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Hope you like it!
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Hope you like it!

Hmmm...the character himself is fine, but I'm worried he might be a bit similar to Yuuta's character. I kinda get a similar vibe from them, y'know?

Also, what exactly are the limits to the barriers? Are they impenetrable, or can stuff break through them? Cause I feel like a 300 square foot barrier might be kinda difficult to get past
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Hmmm...the character himself is fine, but I'm worried he might be a bit similar to Yuuta's character. I kinda get a similar vibe from them, y'know?

Also, what exactly are the limits to the barriers? Are they impenetrable, or can stuff break through them? Cause I feel like a 300 square foot barrier might be kinda difficult to get past


I intended for General's Tent to be basically impenetrable, but the ordinary barriers he creates can certainly be broken through with a sufficient amount of power.

I'd say in terms of toughness, they're like...steel.

I wouldn't say the two are too much alike!....Hondo's not really an academic, or smart in anything save strategy.

I had looked for a non-messyhaired, non-glasses faceclaim, but finding good art of a non dopey-looking fat anime guy is tough....
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Character looks good, accepted

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I intended for General's Tent to be basically impenetrable, but the ordinary barriers he creates can certainly be broken through with a sufficient amount of power.

I'd say in terms of toughness, they're like...steel.

I wouldn't say the two are too much alike!....Hondo's not really an academic, or smart in anything save strategy.

I had looked for a non-messyhaired, non-glasses faceclaim, but finding good art of a non dopey-looking fat anime guy is tough....

Alright, that's fine then

Oh, one thing I meant to ask in the last post: what exactly is this mech like? As in its size, capabilities, etc

As for the personality, I'm alright with it this time but from now on, I think I'm going to put a limit on how many standoffish, angry, antisocial characters I'm going to accept since we already have 3 of them now :S
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(Gonna edit this post to respond to your character, Saber)

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Alright, that's fine then

Oh, one thing I meant to ask in the last post: what exactly is this mech like? As in its size, capabilities, etc

As for the personality, I'm alright with it this time but from now on, I think I'm going to put a limit on how many standoffish, angry, antisocial characters I'm going to accept since we already have 3 of them now :S

I'd say it's about the max height of his wall at that point, so...30 feet? With the density of General's Tent. It's basically that move with Arms and Legs to punch/kick with, which he can sculpt into like, giant blades, or a cannon arm to fire sphere barriers.

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I'd say it's about the max height of his wall at that point, so...30 feet? With the density of General's Tent. It's basically that move with Arms and Legs to punch/kick with, which he can sculpt into like, giant blades, or a cannon arm to fire sphere barriers.

That seems fine. Accepted
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That seems fine. Accepted


Alright, awesome!

i won't let you down, b0ss
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I have updated my character sheet, just changed the background slightly and edited some of the wording I used.
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Damn, I missed a lot in the past 24-36 hours.

Don't freak out, yes this may be amazing but do not freak out!

I'll work on a character, just a question though, would you rather the images be anime/shounen related?

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Read through it again, still looks fine

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Well honestly, I would prefer descriptions over any images at all. But if you really want to use an image then yes, anime images are preferred
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Name: Musashi Uchiha

Description of power: Ultimate Iris-Musashi's only current power, he enhances his eyes in order to greatly speed up the amount of visual information he's capable of processing at one time, or from his perspective, is able to see things in slow motion and in great detail. Eventually this might expand into being able to see an opponent's pressure points, or seeing the structural weaknesses of objects in order to exploit them. It could also theoretically allow him to copy an opponent's physical movements to learn the physical components of their fighting styles, and have numerous indirect applications.


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This character is really good, the only thing is that they resemble my character Akiko a little bit. I feel like there are enough differences so I'm still accepting him, I just felt I should probably point out the similarities

Also, disappointed that Bushido Breaker isn't named Bushido Blaster

Also also, I would recommend a Naruto OST song for his theme, though maybe that's too obvious XD


I do want to say that I really like this character a lot, but I do have a couple questions about his backstory and reputation. First, what exactly is FlowerShine? Are they just a regular corporation that happen to be trying to take over the world, or are they involved with channellers or something? Second, in reference to his reputation: were his fights with FlowerShine in public, or were they just in secret and other channellers happened to hear about his fights or something like that? If they were in public, channellers are supposed to be a secret from the regular world, so how did he hide his powers?
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Descriptions are always better.

Stop ass kissing, you're good at being yourself, no need to change for others.

I shall most likely have a CS posted later today if not early tomorrow, is that alright?

Just a question concerning the CS, are characters with memory loss (I can explain this in more detail by linking to an old character sheet I posted on this site) allowed?
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FTFY


Thankfully, he's got a fairly opposite personality, I'm no-way-in-hell going to let him become a power copier, and it's got a bit more Byagukan mixed in too, if we're gonna start throwing Naruto comparisons around.

plus, the name's basically 'what would a dorky 10/11 year old think is a good name for an eye-based power, so invoking that reaction means it worked.
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Replied to your character sheet, Dblade

I shall most likely have a CS posted later today if not early tomorrow, is that alright?

Just a question concerning the CS, are characters with memory loss (I can explain this in more detail by linking to an old character sheet I posted on this site) allowed?

I don't see why not, those should both be fine
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Interested. I have a character in mind but not a power. I'm not sure what would fit her personality.
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I did notice their similarities in terms of personality, but I agree that they're different enough to still be workable. I'm also considering the fact that despite being immature and odd, he's actually more likely than not a fairly cerebral character in terms of how he fights and approaches obstacles, and over time as he matures emotionally and learns to take things seriously, he'll probably be quite a bit different.

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