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Hidden 7 yrs ago 7 yrs ago Post by Aiyanna
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@Regitnui Google translate told me 'sacrebleu' equals 'dangit'. It seems to be a bit dated. Well, Zafi is the oddball she is so I'll let her use it when she wants to. But for variety, that site's good :D

I don't like to swear but thanks either way :'D Might be usefukl for Zafi when she gets shocked again.

EDIT. Changed the 'sacrebleu' to 'Mon Dieu', seems a bit more approppriate for Zafi's age.
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@AiyannaI understand being critical of your writing. I can't get anything done with my book because my that myself.
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@Old Amsterdam You write as a hobby as well? That's cool! I used to write too, but then I got an arrow on my knee - I've started numerous novel manuscripts, never finished one. The furthest I ever got was an almost-finished 3rd draft of a manuscript...

What's your book about? Mine was some fantasy/magic stuff (wrote it as a kid)
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@Aiyanna I started my novel when I was 13, and this is my 7th edition (rewrite), and I'm completely redoing it.

To give a minor synopsis of the first book (planning on it being a trilogy, if u ever finish anything with it) involves the Past (mostly medieval) being mixed into the Future (like, say, 3100 AD) and shit going sideways. Magic, monsters, and a lot of war.

For basics, anyways. I don't want to go into too much here (publishers don't like that, and in case I ever finish this I do want to get published), but I love talking about it. Mostly through PMs.
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@Old Amsterdam
Such dedication! I could never bring myself to rewrite my embarrassing excuse of a novel again. I just keep cringing when reading it. It's not necessarily a bad text, just... cringy. The MC is so dense. So very teen.

Mine was supposed to be a trilogy too. Trilogies are common in fantasy for some reason. Writing war things must require a lot of research :O Sorry for my English, my tired brain is failing me, LOL

I could talk about writing for hours. If you ever wanna have a chat with me, don't hesitate to throw me with a PM!
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@Old Amsterdam I see. I totally understand that as I'm often the same. I tend to overthink things when I'm worried. Idk if you like shoujo genre but here's something I think would make you laugh:

https://ww1.gogoanime.io/category/gekkan-shoujo-nozaki-kun

It's a parody of today's anime industry & all the clichés. A brilliant parody, almost as good as OHSHC. Not actually a parody of the original shoujo genre which questioned the gender roles (back in the 70s-80s or so, if what I read was legit). But the way the series makes fun of common shoujo manga clichés is just awesome

(Otaku mode off)

@Regitnui Aight. Thank you. ~

@Hammerman @CriticalHit Sorry, writing is taking forever ;~;


GEKKAN SHOUJO

Hello I don't think I have introduced myself yet. Im Yui and I hope we can be anime friends

EDIT: eh I have been thinking of trying to write a novel. I like slice of life so I would be keeping it to that. Write stuff about real life problems of a downer like me.
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@liferusher Sure, why not?

Hi there Yui ~
Yes, Gekkan Shoujo, and Ouran High! Those are some awesomely hilarious series. Have you seen 'Kemono no Souja Erin'? It's epic. A masterpiece. The best anime series I've ever seen.

I like your writing! It's different from mine. Mine is highly descriptive.
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@liferusher Sure, why not?

Hi there Yui ~
Yes, Gekkan Shoujo, and Ouran High! Those are some awesomely hilarious series. Have you seen 'Kemono no Souja Erin'? It's epic. A masterpiece. The best anime series I've ever seen.

I like your writing! It's different from mine. Mine is highly descriptive.


Im trying to be descriptive ;-;

I watch more modern anime. Like... Attack on titan -pukes-

Im laughing so hard at where that plot is going. Way too serious. My favourites are rezero angelsbeats guilty crown hmmm clanned i have many more but that list is too long to call out
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@liferusher I did not mean your writing is not descriptive! I meant you get the point across with fewer words, a skill I lack. :)

I haven't watched that much of modern anime - just such as ReLIFE! or comedies. I mainly watch historical & fantasy. I've never seen Attack on Titan and I know nothing about it, LOL! I haven't watched most of the popular series at all. I'm an anime hipster.
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@Aiyanna@Hammerman Just read both your posts... I'M BEING BOMBARDED WITH AWKWARDNESS AND LEWD STUFF, PLZ HELP

Seriously though, I have almost no idea how Silas is going to respond to this. I mean he could either explode on Kanako for flashing him, or he could just roll with it which seems pretty out of character to me.
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@CriticalHit Sowwyyyy ~

I feel like he would snap at Zafi for being so... awkwardly clumsy. And rage at Kanako for having no shame. I think he's been holding it in for quite long.
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@CriticalHit Sowwyyyy ~

I feel like he would snap at Zafi for being so... awkwardly clumsy. And rage at Kanako for having no shame. I think he's been holding it in for quite long.


