Finally got him done. Go ahead and massacre him. i will ty

Fuck you, @Buddha! But yes, yes I was. And as you can see, I present gayness to you. fix'd

Maema Nisshoku [+]

Maema Nisshoku

_{“nah there's only place for one snark edgelord here fgt”}

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this is not how u play the piano wow

Full Body Veiw [+]

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Personnel Files

_{Accessible by personnel with a C3 security clearance or upwards.}

❖ Name--

Maema Nisshoku the name just rolls off the tongue, ill call him mama

❖ Aliases--

Swordless one, Dragon child, O'lat (plague) only thing in common they have is their edge level

❖ Age--

17

❖ Rank--

Chūnin

❖ Affiliation--

Hamajo Confederation good boy

❖ Sex--

Male

❖ Birthplace--

Kumo-province, Kumogakure not black denied

❖ Bloodline--

Nisshoku

❖ Sexuality--

Heterosexual, his current girlfriend is unhappy with his choices to align with Hamajo Confederation how much does she charge him an hour

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Appearance Descriptions

_{As compiled on basis of the 11th corps intelligence gathering, including pictures}

❖ Appearance--

Seventeen years have come and gone. Genetics, time, and training has honed him into a handsome looking male id lenny face but fk it. Even among the cottonlands of Kumo-province he’s being hailed and admired for his stature and build he's not black no way will he be complimented for his build over there. In comparison to others of his kind, Maema dons his clothing in hopes of being prepared for combat at any time. He’s accustomed to wearing tshirts of varying colors underneath different types of outerwear (usually some form of gakuren). Darker hued trousers fall over his legs, while a deep blue sash ties around his waist. Unnaturally black haidate pieces--lined with gold--protects his thighs. Off-duty he’s more or less the same. He doesn’t feel the need to be fashionable so he can come off as rugged and simple. Either way he’s always wearing the same ankle-high, heavy-duty sandals. A optimal mixture between combat boots and ninjawear. A cherished item flows under both his sash and haidate, a mantle of sorts colored crimson with gold fringes lining its edges.

While others were plowing in the fields of their farms Maema was being tortured by his father’s training methods he cant gather cotton like his brethren huh i see. His face is in conflict with the roughcast of his body. Where lean, hard muscle are pressed tight between necessary fat and skin on his body; his face is kinda of long and elegant. The only fierce part to his face is the sharpness of his golden eyes, hidden behind his dull expression.

Aforementioned his body is near-perfection pls. It's been honed for mobility and strength, to soak up and adapt to predictable disturbances on the battlefield. His sleek body looks unimpressive in clothing, however, beneath said clothes the muscles behind the skin are visible. Four highly developed abs fall into a flat stomach as if the rest were abandoned. The lower half of his legs are thin in appearance, making the top half seem bulky in comparison. All in all, Maema could be seen as the typical ninja but atypical man. so an average shonen character

❖ Height--

5’9”/ 1.75m

❖ Weight--

153lbs/69kg

❖ Build--

Maema is made up of lean muscle, his physique shows this rather well. His mass is dominant in his torso and arms, giving them a solid, cut look. When compared to his arms, though covered with cloths and the sorts, his legs can seem kinda meek he skips leg day, i can smell the douchebaggery already. He has a feral form to his gait, some call it wolven. Others call it innate confidence.

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Psych. reports

_{Medical secrecy applies.}

❖ Fearless ❖ Impulsive ❖ Apathetic ❖ Hopeful ❖

apathetic but hopeful, these two seem funny together for some reason

❖ Personality--

Maema was taught at an early age that being a genius meant nothing in the face of three entities. Those three things were experience, numbers, and the unknown p sure a genius would handle these three factors better than any cunt trying to be smart about it. He learned the value of being fearless days after finding his mother’s head on the porch ooohhh la la. To step to the challenge without second-guessing yourself or those around you inspired a kind of fear and admiration. That lesson didn’t take long to become concrete. The next one did. It was a lesson of analytical schooling, one that guided him well in deciding if he should approach a situation with reckless abandon or patience. He can go either way when lives aren’t on the line. When they are a preternatural impulsiveness springs to life.

Maema wants to be a saviour mama jesus; he’s seen the ruthless of the Hamajo Confederation, and has vowed to never just sit by again. This, unfortunately isn’t coupled with some disregard for his own life. Not in the slightest. He has taught himself to be apathetic to others so hopeful holy shit, to toss aside a hopeless situation p hopeful there too. That’s not something he’s proud of but his father was always a very grave man.

