[OOC] Naruto: Yogensha. Partake in the prophecy.

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新しい	預言者
Atarashī	yogen-sha

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This RP is an AU [alternate universe] for the Naruto world created by Kishimoto. As such it will have a world custom built by yours truly, Buddha. This means that the history will be entirely different from what we know. This is because, in my humble opinion, the world for Naruto was perfect but the execution of it's story was very flawed. 

What does this mean for you?

Well, it means that you might have to read through the world section to gain an understanding of what is going on in the story. The geography and such are still the same as are the villages, but their connections are changed and the location we play in will not focus on one of the larger villages. Never the less, I can assure you that these are weighted choices I made that weighed off pros and cons to me as a GM. If you are looking for a place to play where you can play a canon character and/or completely follow the canon storyline, word by word, then this is not the place to do it.

So what will we play?

We'll be playing as part of Amegakure - the small village where it's always raining. For this RP I'm looking for two small groups of four each - myself included - so that we can fill out two teams of one jounin and three genin. However, do not let this hold you back if you don't want to play a genin. There will be timeskips whenever there is the need, which means that during a timeskip, if you get the OK from the GM's, you can advance to chunin spots. As these are turbulent times, these wont always happen through chunin exams, but can also happen through promotion. After all.. there are troubled times ahead.

How will we progress?

Primarily story based. If you want to learn a new technique, ask a GM first, and then if you get the okay, you can write a training sequence or something similar to show in the IC how you learned it. When this comes up, I'll explain further, but we want everything written out as writers, and not just tacked onto the end of your CS because you felt like it. 

[CHARACTER SHEETS]


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ＯＯＣ Ｉｎｆｏｒｍａｔｉｏｎ

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In this header I would like to explain to you what you can expect from this roleplay. Read, and weep;

ｘ	This roleplay is set in an AU [alternate universe] which means that (parts of) canon is no longer valid in this RP. 
	Use this to your advantage to create new clans and jutsu, and create interesting backstories.

ｘ	This roleplay will be focused on character development, interaction, and progress. There will be plenty of fighting, 
	but for the most part you will need to be focused on developing your character and strengthening their bonds with their team.

ｘ	I aim to represent the gritty reality of war. This is Naruto - but we will not thrive through plot-kai (oh, my character is a player character, 
	so they will never die) and we will not say that 'through the power of friendship we will always win.' That worked for Naruto. It worked 
	for him because he has a Kyuubi sealed within him and is the reincarnation of a Shinobi god. He's the prophesied child. Your character 
	is not.

ｘ	The RP takes place during a war of sorts with a overarching plotline that will, gradually, introduce a plot that overarches more than your 
	character, more than Amegakure, and more than the war. Ultimately your choices will contribute to the outcome. And I don't mean that 
	in the way that I'm giving you choices but they all end the same - your choices will affect the outcome.

ｘ	Your character can die, and I encourage you to seriously consider what effects wounds have on your character, or also mental health. 
	This takes place some time before Naruto's timeline, so technology isn't so refined and you probably won't be able to just pop into the 
	hospital to heal a broken arm. But also consider death. Death is a tremendous plot tool - if you want to make an impact... death is a tool.


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Sadly previous experiences have taught me that sometimes it's better to have rules. I wish I didn't need to have these - they seem oppressive (haha, okay, not really, I'm totally fine being authoritarian) and it seems, to me, that having rules indicates that I don't trust my roleplayers to do 'the right thing.' I do trust you guys. But this is just a precaution.

ＯＯＣ Ｒｕｌｅｓ           

ｘ	No godmodding, powerplaying or making shit up in the IC. The standard stuff.
ｘ	No perfect characters (Mary Sue and Gary Stu).
ｘ	GM team has final say. Always. Like a certain regime in a certain time period. Ahem.
ｘ	One-lining not acceptable. Two lining isn't either. In fact just write two paragraphs.
ｘ	Consistency is key. We understand posting a little less sometimes. There's limits, though.
ｘ	RPG rules apply. Always.


ＩＣ Ｒｕｌｅｓ                

ｘ	Beware the gore; yes, it's allowed but don't overdo it. No blood showers.
ｘ	As for sexual content, take it to PM's and show us a fade to black; make it implied.
ｘ	Death is possible. For all characters. Including GM characters. We love death.
ｘ	Love is also possible. Gay love, heterosexual love, alien love, whatever you want.
ｘ	Feel free to use images to illustrate - however, please consider that a written description is also required.


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ｘ	Your character is a genin, or in rare cases, a chunin or jonin.
ｘ	Be diverse and dynamic with creating your characters; don't be set in stone for what you want and be prepared to change your ideas
	as we go, and acknowledge GM critique.
ｘ	No tailed beasts for now. We will 'give them out' in the IC.
ｘ	Kekkei Genkai are to be made unique. If they are Sharingan with 1 minor edit made into a new KG, then it's a no-go.
ｘ	Same applies to hiden. If they are shadow control with 1 minor edit, then it's a no-no.
ｘ	Please don't make elemental control kekkei genkai. Only try this if you can make it interesting. It's boring.


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Because Naruto is a diverse world with diverse techniques, with some more balanced than others, we have chosen to make several rulesets for characters for each rank. This is to avoid situations with, for example, a chunin who has the rinnegan, fighting some chunin who barely has a single B rank technique. It's also to avoid broken jutsu, such as Flying Thunder God, being used to cheese fights. It might seem like a fun thing to give your characters, especially if they have a historical reason for having that jutsu. And I agree, it's a fun niché thing that makes it more interesting. 

But looking at pro's and con's for these kind of jutsu, we have to decide that ultimately it's not worth it, because that means your jutsu will give you pleasure, but it will detract that of those that go up against your character, or those that wanted something similar but got denied. It's put in place to avoid bad situations where two people cannot reach an ultimatum about fights. Simple as that. We do not accept arguments about these things, they're set in stone.

If you feel like your character might have, for instance, an extra A-rank jutsu.. that's possible. We might accept that if you can justify it to us in a PM or in an OOC comment. For example, two A-rank jutsu that form a combo, but are otherwise not that useful, is perfectly acceptable. But if you justify it by saying 'Oh he's a prodigy, he was like Sasuke and is just super cool like that.' then we're gonna not accept that.

General bans refer to simply not being allowed to have this jutsu on any character, in or out of battle.
Combat bans refer to bans for combat only, meaning they are allowed outside of combat.
Limit jutsu refer to jutsu that are allowed, in and out of combat, but have limited usage.

ｘ	Flying Thunder God Jutsu - general ban.
ｘ	Body Flicker Technique - combat ban.
ｘ	Body Replacement Technique - limit jutsu, 3 uses per battle.
ｘ	Chimera Technique - general ban.

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Ｊｕｔｓｕ ｌｉｍｉｔｓ

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Note: N/A in front of a rank means 'no limit' within reason. You can use as many of these as you like although that doesn't mean you have to use every one of them. They also need to make sense. A character with an aptitude for high level lightning jutsu will probably have more of these N/A lightning jutsu than fire jutsu. Simple as that.

Ｇｅｎｉｎ                    
0 A-rank.
1 B-rank.
2 C-rank.
2 D-rank.
N/A E-rank.


Ｃｈｕｕｎｉｎ                

1 A-rank.
3 B-rank.
4 C-rank.
N/A D-rank.
N/A E-rank.


Ｊｏｕｎｉｎ                

1 S-rank.
3 A-rank.
4 B-rank.
N/A C-rank.
N/A D-rank.
N/A E-rank.


Ｋａｇｅ                   
- Never accepting applications for kage level characters. We'll ask you to make them if we need one.

N/A S-rank.
N/A B-rank.
N/A C-rank.
N/A D-rank.
N/A E-rank.


Note: Kage-level characters will not be judged on their jutsu lists or anything of the sort, they will be judged on identity: are they interesting, are they worthy of the kage-level stamp and do they serve a good, useful purpose? That's because once you reach jonin status, it becomes really quite easy to pass into kage-level areas, and beyond kage there are no ranks. That means the power levels within kage-level characters fluctuate heavily.

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Ｓｅｎｇｏｋｕ Ｊｉｄａｉ                
Ｗａｒｒｉｎｇ Ｓｔａｔｅｓ Ｐｅｒｉｏｄ

During Sengoku Jidai, as the name states, the nations of the world were in constant conflict with each other, and as a result hired Shinobi clans to fight their wars for them. At the center of these conflicts were often the Senju clan, who were famed for their skill in all ninja arts, and the Uchiha, who possessed a refined kekkei genkai that allowed them an advantage in combat that was feared throughout the world.

But it was not the Senju or the Uchiha that caused the Sengoku Jidai to end. It were the diplomatic Hyuga and the Sarutobi, both clans that were renowned for their prowess as well. The traditionalist Hyuga clan and the more progressive Sarutobi clan shared their seats of power with relative ease, finding that friendship between the clans bloomed quickly.

It was Eiji Hyuga that took the first position of Hokage, though it was well known that his companion, Oto Sarutobi was in part also hokage through his close relationship with Eiji. The two ruled Konohagakure, and other villages soon formed as they found that Konohagakure was growing too strong for them to stand against alone. Not that Konohagakure was going out and attacking people - quite the contrary. Any clan that could provide a benefit to Konohagakure was allowed entry, such as the Akimichi, the Yamanaka, and the Nara. Most clans found their way to a village eventually, and there was little reason to remain alone, wandering, after that. 

The Uchiha and Senju both joined the Konohagakure village, but their numbers had dwindled due to their excessive fighting, and they would never quite recover to the level of the Hyuga and Sarutobi, instead taking their place as a regular clan, if not somewhat more prestigious due to their past prowess in battle.

Ｓｈｉｎｏｂｉ Ｇｏｄａｉｋｏｋｕ        
Ｆｉｖｅ Ｇｒｅａｔ Ｓｈｉｎｏｂｉ Ｃｏｕｎｔｒｉｅｓ 

The period that followed the Sengoku Jidai was the period of the Shinobi Godaikoku, the Five Great Shinobi Countries. Following the large success of the shinobi villages, more started to appear in smaller locations, like the land of rain and the land of grass. However, as history had shown before, it was only the largest countries that could field the largest shinobi armies. So, it was Konohagakure, Iwagakure, Kirigakure, Kumogakure and Sunagakure that would lead this era. 

