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Ontos なんですか。

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Well, I assume that Ontos's bullets would have hit him, but in the true fighting game style, it would have done mostly combo damage.
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It's Heaven or Hell. Let's Rock!

So yeah, actually looking forward to this although it was difficult coming up with something for a long while. Let me know if something needs to be fixed or something, I'm all ears.
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Ontos said
Well, I assume that Ontos's bullets would have hit him, but in the true fighting game style, it would have done mostly combo damage.


Then please do me a favor and at least edit something in about Minion getting hit a few times or something. Otherwise I'm going to have to make a gigantic combat post just for him/her/it, AND post for Raphaella. It doesn't have to be anything big, just the hit and maybe a short reaction or something. Iunno.
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Alright, edited.
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Sato Arashi said
It's Heaven or Hell. Let's Rock!So yeah, actually looking forward to this although it was difficult coming up with something for a long while. Let me know if something needs to be fixed or something, I'm all ears.


Well, it's definitely acceptable. A few grammatical errors here and there, but I can look past those easily enough as I got the gist of what you were saying. Go ahead and post whenever you like. I'll add you to the roster.
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I'm going to go on the base that the next person will do as I did and chain the previous events along. I chained the beast throwing Kiske, so they would chain the beast being hit by the kinetic slice.
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Fair enough. Though by that logic, you should have chained Ontos' bullets hitting the Minion.
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True enough, but in my defense, I was literally bitching about being tired while writing as it was almost midnight when I finished it and was Skyping with you! :D We're all human, eh?
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Not present tense! I thought they only appeared in 'Choose your own adventure' books!
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I just realised that I made a huge chronological error. I did not see what store Raphaella crashed into, and made my own choice on what it was.

Should I fix that?
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Ugh... no offense, Venom, but that post was frustrating to read...
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Lol thats the equivalent of going no offense you suck :D

Whats wrong with it. As I don't see the problem. Not saying its perfect but my ability to understand grammar is limited :D I will adjust it as needed.
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I never said you suck. I simply said it was frustrating. It was kinda all over the place.
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Let me see what I can get up. Maybe burn some foolish fool.
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Frustrating is a kind word. I found it lacking a lot of fluidity and aesthetics. In general, I hate big blocks of text, but I believe the post was separated out made it harder to read. I won't get into content, since I don't believe its your first language, but don't make it any more difficult to read...
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Look if its so bad Just ignore it and ill go. I can't grasp what is wrong with such general "Well its bad" style critique.

I am not being hostile, reading this out loud it seemed I was. I am not breathing fire by any means. I really like the plot here and the characters, I want to support the story. So if im hindering it I can just step aside. *Smiles*
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I was pretty detailed in my analysis.
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Take my post how you will. If its defeated, then its defeated. If it is not then it is not.

I also do not mind if you make the Minion attack Dio and actually connect. For drama.
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I'll get something up soon... I had a long day and need a nap before my brain works right. In the meantime, someone do me a favor and PM VitaVitaAR.
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Oh, right, um... I'll work out an intro soon. ^^;
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