Outside of the norm, outside of bloodshed and war; one might catch him smiling. Maybe even laughing but it's rare and here comes the barbecue sasuke. His life has been undoubtedly hard. Growing up in Kumo-province taught a valuable lesson: not everyone is looked after by the Confederation damn rite u parasite. Because of this Maema could be consider a cynical youth he's enjoying the sauce yes. He looks at every situation with caution and finds most people, specifically those full of cheer, extremely annoying is what happens when you have too much of the sauce. Despite being indifferent to most people, Maema has a hard time seeing others suffer. His father calls it “White Knight Syndrome” if you could stop doing that with girls online dat be gr8 and says it has no place in the world of ninjas. Maema calls it saving himself.

He sees it that way sometimes.

When he was child he didn’t get along with others this is a recurring trope i've noticed, did his girlfriend see the light in him no one understood????. In fact he hated them for rejecting him when he actually tried to be friends with them. Maema learns his social lessons quickly. He engraves them harshly into himself and makes sure not to make the same mistakes as before. If nothing else can be said about him, it's that he can hold horrifically long grudges. salty mf

❖ History--

Birthright
The story goes that a wandering samurai found his true love in the middle of blood and tears. Supposedly he was renowned throughout the countries as the “The metrosexual Dragon” a warrior whose blade struck true more times than not. A sellsword whose assistance and friends gave victory to those who hired him. His name was Yasu Nisshoku and he fell in love with a traveling philanthropist. She was not perfect 6/10? but she inspired him to do things for the greater good. When Haruhi since when did the god of the universe live in kumo wtf retired to Kumogakure, Yasu was behind her, hoping to settle down and build a family.

Years afterwards they gave birth to a boy. They named him Maema in concert with the loose-theme of their own names. They took on Yasu’s family name: Nisshoku and almost instantly he was given the moniker “Dragon child” by Yasu friends and “Goddess’ son” by Haruhi’s friends and family. beats the wolf children, naming them after the weather of that specific day 'ohey today there's heavy drought, let's call our kid ... HEATWAVE FUK YA'

The boy’s youth was interrupted by the Hamajo Confederate taking over Kumogakure. The province changed for the worst afterwards. It became flooded with poverty and eventually, through some unknown process became a farming province. It was an ugly adjustment but Yasu and Haruhi did so without open complaints. For a time. the confederates are reclaiming their cotton son

Decision
While Maema was working the fields, training, and attending school; his mother was busy stirring up trouble. She didn’t agree with the Hamajo Confederation. She fought against it with political movements; playing on the different causes to start a small alliance behind her humanitarian rallying points fucking hippies. Yasu watched this behind the scenes, warning her to be careful. She thought she had been. She was secretive about her growing rebellion but that would prove useless against the Confederation’s resources. The last Maema would see of his mother was her body’s gruesome decapitation, her head tilted on their home’s porch. at least the confed have style, fukin hippies uggghhhhh

It was covered-up to be some Hamajo radical but Yasu had his own suspicions listen to Kyuubi news ull be fine( get it cuz FOX NEWS HAHAHAHAHAHHAA). He tempered his rage into productive action. When his comrades came back with information that suggested a Hamajo higher-up had quelled the Kumo-province uprising, it was then that Yasu thought to act. That was quickly snuffed out once he learned the merciless truth. That numerous, inconspicuous deaths that occurred only months after Haruhi’s own. It worsened when he lost all contact with a number of his friends. pinochet taught us well

Afterwards Yasu was struck with depression. baaawwww

He redouble Maema’s training. From physical conditioning to an understanding of topography. There was a range of other studies that he was required to soak up but none of them were quite as effective as sparring and mental games. Years traversed faster than he thought and before long, Maema was a Chunin in the Hamajo Confederation. <3 no gf seeing him as a tortured soul tho k fien u win

❖ Familial ties--

Maema’s relationship with his father is strained. He greatly admires the man his father use to be. The fun-loving, dramatic man that was a reluctant-hero. Nowadays the two of them greet each other in alien apathetic forms. As if too much emotion could cause a catastrophe. Sometimes he resents his father for giving in to the pain.