Despite the existence of larger villages of shinobi, it should not be presumed that the countries were always at peace. There had been Great Shinobi Wars before and, as some say, they will continue to exist forever. As is the case here. 

When Konohagakure was started, it was not too long after that Kumogakure was founded too. Kumogakure almost immediately went to war with Konohagakure to claim valuable land, causing the Daimyo in the land of fire some alarm. Never the less, he would soon be relieved to see that Konohagakure was fighting back.

Ｓａｉｓｈｏ ｎｏ ｓｈｉｎｏｂｉ－ｓｅｎ
Ｆｉｒｓｔ Ｓｈｉｎｏｂｉ Ｗａｒ 

For some time there was a stalemate, with the front never changing position, only sliding back and forth a few meters every now and then. The bodies were piling up on both sides, and old practices were hard to get rid of - children barely aged 12 were sent into battle against foes that were far superior in age and experience. Rarely, if ever, did these children survive the battles, and if they did they were surely deeply scarred. 

This period was also the period in which Amegakure was founded. It was this war that prove to be the first exercise of Amegakure proficiency and they did not disappoint. As more villages were springing up and throwing themselves into the war as allies or independent actors, Amegakure was at the midst of it, providing a battlegrounds of sorts. 

The villagers that lived here were forced out of their homes and saw brutalities committed against them, which caused one righteous shinobi to step up and place his clan down in the village, securing himself a position of the Kage of Amegakure - although the village was little more than a house with shinobi in it at that time. But slowly their forces grew as they protected the village. 

This does not mean, however, that Amegakure is to be seen as some sort of heroic village protecting the innocent. In retaliation for the attacks on Amegakure shinobi and villagers, there were retribution based attacks in which other villagers lost their lives also. The first kage was a brute of sorts with a noble heart but a twisted way of obtaining the goal of safety. It was no surprise that he died as he lived - on the battlefield.

When the war had ended, Amegakure was a husk of itself, and it would never quite recover from these losses. The next Kage made up for that fact by increasing the training regiment. This turned ineffective almost immediately as it was proven that most Amegakure shinobi could not keep up such a regiment after having seen the horrors of war first hand. Many mentally-unstable shinobi were produced in these times following the war.

Ｈｅｉｗａ                                     
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The period following the war was similar for many of the shinobi nations - take as many missions as you can, consolidate power and compete with the other villages. Small skirmishes still occurred when mission objectives conflicted between nations, but overall things were more quiet. This was, in part, because more official and stagnant borders were drawn up between the five great shinobi villages, the discussions for which left out smaller nations such as Amegakure. 

While the other nations hunted for great tailed beasts, Amegakure was left in the mud, clinging on to life coup after coup. During the peacetime they were faced with a lot of civil wars, of new kage's attempting to take over. It was a result of the loose creation they had faced: after all, they were never seen as an 'official' shinobi village, merely a band of shinobi that lived in the village and protected it.

This was ended when a man by the name of Iie Hizen took over in a bloody coup, killing all those who opposed him. A quarter of the village died, but after that, there were no more coup's, and Amegakure began settling in as a real village, taking missions from that moment on. Under Iie's leadership several institutions were formed in Amegakure:

Regyurā, regulars
The run of the mill shinobi that performed everyday shinobi tasks. Genin, chunin and most (special-)jonin make up the regulars, under the command of the jonin commander. They operate under the Amegakure Shinobi code, and adhere to the Amegakure ninja way. Ultimately they are the same as most other shinobi forces. As for their uniform, the Amegakure regulars are allowed some leniency in their uniform. Cloaks, however, are advised due to the weather conditions in Amegakure.
Burakkuopusu, black ops
The ANBU of Amegakure, black ops specialize in espionage and assassination. Contrary to other villages, the black ops are sometimes sent out on missions for monetary gain as the low number of shinobi in the village don't allow for any shinobi to be underutilized. As such, the black ops are part of the assassination squads that undertake missions as well. Their uniforms are a bit more strict and are recognizable mostly through their black clothing and an additional metal forehead protector that says 'Black Ops' on it, usually worn on a belt loop alongside the regular Amegakure forehead protector.
Bōdāgādo, border guards unit
Due to the nature of Amegakure's position in the middle of three larger villages, they are forced to vehemently protect their borders at all costs. These units will go out and confront trespassers, ordering them to turn back and take the long way around Amegakure, and if they fail to do so, will engage and theoretically destroy the opponent. The border guards are typically lead by a borderguard-specific jonin, and then three regular shinobi, but can also consist of four borderguard shinobi.
Fukisokuna, irregulars
These shinobi are anything that doesn't fall in any of the other categories. They are perhaps closely related to the Sannin rank - not really part of the armed forces, but at the same time definitely tied to Amegakure. There is no given title that the fukisokuna use, and most of them are titular, nicknames and such. Currently there are no fukisokuna, but perhaps in the future.
Minashigo-in koyō sābisu, Orphanage employment service
Perhaps the most infamous of the Amegakure institutions, the orphanage employment service or otherwise known simply as 'the orphanage' is a service that deals with children abandoned by their parents or who lost their parents due to war. They come from all over - but mostly from Amegakure. This is due to the frequent usage of Amegakure lands to do battle in by other countries which causes displaced children to end up either in Amegakure or wandering into Amegakure - though, at times, the orphanage has been known to employ the Black Ops to exfiltrate orphans from other areas outside of its' borders. This has earned them a bit of a black mark because they are effectively taking orphans, which isn't so bad. But the process after it is somewhat of a grey area, because the children are then raised as shinobi and made to fight in the Amegakure forces. This has earned critique from other villages, but Amegakure has been quick to retort that they are merely taking care of the children that their wars have orphaned.

Many of these institutions go under different name in the day-to-day lives of the shinobi, as nobody would refer to a shinobi as a regular, or as an ANBU specialist as a black-ops. They are merely there in the upper echelons of the armed forces, used by commanders and kage alike.

The Heiwa period is where we currently are, but the period is soon to come to an end with the arrival of Shinobi who are unrivaled in terms of power.

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As mentioned before, Amegakure was started as the result of a shinobi settling down with his clans in a local village that was under constant attack by the shinobi of the opposing countries that used this village as their battlefield. Whenever there was not a battle raging, forcing people into their homes, there would be scavengers taking supplies from the villagers. This ceased when the shinobi settled down, under the leadership of one Hikako. Though he settled there with his 'clan' they were not related through blood, more so than choice. Not only that, but it was apparent rather quickly that their track record wasn't spotless either. This was used by the other villages to denote the birthplace of Amegakure as a 'bandit infested village,' though for a set of bandits these shinobi were far too skilled.

This meant that, at first, they were not a prime target and were merely an obstacle in obtaining resources. But after the first fights between the clan of rag-tag shinobi and the armed forces it became evident that these were a little more than just bandits. Especially the leader, Hikako, was extremely proficient, having mastered the art of senbon and ninjutsu to the level of an expert. 

Hikako maintained leadership until the weeks before the war ended, dying on the battlefield defending his squad against an oncoming attack of mixed Sunagakure and Konohagakure troops, which had enclosed them from two sides. Perhaps it would be heroic to say he saved their lives, but this was not the case. They all perished in the attack and the chain of command dictated that his younger brother took the position as kage.

But things went slightly different. The moment the message came in that Hikako was dead, a civil war broke out in the village, with a rather bloody coup taking place. Hikako's younger brother was seen as a somewhat inferior and weak leader and his combat skills were sub par to most other shinobi in the village. He was killed alongside some small number of loyalists, and a new kage was placed on top of the hierarchy. After that followed a bloody sequence of coups, with each kage spending a variety of time on that position before inevitably dying off. More on that will follow in a list of all the kages that Amegakure knew. 

During this time, there was still a lot of war, which was ironic given that this time was commonly referred to as Heiwa - peace. Perhaps it is strange to say so, but any war that didn't involve all the great villages were simply were simply put not important enough to be considered a great war. And rightly so - there was nothing great about these war. 

Amegakure was at the center of these wars quite frequently, having to defend their territory against encroaching forces that were attempting to annex the village. The last war was over twenty years ago, however, so it is unlikely that any of the current regular shinobi forces bar the jonin experienced these wars. Perhaps luckily so - war leaves its' scars on anyone, no matter how strong you are.

There were many kages in Amegakure during these times, many of whom were merely average. Some that stood out were the following;

Ｉｋｋｉ                            
The shinobi that settled down in Amegakure with his band of shinobi, this man is some sort of legend among Amegakure shinobi, whether you like him or not. He was a man with a noble heart, but not quite the hero other villages put forth as their 'legendary shinobi.' Ikki was the living embodiment of 'the goals hallow the means' and as such he was at the head of many cruelties against the other shinobi villages. Perhaps this was wrong - but it's what gave them the edge a small village needed to survive.

He died defending his squad in a joint ambush by Sunagakure and Konohagakure. Perhaps it would be heroic to say that due to his efforts his squad made it out alive - but this would be a lie. Nobody returned from that ambush and, while Ikki's defense cost the Konoha- and Sunagakure hitsquad quite a few members, inevitably when Ikki fell the rest was doomed to death as well. Word of his death reached Amegakure a few days later, resulting in the first coup of Amegakure history. Two weeks later the first great shinobi war ended.

Ikki left behind a younger brother, who was swiftly killed in the coup. No other known relatives survived, as far as Amegakure intelligence services know.

Ｋｏｊｉ Ｍｏｔｓｕｂａ         
Koji Motsuba was the person that took over after Ikki. Following Ikki's death, and the arrival of that news, Koji figured it was time to get rid of the weaker younger brother of Ikki and take over for himself, to ensure that Amegakure would not fall under the weak leadership of this brother. 

Luckily for Koji, he had a lot of support compared to the brother, resulting in merely a few deaths. But his reign would not stop there. He initiated a brutal training regime to prepare the rest of Amegakure for the second great shinobi war that he was sure would arrive one day. He wasn't wrong - he just miscalculated the period of time in which it would happen. 

Perhaps his greatest miscalculation was using the war-torn children of the war, deeply scarred both physically and mentally by the pains they suffered during this war. During Koji's reign Amegakure underwent a surge in mental problems that only diminished once this extreme training regiment was replaced with a lesser regiment. 

Koji was the leading figure in 90% of the total defensive wars that Amegakure faced, all of which took place during his twenty years as kage. A coup ultimately cost him his life, and his successor replaced the training regime. Things returned to normal.

