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Domino Effect - Superhero RP


Here you go guys, post your characters for appraisal. I'm working on trying to give the Alignment system / Factions some depth so some adjustments to CSs might have to occur later, sorry guys!

If you have any questions please ask!

Accepted Characters

Mr_Pink - Dr. Donald Sylvian
Another - Rioghnach MacKenzie
Double - Ishmael

Pending Characters

MonkeyBusiness - Rebecca Wright - Bio in Progress
Legion-114 - Ezra Blackwood - Ability in Progress

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I am here from the interest check :)
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what universe is this based in? DC, Marvel, or a custom one of your design?
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Finished most of my app, is alignment to a faction?
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Name: Rioghnach MacKenzie
Nickname/Alias: “Lightning” McKenzie
Age: 22
Alignment Bias: Mutant, Chaotic (I assume this is the tendency to follow the rules?), Good/Neutral

Appearance: Relatively tall at 5 ft 9, MacKenzie has waist length, mildly wavy platinum blonde hair and typical pale Scotsman’s skin. Her eyes are a stormy grey, but they flash blue for a split second before activating her powers. Favourite clothes include denim jackets, biker gloves, ripped jeans, tank tops and boots with those cute little heels and metal studs.

Personality:
Electrifying, Charged with Energy and Sparky. (I’m sorry, that was terrible. I couldn’t resist). Nearly almost always the loudest person in the room, Riognach isn’t quite the type of person to always think before she speaks. Neither is she the type of person to deploy tact in basic daily conversation. Neither will her bold personality shy away from standing up for what she believes in.

Back story:
Rioghnach MacKenzie was Scottish born and bred, so she always had the streak of the warrior in her. It seemed to be her absolute duty “protect” the female kids on the playground by pre-emptively attacking the boys, and break up every fight she saw – regardless of who started it. In truth, she was probably inspired a little by the Suffragettes of the golden days, and her time spent in an all-girls secondary school only strengthened her belief that women should be seen for the queens they really are. Sometime during her adult years, and dropping out of a Gender Studies university degree, MacKenzie turned her energy from pure radical feminism to the pro mutant cause, and moved to the US where the movement seemed to be gathering the most traction.

Ability:
Electricity control. That is, MacKenzie can generate enough electricity in her body to moderately shock a man – causing pain and muscle tightness, but not knocking him unconscious. If she has been “charged” with electricity beforehand, e.g MacKenzie has come into contact with a live wire, then she can store enough electric potential to kill.

Strength of her voltage can be amplified by metal objects also. MacKenzie wears studded gloves and shoes for the extra “oompf” factor, if she ever finds herself in a tight spot.

MacKenzie can travel at lightning speeds through a medium, as long as it can hold a voltage. For example, travelling from one end of a metal fence to another almost instantaneously.

Equipment: A rusty, lightweight iron trident that MacKenzie found in a bootsale some time ago. But hey, it does the job. The points aren’t very pointy, and the blade itself is effectively dull, but anything sharper and MacKenzie would need a legal weapons permit to own it. However, the trident looks menacing enough for most purposes, especially when it’s arcing with her electricity.
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@FantasyChicHello Here from the interest check, I'm ColouredCyan. If you wish to participate, please create a CS.

@SionnieOne like our own, but a mutation means random humans get super powers

@Mr_pinkAlignment is like D&D alignment, its a representation of your character psyche, which tells people how you'll react to a situation and who he's likely to get on with. For most D&D Alignments there is a TVTropes page which breaks down what sort of characters fit in each group.

Unlike D&D Alignment, which is 2D, mine is 3D. it was the result of not wanting to enforce Pro-mutant is good, Pro-human is bad morality on everyone so in addition to your D&D alignment, you have your Mutant/Human Bias.

Behold.



Factions are groups of people with similar goals and similar psyches, the accepted psyches for that faction are denoted by the colours. This probably won't make a lot of sense to most people but its more for me than you guys anyway. An example might help. If your character is Chaotic Good and Pro-Mutant, you'll likely sympathise GJL or ANON. If your character is Chaotic Good and Pro-Human, you'll likely sympathise HSIC or ANON.