Yasu Nisshoku | Father | 34, Kumo-province, Yasu is a farmer who passes the time by wallowing in his own misery. Occasionally you can catch him practicing his unique, saw-sword swordsmanship outside of his home. young as fuck holy shit, fukin teen parents

no gf still, i was right to assume she's a hoe. gibe price plz my lesbian char is interested

❖ Dreams, short term goals, and fears.--

His childhood ended the day he stumbled upon his mother’s decapitated head. Since then he’s had no dreams, only goals. He wants to hurt the Hamajo Confederation and wouldn’t mind returning his father’s smile in the process. He fears what the world may look like if the Hamajo Confederation went unchecked. so he's hamajo but he's not. time to bring something to fear then

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Combat reports

_{Gathered based on exercises, training routines, and combat experience reports}

❖ Combat style--

Maema attacks with unrelenting, self-perilously, and overkilling force. tryhard He utilizes his kekkei-tota in conjunction with his taijutsu, bojutsu, and limited ninjutsu to decimate all. When he can’t find those kinks he doggedly attacks until he’s weighed the opposition down to near nothing. Oddly enough, he’s prone to being caught in genjutsus hehehehhehehehehehehehhehe and lacks the knowledge to counteract sealing jutsus as well. He’s also known to be a tad overconfident. he seems gud, tho why is he overconfident if you make it clear like 4 times that he learns from his bs. p sure after seeing all this shit from hamajo he'd tone down the confidence, especially if he calls other more cheery/confident ppl annoying

❖ Kekkei Genkai--

❖ Name

Suiginton (Mercury Release)

❖ Description

Suiginton (Mercury Release) is more or less exactly what it sounds like. The control, creation, and manipulation of the silvery-white substance. The liquid metal is poisonous, causing severe damage to the senses, muscles, and nerves. Mostly producing tremors, physical weakness, and a cruel disorientation in most beings. Suiginton is a Kekkei Tota that combines Earth, Water, and Lightning chakra natures.

yeah you better go into detail on that later
❖ Strengths

Mercury is malleable. It strengths come from its flexibility and the poisonous effect it can have in combat. Its also conductive of electricity and rather useful in a pinch. Small applications can be made to counteract potentially difficult situations. For example making a key for a door, flight, or discreetly taking out masses. Handling it most of his life has given him a high resistance to the poisoning. still needs details on poisoning

❖ Weaknesses

Mercury is weak to both heat and cold. It turns brittle when met with tundric temperatures and melts when it comes into contact with sweltering heat. Suiginton is dangerous. The key to this is actually afflicting Maema with the cold or heat. This works better with cold than it does heat. If his temperature drops, his mercury is brittle and useless. If hot, the mercury comes out incapable of forming solid incarnations. k

❖ Ninja techniques

❖ Custom techniques

■ Name
Suiginton: Kage Bunshin no Jutsu (Mercury Release: Shadow Clone Jutsu)

■ Rank
A

■ Range
3-5 meters

■ Description
Unique to Maema’s Kekkei Tota this technique is used like most shadow clones are, however due to its nature this one is gravely more dangerous. It was inspired by Maema’s father. Like other shadow clones it can interact with the environment and can perform its own techniques. The clones also soak up knowledge and sends it to the user once dispensed of. When injured the clone disperses like liquid, splashing around. Considering the chance that it's melted the clone gives off a noxious, small dose of its poison in the form of gas what does the gas do? quantities? effects? duration? pls. At most Maema is capable of summoning 2 clones at a time.two in total for the whole fight or ...? quantity will depend on wtf mercury gas does.

■ Name
Suiginton: Yasu no ha (Mercury Release: Blade of Yasu)

■ Rank
B

■ Range
Close

■ Description
Maema strings four hand seals together ending on the dragon seal boop. He then moves his hand to the empty scabbard on his side and brandishes a blade made of mercury. The insides gives the weapon its shape and intricate designs. The grass thin blade is beautified by a thumb-sized circle near the base and a serpentine dragon flying towards it on the flat. When cut by the blade the opposition contracts mercury poisoning. durability + POISON DETAILS PLS

■ Name
Suiginton: Haruhi (Mercury Release: Haruhi) i get a gaara feel to this

■ Rank
B

■ Range
2 meters around user

■ Description
Maema wields the seal of confrontation towards his opponent. A second later he pulls chakra from his heart and it forms into a mercury maiden lol. This woman is malleable LIKE YOU MO-... Wait, defense oriented, and floats off the ground. Haruhi is quicker than Maema and physical attacks are near useless against her. Cold is the only effective way to halt her assault as melting her turns her into noxious gas and she simply invades the enemy before fading away. The only downfall is that she only counterattacks but this utilizes minimal amounts of her limited chakra. so wait, i don't get it. is she solid? If so any strong person can slap her away. If she's liquid then ... She is kind of a useless tobi? Also that weakness is stupid. Basically only those with Ice Kage can deal with this, and that's a p gay and rare KG tbh. Please explain how she attacks, how she hardens, how stuff don't affect her. See this is a new KT, not KG, KT, as such we do need super details. AND POISON OMFG

