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Hidden 7 yrs ago Post by CollectorOfMyst
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@Deadnaut Also, where's Aura? It says in the IC that all characters are in the bar.
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@CollectorOfMyst

Currently sitting in the corner, giggling at tree puns in her head. Worry not, my first IC post is nearly complete, so soon you shall see what what I am of up to
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@Deadnaut

Okay, it's just of the 7 characters we have, three haven't been seen yet.
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Mistress of Puns?! That's preposterous!

You're all too easy, it doesn't even feel like a real competition... Almost like I am the only one actually aiming for that title!

To see your defeated expressions... only the thought already make me quiver!

PS: my next post is already done, but I'm holding it for a while, until another person posts.

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You win...

That's clearly your victory omg!!! haha
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@Deadnaut And the award goes to... I was laughing even when she wasn't thinking of puns. Just promise you won't chug out too many, okay? Things tend to lose their value if there's an excess.
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Alright, for future reference, please please do not use asterisks to indicate an action within speech. This is advanced RP. I mean, I don't wanna be a dick GM, but if any of us are grammar nazis we all ought to understand that "*sigh* (speech)" is not quite as advanced as we can be - especially not if our characters are into discussing advanced philosophy in pubs.
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I'll wait for all our characters to make their ways to the back - with the exception of Samuel, who is probably already there, or with the ship.
Hidden 7 yrs ago Post by CollectorOfMyst
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I think we're just waiting on Adrion/@13900IpForThis, and technically Ariah/@Deos Morran, who is with Kat, and thus ahead of Cole and Aura.
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@Bazmund

Wow... I...
I'm sorry, I guess?

I mean, I used it only once... its not like I've butchered the English language or something like that...

Already fixed it...

I'm pretty sure the contents of my posts are at least "average" compared to what is commonly written at advanced rps... But that made me feel like I made an outrageous, terrible mistake, that I my text is incomprehensible due to grammatical errors...

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I'm ashamed to admit, but I have said "sigh" aloud and in a public irl situation. So maybe it's not totally out of left field. Granted this is not quite modern day and I did get a look or two going 'what?'

As far as my post goes, I'm currently in the last of my school related functions for today, and will start writing when I get home.
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@13org@vietmyke It was the asterisks that got me. Feel free to have your characters say whatever you like, but the asterisks got to me. I apologise for seeming rude about it, but regardless of whether you say 'sigh' out loud or not - and actually, I have too - the asterisks just got to me, that's all.
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@CollectorOfMyst I've already gone into the room. In fact I think I may have been the first... Having us continue our talk a bit before "The only thing left was to wait a minute before Ariah stood up and started to casually walk after the stranger, making his way through the door to see what adventure waited for him on the other side." To quote my post.
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@13orgWe aint no average advanced group, girl.

The hell everyone is laughing at?

Oh...Aura made a post.

I wonder what it POSSIBLY could contain. I'll start writing up just as I get some food into by sad body.

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Sigh, there goes my sleep.
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I am uncertain, sir/ma'am, how my puns have impacted your sleep. Perhaps you should see a professional!
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Womp, my post is a little sparse, seeing as Sam isn't really doing much. Also studies.

edit: Hold that thought, thought of some other things to write.
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@Deadnaut

Took an hour to come up with all these ones.

I used a cheat sheet however, which I'm sure is not against the rules.

en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Glossary_of_arc…

@vietmyke Copy and paste your post after mine, so the RP makes more sense.
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@13900IpForThis What? I don't see why I need to- Sam was never in the bar with the others, he's been in the conference room with the general the entire time, from when Daniel was in there to when he left and came back.
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@Deos Morran Oh yeah... I forgot about that bit at the end. I'm just going to facepalm now...
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@vietmyke

The way I understood it, is that the point of view with the current set up is: Crew in the bar(everyone's intro)>back to the general's room(your intro)> back to the bar (me following the group)>back to general's room (Daniel again).

Running with: group intro and actions in bar>back to room, would have made it simpler.

It's too choatic if we jump all over the place. Next time, we should each person reply to their particular area before jumping to a different one. Symmetry and chornical order will make the RP legible.
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@13900IpForThis noted. Though I think the way I described where my character was was sufficient enough for people to understand where Sam was, and while I don't think multiple perspectives is such a bad thing I understand the point you're making.

Maybe lead with that next time, because I found that first statement to be rather rude.
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