Mr. Pink, to me your character sounds more Neutral Good with No Bias (NGN) than NNN, LGN or LNN. This means he'll likely have sympathy with the GREEN party, who on this occasion have gotten it right, Mutants and Humans should be equal and this equality should be acquired by lawful means.

Currently I'm not terribly happy about how the Factions line up. GREEN and SORDR only really exist to provide everyone with a Faction to rally behind but I can imagine a SORDR existing atleast. GREEN is sort of all law abiding citizens, which isn't really a faction. I'd also like more cross over so everyone has more choice, but that means either factions aren't picky about their members or there is an unrealistic number of factions.

I'm thinking factions will provide bonuses and unbonuses to characters that champion them which could add another layer to the RP, but that would only be relevant if people had more choice factions, so we'll see.

Please everyone, feel free to contribute.

Also this world needs more JoJo, its really not popular enough.

@AnotherYou are correct. From the sounds of it, your boy bullying, rad fem would be Chaotic Good and with a Mutant Bias, she'd fit right in with GJL.
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Wait, so it this going to be played more like D&D with bonuses and all that?
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GJL? Perrfect.

Looking at the more in depth chart, "Lawful Evil" sounds like a really cool character design. "True Neutral" looks difficult to play, but a good challenge nonetheless. Interested to see what everyone else comes up with :)
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@Mr_pinkNo no, I'm just borrowing things that I think will keep the RP interesting
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@Mr_pinkNo no, I'm just borrowing things that I think will keep the RP interesting


Ah right, is it mandatory that our characters ally with a faction?

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My app is finished now, by the way.
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@Mr_pinkCertainly not. Cool, I'll look over them tomorrow
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I'm still working on the history at the moment so please go easy.


Name: Rebecca Wright
Nickname/Alias: Becca
Age:26
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Mutant/Human Bias? M
Lawful/Chaotic Bias? C
Good/Evil Bias? N

Appearance: Rebecca stands at only 5'6" allowing her to stay under most people's radars when she doesn't want to be noticed. She is also seen normally in jeans and a hoodie over her clothes helping her blend into crowds.

Personality: Rebecca is the kind of person that you would over look as she tries to make herself appear as small as possible to stay out of the way. She likes to be silent and does not speak her mind as much as she should and just tends to go along with the flow. On the current events that are taking place, Becca does not feel like she has a choice with out things will turn out no matter if she speaks out for her kind or not and would rather not cause trouble for herself by standing out.

Back story: Becca was born on the Western coast of the United States in San Diego. She had a fairly happy life growing up as she had plenty of friends with some being human and some being mutants. She grew up happen with her small group of friends as they did everything together, but slowly as they grew up her human friends started to grow colder to the mutant friends. It was soon found out that their parents had been feeding them lies about the mutants out of mistrust even though they were getting the same rights. This was rubbing off onto the children leading them to mistrust their own friends. This lead to a miserable middle school and high school experience for her as she was isolated from the others for being different and have mutant powers.

Once Becca graduated form high school, she knew she wanted to get as far away from San Diego as possible. This meant an application to a

Ability: Rebecca's entire body has characteristics of water. She has the ability to change her physical form to water at will to avoid physical contact with an object. Her body can revert entirely to water if needed and she can disappear into any body of water weather it is fresh water or salt water with only minor irritability caused from the process. Becca naturally has a weakness toward electricity and will lose her stability on her physical form if she is near a large electrical source and she is also not able to extend her water past her normal form meaning she cant fire projectiles at anyone of anything similar. As for the clothes that she wears at the time, it seems that her clothes are not able to change into water with her body.
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Wow I totally missed the OOC link in the Interest Check! Just keeping an eye on this. Not 100% sure I'll be joining or not at this point.
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@OneWayOutMaybe I need to make the OOC more obvious then, thank you. Theres no pressure to join,I'm likely going to have to keep the RP open for its full duration to keep numbers where I'd like them.