■ Name
Suiginton: Gyakusatsu (Mercury Release: Massacre) edgy

■ Rank
C

■ Range
Long

■ Description
Maema molds an armory of weapons behind him, all of which is aimed towards his opponent(s). Once released they shoot out towards their target at break-neck speeds. Hardened to the density of a solid if impact’s made the weapon can deal bone-breaking damage. On top of which mercury poison is dispensed through the body if cut or hit on an open wound. Some weapons that may appear are halberds, various types of blades, and lances. so this is kind of a magnetism thing. ok C is cool with this if poison isn't relevant. hence why I need details on poison. cough

■ Name
Suiginton: Kohitsuji (Mercury Release: Lamb) baaaaaaa

■ Rank
B

■ Range
10 meters around

■ Description
Maema forms 13 handsigns ending on the ram before releasing a hail, barrage, and frenzy of small mercury spheres. They are relatively weak impacting with D-rank damage but traveling at C-rank speeds. When they splash against an object the outer shell is broken and the mist inside spreads and joins together. Eventually a fog of mercury is made, endangering both himself with the lethal dosage and everyone inside. Maema the fearless welcomes the untimely death if it's for a worthy cause. he's practically immune to it, that or the brain damage from mercury poisoning (which is the true symptom) made him 'fearless'. so hiding in mist poison version

■ Name
Suiginton: Kusari (Mercury Release: Chain)

■ Rank
C

■ Range
5 meters

■ Description
His main form of attack comes in the form of silverish-white tendrils with hand-shaped appendages at its end. They fly out from a mirror-source behind him, usually without the necessity of weaving hand seals. They have a limit of fifteen feet from himself and strikes quick. The end and length of the tendril can be molded into pikes, hammers, or other weapons. When exposed to extreme cold they become brittle and break. When exposed to extreme heat they melt and become useful as nothing more than whips at its best and at its worse, a noxious poison. this is not C rank, High B low A, this is basically Sasori's tail thing times whatever with mystery poison and shape shifting. It's strong, and no hand seals so mega reactive too.

❖ Weaponry and tools

■ Name
Dogma’s Disciple.

■ Weapon/tool type
A elder wood, worn scabbard. Silver and golden dragons twist around each other on its frame.

■ Range
Close

■ Description
A scabbard. . . that’s all.

Finally got him done. Go ahead and massacre him.

Fuck you, @Buddha! But yes, yes I was. And as you can see, I present greatness to you.

Maema Nisshoku [+]

Maema Nisshoku

_{“I’am Maema the fearless. The dragon child of Kumo. Yada, yada, yada. ”}
o wow strong start, we have a nice quote with no context so we don't know why he is the dragon child, nice

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i think he looks v nice

Full Body Veiw [+]

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Personnel Files

_{Accessible by personnel with a C3 security clearance or upwards.}

❖ Name--

Maema Nisshoku

did you cross together the word 'meme' with 'mama' to get this name

❖ Aliases--

Swordless one, Dragon child, O'lat (plague) get me some of that dank you been smokin (puff puff puff) cause these nicknames make no sense boyo

❖ Age--

17 he's a youngin

❖ Rank--

Chūnin

❖ Affiliation--

Hamajo Confederation

❖ Sex--

Male

❖ Birthplace--

Kumo-province, Kumogakure

❖ Bloodline--

Nisshoku nice i definitely know this clan. some basic info might've been nice, but i guess it is optional so i cant really blame you

❖ Sexuality--

Heterosexual, his current girlfriend is unhappy with his choices to align with Hamajo Confederation kudo's for adding something original, shame that it doesn't match so super well with his history

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Appearance Descriptions

_{As compiled on basis of the 11th corps intelligence gathering, including pictures}

❖ Appearance--

Seventeen years have come and gone. i mean, the earth exists a lot longer for that, but you could say that and i can say that it makes you sound stupid Genetics, time, and training has honed him into a handsome looking male. hey man, when you use faceclaims that are supposed to be superior shonen manga superheroes that drop panties, how can you say anything else Even among the farmlands lol of Kumo-province double lol, it's funny cause you're black and the possibility for racist jokes (haha farms + kumo (where the black people live) hahahaha so funny!) is too big he’s being hailed and admired by who? the local farm girls? for his stature and build. In comparison to others of his kind ?? his kind? farmers? people who aren't black inside of Kumo? who?, Maema dons his clothing in hopes of being prepared for combat at any time wow its definitely not like there's a Hamajo uniform. He’s accustomed to wearing tshirts of varying colors underneath different types of outerwear (usually some form of gakuren) so he looks like a highschool student ok. Darker hued trousers fall over his legs, while a deep blue sash ties around his waist. gotta accesorize up innis hoe Unnaturally black haidate pieces--lined with gold--protects his thighs these are functional i assume. Off-duty he’s more or less the same. He doesn’t feel the need to be fashionable so he's handsome and naturally talented at being super perfect, but he doesn't care about fashion? so he is just naturally handsome and fashionable, i guess so he can come off as rugged and simple oh he's going for the 'i dont care, but i do care' approach where he cares to look like he doesnt care, i see. Either way he’s always wearing the same ankle-high, heavy-duty sandals. A optimal mixture between combat boots and ninjawear. A cherished item flows under both his sash and haidate, a mantle of sorts colored crimson with gold fringes lining its edges. you know, the appearance section was to be used for things i coudn't really see in the picture, but i guess you can just describe the picture with words in here too, that works. he looks cool ok we get it