Ｍａｏ Ｓｕｓｕｂｅ           
Mao Susube was a female assassination expert. It should come as no surprise, then, that she was at the head of the largest and most complex coup in Amegakure history - no small feat to accomplish. Her status as assassination also put her in relative comfort when it came to defense against other coups - she knew what to expect. 

Her reign as kage was relatively normal, and it was under her time period that Amegakure opened it's borders slightly more and began accepting trade and commerce between the other villages and Amegakure. Controls were tightened in the shape of bureaucracy but ultimately, she provided a good boost to economics for Amegakure. Their industrial exports could now also be exported to other countries, after all.

This ended when an infiltrator used a trading wagon to bring in heaps of explosives and blew up a large section of the Amegakure industrial district. Following this attack, which was not claimed by anyone, she reverted her previous actions and closed the country again, not allowing anyone from the outside access without explicit approval from the kage herself. To this day it is unsure who committed the crime, but it is said that the upper echelons of the Amegakure shinobi forces know exactly who was behind it.

She died not long after that of health problems. 

Ｉｉｅ Ｈｉｚｅｎ                     
Iie Hizen was the leader that took over after a series of coups, putting an end to them with an iron fist and the help of the Black Ops squadrons. Using black ops, anyone with thoughts about revolutions were put to an end, with either re-conversion to the Amegakure ninja way, or forcible departure from this world. He ruled the longest of any kage in Amegakure, being the twelfth kage, and held office for over 30 years. 

He was a hard shinobi, hardened by the many defensive wars he fought, and during his later period of rulership this became evident as he came down harder and harder on suspected revolutionary elements in Amegakure. Despite being at the head of many progressive things in Amegakure, he was also the cause of a lot of cruelty. This was never hidden either - he accepted this, and he embraced it, proclaiming that a hard rule was necessary for the people of Amegakure, who would otherwise devolve into more and more coups and bloodshed. Over time this became the accepted ideal. Rule hard, or perish.

He died two years ago, with the new kage taking his place soon after.

Ｓｈｉｉ Ｍａｔｓｕｍｅ                 

Ｓｈｉｉ Ｍａｔｓｕｍｅ， ｃｕｒｒｅｎｔ Ａｍｅｋａｇｅ

Shi Matsume is the current Amekage, who took over after Iie. During her 2 year seat on the position of kage, she has not accomplished that much yet. However, her mainstay focus has been on the protection of Amegakure borders, what with the war starting within her reign. She is known as a rather fierce shinobi, definitely a match for any other kage out there at the moment. More over, her personality matches Amegakure almost indefinitely, and she has allowed Amegakure to consume her - to essentially become a living breathing portrayal of Amegakure.

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Personalia

Information collected by the census office of Amegakure

“I'm not all too special.”

|   Ｂｉｒｔｈｎａｍｅ:   |
Mizushima Sachi

|   Ｎｉｃｋｎａｍｅｓ:   |
Freak, Murderer, Thief

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N/A

|   Ｓｅｘ:   |
Female

|   Ａｇｅ:   |
14

|   Ｂｉｒｔｈｐｌａｃｅ:   |
Konohagakure

|   Ｂｌｏｏｄｌｉｎｅ:   |
Mizushima

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Genin

|   Ｒｅｐｕｔａｔｉｏｎ:   | 
Sachi’s unnatural eye gives her a bit of a nasty reputation among her peers. They believe that she killed the Uchiha her sharingan was from with her bare hands and ripped his eyes out like some sort of monster. Whenever she tried to defend herself, she dug herself an even deeper grave. The orphanage did not treat her well socially, leaving her a bit estranged.

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Psychology & History

From detailed inspection and investigation by Black Ops and medical personnel

“W-What? I'm not comfortable talking about that....”

|   Ｐｅｒｓｏｎａｌ ｂｉｏｇｒａｐｈｙ:   |
Sachi was born to the Mizushima clan of Konohagakure. Specifically, Kurui and Muchi. Two of the clan's top shinobi, at least, when they were still shinobi. They had been retired due to their decline in performance, so they taught in the school. Teaching in the school taught them a love for children, though it might be the other way around for others. They tried for a child, and so Sachi was born.
 
When Muchi contracted a chakra virus, Kurui did everything he could to stop it, but there was nothing he could do. She passed in her sleep the night of Sachi's second birthday. Thus began his research about Dōjutsu, he was bitter and spiteful that his beloved wife had died. He had this delusion that one of the Sharingan's genjutsu could have stopped it. There was no practical reasoning for this, and when he tried to talk to the Uchiha, they laughed at him and shunned him. It got so bad that even his own clan shunned him.
 
Kurui's delusion took him to a point where it became less about the chakra virus and more about stealing a sharingan to fuel a power-hungry ego of his. These traits that he showed were more apparent each and everyday, making a negative impact on his daughter. She became incredibly timid and afraid of everything, becoming a jumpy child.

Around the age of 10, Kurui finally went off the deep end. He captured and tortured a young man named Uchiha Fuun. Tortured being used relatively loosely, because while Kurui did not inflict any wounds beyond ripping his eyes out, he did not put the boy out of his misery and left him to suffer.

Sachi was vehemently against this, and knew it was wrong, despite her fathers attempts to trick her, telling her that he volunteered and such. Though, these protests amounted to nothing in the end. Kurui knocked her out and transplanted the eye. Sachi did not take well to this, and threatened to go to a higher-up of some kind, but Kurui kept her quiet, he had been planning to flee the leaf regardless.

Kurui forcefully took Sachi and fled the village after learning that Amegakure was currently taking in refugees. They made it to the Hidden Rain Village safely, but was met with an Uchiha hit squad, presumably friends and family members of Fuun. They killed Kurui, leaving Sachi to herself. The leader of the hit squad told her bluntly that he wanted her to suffer for her fathers' actions.

After being found by the minashigo-in koyō sābisu, she was quickly enlisted to be trained in the orphanage. She hardly ever used her sharingan, only but once when she was being harassed by another student about it. Sachi lashed out, knocking the student to the ground.

This caused an instructor, Kūki Ryuu, to take a special interest in her. He wondered just what the girl had to offer, and while it wasn't much, he believed she had potential. Proficient in Fūton, Ryuu taught Sachi the basics of the nature, allowing her to copy Fūton techniques as well as Suiton, her natural affinity.
Ryuu was and continues to be a father figure for her, considering hers was less than subpar.

|   Ｆａｍｉｌｙ ｂｉｏｇｒａｐｈｙ:   |
The Mizushima are native to Konohagakure, renowned for their water release techniques. They were one of the first families to settle in the Hidden Leaf, along with the Akimichi, Yamanaka, and Nara. The family has no kekkei genkai, but a numbered amount of techniques that can be attributed to their name. While Sachi has never met a majority of her extended family, when seeking refuge in the Hidden Rain, her father brought scrolls containing jutsus he was planning to learn with his newly-acquired sharingan. 

|   Ｆａｍｉｌｙ ｔｉｅｓ:   |
Mizushima Kurui ✝ | Father | 42, Kurui studied the common dōjutsu within Konohagakure, most specifically the Sharingan. While he had multiple studies on the Byakugan, it was not the one he was most interested in. He wanted to know exactly how the copying aspect of the eye worked , and to do that, he had to have a sharingan on hand. After asking around, it was clear no Uchiha was interested in helping his studies. Which meant he had to take matters into his own hands.
 
Mizushima Muchi ✝ | Mother | 38, most of her mother's past is unknown to her. Sachi had constantly badgered her father before his untimely demise, but he would never budge.
Unbeknownst to Sachi, Muchi was a beautiful young house wife up until she contracted a chakra virus, dying when Sachi was only two years old. 
 
|   Ｄｒｅａｍｓ ａｎｄ ｆｅａｒｓ:   |
 Sachi dreams to be rid of the horrible trauma that she's faced, watching her own father be killed in front of her, his stolen sharingan being ripped out in such a gory and horrible fashion. Sachi has a fear of the Uchiha, and whenever she sees another wielder of the Sharingan or their symbol, she freezes up momentarily.

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“Don't look at me like that."

|   Ｆｉｇｈｔｉｎｇ ｓｔｙｌｅ:   |
Sachi fights at a mid-range, not being too confident in her skills long-range and short-range. If she's too up close, she'll get pummeled, but if she's too far away, she's not accurate or precise enough with her jutsus to hit them.

|   Ｋｅｋｋｅｉ ｇｅｎｋａｉ － ｂｌｏｏｄｌｉｎｅ ｌｉｍｉｔ:   |
Ｋｅｋｋｅｉ ｇｅｎｋａｉ ｎａｍｅ
Sharingan

Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ
Due to the fact that she only has one Sharingan, it's not as effective as it could be. She can not use any of the Genjutsu, the eye she has seems to be naturally pre-disposed to work as the eye of insight, granting her the ability to see chakra, have an incredibly high perception, and the ability to copy almost any jutsu, to an extent, she sees. Sachi only has one tomoe.

Ｓｔｒｅｎｇｔｈｓ
It grants Sachi high perception, and the copy aspect of the eye works perfectly.

Ｗｅａｋｎｅｓｓｅｓ
While Sachi has a high perception, if you're in a blind spot and you hit her hard enough to knock her face down, you'd be able to get a few solid hits in before she could recover.

|   Ｎｉｎｊａ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ:   |

Ａ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ
N/A

Ｂ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ
Suiton: Suishōha (downscaled to half the size)

Ｃ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ
Mizu Kamikiri
Mizu no Muchi

Ｄ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ
Fūton: Toppa
Suiton: Mizu Shuriken (up to two)

|   Ｃｕｓｔｏｍ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ:   |

Ｊｕｔｓｕ ｎａｍｅ
Mizu Kamikiri

Ｒａｎｋ
C

Ｒａｎｇｅ
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Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ
A jutsu created by the Mizushima, Sachi slams her foot into the ground, much like the Tsūtenkyaku,  causing water to rise up and travel towards her target as a slicing jet.

Ｊｕｔｓｕ ｎａｍｅ
Mizu no Muchi

Ｒａｎｋ
C

Ｒａｎｇｅ
Far-Mid

Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ
A jutsu created by the Mizushima, Mizu no Muchi is a ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a whip. The whip will function in the normal fashion.

