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WIP WIP WIP

Don't normally post WIPs, but I've gotta go for a bit. Need to finish personality and history, and list her gear but for the most part everything else is done.

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First of all, ho-ly crap. Thank you all so much for the interest and jumping right into conversing about your characters! To be totally hinest, when I woke up, I was a little overwhelmed at first, but all that has fueled my excitement and inspiration. I can't wait to get started!





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@Dark Light Awesome! I really like that character and I don't have anything that stands out as unfit for this world. His desire to grow in swordplay gives me a few ideas already!




@Rune_Alchemist I will answer these questions as if I haven't read the rest of the thread.

Firstly, thank you for the Welcome! Secondly, of course you are free to join!

As for the races, personally, you could make an argument for any race. Personally I would avoid changlings or cursed monsters as most Civilized people are scared of and hate monsters. This feeds a little into some racism toward goblinoid races, like Orcs, Trolls, and Goblins. They get a lot of crap because of their skin color or facial bone structures.

Magic.... I don't want to smother creativity in magic. So I have been thinking about its restrictions. Constant use of Magic or use of strong magic will make the mage tired. Conditions for good magic casting is being well fed, healthy, and well rested.
Classes of magic.... Elemental is what I'll say. So like, magic falls under certain elements. The basic elements I won't really explain. Fire, Ice, Air, Earth, and Lightning (it's an element). Not many people can easily use mixed elements. They tend to specialize in one or two. Some other elements I'd like to include are Kinetic, Which controls physical movement and force. Levitation and movement of items falls under kinetic. Holy magic, healing and repels those decidedly unholy. Holy magic can be learned by anyone gifted for magic. It heals, lights the way, and for the most advanced, teleport (though the spell for teleportation is a guarded secret of Ballion). Those who wield holy magic are not by any means instantly a good guy, also anyone tucked with Dark Magic would be hurt by holy magic. The only magic seen as inherently evil is Dark Magic. Control of the shadows. This magic kills most casters right away wth one known exception currently terrorizing Sarah's hometown. Most monsters are touched by Dark magic and are immune to its effects. I will go into more detail on Dark Magic in the story as it's not a widely known element.

I hope that helps.






This is it :)
I hope it's ok :)


He is brilliant @Ashevelendar! As for naming weapons, I could see many or tribes doing that very thing. I really like what you have done and I think he will be a great addition to the cast!




Hello @Lady Sven, I would like to join the RP. This character is a member of a crusading guild known as the Audrian Order, which I will explain more in-depth below.



Wow. Very devout in the extermination of all that is dark. And the bit of their chapter houses spreading through the world is very plausible as well. I could see them having a firm seat in Belwind as it would most likely have travellers from afar. Conra would not turn them away but I am sure many would see the Order negatively and just as many would see them positively. I definitely welcome this new addition to the cast!@TJByrum

I feel it is important to note that Monsters are generally uncommon except in the wildlands of the world. Conra is apparently being overrun. While many of the characters have experience in fighting/hunting, monsters will still prove dangerous.




Final side notes, vampirism in this world isn't all glorious. They have increased healing abilities and are stronger and faster than the average of their base race. However, sun won't burn them and holy magic won't outright kill them unless they have personally tampered with Dark Magic.

Vampires are local legend in most places and aren't openly accepted. I mean, they drink blood! Common folk would never be accepting of that. Whether it be human blood or livestock, it is a danger to most villages and towns and they don't want anything threatening that.

Uhm... thank you all, seriously. I am so happy with all I have seen so far!
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Aw damn! The
didn't work. That looks derp as shit ;-; I'll fix it later. My phone lost 20% to that post

*edit* IT WORKED HERE???
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@Lady Sven Thanks ! You sound as excited as I am with this RP. The thing that brought me to this site was a RP like this ( someone told me to come here to RP if I want ) but RP is taking way too long to start and when I saw your interest check. I was...controlled by it :) Really made me want to RP.

How far is Conra from those "wildlands of the world " ?

Edit : And just a quick question. Are Lizardmen a thing here ? I mean do they exist ?
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@Lady Sven
That's what I was going with for Vampires, of course. But they aren't vampires - *supposedly* distantly related and descended from them, but aren't 'true vampires'. They don't drink blood, and behave much like everyone else. They do have minor weaknesses to holy magic - but that's thanks to their blood and that most are simply taught darker magics from birth.

They are very aware of the stigma attached with them and isolate themselves because of it. Instead of vampires though, I could simply make them nobles who call themselves that from long use of 'Blood Magic'.

If that of course, is not acceptable I can change anything I need too, since you say Dark magic isn't all that prevalent.

