence. I was (and still am) very sick. Like damn, I haven't gotten this sick in a while. Just kinda been sleeping the days away. Was I needed for anything aside from my first post? I'll bug the other two to post to make up for it!

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