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Caught my interest, seeing how I am a big Naruto fan.  The AU's village has me more interested, maybe more so then the winter years one you had going a few months ago Buddha.  I'll try and put something together as soon as I can.

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@BladeSS4 The winter war wasn't my idea, I just went with it with a lack of better plot. You can blame Hillan for the stupid winter stuff.

This time, I actually came up with it (well, Asura did, and I made it better) so I definitely like this more.

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Here yeah go, my character.  Still not very good at making a good backstory for a character so it might be a bit of a cliché. I hope it works though.

Tensai Hozuki

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Personalia

Information collected by the census office of Konohagakure

| Ｂｉｒｔｈｎａｍｅ: | Hozuki Tensai 

| Ｎｉｃｋｎａｍｅｓ: | None until someone gives him one
| Ａｌｉａｓ: N/A

| Ｓｅｘ: | male

| Ａｇｅ: | 13

| Ｂｉｒｔｈｐｌａｃｅ: 

| Ｂｌｏｏｄｌｉｎｅ: |  Hozuki and Uchiha 

| Ｒａｎｋ: | Genin

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Psychology & History

From detailed inspection and investigation by ANBU and medical personnel

| Ｐｅｒｓｏｎａｌ ｂｉｏｇｒａｐｈｙ: | 

Tensai was born and raised the rain village by his mother and his mother alone.  His mother was thrown out of her clan, so it was just his mother to raise him.  Growing up, a few of the adults gave Tensai some distrustful looks a few of the older adults know of his bloodline.  He was seen as a hidden weapon or a jewel that could be used for the rain village.
The ANBU kept a close eye on him as he grew up, with the blood of an Uchiha running through his veins and the blood of the Hozuki clan.    While he wasn't really special he could be when he grew up.  With the power of an Uchiha it is thought if Tensai did inherit the bloodline trait 
5 years old
At five years old Tensai joined the shinobi academy and began his studies, he learned slowly. His mother was barely around doing various jobs around the village as a servant for the AmeKage. Tensai was basically given to the service of the Amekage.  With this Tensai saw the fourth Amekage as a father figure.
During his time in the academy he spent all his time either studing or traing.  Tensai wanted to impress the fourth Amekage at least once but not once did he ever.  Tensai also felt the cruelty of the fourth Amekage and seen it almost first hand. 
Once when he was eight years old he was playing too close to the Amekage talking to  his black ops squadron. He never heard anything but he had a curse put upon him to prevent him from speaking of what ever was said.  He was branded with a curse that was burnt into his back.  The pain was a reminder that he shouldn't ease drop on the Amekage.  
11 years old
During near the end of Tensai's year's learning to become a Genin, he remembers one day above all others. The day Iie Hizen had died.  He did mourn his death as he was the only person he knew like a father died, even if he had caused him pain.   Tensai on this very day made a goal to become the Amekage one day.   Two years later Tensai became a Genin.  
Personality wise, Tensai is a very friendly person.  He is rather eager to impress nearly anyone.  He is a bit of a show off, likes to go big or make that extra effort to do something when he doesn't need to. 

| Ｆａｍｉｌｙ ｂｉｏｇｒａｐｈｙ: | His family mostly consists of his mother within the Rain Village.   His mother is Ari Hozuki she is a disowned member of the Hozuki clan.  She was disowned from her family for having a child by someone who is not of the Hozuki clan, while also having a child without being married.  His father was that of the Uchiha clan. Masaru Uchiha was his name, a member of the leaf village.  His mother was originally of the hidden mist's ANBU black ops, and his father was the same within the leaf.
It was during a mission where both met, both on recon missions to scope out the others village. Instead both were attacked by shinboi of the stone.  Trying to create conflict between the two villages.  Both Masaru and Ari got separated from their own squads when they met each other.   They both fought several stone shinobi.  Ari got injured and she was nearly killed but was saved by Masaru.  They slew fifty stone ninjas before finding a shack to hold up for three days and nights.  

During those days and nights one thing lead to another and both left their separate ways afterwards. It was meant to be a one time thing and never see each other again kind of thing.  They never did see each other again, but it did lead to Ari ending up pregnant with his child and being ejected from her clan, even ejected out of her village as she was thought she couldn't be trusted anymore.  All of her jutsu were sealed away from her and she was cursed to never give any secrets away from the village.

Ari while pregnant found her way to the Rain village, the fourth Amekage nearly had her killed as she was thought to be a spy from the Mist.  She begged him if she would not be let in but to let her child be born in the village.  Upon further questioning she did reveal to  the Amekage and his Jounin advisors, who the father of the child was.  Presenting an opportunity to strengthen the village with this hybrid child was enough to let Ari into the village.  She was placed in Black Ops custody until Tensai was born. Ari then was to become a servant to serve the Rain village.  Her child then belonged to the village from that day forward.

| Ｆａｍｉｌｙ ｔｉｅｓ: |
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Hozuki Ari|  Birth Mother | 40| Rain Village|Maid| 

 Uchiha Masaru | Birth Father| 45, Leaf village, N/A and Has never had contact or has knowledge of his son ever being born or exists

| Ｄｒｅａｍｓ ａｎｄ ｆｅａｒｓ: |
Tensai Dreams of becoming a Amekage that was better then the fourth, to see the village grow and stop being a village torn by war.

Fears, Tensai fears a few things, he fears the village will get so consumed by war one day that it will just fall apart.  He also fears snakes.

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Combat Reports

From detailed reports from previous missions and academy sparring matches

| Ｆｉｇｈｔｉｎｇ ｓｔｙｌｅ: | Close to mid.

| Ｋｅｋｋｅｉ ｇｅｎｋａｉ － ｂｌｏｏｄｌｉｎｅ ｌｉｍｉｔ: |
Ｋｅｋｋｅｉ ｇｅｎｋａｉ ｎａｍｅ Sharingan currently not precent on Tensai

Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ A visual ocular jutsu, that of the uchiha clan. The power in the eyes, eyes that can see through genjutsu, able to see and predict and mimic and ninja's abilities that aren't bloodline traits. The sharingan has a multiple forms and multiple other abilities depending how far it is awaken. The normal and more common Sharingan is easy to spot out they are red eyes with three dots around the pupil with a circle that connects the three other dots.  

Ｓｔｒｅｎｇｔｈｓ
Able to see through moderate genjutsu-(depending on the development of the sharingan.
Able to predict a ninja's jutsu and technique that aren't bloodline trait analyzes at great speeds.
Able to see chakra and chakra natures

Ｗｅａｋｎｅｓｓｅｓ
High Charka consumption 
Quite a few blind spots outside the field of vision. 
Further Awakened Abilities of the Sharingan does damage to the eyes.

| Ｎｉｎｊａ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ: |
Jutsu names can be found here.

Ａ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ
N/A
Ｂ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ
Water Style: Water Dragon Jutsu
Ｃ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ
Cloud Style: Back Slice
Cloud Style: Front Slice
Ｄ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ
N/A
Ｅ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ
Acadmey Skills

| Ｗｅａｐｏｎｓ: |
Ｗｅａｐｏｎ ｎａｍｅ Chakra Sword

Ｗｅａｐｏｎ， ｔｏｏｌ， ｏｒ ｏｂｊｅｃｔ ｔｙｐｅ Sword

Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ A sword that absorbed the weilders chakra and element nature(s) of the user.

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As always, review in red. Keep in mind that not all my comments are dead serious and have a laugh. See it as constructive criticism.

Tensai Hozuki

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Dude looks a bit older than 13


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| Ｂｉｒｔｈｎａｍｅ: | Hozuki Tensai 

You know how there's this specific text in italics under the name in my CS skeleton? You could've just filled it in there, so that it'd be underneath the header.

| Ｎｉｃｋｎａｍｅｓ: | None until someone gives him one
Fair
| Ａｌｉａｓ: N/A

| Ｓｅｘ: | male

| Ａｇｅ: | 13

| Ｂｉｒｔｈｐｌａｃｅ: 

| Ｂｌｏｏｄｌｉｎｅ: |  Hozuki and Uchiha 

| Ｒａｎｋ: | Genin

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Psychology & History

From detailed inspection and investigation by ANBU and medical personnel

| Ｐｅｒｓｏｎａｌ ｂｉｏｇｒａｐｈｙ: | Tensai was born and raised the rain village by his mother and his mother alone.  His mother was thrown out of her clan, so it was just his mother to raise him.  Growing up, a few of the adults gave Tesnai I suggest you take more time to write your posts so that you can focus on getting spelling right, etcetera some distrustful looks a few of the older adults know of his bloodline. Why did they care about his bloodline? Were the Uchiha or Hozuki seen as evil? He was seen as a hidden weapon or a jewel that could be used for the rain village.
The ANBU kept a close eye on him as he grew up, with the blood of an Uchiha running through his veins and the blood of the Hozuki clan.  Why? What made him special?
5 years old
At five years old Tensai joined the shinobi academy and began his studies, he learned slowly. His mother was barely around doing various jobs around the village as a servant for the AmeKage Amekage, not AmeKage. Tensai was basically given to the service of the Amekage. You spelled it right here, lol.  With this Tensai saw the fourth Amekage as a father figure. I presume you mean Iie Hizen, not the actual fourth. I never put a number on them because there have been a lot of Amekages. The actual 'fourth amekage' would have existed like.. 70 years ago? There's been a lot of coups, if you read the history.
During his time in the academy he spent all his time either studing or traing. Studying or training. Spelling  Tensai wanted to impress the fourth Amekage at least once but not once did he ever.  Tensai also felt the cruelty of the fourth Amekage and seen it almost first hand. 
Once when he was eight years old he was playing too close to the Amekage talking to  his black ops squadron. He never heard anything but he had a curse put upon him to prevent him from speaking of what ever was said.  He was branded with a curse that was burnt into his back.  The pain was a reminder that he shouldn't ease drop on the Amekage.  Eavesdrop - spelling. Take more time to write so that you can prevent mistakes. 
11 years old
During near the end of Tensai's year's learning to become a Genin, he remembers one day above all others. The day Iie Hizen had died.  He did moron Mourn., the only person he knew like a father died, even if he had caused him pain.   Tensai on this very day made a goal to become the Amekage one day.   Two years later Tensai became a Genin.  
Personality wise, Tensai is a very friendly person.  He is rather eager to impress nearly anyone.  He is a bit of a show off, likes to go big or make that extra effort to do something when he doesn't need to. I like that

| Ｆａｍｉｌｙ ｂｉｏｇｒａｐｈｙ: | His family mostly consists of his mother within the Rain Village.   His mother is Ari Hozuki she is a disowned member of the Hozuki clan. How did she get to Amegakure and why? She was disowned from her family for having a child by someone who is not of the Hozuki clan, while also having a child without being married.  His father was that of the Uchiha clan. Masaru Uchiha was his name, a member of the leaf village.  His mother was originally of the hidden mist's ANBU black ops, and his father was the same within the leaf.
It was during a mission where both met, both on recon missions to scope out the others village. Instead both were attacked by shinboi of the stone.  Trying to create conflict between the two villages.  Both Masaru and Ari got separated from their own squads when they met each other.   They both fought several stone shinobi.  Ari got injured and she was nearly killed but was saved by Masaru.  They slew fifty stone ninjas before finding a shack to hold up for three days and nights.  

