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Well Micheal feels a bit scared of Erik.
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@Eviledd1984 Really? Why?
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Micheal think that Erik wants to hurt him or Danny or yell at him which Mike doesn't want.
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@Eviledd1984 Really? When did that shift?
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Well soon Mike will have the courage to talk to him again.
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@Eviledd1984 Oh! You are saying I will find out in RP- gotcha
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Of course i don't mean to offend you if i do im sorry.
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@Eviledd1984 oh I'm not offended it just took me a moment to figure out what you were saying haha
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Okay sorry for the confusion.
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In case anyone posts interacting with my characters! I'll be studying for my AP exam tomorrow and will be unavailable. You can skip over me!
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Hello! Is it still possible to apply here?
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@finalends Totally ! Just check out the first OOC post for more details on that!
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I probably made some typos and mistakes, but I hope this works and can be approved of after being checked or any edits required. -Sits and plays the waiting game for the GM-
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@paragloan Should I wait for your post or just reply to Teres now?

@finalends That's a pretty interesting character! Lot of great details! I have like two questions though. Those are some pretty serious crimes- how did he end up getting sent to a group home rather than something more intensive? Second question- insomnia of any notable illness is somewhat confusing- do you mean multiple diagnoses with Isomnia being the primary related symptom? If so what? An argument could be made here for some type of dissociative disorder as being the primary diagnosis. Aside from those two big questions- I hope you come and join us with the GM's say so- Axel seems like a fun character to interact with!
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I could always rewrite the incident, but due to the creation of the group home, they would be advised to take the opportunity. If he was really a killer, then it could just cause trouble there in getting people killed, and also solid proof to evict him. It's still unknown of the many contributing to it to the group home's creation, but they'd take the opportunity nonetheless. As for another, his crime wasn't solid or proved him to be the clear killer, and they didn't want to end the case right there, so they would defer his presence to there since he couldn't do much in the court. It's also why it's currently a year as it's to be decided whether he's to be moved to a jail, or to be free of the eviction.

Ever since the first trauma, he obtained insomnia. The trauma could cause depression and lead to a multitude of illnesses, but of all the main occurring ones, he has insomnia. If you just want me to list insomnia as the only possible illness, then that's how it will be for the rest of his life until the next trauma or occurrence.
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The first answer here is really confusing. When you eviction do you mean conviction? Also I don't know what you mean by the creation of the group him and the "unknown of the many contributing to it to the group homes creation. The group home is not a mysterious place by itself, it is like a halfway house for teens suffering from mental illnesses that has existed for quite some time before your character. Several of us have been there for months. You also seem to implying that if your character killed someone there it would be solid proof and that is the opportunity the police would "be advised to take advantage of." That doesn't make sense as the police would not want him to kill again to prove guilt, not only does that endanger lives it would do nothing to prove he had anything to do with the first alleged crime. I can understand if he was placed there while still being under suspicion of a crime, though with no solid case against him.

As for 2nd answer, way clearer- I want to know all of his diagnoses actually. Makes it more interesting. Depression was very clear, but are there any more?
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Well if we put the other diagnoses and the murder, you could always include the sleeping disorders in. It was unknown if he was knocked out, but if we can add some medical information and sleeping disorders. We could also include sleep walking and night terrors to match with the timing of the trauma, but don't occur as often.. Therefore, he could've done it asleep or from the point of insanity. He prefers to not take any medications or drugs as well as resents them. It could just be a series of avoiding any treatment that leads him to craziness from multiple depression symptoms. He didn't really develop PTSD or any panic disorders, but more of just a restlessness and paranoia.

But like the included sleep symptoms or from the depression, he could've committed a crime asleep, which wold be impressive, or he could just have killed someone out of insanity. Even so, it's probably be a treatment for him to be watched and somehow get along, since he usually was anti-social. The group home is equivalent to a prison but to also handle him with treatment. Otherwise he would've gone to a hospital of actual supervision or gone to prison remaining that way and somehow committing suicide or dying, but went to the group home instead.

I probably also made some mistakes with using the wrong words, like eviction. I didn't think of conviction at the time DX. I guess I wasn't quite clear about the information of the house, but it seemed like a mystery of being developed rather than just normal rehab or being in a hospital. But it's probably just a better change to get both done to see if it'll cause any change by replacing his year to be there, if not, then they have to probably do something about it.
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Go ahead and post. It seems to make more sense that way. I will just jump in afterwards.

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Nice to meet you. Welcome.
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Hey! It was a really cool bio, including the story of the incident, but as Eurmal already mentioned, murder is WAY too much for the group home. Unfortunately, the group home has nothing to do with the mystery or anything, the supernatural aspects of this rp are only the demon and Teres.

See this place is basically a step before a psychiatric facility. A place that can put parents at ease because of its humane appearance. Incidents such as murder are much to dangerous for it, none of the nurses are trained to deal with such a patient.

The place has a strict rule of three Misendeavors and your out, off to the mental hospital.

@EurmalEye you can reply before I do, I need to catch up on my rps first.
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I wanted to make it something serious, but I guess a crime wouldn't work out. Instead I rewrote it to be an attempt of suicide so some sort of death is included, but failed. If it's too intense to have it like that, despite what I wrote, then I can simply just change it to something else I can think of. But here are the changes.



I already changed the things above for it, but if this is alright with you I'll wait approval or any advisable changes.
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