Hmm seen kannon?
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@liferusher Yes, if you mean Kanon 2006. It was so depressing

EDIT. It's past midnight here, I should really be going to bed... Why do I always get struck by inspiration when it's time to go sleep?????asdfghkjlöä'
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@Zelosse

Since I left Catherine's backstory pretty empty and vague, I was wondering if it's OK that she was an elementalist terrorist that broke out of her organization and became a crime lord? A young wind elementalist who was convinced of Elementalist Superiority, enlisted, and used as a weapon against non-elementalists. However disagreements with the leadership would cause her to leave the militant group only to then use her natural talent, cunning, and charm to build her own little criminal empire until she was finally taken down by Kano and other teachers. She sold Kano intel on elementalist terrorist groups for amnesty. She's more-or-less reformed and plays along quite nicely, but she has a strong desire to nurture independence in her students rather than discipline, believing that everyone has a right to be selfish, within reason. It also explains her calm confidence and potentially snobby nature (which has yet to be shown). Maybe some of the other teachers still fear and/or hate her, since she gives elementalists a bad name.


@Zelosse @Stern Algorithm

You can bet that Kano would have made use of Jordan's unique talents in taking down Catherine and bringing her around to the good guys! However unlike other more predictable teachers, Manilow would probably have found Catherine to be quite alluring, if obviously a bit on the dangerous side. Whether anything came of that depends on what you would think Stern, but I mean hey? I find it pretty fun when the mentors in stories have histories, especially with each other. ;) ;) Nudge, nudge.


Not to be needlessly grim, but Kano lacks the required humanity to believe you were capable of forgiveness.

To summarize the punishment: stripped of your second soul and thus your connection to the wind, then exiled if not outright killed. Information or not.

Im not saying you cant have done what you said but make sure Kano isnt the one who caught you.


@Zelosse @Stern Algorithm Ahem... *points not so subtly at himself* A certain gym teacher could have vouched for her...


@Kalleth Never let Kano know what she did. Or that you tried to save her.
You'll both be served the same fate.


Ok, coming back to this conversation, Catherine was not taken down by Kano, instead, she was betrayed by someone in her organization and, having lost everything and left for dead, has a chance encounter with Jordan. With nothing left to lose, she spills her guts and, after finding out that Jordan works as a teacher for the draconian Kano Hargor, fully expects to be killed on the spot. Jordan shows mercy and helps Catherine back on her feet, ultimately convincing her to become a teacher like him. Catherine probably found solace in Jordan's companionship, if you know what I mean. While she is on friendly terms with him, she is a bit ashamed of her relationship with him as it reminds her of her lowest point in life, and she has since put some professional distance between herself and him. This doesn't mean she won't tease or flirt with him on occassion, but she needs to feel like she's the one in control and not emotionally dependent on him. In other words, she likes giving Jordan the Blue Balls :P

Her 'villain' name was Breathtaker, and her true focus is vacuums. Her signature technique is creating a vacuum around a victim which causes asphyxiation, disorientation, and pain as the liquids and gases in the body try to evaporate in a pressure-free environment. This is followed by releasing the vacuum, resulting in an implosion that is like getting hit with a cannonball. This process is called cavitation, think Mantis Shrimp.

Is this acceptable?
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@Stern Algorithm A potentially villainous teacher eh? You're giving me some Soul Eater flashbacks here Stern.
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@CriticalHit I hope Zafi didn't attack you with too much of awkwardness ~
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@Aiyanna You've misunderstood what I said, I didn't mean that there was anything wrong with the situation so no need to apologize. All I'm saying is that I'm not sure how Silas would react.

If I make him go nuclear, it's probably one of the more character appropriate responses but it also kills future interaction possibilities with you and Hammer. Also if he does blow up it'd probably be on Kanako because even though she is "innocent" in this case, Silas doesn't know her and thus he really doesn't give a damn.

If I don't and have him roll with the situation, it's pretty out of character but it leaves more opportunities for future posts. But I digress.
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@CriticalHit Thank you for the clarification. :) Not sure about Kanako, but Zafi would very likely become afraid of him - or then just stand there with a blank face, depends on the situation. I love how he's considerate of Zafi - even though Zafi should apologize to him straightforward. Silas getting mad at her might do some good for her growth as a character.

I love discussing characters like this. How they would react, how they would feel. I'm an oddball like this

[sidenote: soon 3 am, I srsly should get going but inspiration struck]
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@Aiyanna Hmmm, well then I may just go somewhere in the middle and rather than having Silas full on explode, have him just vent some frustration. It's still decently in character, and it doesn't totally kill interaction and reaction potential. BTW @Hammerman If I do this Silas will likely bring up the fact that Kanako had just flashed both Silas and Zafi twice.
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Anime is Awesome!! LOL

Gory: Tokyo Ghoul, Another, and Angel Beats.

Chick Flick: School Rumble and fruits basket.


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