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Hidden 8 yrs ago → 8 yrs ago Post by Aura
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I posted a character sheet :D
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Your supposed to get it accepted first.
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Your supposed to get it accepted first.


OPS SORRY
I had posted it in OCC but then I worried I was suppoed to put in characters so then I changed it and blah.
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@VATROU I'll get a reply in to our collab today, sorry for not already having done so.
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<Snipped quote by Hellis>

OPS SORRY
I had posted it in OCC but then I worried I was suppoed to put in characters so then I changed it and blah.


Calm down. Everyone makes mistakes, I know a person who hopped into the wrong OoC randomly and felt like a complete goof. I'm sure Ded, NMS and Hound will ask for any changes and all you got to do is make them.
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@VATROU I'll get a reply in to our collab today, sorry for not already having done so.


Natural Selection Arc has been dividing your attention.
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@Aura: I don't know if @Nitemare Shape and @Hound55 have the same opinion, but the character sheet seems a little bare bones.

If you are still going with the imperfected serum, your character sheet does not explain how she has survived for ~5 months while her body rejects the serum. An example of this can be seen in this post.

Honestly, I feel that your character gaining her powers from the perfected serum might make more sense in this case. Her powers alone are enough of a "curse".
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@Nytefall & @EnterTheHero & @fdeviant



Okay guys, I'll give you 1 full week - 7 Days to reply to my last post. If there isn't any reply to stop Odette from opening the portal or stop her from taking Racheli through it I will move on and Racheli will be kidnapped.

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Woooo just watched Civil War finally

That shit was INSPIRING
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Actually...prior to August, he was experimenting on "guinea pigs" with an incomplete serum. These subjects would slowly suffer from their bodies rejecting the serum. So this could work.


I agree. I like where you're headed and I think it's a good start. I'd just like to see a bit more information. Tell us a bit about her life before she was experimented on. Why is she the way she is? Did she ever have a family? Friends? If it helps, take a look at some of the other CS's and see what kind of info they have.

Again, this isn't a denial, it's just a request for more info. Like I said, I like where I think you're going with this.
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@Aura One of my suggestions, and how I did many of mine, was to do a timeline of events for the bio. I would basically start from my PC's birth, determine what events were important to her (like say key milestones like first date, prom, sports she or he liked, etc then progressed into adulthood and finally into the present). It helps with fleshing and writing about the PC's bio while preventing it from becoming lengthy or complete fluff, if that's what concerns you.

Btw, I'm not aiming to step on the GMs toes with this suggestion, merely thought I would share my tactics to help.
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Alright, so after a few weeks of apartment searching and budget planning, I think I actually have time to post the things I've been meaning to post this weekend!
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Hidden 8 yrs ago → 8 yrs ago Post by VATROU
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Made my first post from my new tablet, super excited to show off what Barron has been doing, I admit though I totally forgot what's Barron's Text color is so I kinda winged that.
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Work's been killing me. I'll try to post sometime this weekend, guys. Sorry for the wait.
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Work...apartment hunting...pfft.

Excuses, excuses...


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*coughcoughcoughdon'tgetarrestedthisweekendcoughcoughcough*
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*coughcoughcoughdon'tgetarrestedthisweekendcoughcoughcough*


Hush you. I will if I want to, there's so many fun things that can be done with cuffs after all.
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Hush you. I will if I want to, there's so many fun things that can be done with cuffs after all.


See, you say that and people think nice, wholesome kink.

I see that, and I have flashbacks to a crazy ex and the movie Misery...
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See, you say that and people think nice, wholesome kink.

I see that, and I have flashbacks to a crazy ex and the movie Misery...


Misery has always wanted company... :p
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I've also amended one of the rules, and added another which I think will help out in the long run due to issues that have popped up from time to time.

The new rule:

* If you are collaborating with another player and you do not hear from them for 1 week, and they have not let us know of an absence either in the OOC or through PM's either directly to you or the GM's, feel free to move on without them.

The amended rule:

* This game is essentially a PG-13 game. Use your discretion for cussing and swearing in posts. Some swearing is okay, but don't overdue it. Please don't make me amend this down the line.

and to clarify that last one, I personally don't care about swearing, but others might have a problem with it or be offended. So again, let's not overdue it.
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