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If I read correctly more people are wanted, had me eye on this for a while. If my computer doesn't need cleaning I'd like to join, if it does then ignore me above letting me know... best get those spectacle cleaning things ready.
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@Orlan Yeah go ahead and make a sheet.

@6slyboy6 A few issues with the sheet I'd like to see fixed up:
- I would like to see a ship from the SW universe, there's no short selection of them. If you absolutely cannot find one that works then you can make one, just describe in detail some of its features and how it works.
- Her only talent is bounty hunting? She's not a good pilot, thief or anything? What about like basic skills, does she have any medical knowledge or know any languages other than Basic?
- Backstory needs some work, which world exactly? Dantooine maybe? Describe more in detail how she managed to kill the criminal when trained bounty hunters had failed. Where did she get 40k credits from? That's a pretty big bounty, was it all from that? What about her experiences in becoming a bounty hunter? How'd she get noticed by the Empire. There's also some noticeable spelling and grammatical errors that I'd like to see fixed.
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@Heatlolz

-I am working on finding a ship

-Yes, maybe she can fly her ship but that is all. She can't treat wounds bigger than bruises, and she really isn't all that good in anything, apart from skills needed for bounty hunting. She knows only the Common Tounge and nothing else. Though the terminals can easely translate speech...

-Yeah, I mean, the 40k was from that one bounty. The rest I will do, but I am kinda busy, so don't expect it to be up soon.
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A Bothan bounty hunter, the bloke seems reasonable to me.
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@Cruallassar I don't know, I intended my character a cheapy one. Her gear is around 2000 creds and the rest of her money went into her ship. And I did say she can't handle money well. I won't have a 15k starting armor XD


Cheapy one with that kind of gear? Yeah, a shadowsuit can't be anything less than at least ten thousand, and that's probably on the low end. Same goes for that other suit. DL-18s are pretty common, but that sniper rifle you already have seems like a slightly un-cheap piece of gear, if not super high-end. There's no way that starting armor is less than 15k already. :p
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Wonder how much bounty hunters would get if they stripped their bounty, their bodyguards and their ships for anything of value and sell on the husks as scrap and animal food.
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@Cruallassar Check the links goven. The Shadoqsuit was around 600 Credits whilst the Cresh Luck was sold for 500 Credits. Its not nearly as expensive as the 15k anti blaster armor.
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@Orlan The sheet looks good other than the backstory. The Rebel Alliance hasn't been established yet. There's been murmurs of rebellion but no ones done anything. The Empire is in total control. Fix the backstory and it's good to go. Describe his Jedi encounter a bit more, and how he ended up getting noticed by the Empire. Basically just buff it and fix the Alliance bit.
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@Cruallassar Check the links goven. The Shadoqsuit was around 600 Credits whilst the Cresh Luck was sold for 500 Credits. Its not nearly as expensive as the 15k anti blaster armor.


...that makes no sense. What source provides these costs? There's no way some simple durasteel plates to defend against blasters cost more than some exotic body-suit made of rare materials that absorbs light, or a wearable sensor suit.
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I shall post after some sleep
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Sorry I disappeared for a while. Heat are you fine with me coming back to this RP with the same character?
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Sorry I disappeared for a while. Heat are you fine with me coming back to this RP with the same character?


Yeah, sure. I didn't kill any characters off that disappeared.
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There we go, a Bothan Bounty Hunter whose career launched during a lucky coincidence of a spike and a Jedi with no one else watching.
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@Orlan The Bothan bounty hunter is accepted! Please post the sheet to the appropriate tab and you're clear to post in the IC. To cover for missing the start you can have it where your character was message essential details by the Empire and have him go right to Corellia.
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Alright, I will have Kai moved over soon.
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Will have an IC post up today.
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@HeatYou probably got busy, and it's understandable. We're ready when you are, though.
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@HeatYou probably got busy, and it's understandable. We're ready when you are, though.


Yeah, sorry about that. Still trying to figure out where to go with the IC post, as well.
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Well Coronet City would have the odd shipyard nearby and they could be targets for riots, a famous workplace is a good enough spot to do some rabble-rousing.
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Yeah, sorry about that. Still trying to figure out where to go with the IC post, as well.


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