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You didn't have to remove them, just define how they'd function in a prose environment not based around a video game.

Like I said, though, I'll get them done when both @RolePlayerRoxas and I are online tomorrow.
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  • Name: Frank 'Doc' DuFresne
  • Universe: Red vs Blue
  • Appearance: "OBLIVION!"
  • Personality: Doc is usually very calm and collected, and was a pacifist and timid until he was accidentally struck by a teleportation grenade. This had an impact on his sanity, as he stated that he 'lost his mind, found it, and then lost it again.' Following his return, Doc's realisation of how little his friends actually valued him has resulted in a facsimile of the O'Malley personality surfacing, born out of Doc's own subconscious as opposed to A.I. implementation. Similar to Omega, the seemingly natural O'Malley personality does not overtake Doc's, but instead, much like before, engages in banter with him. Despite the continuous claims of villainy and tyranny however, Doc continues to act as an ally to the Blood Gulch Troopers while acting under the O'Malley personality.
  • Abilities: While Doc's medical skills are questionable, he has nonetheless managed to heal several characters successfully. He is also very tough, to the point of near-invulnerability, having taken some of the worst punishment and survived with few injuries. Doc is capable of running faster than most other soldiers, and has shown to be very agile. Though not the smartest character, Doc is very clever. For example, he convinced Command to give him his own rank. He is often seen with his medical scanner, which can detect injuries and diagnose physiological problems. Other than this, it can be used to heal and treat injuries. It can fire an overcharged shot as its secondary ability, which can paralyse targets for a short time. His Standard-issue Freelancer Armour protects him from a majority of injuries, and contains systems such as a motion tracker.
    • UNSC M41 Surface-to-Surface Rocket Medium Anti-Vehicle/Assault Weapon: Doc's main offensive weapon, a double-barrelled rocket launcher. It has a 2x magnification scope and fires 102mm HEAT shaped charges over long distances with devastating firepower, although its accuracy decreases over time. Its projectiles deal heavy explosive damage, and it has the ability to lock on to targets, which allows rockets to home in on to targets and detonate.
  • Alliance: Team Charmeine
  • Other: Appears some time after getting found in Season 13.
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Alright, as soon as @RolePlayerRoxas gets on we'll look this bios over together.

In this case I'd like to have a second opinion, which is one of many bonuses of having a GM team.

Edit: Actually, hold on a moment.
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@Flamelord: Unless @RolePlayerRoxas says anything, accepted. Though please rewrite her healing ability to define how it'd work outside of something with health percentages.

@MagusDream: First character is probably fine, second though I'd like some idea of how some of her abilities reduce/boost offense and defense.

@Hostile: I don't think I see anything wrong here, but like I said, co-GM consulting's going to be happening.
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Name: Tenkuuji Takeru

Universe: Kamen Rider Ghost

Appearance: imgur.com/a/jULEi

Personality: He's actually a pretty nice dude, all things considered. He gets pretty timid and scared. However, this changes when people need saving. He gets angered when people don't value their own lives or even the lives of others, having died once and appreciating the values of life.

Abilities: As the name implies, Takeru is a ghost. Or at least, he WOULD have been. His alliance with Charmeine ended up giving him a temporary human form, delaying his 99-day countdown before he is forced to go to the afterlife, and as such, removes most of his ghostly powers such as intangibility and indestructibility.

What it doesn't remove, however, is his ability to become Kamen Rider Ghost. This is a basic form for him to use for fighting, using a large sword called the Gan Gan Saber to help him. However, he can also call the spirits of heroes to aid him. Musashi gives him two swords to fight with, Edison gives his guns electrical powers, Robin Hood makes his gun an arrow, and Newton gives him gloves with the power of gravity.

Alliance: Team Charmeine

Other: 12 days into his first 99-day countdown, sometime after his meeting with Shinnosuke.

And question for a secondary character. Would being able to turn things into explosives be overpowered?
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I don't see anything wrong with Takeru, but we'll see what my co-GM says as well just in case.

As for turning things explosive, it depends on how far it can go.
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As for turning things explosive, it depends on how far it can go.


As in he can literally turn anything into an explosive, ranging from a coin to a doorknob. The limits are that he can only set one object to explode and that it can only be detonated if someone is touching it.
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Probably not if it applies to people.
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Probably not if it applies to people.