While others were plowing in the fields of their farms again with the racist jokes, Renny? really? racist Maema was being tortured by his father’s training methods. okay, why him? wasn't he a farmer too? what made his dad think that mama meme was special His face is in conflict with the roughcast of his body of course, can't be handsome if you look like a farmer. Where lean i sip that, hard muscle i rub tha- nevermind are pressed tight you're making it too easy between necessary fat and skin on his body; his face is kinda of long and elegant like my di------psauce. The only fierce part to his face is the sharpness of his golden eyes, hidden behind his dull expression. because he doesnt care about anything isnt it?

Aforementioned his body is near-perfection okayyyy we get ittttt. It's been honed for mobility and strength, to soak up and adapt to predictable disturbances on the battlefield can't wait to have Kuko beat his ass with her giant metal kanabo. His sleek body looks unimpressive in clothing this is false, you can't be the most handsome man in KUmogakure if you don't look unimpressive, or is that part of the appeal?, however, beneath said clothes the muscles behind the skin are visible. Four highly developed abs fall into a flat stomach as if the rest were abandoned. The lower half of his legs are thin in appearance, making the top half seem bulky in comparison. basically he looks like a triangle?? All in all, Maema could be seen as the typical bboooiiiii you just spent half an hour praising him into the sky, now you're calling him 'typical' really?? i expected better renny, at least be honest and say you just want a really fucking handsome character okay ninja but atypical man.

❖ Height--

5’9”/ 1.75m

❖ Weight--

153lbs/69kg

❖ Build--

Maema is made up of lean muscle, his physique shows this rather well. His mass is dominant in his torso and arms, giving them a solid, cut look. When compared to his arms, though covered with clothes i guess you meant clothes, because if you cover him in loose sets of cloths, that would be weird and the sorts, his legs can seem kinda meek. He has a feral form no its called 'handsome' to his gait, some call it wolven. Others call it innate confidence.

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Psych. reports

_{Medical secrecy applies.}

❖ Fearless ❖ Impulsive ❖ Apathetic ❖ Hopeful ❖ Spodes already pointed out that these don't really stand that well with his 'personality+history' for example, he is impulsive, which is shown in that he doesn't second guess himself, however at the same time he received lessons in analytical schooling?? so these don't really sum him up too nicely. I would suggest you pick an archetype before you start writing, so you know kind of what you want before you actually begin. for example, Kuko was supposed to be a childish and careless girl who was really 'stupid' and clueless and only cared for 1 thing; her shrine. I don't see this in mama meme very well, and he seems to be kinda a jack of all traits, which is not bad, but in the case of personality, it makes it seem like he has a split personality or some kind of disorder.

that said, i dont really mind, i know you can portray a character well enough, i just felt i should mention this because it might help you improve somehow.

❖ Personality--

Maema was taught at an early age that being a genius meant nothing in the face of three entities women, sex, and sexy women. Those three things were experience, numbers, and the unknown i guess my point still stands; experience in sex, numbers of women you've banged, and the unknown std you might receive. He learned the value of being fearless days after finding his mother’s head on the porch this was really weird to read, since i haven't read the history entirely yet. i guess there's an explanation.. To step to the challenge without second-guessing yourself or those around you inspired a kind of fear and admiration. this has nothing to do with finding the head of your mother on the porch That lesson didn’t take long to become concrete. The next one did. It was a lesson of analytical schooling, one that guided him well in deciding if he should approach a situation with reckless abandon or patience. He can go either way when lives aren’t on the line. When they are a preternatural impulsiveness springs to life. see, this is what i mean. if he is impulsive, this wouldnt be true

Maema wants to be a saviour i mean, we all want to be the hero, but you have to understand in an RP we can't all be heroes all the time, and we have to be 'a little hero' before we can be a big one ok little Renny?; he’s seen the ruthless of the Hamajo Confederation hey man, you gotta do what you gotta do, didn't his dad teach him that?, and has vowed to never just sit by again. yet he works for the same guys he hates apparently This, unfortunately isn’t coupled with some disregard for his own life. wow gay, sacrifice is so cool, that's why i give all my characters near suicidal tendencies, my friend. Not in the slightest. He has taught himself to be apathetic to others contradictory to his 'saviour' complex, to toss aside a hopeless situation like spodes said, that makes him hopeless, not hopeful. That’s not something he’s proud of but his father was always a very grave man.

