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Hidden 8 yrs ago Post by Akayaofthemoon
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@Archmage MC

The City is on top of the Kindergarden so your second explaination is more likely.
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Either is fine. The choice is yours.
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Some parts might be filled in but there is still tunnels and a functioning kindergarten underneath.

As for night or day...I can't answer that till I've read the post lol sorry
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Looking at the post, I would say it is day time.
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well I guess I am the first to post, hopefully that hasn't screwed up anything other people are writing at the moment.
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Gonna post something now or tomorrow, probably the former. You got me hyped
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I made a post! I'm really excited for things to start up! I hope my post is okay, I just kind went this what I knew.

Secretly hopes a home-world gem find my character
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@The1Rolling1Boy Uh... I'm really sorry to have to rain on your parade, but...

  • You must post at least two paragraphs minimum (5-7 sentences per paragraph). More is always good.


I'm trying not to be the police here, but you seem to have only one paragraph.
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Oh! I didn't not read! I'll go fix it Thank you!

EDIT: I fixed it. This may now I had a chance to describe her surroundings a little better and how she feels and thinks.
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Hidden 8 yrs ago Post by HaltingBlooper
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@GutshotHow tall is Clinohumite?
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@HaltingBlooper around 5'8": taller than average, but not by that much.
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A brilliant orange flash could be seen

This blinds the Howlite.

I love idea of the episode title under her name, that's really fun.

quick question, seeing as Howlite has basically stolen the the command and control system of the kindergarten and strapped it to her hair I was wondering if you want the scraping of Clinohumite's sisters to be on there? Howlite would probably keep it to herself initially anyway, the "yeah I think they abandons us and its been ages since the war" bombshell would be enough of a shock already, but it would like to leave said decision on this particular piece of information to you.
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@DracoLunaris Thanks for the compliment! I would say keep the scraping part a mystery for now, perhaps as a 'steven bomb' for later on in the story. I really like that Howlite has all that information, though. It's going to make some great scenarios later on, with Howlite knowing the Clinohumites' tragedy, but really not wanting to tell Chloe the facts. I feel like those interactions could be really good to lead up to the final climax of confronting Clino with her kind's fate. Of course, that's just me thinking far and wide, it's your character after all.

EDIT: What'd be really interesting is if Bloodstone told her, but look at me thinking again.
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that is what i had in mind, a secret weighing on Howlite's mind about her new found ally/friend.
I will add the scrapping to what is effectively going to be Clinohumite's Pokedex entry.
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Hidden 8 yrs ago → 8 yrs ago Post by Archmage MC
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Deciding how I should post for my first one. Def with some sort of experiment, but I dunno where to go from there. I'm sure there were some tripwires that got tripped when the kindergarten gems emerged, right? human tech ones and whatnot.
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Kept things short and suite for my two posts, also @BrassOtter messed up my tag for ya.
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Let me know if you want to do HomeWorld. I can have your character avoided so you can have the direction you want your character to go in.
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@Raijinslayer I'm slightly confused by the first half of your post. Whose perspective is it writen from?
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Alrighty, posted. Need some rebellion gems to come with Marry to take a look at the drones or kindergarten alerts xD.

Hope my post worked. lol. Starting is so hard.
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@KronshiIt's written from the perspective of anyone observing, namely Marnie at the momemt, because I'm tired and thought that was a good idea.
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