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@Tergonaut Beefed up his backstory a little more to include his interaction with the head of Cybertronics and his reason for staying in Faiza. I also opted to do away with the specialization and keep the broad specifications of his power.
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@Tergonaut so some feedback on your feedback, first off thanks for the feedback haha. So in order, first I'll work on expanding personality, what could set him off, how that works.

Next, the sister. Honestly I didn't put much thought in to her, but the idea was kind of his dads half of the family has the phoenix blood, and the mom has something else, and that's what his sister got. I know I'd never play her because really I can only handle 1 character in an RP at a time, I meant to open it up to someone else being able to play her and pick what her deal is but forgot to mention it. If no one wants to take her I'll either think of something for her or just get rid of her.

You've got it right on why he's going to the lodge, he may want to pretend he's not a big deal but he's more powerful than he realizes. Before making his decision he nearly had an incident while working, so that's why he needs time away from the world for a bit.

Finally, I think I'll be changing his eyes to orange to indicate the phoenix bloodline, maybe something else but I can't think of anything right now.

Also, just read the first post, nice work by the way, just making sure, are we all going to be arriving on a bus? If so do you think the bus could stay at the lodge? Because now I have an image of Sam driving the bus but no one knows he's a lodge resident until he gets off and starts unpacking like the rest of them haha
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@duskshine749, you are quite correct about the name conflict. It will cause some confusion, at some point, at least. However...at my first job, I worked with two Davids, two Brians, a Ryan, a Karen and an Aaron. You could not utter a single name in that place without at least two people lifting their heads. It's...honestly a very common name, although I'll admit not as common for a female. If I'm honest, I hadn't realized your character had that name until after I submitted my request. It may be something we'll just have to handle as "one of those things" in the course of the story.

For what it's worth, Sam hates her given name, which is why she utilizes the abbreviated version. Truth be told, in almost any scenario we'd like to imagine, she will use an alias of some kind anyway. "Sam" is only the name she gives to her closest allies; those she intends to interact with over a longer course than just the current job. It may be that her callsigns and street names are the majority of her identity.

In any event, I'm certain we can work it out to where we can indicate which "Sam" we're referring to. I'm willing to work for it if you are. ^_^

@Tergonaut, thanks for the speedy decision. I'm looking forward to seeing what I can do to help out with the story. Sam's been inactive for too long and wants to stretch her legs. There are raw components out there, unused, forgotten...every chip a blank canvas waiting for the brush that is her soldering iron. I will post her CS to the Characters page immediately. IC postage may occur tonight.
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@BlessedWrath I'm sure in peoples posts it'll be clear enough which Sam they mean, in universe though it might be fun, so I don't mind them having the same name
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@Tergonaut updated Samuel right here

Still don't know what to do with the sister, if I can't think of anything in the next few days she'll just cease to exist.
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Just a quick note; I'm planning on waiting until I have all six slots filled before we proceed with the IC. Just wanted to make that clear since I added that into the OOC rules, but they were mixed in with the interest check rules, so they were easy to overlook before.

As for the sister, @duskshine749, you could just leave that open for now; maybe I can make her into an NPC, or you can come up with something for her later on. Also, I'm cool with the bus staying at the lodge, though since there will only be a total of six people, maybe it should just be a van instead! That way it could fit into the garage, though if you'd prefer a bus, it can be left outside the lodge.

I'm going to sit and wait a bit before finalizing approval for anyone else this evening, just to give more time to finish up CSes for those who need to wrap them up; but at this rate, we will likely be starting IC officially sometime tomorrow. Thank you for your patience!
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I think the NPC idea is a fair option, especially since it seems like we're all doing single characters thus far. It would give an option for still including her, without upsetting that balance of play. There's nothing to stop you discussing what his sister would/would not do with Tergonaut in PMs, so there is still that level of control over the development of the character.

Tergonaut has reminded me that IC posts are to wait until all six slots are filled, so I am retracting my earlier statement. I'm afraid I was a bit overzealous about getting into a roleplay again, and jumped the gun. I personally have no doubt that the remaining slots will be filled quickly.
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In the meantime, I'm commissioning artists on this site to draw my character, Amie. If you're an artist and you like drawing people (and want to make a little money), check it out. Only one person has followed up, and I'm hoping to get some more people.

Here's the thread:
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@Tergonauti like the idea of her as an npc, I've still got no ideas for her. And now I really like the idea of Sam being the driver, so I think I'll do that, a van works
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A van it is, then!

I'm going to say that @AFro Samurai and @duskshine749, you can go ahead and move your CSes to the characters tab!

This means only one slot is currently left, though most likely it will be taken by [@Rajinslayer], who has contacted me to let me know he'd like to try a different character than he has already proposed. I am all right with this, and right now, I plan on giving him another day or so to do that. Once he's done and approved, we will proceed with the IC!
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Acknowledged. This seems like quite the motley crew, so far. It will be interesting to see how Sam fares in a team dynamic with such rogues. :D
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It's kinda rambleing at points because it's late. Gonna fix it up tomorrow night, but ye, here's my new idea.

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@Raijinslayer So he has the same height, weight, hair color, and eye color as Amie?
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@MatthiasAngelPlatinum blonde is a lot different then dirty blonde though, like, almost exact opposite side of the blonde spectrum. I don't get where you got weight from, since i didn't specify it. The chance of them being the same weight is pretty low given that Jaden's a guy and all.
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@Raijinslayer Well, okay.
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@MatthiasAngelsorry if that came across as a bit rude. I was just a bit confused by the purpose of the observation, as well as a bit tired due to answering when i literally just woke up.

I didn't mean to offend or anything
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Discussion and debate are healthy for a roleplay. It may take some time before we strike a rhythm with either. I don't think either of you meant to be rude. Just an outside observation.
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@Raijinslayer I was observing that your character looks very similar to another character. Even the hairstyle is similar.
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@BlessedWrathYe, I even had an follow up message that specifically stated that I wasn't intending to be rude, but I wasn't sure if it was needed(and as I said before, I had just woken up, so my ability to string words together was not at it's best.)

@MatthiasAngelI think that, in my tired state, I read the tone of comment as somewhat accusatory, though of what I had no clue. That was probably the main reason for my response being a bit more irritated/defensive then I meant it to be.
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@Tergonaut

Finished. I re-worked a few things now that I'm in a better state of mind, and I can't wait to get things started.

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