Outside of the norm, outside of bloodshed and war there's not really been any war he could've in as a 17 y/o; one might catch him smiling. Maybe even laughing but it's rare. ooooooooo, woooooooowwwwwww, so barbecue, i'm gonna sauceke this His life has been undoubtedly hard i mean, i can say sauceke 20x in 1 review/grading but you get the point. Growing up in Kumo-province taught a valuable lesson: not everyone is looked after by the Confederation. eyyyyy you read the information i write on the original post, how nice!!! i appreciate it, a lot of people don't. Because of this Maema the mememama could be consider a cynical youth. wasn't he hopeful??? He looks at every situation with caution and finds most people, HELLO? HOPEFUL???? specifically those full of cheer, extremely annoying. aw Despite being indifferent to most people, Maema has a hard time seeing others suffer why? this is stupid. he is apathetic, but also he has a saviour complex, but also, he doesn't care. which one is it??. His father calls it “White Knight Syndrome” and says it has no place in the world of ninjas. Maema calls it saving himself. okay, i guess it's not really a saviour syndrome then, but more so 'i want to go to heaven so i gotta do good shit, even if i dont wanna' right

He sees it that way sometimes. i can agree

When he was child he didn’t get along with others. ooooooooo nardo and sauceke, woooooow, i'm gonna cliché this In fact he hated them for rejecting him when he actually tried to be friends with them man, im not even gonna say it sauceke and nardo. Maema learns his social lessons quickly s-so why wasn't he succesful at befriending them. He engraves them harshly into himself and makes sure not to make the same mistakes as before. If nothing else can be said about him, it's that he can hold horrifically long grudges. I AM AN AVERNGEEEEERRR

❖ History--

Birthright
The story goes that a wandering samurai found his true love in the middle of blood and tears. Supposedly he was renowned throughout the countries as the “The Pristine Dragon” a warrior whose blade struck true more times than not. he'd be a bad samurai if h didn't hit his targets a lot dont you think A sellsword whose assistance and friends gave victory to those who hired him. His name was Yasu Nisshoku and he fell in love with a traveling philanthropist. She was not perfect but she inspired him to do things for the greater good. When Haruhi retired to Kumogakure, Yasu was behind her, hoping to settle down and build a family. aka make the babbie

Years afterwards they gave birth to a boy. They named him Maema in concert with the loose-theme of their own names. They took on Yasu’s family name: Nisshoku and almost instantly he was given the moniker “Dragon child” by Yasu friends and “Goddess’ son” by Haruhi’s friends and family. wooooow so nice, no real reason for these nicknames i guess

The boy’s youth was interrupted by the Hamajo Confederate taking over Kumogakure. The province changed for the worst afterwards. It became flooded with poverty and eventually, through some unknown process became a farming province. It was an ugly adjustment but Yasu and Haruhi did so without open complaints. For a time. well, did you really read the thing? actually Kumo is the 2nd largest military power after Konoha, so... i guess there's farming, but within Kumogakure the village, there would be shinobi man

Decision
While Maema was working the fields insert racist joke about kumo being black and farming, training, and attending school; his mother was busy stirring up trouble oo she gon die. She didn’t agree with the Hamajo Confederation oo big mistake. She fought against it with political movements; playing on the different causes to start a small alliance behind her humanitarian rallying points wooow, i too would fight a large military power using nothing but words!!!. Yasu watched this behind the scenes, warning her to be careful. She thought she had been. She was secretive about her growing rebellion but that would prove useless against the Confederation’s resources ey man, the 11th corps still lives and it is still good at what they do. Daiki's sharingan were very helpful i'm sure, in generating new sharingans. The last Maema would see of his mother was her body’s gruesome decapitation, her head tilted on their home’s porch. eeheh sounds like something yakoul would do

It was covered-up to be some Hamajo radical but Yasu had his own suspicions. He tempered his rage into productive action. When his comrades came back with information that suggested a Hamajo higher-up had quelled the Kumo-province uprising, it was then that Yasu thought to act. That was quickly snuffed out once he learned the merciless truth. That numerous, inconspicuous deaths that occurred only months after Haruhi’s own. It worsened when he lost all contact with a number of his friends. i dont get it. he was going to kill that guy, but then a lot of other people also died, so he didnt do it anymore?