Not as in not overpowered or not as in it's not acceptable?
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Not acceptable if it applies to people.
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For some reason, I'm getting Killer Queen vibes from this guy...
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Probably not if it applies to people.


From what I can gather, he can only turn objects into explosives.
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Hmm. I'll have to talk this one over with @RolePlayerRoxas.
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Hmm. I'll have to talk this one over with @RolePlayerRoxas.


Alright, no worries. I too have some doubts about Kira as well, plus I might be considering someone who might be a better fit...
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Righty-ho, bio-readin' time. Sorry for the wait, guys.

@PKMNB0Y - I trust Vita here, since my knowledge of Raildex is limited to the anime. Accepted.

@MagusDream - Your characters look fine, though for the sake of clarification; how effective would those buffs/debuffs be? Like, would it be a sharp difference or anything? And would the shields block all damage?

@Flamelord - The 50% heal thing might need reworded a bit, and I'm not really sure about the ability-sealing attack. The rest of the bio looks fine to me.

@Hostile - I don't think there's anything major here, looks fine to me.

@Psyga315 - Should be fine here, too.

Regarding the explosives thing... if it's only on inorganic materials, and depending on how the power is actually applied, it seems workable enough with those limitations. Does he need to directly touch something to turn it into an explosive?
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Does he need to directly touch something to turn it into an explosive?


Yeah. Inorganic materials. Also, he does need to directly touch the object. He gets a little leeway thanks to Killer Queen, the very Stand that allows him to create explosives, but it's such a short range that he still needs it to directly touch the objects.

I'm also gonna say that he doesn't have access to Sheer Heart Attack for simplicity's sake.
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Uh...

Well, if it really is Kira...
Well, I have to worry about whether or not Bites the Dust is available or the combo with Stray Cat is usable...

Not saying what they are because spoilers, but those concerns are still relevant.
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Hypotetical situations! Ho!

1. Crepuscule Cataract and Risque Enthrallment
Let's put a fight between Saber and Hibiki against Eggman and Ensa-Taya and we'll consider that, no matter who came for where, everyone has a defined and balanced power. Say that Eggman aims to shoot five missiles at Saber. If she were to defend it, nothing would happen and she would be able to stand on her feet. Maybe she would be pulled back a little. If Ensa-Taya were to use her Risque Enthrallment on Eggman, he would gain a little oomph on his power. The same five missiles would be harder to defend and would pull Saber away a slightly longer distance than normal, with a chance of only 1 of the missiles breaking through her defense and damaging her. In other words, what Saber had no difficulty to defend previously, she would clearly possess now. That doesn't mean that anyone gained the power to obliterate anything here. It's just a small boost that has the probability of changing absolutely nothing.
In the other way around, let's say that Hibiki were to deal damage to Ensa-Taya herself. She can create her own dark shield to defend himself, but it isn't sturdy enough. With Hibiki being fast too, say that 4 punches were enough to break Ensa-Taya's shield and would open a space for her to be hit. If Crepuscule Cataract is active, Hibiki would have to deal 6 punches in order to make her shield broke. She wouldn't feel sluggish or anything of the sort, but she would have to attack more of what she needed earlier. Again, this isn't completely an advantage, since it has locable flaws. Say now that Saber were to use her Excalibur. Crepuscule Cataract can't interfere on anyone's special power and just on normal, basic offense.

2. Juno-Seto and Ensa-Taya's Barrier Function
Despite they sound impenetrable, they are. Barriers only consider normal attack as hits. Put Saber and Juno-Seto against Eggman and Ensa-Taya. Juno-Seto uses Amaranthine Bastion and generates the barrier on Saber. Eggman launches 5 missiles on Saber. 3 of them are nullified by the barrier and the other 2 will still consider themselves as hits if she doesn't defend them properly. Now, Saber is going Excalibur again. Ensa-Taya unleashed her Paradox Blossom and created a 15-hit shield on Eggman. It won't null Excalibur. It will null Saber's direct sword attacks at him. Attacks that require special energy cannot be blocked by the barrier, no matter how sturdy they are.

Is this good, @RolePlayerRoxas and @VitaVitaAR?
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Uh...

Well, if it really is Kira...
Well, I have to worry about whether or not Bites the Dust is available or the combo with Stray Cat is usable...

Not saying what they are because spoilers, but those concerns are still relevant.


Nah. I'm gonna set him before all that happens.
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