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So I tried to make a list of current player-characters in this from the strongest to weakest on an even playing field.

So when you put every character on a football field, which character would be strongest?



1 - Headhunter (Insta win because sniper single-shot kills)
2 - Sonika (Limitless supply of air)
3 - Messiah (Nuke everything)
4 - Outsider (Mini-Endbringer OP)
5 - Jaunt (Provided he wants to kill himself)
6 - Exhale (Insanely good for AoE, not so good when far away)
7 - Cassidy (Time manipulation is good, but it's limited by quite a bit)
8 (EDITED 8.5) - Tulpa / Arsenal (That projection is really strong, and so are his robot parts)
9 - Kyoshi (Good balance of everything, could be one of the strongest if she had experience)
10/11 - Chatterbox / Mantis (Both are good at manipulating others, and that's strong as fuck)
12 - Wisp (Light projection is good, and the matter of use is great)
13/14 - Zach / Sophia (Both are defensively amazing, but both aren't really strong in the offense department)
15 - Margrave ("B-but how? How can someone as good as me be ranked so low?!")
16 - Overlook (He's shitty. End of story)

I tried to make this unbiased, and I'm bad at ranking, so if somebody wants to retry this list, please do.
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@Banana Heh. I wouldn't dare try to rank the different characters, but, um. Didn't you forget at least two? That is, Arsenal and Macavity, unless I missed some message. ... Oh, well.

Speaking of missed messages. When I originally looked over Outsider's character sheet, it says his loyalty with the Minutemen. Yet, he hasn't been recognized yet as far as I've seen, which confuses me. Was it said behind somewhere that he, like, hasn't joined them yet? I know I'm not in a position to necessarily know, but that has thrown me for a loop for a while. Huh.
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He's joining in game with their current meeting.
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@PlatinumSkink
I didn't include Macavity because West is dropping him for Exhale. I did however completely forget Arsenal, so good on you for noticing that.
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@Everyone that isn't a tropical fruit:

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I've done my part. I'm spying into brightened room with light-powers and eavesdropping. Hahaha.
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*panicked flailing*
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Sorry about the wait Skink, I've got classes keeping me busy for today and tomorrow and have been working on a collab. I have not forgotten!
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@Eklispe I didn't think you had. I'd like to think I know you better than to suspect so. Haha.
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Hey is this still open?

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@floodtalon It's cool to see that you've migrated over here! I like the character and think there's a great deal of promise for it, but there are some issues that you'll need to address.

he is 110 punds even.


locked him in an abandoned she'd for 3 days.


Than bigger things like games.


These are just some examples of grammar and spelling errors that I'd like you to proof read for. It never got so bad that it was annoying to read, but it was jarring.

Another thing to address is the classification of his power, which I admit comes with some gray area (pun not intended). I definitely agree that it is mover (teleport through shadows) and changer (shifting body to a different form), but it isn't a stranger ability. It definitely has stranger applications, but I couldn't call it stranger in and of itself. What I would definitely call it, however, is breaker as his body changes to a form that completely alters how physics affects him.

Another thing to address is that the trigger event just doesn't match the power. If it was a pure stranger ability, then yeah it'd be great, but it isn't. Remember that a trigger event has to incorporate all aspects of the power classification. There's nothing indicating a desire to flee from danger, to run away. There's nothing involving an issue with self-image. These things are integral for a mover and a changer. To make things easier on you, I won't force you to reclassify the stranger portion to breaker as I would like to do, because making a breaker trigger is difficult and weird (usually involving drugs/hallucinations/other confusing crap that convolutes the whole situation), but the trigger does have to be changed enough to involve and incorporate 1) a need to flee/run away from danger, and 2) a problem with his body/self-image.

And lastly, if you want to incorporate creating shadow objects, then he will need to also have the blaster categorization. That would make him incredibly complicated and convoluted for a trigger event, so I highly recommend against keeping that aspect of the power in order to save your own sanity. :P Besides, someone that can peel off of the wall and garrote you in a closed office is pretty terrifying as is.

Oh, and one last tidbit from me.
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@ProPro

Sorry about the grammar mistakes, I was in a bit of a rush as my phone was about to die and I didn't want to lose everything.

Honestly I could definitely change the Stranger Classification to Breaker, justifying the hallucinations aspect by saying he was hallucinating from lack of food, water, and a crippling loneliness.

And yeah I can change up his Trigger Event a little to match the powers.

I will remove the Blaster Powers, I thought I might very been reaching a little on that one.

Thanks for the advice!
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@floodtalon Awesome possum, just tag me in a new post when the proper edits are taken care of.
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@ProPro OK I think I've fixed up what you asked for. Let me know if I need to change his Trigger Event, you were right in saying Breaker is hard to write for.
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@floodtalon There's still no mover or changer aspects to the trigger event. Nothing is there to indicate a drive to escape/flee/run from danger (which should be easy since he's trapped in a shed), or body/self-image issues (which can be a stretch with the situation, but if he's hallucinating via starvation/dehydration it can be achieved). Side note that isn't important, there's no description of his villain costume in the appearance section. It's not necessary, but it's advisable he has something. Even if he can turn into living shadow, he has to return to flesh and blood sometime and could be witnessed doing it. Plus he shouldn't be able to attack people while he's a shadow, so he'd have to solidify for that, etc. Again, not necessary or super important, but advisable.
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@ProPro I just included the stuff you mentioned, I had originally put all of it in other places forgetting it had to actually be in the Trigger Event itself. My bad on that one. I also included his costume, pretty basic but it gets the job done.
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Oooh, with the proper edits made, that reads fantastic. Heartless is approved and fills up the roster for The Jacks once again. They're currently on their first mission, but as soon as it wraps up we can introduce Heartless to the rest of the team back at the hideout. I'll get with you on the details of that.
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@solokolos@yoshua171@BCTheEntity@Eklispe

What's going on with the Wards, Jacks, and Minutemen, guys?
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If I may, I'd like to invite you all to take a look at The Crucible, an idea I have brewing. Having remained with this RP this long, and given your level of writing, you all meet the dedication and skill requirements to be more than welcome to join. Even if you're not interested in joining a new RP, I'd be very happy to hear any feedback you might have on the idea anyway.
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