Afterwards Yasu was struck with depression. o no

He redouble Maema’s training. From physical conditioning to an understanding of topography. There was a range of other studies that he was required to soak up but none of them were quite as effective as sparring and mental games. Years traversed faster than he thought and before long, Maema was a Chunin in the Hamajo Confederation. let me guess, mamameme was a infiltrator for his father

❖ Familial ties--

Maema’s relationship with his father is strained. He greatly admires the man his father use to be. The fun-loving, dramatic man that was a reluctant-hero. Nowadays the two of them greet each other in alien apathetic forms. As if too much emotion could cause a catastrophe. Sometimes he resents his father for giving in to the pain. o noooo, the great apathetic dragon is now, onl a shell of himself, and give in to tha paaaaain, o nnoooooo..

Yasu Nisshoku | Father | 34, Kumo-province, Yasu is a farmer who passes the time by wallowing in his own misery with tha alcohoollllll. Occasionally you can catch him practicing his unique, saw-sword swordsmanship outside of his home.

❖ Dreams, short term goals, and fears.--

His childhood ended the day he stumbled upon his mother’s decapitated head. Since then he’s had no dreams thats sad bruh, only goals to take reveneeeeenge. He wants to hurt the Hamajo Confederation and wouldn’t mind returning his father’s smile in the process. He fears what the world may look like if the Hamajo Confederation went unchecked.why is he a part of the confederation then

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Combat reports

_{Gathered based on exercises, training routines, and combat experience reports}

❖ Combat style--

Maema attacks with unrelenting, self-perilously, and overkilling force. He utilizes his kekkei-tota in conjunction with his taijutsu, bojutsu, and limited ninjutsu to decimate all. When he can’t find those kinks he doggedly attacks until he’s weighed the opposition down to near nothing. Oddly enough, he’s prone to being caught in genjutsus and lacks the knowledge to counteract sealing jutsus as well. He’s also known to be a tad overconfident. okayyyyy, i'm going to point out the first serious big flaw.

you and i both know nobody uses sealing jutsu in a fight, and nobody, nobody ever uses any genjutsu, so these weaknesses are stupid. change it.

❖ Kekkei Genkai--

❖ Name

Suiginton (Mercury Release)

❖ Description

Suiginton (Mercury Release) is more or less exactly what it sounds like. The control, creation, and manipulation of the silvery-white substance. The liquid metal is poisonous, causing severe damage to the senses, muscles, and nerves. Mostly producing tremors, physical weakness, and a cruel disorientation in most beings. Suiginton is a Kekkei Tota that combines Earth, Water, and Lightning chakra natures.

❖ Strengths

Mercury is malleable. It strengths come from its flexibility and the poisonous effect it can have in combat. Its also conductive of electricity and rather useful in a pinch. Small applications can be made to counteract potentially difficult situations. For example making a key for a door, flight, or discreetly taking out masses. Handling it most of his life has given him a high resistance to the poisoning. it was so important in his entire life that it wasn't mentioned once in the history

❖ Weaknesses

Mercury is weak to both heat and cold. It turns brittle when met with tundric temperatures and melts when it comes into contact with sweltering heat. Suiginton is dangerous. The key to this is actually afflicting Maema with the cold or heat. This works better with cold than it does heat. If his temperature drops, his mercury is brittle and useless. If hot, the mercury comes out incapable of forming solid incarnations. ok i guess so

❖ Ninja techniques

❖ Custom techniques

■ Name
Suiginton: Kage Bunshin no Jutsu (Mercury Release: Shadow Clone Jutsu)

■ Rank
A

■ Range
3-5 meters

■ Description
Unique to Maema’s Kekkei Tota this technique is used like most shadow clones are, however due to its nature this one is gravely more dangerous. It was inspired by Maema’s father. Like other shadow clones it can interact with the environment and can perform its own techniques. The clones also soak up knowledge and sends it to the user once dispensed of. When injured the clone disperses like liquid, splashing around. Considering the chance that it's melted the clone gives off a noxious, small dose of its poison in the form of gas. ok, explain what the poison would do, and how quick it would react, and also if you can see it, avoid it, or somehow defend against it (i mean, i guess you can just not stand in it, but that's kinda dumb if you're using melee, and if the poison is supa strong then it'd be a 1 hit kill At most Maema is capable of summoning 2 clones at a time.