During those days and nights one thing lead to another and both left their separate ways afterwards. It was meant to be a one time thing and never see each other again kind of thing.  They never did see each other again, but it did lead to Ari ending up pregnant with his child and being ejected from her clan, even ejected out of her village as she was thought she couldn't be trusted anymore.  All of her jutsu were sealed away from her and she was cursed to never give any secrets away from the village.

Ari while pregnant found her way to the Rain village, the fourth Amekage nearly had her killed as she was thought to be a spy from the Mist.  She begged him if she would not be let in but to let her child be born in the village.  Upon further questioning she did reveal to  the Amekage and his Jounin advisors, who the father of the child was.  Presenting an opportunity to strengthen the village with this hybrid child was enough to let Ari into the village.  She was placed in Black Ops custody until Tensai was born. Ari then was to become a servant to serve the Rain village.  Her child then belonged to the village from that day forward. Why keep her around? She was cursed and her jutsu were sealed - she was useless. Instead of keeping her around, he could've been given to the orphanage and it'd have the same effect. Is there a reason for that?

| Ｆａｍｉｌｙ ｔｉｅｓ: |
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Hozuki Ari|  Birth Mother | 40| Rain Village|Maid| 

 Uchiha Masaru | Birth Father| 45, Leaf village, N/A and Has never had contact or has knowledge of his son ever being born or exists

| Ｄｒｅａｍｓ ａｎｄ ｆｅａｒｓ: |
Tensai Dreams of becoming a Amekage that was better then the fourth, to see the village grow and stop being a village torn by war.

Fears, Tensai fears a few things, he fears the village will get so consumed by war one day that it will just fall apart.  He also fears snakes.

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| Ｆｉｇｈｔｉｎｇ ｓｔｙｌｅ: | Close to mid. Not very detailed. Anything more you could add?

| Ｋｅｋｋｅｉ ｇｅｎｋａｉ － ｂｌｏｏｄｌｉｎｅ ｌｉｍｉｔ: |
Ｋｅｋｋｅｉ ｇｅｎｋａｉ ｎａｍｅ Sharingan currently not precent Present on in Tensai

Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ A visual ocular jutsu, that of the uchiha clan. The power in the eyes, eyes that can see through genjutsu, able to see and predict and mimic and ninja's abilities that aren't bloodline traits. The sharingan has a multiple forms and multiple other abilities depending how far it is awaken. The normal and more common Sharingan is easy to spot out they are red eyes with three dots around the pupil with a circle that connects the three other dots.  You could've just linked me the Narutopedia page and it'd have been fine 

Ｓｔｒｅｎｇｔｈｓ
Able to see through moderate genjutsu-(depending on the development of the sharingan.
Able to predict a ninja's jutsu and technique that aren't bloodline trait analyzes at great speeds.
Able to see chakra and chakra natures

Ｗｅａｋｎｅｓｓｅｓ
High Charka consumption 
Quite a few blind spots outside the field of vision. 
Further Awakened Abilities of the Sharingan does damage to the eyes.

| Ｎｉｎｊａ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ: |
Jutsu names can be found here.

Ａ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ
N/A
Ｂ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ
Water Style: Water Dragon Jutsu
Ｃ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ
Cloud Style: Back Slice
Cloud Style: Front Slice
Ｄ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ
N/A
Ｅ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ
Acadmey Skills

Jutsu's are all fine

| Ｗｅａｐｏｎｓ: |
Ｗｅａｐｏｎ ｎａｍｅ Chakra Sword

Ｗｅａｐｏｎ， ｔｏｏｌ， ｏｒ ｏｂｊｅｃｔ ｔｙｐｅ Sword What type of sword?

Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ A sword that absorbed the weilders chakra and element nature(s) of the user. So all it does is absorb chakra and nature? What can he do with it when it absorbed chakra and the nature?

I think there's still a few things you can fix in this CS.@BladeSS4

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Personalia

Information collected by the census office of Amegakure

“Violence is in our blood. Amegakure's creation was through war. It is inevitable we return to our roots.”


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Uragiri Sakana

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Blackeye

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Male

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16

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Amegakure

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Uragiri

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Jonin

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Sakana is relatively well known throughout Amegakure, mostly because he became a jonin at the young age of 16. Although not impossible, it is relatively uncommon. It was to be expected however, as Sakana is a very skilled shinobi, on par with a genius. However, this does have a turnside - he is also known to have some ideas that are directly in line with Iie Hizen's thoughts and ideas, and he takes them perhaps a bit too literally.


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Psychology & History

From detailed inspection and investigation by Black Ops and medical personnel

“Any time you get hurt and survive - that's a lesson. A child only sticks his finger into the flame once.”


|   Ｐｅｒｓｏｎａｌ ｂｉｏｇｒａｐｈｙ:   |
Sakana was born in Amegakure 16 years ago, under the reign of Iie Hizen. Being raised in such an environment was not an easy feat (but one that all his peers eventually had to get through). However, Sakana seemed to thrive in an environment where any sign of revolution was punished harshly. He graduated to the genin rank at 12, which was a relatively standard age for a boy to become a genin. His time in school had been relatively uneventful - he performed above average, but far from perfect. Most of that had to do with his attitude, being prone to being disinterested in whatever the teacher had to teach.

Throughout his academy time, he was relatively indifferent about Amegakure, but after graduating his loyalty began growing to a point where he would support the Amekage even if he committed mass murder. Seeing potential in Sakana, his sensei allowed him to take part in internal chunin exams, which were harsh but fair, and at age 14 he was already made a chunin, a step ahead of his peers. It was at that point that his name began spreading around too, as he became known as 'that kid with the black eyes who is already a chunin.' Of course, that was only a temporary title before people actually learned his name. 

He participated in some small scale skirmishes with Sunagakure mostly, trifling over borders and trade. Most of them were just small team based missions where they ran into Sunagakure shinobi that claimed they were intruding on their business, but they were usually easily routed. There were very few cases where people actually died. 

To further add to the surprise however, he became a jonin at age 16, only making his genius more apparent. Although he didn't stand out as a legendary shinobi or anything of the like, he was simply very good at what he did making himself quite the promising individual early on. It seemed that with every promotion his loyalty to the cause of Amegakure became bigger, almost to the point where people openly questioned whether he had been brainwashed or was under some permanent genjutsu or something.

He has been a jonin for, give or take, 3 months now. He was primarily doing missions during this but recently was put on hold by the Amekage and alerted that he will be leading a team shortly, teaching three genin in the art of warfare and performing duties with them as they enter a period of turmoil with the ongoing war.

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Uragiri clan symbol

The Uragiri clan is relatively unknown, even in Amegakure. They provide mostly standard civilians in Amegakure who work in the industrial plants creating metal and tools. They all stand out, however, due to the black and yellow eyes that run in their family - any Uragiri clan member is recognizable by their eyes. This trait, while genetic, can be recessive and there are very few Uragiri clan members who do not have these eyes - but they do exist. In such a case the clan members can be identified by their clan icon, which is a set of black and white koi circling each other. The image is fitting, given that their eyes give them a somewhat fishy appearance.

The clan is primarily (90%) just pure civilians that mostly work in shops or the industry. The remaining 10% are shinobi, like Sakana. And, while they are good at what they do, they are typically not very well renowned - not because nobody likes them or so, but just because they are pretty average all together. For that, Sakana is pretty much the one exception. In doing so, he has also become the clans' pride, more or less.

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Uragiri Same | Mother | 41, shinobi as part of the regyura. She is currently leading her own team of genin as well. 
Uragiri Sāmon | Father | 45, teacher at the shinobi academy in Amegakure. Most kids like him because he 'looks cool.' He's not a bad teacher, just a little boring. 

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What is there to dream of for a person whose only loyalty is to the village? What is there to fear but death itself? 

Sakana has no higher aspirations - his goals were met the day he became jonin, and his further goals are to do whatever it takes to aid Amegakure in becoming better. 

His fears are, perhaps deep down, also linked to that. Seeing Amegakure lose a war or become annexed are truly fears but are they intrinsically his? Every person in Amegakure should share those fears. No, he has no fears of his own - only those of his village.


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Combat Reports

From detailed reports from previous missions and academy sparring matches

“All your training is useless if you don't know how to apply it - once you take a life, you'll understand.”


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Sakana is a ninjutsu genius, mastering 3 elements not only at barely his first year as a jonin, but as a 16 year old no less. For this reason he utilizes his ninjutsu a lot. He prefers to stay in close to medium range, taking a bit of a front role at times but maintaining enough distance to use ninjutsu. Never the less, he is also quite skilled at close combat, though this isn't his forté so to speak.


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Ｓ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ
Ura Shishō Fūin

Ａ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ
 Katon: Gōka Messhitsu
 Katon: Gōka Mekkyaku
Kuchiyose no Jutsu [See details in lower section]

Ｂ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ
 Katon: Gōka Mekkyaku
 Doton: Doryū Jōheki
 Suiton: Sensatsu Suishō
Hien

Ｃ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ
 Katon: Gōkakyū no Jutsu
 Sūpu-jutsu: Sutōbu ​​o tentō
 Suiton: Ja no Kuchi
 Suiton: Amegakure no Jutsu
 Sūpu-jutsu: Sūpu mizu
 Sūpu-jutsu: Bōru

Ｄ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ
 Doton: Earth Shelter
 Katon: Karyūdan


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Ｊｕｔｓｕ ｎａｍｅ
 Sūpu-jutsu: Bōru

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C

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Up to 20 meters.

