@KatherinWinter Forgot to add the side effects he dealt with. Kailod would see hallucinations according to what he thought, he was afraid of the Doc so he would often see him as a grotesque creature. This made it difficult for him to settle down during experiments and to keep him from trying to escape from the Doc every time he saw him. Mind you he was 14, I should write down in his bio that among a venomous bite, the doctor may have deducted his given ability as sensory manipulation in his papers (so as to explain his current ability to control it instead of being afraid of it), but it was yet to be 100% confirmed since Kailod had grown TOO fearful to properly follow commands at the time. It was then that the Doc adopted him out, but had placed him in a completely different orphanage to avoid suspicion from the previous one. I'll rework that into the bio. I'll also write up his disadvantages/weaknesses

@VarickeI am not sure I understand his strength and weaknesses

@KatherinWinter I'm gonna write them out clear as day, no worries. I'll place them here when I have them done, shouldn't take too long. It'll part of the age, name, section.

@Varickelet me know when your done.

@KatherinWinter
Strengths: Amazing ability to focus consistently (This helps him manipulate the senses of multiple people at a time), incredible visual memory (In a memory he can recall almost every little physical detail as if he was watching a video of his past), near perfect retaining of sensory information (If he recalls on a certain memory, he can remember what the temperature felt like, what he smelled, what he saw, what he could feel)

Weaknesses: His retaining of sensory info and visual memory is severely limited by what he remembers (He has the normal memory of an average human and can't remember every little thing, but what he does remember is in great detail), his ability of Sensory Illusion is based entirely on his will and control (Amazing focus helps with this power, but he can easily lose control of it. For example if he's afraid the hallucinations will turn against him and doesn't regain his composure quick, then he will begin to hallucinate things that terrify him, or his mind will basically go against him thus causing his power to go against him as well.), had a depressing childhood and traumatic experiences (This can trigger uncontrollable emotions which will greatly affect his ability to control his power.)
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I may of course add things over time as the character grows.

@cara214@Framing A Moose Where are your characters at?

Well, I have not made a post, but I assume she is in a taxi on her way over there.

@Varicke so he remembers things when he touched, smells, or eats something? Sounds like he would be trif feted all the time. Plus he can create memories through sensations?

@KatherinWinter No. He has a regular memory like any human being, it's just his memories are very vivid and detailed when he recalls back on them. Like when his dad died, that's something any human would have remembered but he remembers every little detail, the smell of the paint in the room and the wood, how cold the room felt, etc. Does that make sense? The memories themselves aren't very triggering unless he completely indulges himself in them, and he prefers to forget about the past so he doesn't dwell on them.

@Varickeaww....got it. He remembers things he's experience in detail. That might be useful later.

@KatherinWinterSooo, accepted? ;v;

@Varicke opps...Yea hes accepted

Well, I have not made a post, but I assume she is in a taxi on her way over there.

I know. I was just wondering if you were going to have HasEl in the manoon or not

@KatherinWinter
Question, how long ago was it in the story that Dr Whitney died?

@Varickealmost a month

@Varicke opps...Yea hes accepted

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I know. I was just wondering if you were going to have HasEl in the manoon or not

...what's a manoon?

Also, where is the mansion?

@Framing A Moose getting tired I guess.it's after 1am. I meant mansion. You where is it state wise?

@Framing A Moose getting tired I guess.it's after 1am. I meant mansion. You where is it state wise?

Oh, I see. Yeah, she'll get to the mansion.

Yeah, state wise.

@Framing A Moose Well...I suppose that depends... I was to make up a city. I only know one area really well. So I'm going to say California. Someplace rural.

Gotta love my long intros. That's just the intro though, don't worry, my posts won't be near as long as that through the whole way.

@Varicke@KatherinWinter
while i liked your intro a lot, i don't get the "this happened a month ago" part, as far as i know, what we're doing now happens the day the mansion was opened, or a few days after at most, not certainly not a month later, so you're basically in the future..unless i missunderstood something :) still great intro and narative style, i really liked it :D

kathy, a bit of clarification please?

@Kibaro

I'll make a better way to understand it haha. "This was nearly a month ago" explains that the previous paragraphs were part of a prologue to the current events that lead up Kailod making his way to the mansion now. It's still the current time, the guys are at the meeting with Lily etc. Think it of it as a flashback that explained the lead up to the current point.

Also might I add, I really love your character's personality. You put so much detail to explain the kind of person he is, I really like that, heheh.