■ Name
Suiginton: Yasu no ha (Mercury Release: Blade of Yasu)

■ Rank
B

■ Range
Close

■ Description
Maema strings four hand seals together ending on the dragon seal. He then moves his hand to the empty scabbard on his side and brandishes a blade made of mercury. The insides gives the weapon its shape and intricate designs. The grass thin blade is beautified by a thumb-sized circle near the base and a serpentine dragon flying towards it on the flat. When cut by the blade the opposition contracts mercury poisoning. okay, what would this do, and how quickly would it take effect. would it be instant? if so, the power cant be too great. if it's slow, over a period of time, and can somehow be fought back, it may be more strong.

■ Name
Suiginton: Haruhi (Mercury Release: Haruhi)

■ Rank
B

■ Range
2 meters around user

■ Description
Maema wields the seal of confrontation towards his opponent. A second later he pulls chakra from his heart and it forms into a mercury maiden. This woman is malleable, defense oriented, and floats off the ground. Haruhi is quicker than Maema and physical attacks are near useless against her why. Cold is the only effective way to halt her assault as melting her turns her into noxious gas and she simply invades the enemy before fading away. The only downfall is that she only counterattacks but this utilizes minimal amounts of her limited chakra. so cold is the only way? no other jutsu would do anything? I can't melt her, I can't make her fall apart by smashing her face in, and water isn't cold enough to freeze her. you'd need a kekkei genkai to stop this. i suggest adding another weakness, one that's more accessible.

■ Name
Suiginton: Gyakusatsu (Mercury Release: Massacre)

■ Rank
C

■ Range
Long

■ Description
Maema molds an armory of weapons behind him, all of which is aimed towards his opponent(s). Once released they shoot out towards their target at break-neck speeds. Hardened to the density of a solid if impact’s made the weapon can deal bone-breaking damage. On top of which mercury poison is dispensed through the body if cut or hit on an open wound. Some weapons that may appear are halberds, various types of blades, and lances. ok nice, how do i stop it. also mercury poison needs more explanation

■ Name
Suiginton: Kohitsuji (Mercury Release: Lamb)

■ Rank
B

■ Range
10 meters around

■ Description
Maema forms 13 handsigns ending on the ram before releasing a hail, barrage, and frenzy of small mercury spheres. They are relatively weak impacting with D-rank damage but traveling at C-rank speeds. When they splash against an object the outer shell is broken and the mist inside spreads and joins together. Eventually a fog of mercury is made, endangering both himself with the lethal dosage and everyone inside. Maema the fearless welcomes the untimely death if it's for a worthy cause. can't be instant and you need to offer time to get out. otherwise, it's fine. granted that is only if you detail the effects, so just 'you die after 1 post' won't be enough.

■ Name
Suiginton: Kusari (Mercury Release: Chain)

■ Rank
C

■ Range
5 meters

■ Description
His main form of attack comes in the form of silverish-white tendrils with hand-shaped appendages at its end. They fly out from a mirror-source behind him, usually without the necessity of weaving hand seals. They have a limit of fifteen feet from himself and strikes quick. The end and length of the tendril can be molded into pikes, hammers, or other weapons. When exposed to extreme cold they become brittle and break. When exposed to extreme heat they melt and become useful as nothing more than whips at its best and at its worse, a noxious poison. okay, i guess this is okay.

❖ Weaponry and tools

■ Name
Dogma’s Disciple.

■ Weapon/tool type
A elder wood, worn scabbard. Silver and golden dragons twist around each other on its frame.

■ Range
Close

■ Description
A scabbard. . . that’s all. uuuuuseful, woooow, im gonna steal it

due to popular demand (and i was reading spodes review and there was too much sauce not to write a review about) here is also my review

@BuddhaSo, against my better judgement, I'm going to be joining this again(Fourth times the charm, right?). That being said, I'm going to have to PM you, Sav, and the third person who I don't know(Hello, nice to meet ya) about the character I'm going to introduce because nothing is ever simple with me. The only thing I can tell you right now is that it's very dragon-centric. Extremely dragon-centric. I'm going to app a super cool dragon sage whose going to be the coolest and topple the regime and everything, because Ame- I mean, Koho- wait , no . . . I should really leave these kinds of jokes to you guys. I'm much too guilty of all the things you call people on to make fun of them. (lowers head in shame)

@BuddhaSo, against my better judgement, I'm going to be joining this again(Fourth times the charm, right?). That being said, I'm going to have to PM you, Sav, and the third person who I don't know(Hello, nice to meet ya) about the character I'm going to introduce because nothing is ever simple with me. The only thing I can tell you right now is that it's very dragon-centric. Extremely dragon-centric. I'm going to app a super cool dragon sage whose going to be the coolest and topple the regime and everything, because Ame- I mean, Koho- wait , no . . . I should really leave these kinds of jokes to you guys. I'm much too guilty of all the things you call people on to make fun of them. (lowers head in shame)