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This Doton technique forms the basis of a three-nature combination. The Bowl jutsu causes the target to be encased in a dome of earth around them, which then lifts up off of the earth on four earthen pillars. The jutsu is simple. There really isn't much to it - it doesn't kill, damage, or harm you, it just traps you inside the dome. That's bad, right?

Well you can break free. Use S, A, B, or C-rank lightning based jutsu's to break through, or use sheer force if you're really that strong. Just do it in time before the next part of the combo.


Ｊｕｔｓｕ ｎａｍｅ
 Sūpu-jutsu: Sūpu mizu

Ｒａｎｋ
C

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Up to 20 meters.

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This Suiton based jutsu is the next step. Thought being trapped in a dome of earth was bad enough? WRONG! Through a hole in the top of the dome that briefly opens at the command of the user, the user then spews water into the 'soup bowl' until it's full of water. Congratulations, you'll now be drowning!

Since this is a suiton jutsu, you could possibly use wind to create a bubble of air for yourself to breathe, though it's not drowning you need to worry about. At this stage of the combo it becomes more or less impossible to use electricity to free yourself from the dome as you'd electrocute yourself. Unless you're willing to risk that. Sheer force would still be enough to break free, but since water slows down movement, it'd likely have to come from the outside. 

Or another solution. Maybe you can think of something. Better hurry before the next step, which is..


Ｊｕｔｓｕ ｎａｍｅ
 Sūpu-jutsu: Sutōbu ​​o tentō

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C

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Up to 20 meters.

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The final step in the three jutsu combo. True to it's name, this is the step that probably is the most dangerous for whomever gets trapped. Using the Katon nature, the user lights a fire underneath the earthen soup bowl/dome that they created, beginning to boil it at an alarming and dangerous rate for whomever is inside. Drown in the soup made of your own body! Muahaha! Ahem. There is no real defence for this step, if you are trapped.

For outsiders it's possible to blow out the fire using wind jutsu, to quench it with a water jutsu, or to simply free those in the bowl with force. Electricity is possible but ill-advised since you'd probably electrocute your friends inside the bowl.


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Ｗｅａｐｏｎ ｎａｍｅ
Knives x2

Ｗｅａｐｏｎ， ｔｏｏｌ， ｏｒ ｏｂｊｅｃｔ ｔｙｐｅ
Straight edge knife, corded handle

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These are two blades made of steel that can be infused (through the Hien/Flying Swallow technique) to sharpen their properties and make them more deadly. Besides that, they have no real 'special' properties.


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Shima

Ｓｐｅｃｉｅｓ ａｎｄ ｓｉｚｅ
Shima is a newt of about 1.5 meters high, and five meters long. However, most of that is his tail. He is a bright orange with black drawings all over his body in various shapes, most notably a marking on the front of his head that reads 'Shima' in kanji. This marking seems to be entirely natural and it seems to be the case that he was named after this shape.

Ｐｏｗｅｒｓ ａｎｄ ｃａｐａｂｉｌｉｔｉｅｓ 
Shima has the 'power' to produce a large flame from his throat by using his chakra, producing either a steady high pressure stream of fire or a large fireball. Furthermore, his aquatic nature as a newt means he's extremely capable in the water and can swim extremely fast - while he is much, much slower on land. ]

Lastly he can fit up to three people in his mouth if they sit down.

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Since I've been craving for a Naruto RP since a while ago and you're searching for players, I could as well submit a character that I've been wanting to use since a while ago.

Souma Uzuki

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Personalia

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“Geez. Such a bother”


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Uzuki Souma

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Nanashi (No Name); Sword-Style Thief; Battle Addict; Lazy Monster

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Crescent Moon Devil

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Male

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24

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Konohagakure no Sato (Hidden Leaf Village)

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Unknown Bloodline

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Jounin

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 If asked to describe him, most of his acquaintances would resume his very being as "A lazy bastard with a monstrous talent for cutting anything that stands in his way", and that would be quite the accurate description for him. He is mostly recognized as an individual that shouldn't be messed up with yet can't be taken seriously, being overall seen as someone befitting of being called as a Wildcard.
Most of Souma's infame came from either the assassination of one of the seven mist swordsmen before he was even recognized as a jounin or from the fearsome reputation he created for himself while traveling as a missing-nin - a direct result of him stopping to defy every single person that "carried a sword and looked strong" he found in his travels as a way of sharpening his skills with the sword.


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Psychology & History

From detailed inspection and investigation by Black Ops and medical personnel

“Do you really need to bother me right now? I was planning to sleep.”


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The start of the story of the young adult known as Souma is far from being uncommon or special, being shared by many others through the years since the start of the ninja era: He was an orphan. While this statement may seem a bit simple, it does resumes his youth perfectly in despite of being a simple word. He was nothing but an orphan like any other, abandoned at birth by parents that probably felt that leaving him behind would be safer - or maybe never cared for him, he couldn't know (Or care) - Souma was raised on Konoha's orphanage for most of his infancy, being regarded as an overall quiet child who hardly interacted with others or have any problem by most of his former caretakers - quite the accurate description, considering that he wasn't especially remarkable back then - but that would quickly change after his entrance in the academy.

If asked now, he'd hardly know what exactly made him such an abnormal individual, but one thing was certain: it started in the academy. He doesn't know, even today, what exactly awakened his instincts in that place, but he know for certain that it happened in an instant: The quiet kid that he was back then instantly changed into one of the most promising future ninjas and undoubtedly the most troublesome one, being regarded as mischievous, lazy, fun loving individual and, above all, ridiculously talented individual.

Thinking deeply, the root of this sudden change was most certainly the person that started his training - and initiated him into the ways of a scoundrel - His foster father, Hayato Uzuki. If asked to describe him, Souma would most certainly choose the words "Carefree and Sharp", two seemingly unrelated adjectives that undoubtedly suited the man to an abnormal extent: Hayato was as much of a genius as Souma himself, being regarded as the strongest sword user in the whole village before he even reached his thirties - a man that loved the sword as much as he loved fun and imparted the same values in the youth that he loved as a son.

With all of that being said, it's hard to understand how Souma, that earned such a good life, managed to turn into an fool that rushed to join a war torn country before he even managed to get his first girlfriend - an understandable doubt that will be erased by the events that followed the quiet period of the boy's life.

It all started to crumble when he received the worst notice of his life at the age of 15 - six months before his chunnin exam: His father, Hayato Uzuki, had died by the hands of a member of Kirigakure's Seven Swordsmen, assassinated without a chance to react due to a stupid grudge held by the young swordsman. The worst part? He wasn't caught. Due to the alliance made between Konohagakure and Kirigakure, the wielder of the sewing needle was forgiven with just minor punishments for the sake of "not damaging the allied military forced even more". No need to say that, to the boy that only had Hayato as family from the very start, this was the highest treason possible.

For the next month, the carefree smile that was often seen in the boy's face completely vanished, giving place to a gloomy expression and even gloomier attitude. This quickly changed in the following two months tough, as the boy gradually returned to his former self with some small changes: His eyes had a sharp gleam now, and his carefree smile gave a predatorial feel that only intensified with the passage of the months. By the time of his chunnin exam - that happened in conjunction with the hidden mist village as a way of sealing the treaty - the boy had already changed into a different yet similar person: The sheath that once covered his true self - his "blade" - was now a thing in the past.

The first stages were so ridiculously easy for the boy that they almost felt like a joke. It was more than clear for him that, had they been in war times, he could already be a jounin with his level of proficiency, but at the moment it didn't matter. His only priority was getting the right spot in the finals - something that was easily done through having contact with one of the responsibles for the event. His target?  It was obviously the mist swordsman's kid, a fairly talented boy around his age that the killer of his father regarded as being even more important than his own life. 

It isn't hard to predict what happened next: Souma toyed with the boy to an unbelievable extent without even revealing his Kekkei Genkai, trapping the spawn of his enemy in a way reminiscent of a cat playing with the rat held under his paws until the father of the poor mice couldn't hold back his anger anymore, stepping into the arena to stop the fight. The result? He finally used his Kekkei Genkai - something that he discovered months ago but never had the opportunity to show to anyone, as he was waiting for his foster father to return home before making the reveal - taking the unsuspecting swordsman by surprise and, consequently, managing to behead the man in front of his son before he could react to his attack with a smile in his face - for the first time in the last six months, he truly felt alive.

Of course the story couldn't end like this, and he was captured by the Shinobi of his village and escorted to face judgement for his sins - a laughable display of fake righteousness orchestrated by the same guys that forgave the man who killed his father. That being said, this specific judgement never happened: the boy managed to escape by making use of a thin blade hidden under his skin, killing the guards in the process and being put into the bingo book as an A Rank criminal.

For the following 5 years, Souma lived as a wanderer - using his status as a wanted criminal by the authorities of the two hidden villages to easily enter into the territories of their enemies as he traveled the world, using his time solely to collect new techniques of handling the sword while having fun in the process until 2 years ago, when a woman who called himself as the shadow of the rain (Amekage) stopped him, praising his skills and requesting him to join her - request to which he replied with an answer befitting of his personality: "Sure, if you manage to beat me I can do that." And an extra comment that would bring pride to his foster father: "But if I win, you're going to be my wife".

The result? He's still single and is now one of Amegakure's jounin.

|   Ｆａｍｉｌｙ ｂｉｏｇｒａｐｈｙ:   |
Being an abandoned orphan, Souma never had - and never had any special desire to - the opportunity of meeting his parents. His foster father, however, was a member of the Uzuki family, a family known for their attainments in the use of the Konoha-Ryu, and naturally had some blood ties that still live in Konoha - Albeit none that Souma cared about enough to meet after leaving the village.

|   Ｆａｍｉｌｙ ｔｉｅｓ:   |
Hayato Uzuki | Foster Parent | 32 by the time of his death, Konohagakure, Former Shinobi and the man responsible for Souma's love for the way of the sword.

|   Ｄｒｅａｍｓ ａｎｄ ｆｅａｒｓ:   |
Souma isn't the kind of guy to think deeply about the future, having the sole objective of enjoying his life while continuously enhancing his sword style. His biggest fear is being sealed or imprisoned mainly due to the implication having to stay alive without any opportunity of having fun.


