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Interest checked, though I'm still trying to decide which power to stick with out of the multitude I've been scheming up :/

I'll post an app once I've decided that far.
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@FallenTrinity It'll be classified as an Emitter-class Quirk.

I prefer that we don't use realistic images. I believe I mentioned that in the character sheet in the OP.

That ability is fine, but the level of power and control you have now is too strong. The ability you chose was practically similar to this one. You can use this as a reference on how powerful you can start out as.
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@Quatro Yeah I might be able to use one of those names, I hope my edits to the quirk aren't a problem
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So the hooded artwork is fine but the other picture should be replaced? Got it!

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@Duthguy Its all cool. You included having a larger chest and lungs. Right?

@MonkeyBusiness Sorry, but I wanted to quirks to have single theme to then as much as possible. The exemption to this would be quirks that stem from both parents. Currently, your quirk is water manipulation, ice manipulation, and mist manipulation.

@FallenTrinity I could have sworn I read "Nicholas is a fairy tale." I was like, "wut?"

Yeah, electrokinesis would be an emitter-class quirk. Just a clarification about what he can do with his quirk? What would the degree of his manipulation of electricity be like? What can he do with outside sources of electricity and what causes heavy strain on his body? The overuse of his quirk or manipulation of outside sources of electricity? Thanks dude.
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@Quatro No worries. I will restrict the Quirk to just water manipulation. That way she would still have the ability to liquefy herself, which is the main focus of her ability.
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@Duthguy Its all cool. You included having a larger chest and lungs. Right?

@MonkeyBusiness Sorry, but I wanted to quirks to have single theme to then as much as possible. The exemption to this would be quirks that stem from both parents. Currently, your quirk is water manipulation, ice manipulation, and mist manipulation.

@FallenTrinity I could have sworn I read "Nicholas is a fairy tale." I was like, "wut?"

Yeah, electrokinesis would be an emitter-class quirk. Just a clarification about what he can do with his quirk? What would the degree of his manipulation of electricity be like? What can he do with outside sources of electricity and what causes heavy strain on his body? The overuse of his quirk or manipulation of outside sources of electricity? Thanks dude.


Yeah I'll clarify more tomorrow both with quirk and description. That's funny, did it myself when I went back to see what you were talking about.
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@Quatro My cs is done could you check it out?
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Here is my werewolf.

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Alright, while I admit to having no knowledge of the anime this stems from, I am eager to partake, I'll write something up within a few days.
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You without a doubt have my interest, I'll get something up after work.
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Simple and good. Everything is alright. Accepted!

Crowley's good. Now we have a puppy. Accepted!

@Mr Allen JI like Phoebe, I truly do. But her quirk, is just too many things packed into one. The fact that it doesn't have that many weaknesses doesn't help. Sorry. Front what I see, her quirk is a Mutant-class Quirk, Emmission-Class Quirk and a Transformation-class Quirk at the same time.

Not sure if you're familiar with the series, but I'll try citing some references on characters with similar quirks. Lumber is a wood-based quirk by one pro-hero while Vines is one used by a student.

Unique quirk, I like it. Doesn't seem that OP but is definitely a double-edged sword. He's reminds me of a piece of metal being worked on by a smith. Balanced out with the weaknesses you gave him; good job. Accepted!

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@Quatro I can change her quirk to something else or make a new character if necessary.
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@Mr Allen JYour choice man. I just gave you my comments; up to you what you want to do with the criticism. :)
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Thank ya.
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@Mr Allen JYour choice man. I just gave you my comments; up to you what you want to do with the criticism. :)


I mean, I was honestly trying to see how much I could get away with tbh. lol

I'll reduce it down to turning into chlorokinesis. I probably won't be able to write the whole living plant idea if I dumb it down too much (I mean, a lot of the capabilities are just from being able to turn into plants and that jazz).
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