@Mr_PinkSailorman Dr. Sylvian accepted
@AnotherLittle Lassie MacKenzie accepted
@MonkeyBusinessThe seriously important details are all good so far, get that Bio done and you'll get an accepted.
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Name: Ezra Blackwood
Nickname/Alias: Rift
Age: 23

Alignment: Chaotic Evil
Mutant/Human Bias: Both species are equally hated.

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Personality: Cool and collective on the outside. However, his mind without his harness is so heavily fragmented, if he were to not wear it, Ezra would be classed psychotic.

Back story:

Ezra and his younger brother were born in the East of England where they both grew up in what seemed like a perfectly normal family environment. Both went to school, dad went to work and mum stayed home to look after the house. Things were simple.
That was until The Secret Order came into play.

Both boys were found to have mutant genes within their genome unlike ever recorded in the earliest years of the Order’s existence. The boys went under hundreds if not thousands of cruel experimentations, there purpose most of the time had very little coherence and were mostly done because they could be done.

The youngest brother, Michael was killed during these experiments, well physically anyway. But the brother’s mutant powers had allowed him to be able to ‘transfer’ his mind over to Ezra, whose shattered mind barley even remembered who he was, let alone his brother.
After years of development, and the destruction of five Order facilities. A harness was created that could contain Ezra’s temporal rift abilities and allow his mind to piece itself back together. But the harness also forced him to do the Order’s bidding.

Ability: Temporal Rift:
Ezra has the ability to defy the laws of physics and bend them to his will. However, he does so by the energy he collects from killing anything with natural energy, such as humans, or better yet, mutants. This energy is stored within him, the more energy he has consumed, the greater the effect range, magnitude and duration.

Equipment: The GX-114 Harness. Two wrist mounted blades. G9 Supressed Pistol.

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@Legion-114 Those powers are much too vague, defying physics allows you to do anything from levitation to making mini suns. From the name you've given your ability I can infer that you mean to use it to phase out of existence/teleport, but you should have said this if its the case.

Rewrite the power to be less vague about your power and you'll likely get an accept.

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Name: Ishmael
Nickname/Alias: Leviathan, at least that's what the nice people call him. Everyone else usually defaults to Monster or Freak or some variant thereof.
Age: He honestly doesn't know. No one ever told him when he was born or even when his birthday is. His best guess is that he may still be in his twenties, though even that is a rough estimate at best.
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Lawful/Chaotic Bias? C
Good/Evil Bias? N
Mutant/Human Bias? N

Appearance: What most see when they see Ishmael is a young man who keeps himself wrapped up in a trench coat, hat-and-scarf combination or some kind of hood, doing everything he can to stay covered up even in warm weather. Underneath all that is what most would describe as a some kind of a humanoid sea monster. With skin covered in scales of blue and green, fin-like extensions in place of what would normally be hair, sizable gills at the base of his neck and along the sides of where his ribs are, and membrane webbing between and his fingers and toes, Ishmael looks like he walked off the set of the Creature From the Black Lagoon. When he speaks his voice contains a gravelly, monstrous tone that he cannot hide or change, though he has at times managed to pass it off as the voice of a chain-smoker while on the phone. Even his eyes are inhuman, instead being dark and beady and obviously designed more for seeing underwater. If that weren't enough, he can grow to the size of a body-builder, his torso becoming much more puffed out and his arms and legs much more beefy. If he weren't a monster before, he certainly is at that point.

Personality: Ishmael is practically the embodiment of the strong, silent type. He hates talking, and when he does he keeps it short and to the point. If he is provoked into a more prominent speaking role, it's likely because someone angered him enough into making him explode into telling them off, with the unfortunate side effect of becoming much more frightening than he ever intends to. Because showing his feelings tends to make him look like more of a scary monster, Ishmael has adopted the practice of keeping those feelings bottled up, letting them out only when he knows he's alone or the people he's with know him better than to be frightened, though mostly it's the former scenario.