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Combat Reports

From detailed reports from previous missions and academy sparring matches

“My speciality is cutting people until they stop moving. I can also cut animals and things though”


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Souma's fighting style is fairly direct, being mainly reliant on directly fighting the enemy at close range through the mixed use of his sword arts and Kekkei Genkai, overpowering anyone in his way through the use of a mix of his excessive speed and his masterful handling of swords. 
At long range, he mainly relies on the few long distance techniques he knows and shurikenjutsu to distract the attention of his foes and force them out of their hiding spots, giving him the opportunity of getting close to them and finishing the fight through the use of his sword.

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Ｋｅｋｋｅｉ ｇｅｎｋａｉ ｎａｍｅ
Jinton - Speed

Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ
Swift Release is a combined nature transformation kekkei genkai that can be used to move with instantaneous speed, granting the user an advantage over opponents with more strength than speed, such as users of Chakra Enhanced Strength. This nature therefore renders the user invulnerable against most taijutsu. It is unknown what elements this nature entails.
This Kekkei Genkai mostly acts as a supplementary skill for Souma's use of Kenjutsu - field that he appears to favour to an abnormal extent.

Ｓｔｒｅｎｇｔｈｓ
Souma mostly uses this Kekkei Genkai in conjunction to his sword techniques, giving him the opportunity of easily overpowering his enemies ay a close distance due to the absurd speed provided by it.

Ｗｅａｋｎｅｓｓｅｓ
Being only capable of short bursts of speed and failing to provide any form of long distance capacity, this Kekkei Genkai can be easily overpowered through the use of attrition tactics and long-range combat.


|   Ｎｉｎｊａ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ:   |

Ａ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ
Blade of Wind

Ｂ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ
Flying Swallow

Ｃ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ
N/A

Ｄ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ
N/A

Ｅ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ
Academy Techniques

?ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ
Cloud Style: Crescent Moon Beheading
Cloud Style: Deception Beheading
Dancing Blade Risk
Hazy Moon Night
Iai Beheading
Iaido
Killing Intent
Swift Release: Shadowless Flight

|   Ｃｕｓｔｏｍ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ:   |

Ｊｕｔｓｕ ｎａｍｅ
Souma's Original: Cloudy Sky, Hidden Moon

Ｒａｎｋ
B

Ｒａｎｇｅ
Close Range

Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ
A technique made from the observation of the Dance of the Crescent Moon technique - unreplicable by Souma due to him being unable to use the shadow clone technique - this technique relies on the most basic clone technique to create a sole clone overlapping with the user and then using the swift style to instantly move behind the enemy and behead they while they're distracted with the illusory clone.

Ｊｕｔｓｕ ｎａｍｅ

Souma's Original: Endless Moon

Ｒａｎｋ

S

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Close-Medium Range

Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ

A technique developed from mixing his swift style with the Iaido he learned through living with the Samurai, this monstrous skill uses the swift release to enhance the speed of the user's arms to an unbelievable extent for the span of three seconds, time that he uses to unleash up to 24 slashes coated with wind-based chakra, delivering an absurd damage not only to those directly in the range of the blade - that appears to be able to cut armour with an ease that can only be described as inhuman - but also to anyone directly behind them, as each cut produces a wind blade comparable to the wind release's Wind Cutter Technique.
The main disadvantage of this technique is that it puts strain in the user's arms, being unfit for being used without restraint.


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Ｗｅａｐｏｎ ｎａｍｅ
Violent Moon

Ｗｅａｐｏｎ， ｔｏｏｌ， ｏｒ ｏｂｊｅｃｔ ｔｙｐｅ
Sword/Katana

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A simple looking Katana with an equally simple pitch black sheath, the only special characteristic of this weapon is it abnormal sharpness: A result of Souma's excessive use of chakra augmentation, that ended up permanently infusing the sharpness characteristic of his wind release into the blade.

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Alright I tried to fix most of what you had issues with.  Let me know if this works now.

Tensai Hozuki

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Personalia

Information collected by the census office of Konohagakure

| Ｂｉｒｔｈｎａｍｅ: | Hozuki Tensai 

| Ｎｉｃｋｎａｍｅｓ: | None until someone gives him one
| Ａｌｉａｓ: N/A

| Ｓｅｘ: | male

| Ａｇｅ: | 13

| Ｂｉｒｔｈｐｌａｃｅ: 
Rain Village

| Ｂｌｏｏｄｌｉｎｅ: | 
 Hozuki and Uchiha 

| Ｒａｎｋ: | 
Genin

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Psychology & History

From detailed inspection and investigation by ANBU and medical personnel

| Ｐｅｒｓｏｎａｌ ｂｉｏｇｒａｐｈｙ: | 

Tensai was born and raised the rain village by his mother and his mother alone.  His mother was thrown out of her clan, so it was just his mother to raise him.  Growing up, a few of the adults gave Tensai some distrustful looks a few of the older adults know of his bloodline.  He was seen as a hidden weapon or a jewel that could be used for the rain village.
The ANBU kept a close eye on him as he grew up, with the blood of an Uchiha running through his veins and the blood of the Hozuki clan.    While he wasn't really special he could be when he grew up.  With the power of an Uchiha it is thought if Tensai did inherit the bloodline trait, or if he would also inherit the traits that of the Hozuki clan.
5 years old
At five years old Tensai joined the shinobi academy and began his studies, he learned slowly. His mother was barely around doing various jobs around the village as a servant for the Amekage. Tensai was basically given to the service of the Amekage.  With this Tensai saw the Iie Hizen as a father figure.
During his time in the academy he spent all his time either studing or traing.  Tensai wanted to impress Iie Hizen at least once but not once did he ever.  Tensai also felt the cruelty of Iie Hizen and seen it almost first hand. 
Once when he was eight years old he was playing too close to the Amekage talking to  his black ops squadron. He never heard anything but he had a curse put upon him to prevent him from speaking of what ever was said.  He was branded with a curse that was burnt into his back.  The pain was a reminder that he shouldn't ease drop on the Amekage.  
11 years old
During near the end of Tensai's year's learning to become a Genin, he remembers one day above all others. The day Iie Hizen had died.  He did mourn his death as he was the only person he knew like a father died, even if he had caused him pain.   Tensai on this very day made a goal to become the Amekage one day.   Two years later Tensai became a Genin.  
Personality wise, Tensai is a very friendly person.  He is rather eager to impress nearly anyone.  He is a bit of a show off, likes to go big or make that extra effort to do something when he doesn't need to. 

| Ｆａｍｉｌｙ ｂｉｏｇｒａｐｈｙ: | His family mostly consists of his mother within the Rain Village.   His mother is Ari Hozuki she is a disowned member of the Hozuki clan.  She was disowned from her family for having a child by someone who is not of the Hozuki clan, while also having a child without being married.  His father was that of the Uchiha clan. Masaru Uchiha was his name, a member of the leaf village.  His mother was originally of the hidden mist's ANBU black ops, and his father was the same within the leaf.
It was during a mission where both met, both on recon missions to scope out the others village. Instead both were attacked by shinboi of the stone.  Trying to create conflict between the two villages.  Both Masaru and Ari got separated from their own squads when they met each other.   They both fought several stone shinobi.  Ari got injured and she was nearly killed but was saved by Masaru.  They slew fifty stone ninjas before finding a shack to hold up for three days and nights.  

During those days and nights one thing lead to another and both left their separate ways afterwards. It was meant to be a one time thing and never see each other again kind of thing.  They never did see each other again, but it did lead to Ari ending up pregnant with his child and being ejected from her clan, even ejected out of her village as she was thought she couldn't be trusted anymore.  All of her jutsu were sealed away from her and she was cursed to never give any secrets away from the village.

Ari while pregnant found her way to the Rain village, the fourth Amekage nearly had her killed as she was thought to be a spy from the Mist.  She begged him if she would not be let in but to let her child be born in the village.  Upon further questioning she did reveal to  the Amekage and his Jounin advisors, who the father of the child was.  Presenting an opportunity to strengthen the village with this hybrid child was enough to let Ari into the village.  She was placed in Black Ops custody until Tensai was born. Ari then was to become a servant to serve the Rain village.  Her child then belonged to the village from that day forward. While Ari her self was meant to serve the village as a servent to whatever the Amekage says as a personal servent to Iie Hizen as long as he was  Amekage.

| Ｆａｍｉｌｙ ｔｉｅｓ: |
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Hozuki Ari|  Birth Mother | 40| Rain Village|Maid| 

 Uchiha Masaru | Birth Father| 45, Leaf village, N/A and Has never had contact or has knowledge of his son ever being born or exists

| Ｄｒｅａｍｓ ａｎｄ ｆｅａｒｓ: |
Tensai Dreams of becoming a Amekage that was better then the fourth, to see the village grow and stop being a village torn by war.

Fears, Tensai fears a few things, he fears the village will get so consumed by war one day that it will just fall apart.  He also fears snakes.

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| Ｆｉｇｈｔｉｎｇ ｓｔｙｌｅ: | Close to mid. Tensai prefers to fight up close with a sword and using kenjutsu.  He does fight long range with ninjutsu but he prefers fighting with a sword.

| Ｋｅｋｋｅｉ ｇｅｎｋａｉ － ｂｌｏｏｄｌｉｎｅ ｌｉｍｉｔ: |
Ｋｅｋｋｅｉ ｇｅｎｋａｉ ｎａｍｅ Sharingan currently not present in Tensai, he might get it later down the line though.

Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ A visual ocular jutsu, that of the uchiha clan. The power in the eyes, eyes that can see through genjutsu, able to see and predict and mimic and ninja's abilities that aren't bloodline traits. The sharingan has a multiple forms and multiple other abilities depending how far it is awaken. The normal and more common Sharingan is easy to spot out they are red eyes with three dots around the pupil with a circle that connects the three other dots.  

Ｓｔｒｅｎｇｔｈｓ
Able to see through moderate genjutsu-(depending on the development of the sharingan.
Able to predict a ninja's jutsu and technique that aren't bloodline trait analyzes at great speeds.
Able to see chakra and chakra natures

Ｗｅａｋｎｅｓｓｅｓ
High Charka consumption 
Quite a few blind spots outside the field of vision. 
Further Awakened Abilities of the Sharingan does damage to the eyes.

| Ｎｉｎｊａ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ: |
Jutsu names can be found here.