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The 'Hr' thing happened because you capitalized the 'Hr' in the post. It's fickle like that, but I dunno why since I'm not some computer expert xD
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@Rune_Alchemist It is because those " ['hr] , [color=somehting] " etc codes are Case Sensitive. The program ( our website in this case ) doesn't know what " [Hr] " means. For him it's a normal thing and it treats it like normal writing. But when you write it " ['hr] " then the website recognizes it as a code and does what the code tells him to :)
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I'll fix it later. Damn phone capitalizing things.......

You concept of blood magic is acceptable but I wouldn't call it Dark or even give it a Dark Affinity. The inherent traits of the vampires and their magic could be considered a tribal magic since it would be unique to just them. And since they aren't actually vampires I don't really have much else to say on the matter. What you have so far is good! I like the idea of having some traits of some maybe unwise decisions in their family's history.
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Alrighty! Thanks~

I'll finish it up when I have the time.
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@Lady Sven Thanks ! You sound as excited as I am with this RP. The thing that brought me to this site was a RP like this ( someone told me to come here to RP if I want ) but RP is taking way too long to start and when I saw your interest check. I was...controlled by it :) Really made me want to RP.

How far is Conra from those "wildlands of the world " ?

Edit : And just a quick question. Are Lizardmen a thing here ? I mean do they exist ?


Conra is actually not supposed to have many wildlands. The majority of the central part of the country is plains and framlands. Has you move south, you'll find thick clumps of woods and more rivers as the terrain becomes more hilly and the climate get colder. There are more Wild places here as the population gets less dense.

Due to the Dark Magic being used by the wizard at Sarah's himetown, Monsters have been growing more aggressive and have been appearing more. Communication has been troubled between Conra and Ballion in recent years due to the growing threat. Conra believes the Ballion army is fighting the Monster's from the other side and will put a stop to the problem.

*edit* Completely missed the edit. Lizardmen... Hmm, yeah, to extent I think they can be prevalent. Though probably very much looked down on due to their appearance and possible cold-bloodedness. Though between the very Human-centered Ballion and the ocean, the chances of a tribe on the Conran mainland is very unlikely. If Lizardmen were to come to Conra, it would have to be from overseas.
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Alllllright, I think I'm done! Decided to make the Beaumonts a bit of an antithesis to the order of knights we have. Do tell if this is acceptable, as I can definitely change anything that is needed. Don't mind at all~

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@Rune_Alchemist A beautiful character and a welcome addition to the cast!!

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@Rune_Alchemist A beautiful character and a welcome addition to the cast!!


Excellent!~

I shall move her to the Character tab, and await for the IC to start~
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Excellent!~

I shall move her to the Character tab, and await for the IC to start~


Yes! Everyone else who I have seen. Do this. DO EET

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@Lady Sven Done. Can't wait for this to start !
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@Lady Sven I have posted my bio in the CHAR tab.

The Order is ambiguous in morality, and so I want them to be viewed negatively. But whatever you think of them, they're a necessary evil (at least, in my head-canon). No one else is willing to stand on the ramparts in some gods-forsaken wasteland like the Knight-Brothers; no one else is willing to commit the atrocities they are willing to commit.

Then again, that's just my head-canon, take it and use it as you will.

On another site, the Brothers would attack pagan villages in the midst of the night, drag the occupants into the streets, and then force them to convert. Those who agreed were put on wagons and escorted to pacified lands where they were given fertile land and good protection. Those who refused were brutally butchered in the street, in front of everyone, as a warning to anyone else who might oppose the will of the Brotherhood.

EDIT: At that time, the Brothers were trying to purge that area of a specific kind of worship; they did so with brutal efficiency.
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@TJByrum
So, I imagine the Order and those of Malgrave Castle have had some pretty bad run-ins in the past. While their missions are similar, their methods and beliefs are completely different. I Don't think the Nobles of Beaumont would ever get along with them, at least.
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@TJByrum@Rune_Alchemist Those two Orders are good for the story. They are the thesis and anti-thesis to one another.
Probably your characters will have a little...fight ( verbal or not ). But they really sound cool ^_^
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@TJByrum@Rune_Alchemist Those two Orders are good for the story. They are the thesis and anti-thesis to one another.
Probably your characters will have a little...fight ( verbal or not ). But they really sound cool ^_^


Yeeeah, don't imagine them getting along well, at least to start with....In fact, I don't think Cia is ever going to get along with the Order. She absolutely despises their methods.
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@Rune_Alchemist Even so , maybe they'll get along fine. Like they can be friends even tho' they don't like their Orders methods of doing things.
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I welcome any dynamic between the characters, and will happily play according to Wolff's personality. Sometimes when writing a character, they take on a personality of their own. I have to stop and ask "would Wolff do/say this?" so I'm not sure how Wolff will feel at this very moment.
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