At times Ishmael comes across like he just hates everyone in general, though that could just be the nature of his mutation doing that. People who meet him, but don't get to know him, often swear up and down that just because Ishmael himself feels miserable that that means everyone else has to be miserable along with him. They are wrong, of course, as anyone who spends a significant amount of time around him will quickly realize. Unfortunately, his frightening appearance does him no favors when it comes to making friends, which essentially means that, as far as the rest of the world is concerned, Ishmael is just a bitter monster full of hate and contempt for those around him. No matter how far from the truth that sentiment actually is.

Back story: Unsure of when he was born, or even of his parentage, Ishmael was essentially the property of a circus for as long as he could remember. The Ocean Terror, or so the signs claimed he was. He was basically a sideshow freak. Though unlike all the others in the circus, who at least still looked human and could go out and interact with them normally, Ishmael was of course too scary to ever be let out of his confinement. Either he was in a cage of some kind, or kept in an aquarium tank. Either way, he was never allowed to go out, or even to speak to people. Behind the scenes, the ringmaster was quite the cruel man who demanded that his rules be followed or that there would be hell to pay. He liked targeting Ishmael with his abuse in particular, perhaps because he simply hated mutants, no one was ever really sure. But he barely fed Ishmael, believing that the hungrier he was, the more frightening he could be toward the audiences and costumers. After all, a ravenous monster was far easier to sell than a kind one. If he wasn't treating Ishmael with malnourishment, the ringmaster was subjecting Ishmael to other tortures, mainly to see just what kind of punishment the monster could and couldn't take, so that he could be advertised as "indestructible" and be able to prove it with performances.

This went on for quite a few years, mostly until Ishmael's late teens. On one particular day, Ishmael finally snapped. He was sick of his treatment and sick of the ringmaster getting away with all his abuses. With his anger, his body grew larger until he was able to break out of his chains and cage. He lashed out against the ringmaster, killing him. Still coming to terms with what he'd done, Ishmael ran. He ran away from the circus, simply fighting off everyone who tried to capture or restrain him. Thankfully, they were setup on a pier that day and Ishmael escaped to the sea. He's tried to keep himself hidden since then, only going out into public while hiding his appearance under heavy costume and usually running away again as soon anyone discovers him. Since he was never given a name, and the only bit of culture he was exposed to at the circus was listening to one of the clowns read Moby-Dick, he gave himself the name Ishmael. Of course, the media often referred to him as Leviathan, choosing to compare him to sea monsters from mythology. He's tried helping people, doing the whole hero thing, but it almost always blows up in his face somehow, so nowadays he just sticks to keeping to himself.

Ability: Ishmael is probably one of the few mutants in the world who actually physically mutated. He is essentially an amphibious humanoid fish person. Not only can he breathe in the water, but he can also withstand the immense pressure of swimming down to the ocean floor. He's tough, even outside the water, where his scaly skin is tough enough to be like armor, and Ishmael himself is strong enough to tear open a car and rip out the engine parts. The tips of his fingers and toes can rip and tear as if they were claws, and he appears to have some degree of a healing factor, as what few injuries that can be inflicted upon him are often healed right up within hours. His last ability, often tied directly to his anger and rage, is when he grows in size, essentially "hulking out" and temporarily becoming even stronger and tougher than he was previously. This can be a curse as much as a blessing, though, since hulking out like this often involves going into a blind rage that he can't always control. Being amphibious, Ishmael can't stay out of water for more than a couple of days at most before needing to submerge himself again to re-hydrate. Speaking of which, Ishmael can also be weakened by dehydration, especially when subjected to extreme heat. Extreme cold can also slow him down, this is all likely due to his amphibian nature.

Equipment: None

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Alignment: Chaotic Good

Good/Evil Bias? N

...the only bit of culture he was exposed to at the circus was listening to one of the clowns read Mody-Dick, he gave himself the name Ishmael....


Unfortunately we have no copies of Mody-Dick by Herman Melvile, with one L, the well known Dutch author. Have you tried a Pharmacist?

Besides these mistakes, looks good. Consider yourself accepted.

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I get the Moby-Dick correction, but I'm not sure how the Good/Evil Bias counts as a mistake?
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