Ａ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ
N/A
Ｂ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ
Water Style: Water Dragon Jutsu
Ｃ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ
Cloud Style: Back Slice
Cloud Style: Front Slice
Ｄ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ
N/A
Ｅ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ
Acadmey Skills

| Ｗｅａｐｏｎｓ: |
Ｗｅａｐｏｎ ｎａｍｅ Chakra Sword

Ｗｅａｐｏｎ， ｔｏｏｌ， ｏｒ ｏｂｊｅｃｔ ｔｙｐｅ Sword 


Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ A sword that absorbed the wielders chakra and element nature(s) of the user. 
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Since I've been craving for a Naruto RP since a while ago and you're searching for players, I could as well submit a character that I've been wanting to use since a while ago.

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Souma Uzuki

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Battle Attire:

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Personalia

Information collected by the census office of Amegakure

“Geez. Such a bother”

|   Ｂｉｒｔｈｎａｍｅ:   |
Uzuki Souma

|   Ｎｉｃｋｎａｍｅｓ:   |
Nanashi (No Name); Sword-Style Thief; Battle Addict; Lazy Monster

|   Ａｌｉａｓ:   |
Crescent Moon Devil That's a mouthful

|   Ｓｅｘ:   |
Male

|   Ａｇｅ:   |
24

|   Ｂｉｒｔｈｐｌａｃｅ:   |
Konohagakure no Sato (Hidden Leaf Village)

|   Ｂｌｏｏｄｌｉｎｅ:   |
Unknown Bloodline

|   Ｒａｎｋ:   |
Jounin

|   Ｒｅｐｕｔａｔｉｏｎ:   |
 If asked to describe him, most of his acquaintances would resume his very being as "A lazy bastard with a monstrous talent for cutting anything that stands in his way", and that would be quite the accurate description for him. He is mostly recognized as an individual that shouldn't be messed up with yet can't be taken seriously, being overall seen as someone befitting of being called as a Wildcard.
Most of Souma's infame came from either the assassination of one of the seven mist swordsmen before he was even recognized as a jounin or from the fearsome reputation he created for himself while traveling as a missing-nin why would Amegakure take in a missing nin, which are known criminals? - a direct result of him stopping to defy every single person that "carried a sword and looked strong" he found in his travels as a way of sharpening his skills with the sword. More importantly why would they take in a dude that thought killing people at random to test his skills was a good idea?

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Psychology & History

From detailed inspection and investigation by Black Ops and medical personnel

“Do you really need to bother me right now? I was planning to sleep.”

|   Ｐｅｒｓｏｎａｌ ｂｉｏｇｒａｐｈｙ:   |
The start of the story of the young adult known as Souma is far from being uncommon or special, being shared by many others through the years since the start of the ninja era: He was an orphan. While this statement may seem a bit simple, it does resumes his youth perfectly in despite of being a simple word. He was nothing but an orphan like any other, abandoned at birth by parents that probably felt that leaving him behind would be safer - or maybe never cared for him, he couldn't know (Or care) - Souma was raised on Konoha's orphanage for most of his infancy, being regarded as an overall quiet child who hardly interacted with others or have any problem by most of his former caretakers - quite the accurate description, considering that he wasn't especially remarkable back then - but that would quickly change after his entrance in the academy. Pretty standard then

If asked now, he'd hardly know what exactly made him such an abnormal individual, but one thing was certain: it started in the academy. He doesn't know, even today, what exactly awakened his instincts in that place, but he know for certain that it happened in an instant: The quiet kid that he was back then instantly changed into one of the most promising future ninjas and undoubtedly the most troublesome one, being regarded as mischievous, lazy, fun loving individual and, above all, ridiculously talented individual. okay

Thinking deeply, the root of this sudden change was most certainly the person that started his training - and initiated him into the ways of a scoundrel - His foster father, Hayato Uzuki. If asked to describe him, Souma would most certainly choose the words "Carefree and Sharp", two seemingly unrelated adjectives that undoubtedly suited the man to an abnormal extent: Hayato was as much of a genius as Souma himself, being regarded as the strongest sword user in the whole village before he even reached his thirties - a man that loved the sword as much as he loved fun and imparted the same values in the youth that he loved as a son.

With all of that being said, it's hard to understand how Souma, that earned such a good life, managed to turn into an fool that rushed to join a war torn country before he even managed to get his first girlfriend - an understandable doubt that will be erased by the events that followed the quiet period of the boy's life.

It all started to crumble when he received the worst notice of his life at the age of 15 - six months before his chunnin exam: His father, Hayato Uzuki, had died by the hands of a member of Kirigakure's Seven Swordsmen, assassinated without a chance to react due to a stupid grudge held by the young swordsman. The worst part? He wasn't caught. Due to the alliance made between Konohagakure and Kirigakure, the wielder of the sewing needle was forgiven with just minor punishments for the sake of "not damaging the allied military forced even more". No need to say that, to the boy that only had Hayato as family from the very start, this was the highest treason possible. Kirigakure and Konohagakure are not allied in this AU, in fact they're at war when the IC starts

For the next month, the carefree smile that was often seen in the boy's face completely vanished, giving place to a gloomy expression and even gloomier attitude. This quickly changed in the following two months tough, as the boy gradually returned to his former self with some small changes: His eyes had a sharp gleam now, and his carefree smile gave a predatorial feel that only intensified with the passage of the months. By the time of his chunnin exam - that happened in conjunction with the hidden mist village as a way of sealing the treaty - the boy had already changed into a different yet similar person: The sheath that once covered his true self - his "blade" - was now a thing in the past.

The first stages were so ridiculously easy for the boy that they almost felt like a joke. It was more than clear for him that, had they been in war times, he could already be a jounin with his level of proficiency, but at the moment it didn't matter. His only priority was getting the right spot in the finals - something that was easily done through having contact with one of the responsibles for the event. His target?  It was obviously the mist swordsman's kid, a fairly talented boy around his age that the killer of his father regarded as being even more important than his own life. 

It isn't hard to predict what happened next: Souma toyed with the boy to an unbelievable extent without even revealing his Kekkei Genkai, trapping the spawn of his enemy in a way reminiscent of a cat playing with the rat held under his paws until the father of the poor mice couldn't hold back his anger anymore, stepping into the arena to stop the fight. The result? He finally used his Kekkei Genkai - something that he discovered months ago but never had the opportunity to show to anyone, as he was waiting for his foster father to return home before making the reveal - taking the unsuspecting swordsman by surprise and, consequently, managing to behead the man in front of his son before he could react to his attack with a smile in his face - for the first time in the last six months, he truly felt alive. This is even more reason for Amegakure to never take him in, since he's unpredictable and apparently keen on murdering superiors. It doesn't really make any sense

Of course the story couldn't end like this, and he was captured by the Shinobi of his village and escorted to face judgement for his sins - a laughable display of fake righteousness orchestrated by the same guys that forgave the man who killed his father. That being said, this specific judgement never happened: the boy managed to escape by making use of a thin blade hidden under his skin, killing the guards in the process and being put into the bingo book as an A Rank criminal. More reason not to take him in

For the following 5 years, Souma lived as a wanderer - using his status as a wanted criminal by the authorities of the two hidden villages to easily enter into the territories of their enemies as he traveled the world, using his time solely to collect new techniques of handling the sword while having fun in the process until 2 years ago, when a woman who called himself as the shadow of the rain (Amekage) stopped him, praising his skills and requesting him to join her So the Amekage, right after her inauguration into the position of power, decided that the best way to cement her rulership was to take a known A rank criminal, who had killed both shinobi of his own village as well as shinobi from other villages in peacetime? - request to which he replied with an answer befitting of his personality: "Sure, if you manage to beat me I can do that." And an extra comment that would bring pride to his foster father: "But if I win, you're going to be my wife".

The result? He's still single and is now one of Amegakure's jounin.

|   Ｆａｍｉｌｙ ｂｉｏｇｒａｐｈｙ:   |
Being an abandoned orphan, Souma never had - and never had any special desire to - the opportunity of meeting his parents. His foster father, however, was a member of the Uzuki family, a family known for their attainments in the use of the Konoha-Ryu, and naturally had some blood ties that still live in Konoha - Albeit none that Souma cared about enough to meet after leaving the village.

|   Ｆａｍｉｌｙ ｔｉｅｓ:   |
Hayato Uzuki | Foster Parent | 32 by the time of his death, Konohagakure, Former Shinobi and the man responsible for Souma's love for the way of the sword.

|   Ｄｒｅａｍｓ ａｎｄ ｆｅａｒｓ:   |
Souma isn't the kind of guy to think deeply about the future, having the sole objective of enjoying his life while continuously enhancing his sword style. His biggest fear is being sealed or imprisoned mainly due to the implication having to stay alive without any opportunity of having fun.

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Combat Reports

From detailed reports from previous missions and academy sparring matches

“My speciality is cutting people until they stop moving. I can also cut animals and things though”

|   Ｆｉｇｈｔｉｎｇ ｓｔｙｌｅ:   |
Souma's fighting style is fairly direct, being mainly reliant on directly fighting the enemy at close range through the mixed use of his sword arts and Kekkei Genkai, overpowering anyone in his way through the use of a mix of his excessive speed and his masterful handling of swords. 
At long range, he mainly relies on the few long distance techniques he knows and shurikenjutsu to distract the attention of his foes and force them out of their hiding spots, giving him the opportunity of getting close to them and finishing the fight through the use of his sword.

|   Ｋｅｋｋｅｉ ｇｅｎｋａｉ － ｂｌｏｏｄｌｉｎｅ ｌｉｍｉｔ:   |
Ｋｅｋｋｅｉ ｇｅｎｋａｉ ｎａｍｅ
Jinton - Speed

Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ
Swift Release is a combined nature transformation kekkei genkai that can be used to move with instantaneous speed so like body flicker technique? There's a reason I banned body flicker technique for combat so..., granting the user an advantage over opponents with more strength than speed, such as users of Chakra Enhanced Strength. This nature therefore renders the user invulnerable against most taijutsu. It is unknown what elements this nature entails.

This Kekkei Genkai mostly acts as a supplementary skill for Souma's use of Kenjutsu - field that he appears to favour to an abnormal extent. If he favors it to an abnormal extent then would he have time left to learn and practice ninjutsu?

Ｓｔｒｅｎｇｔｈｓ
Souma mostly uses this Kekkei Genkai in conjunction to his sword techniques, giving him the opportunity of easily overpowering his enemies ay a close distance due to the absurd speed provided by it.

Ｗｅａｋｎｅｓｓｅｓ
Being only capable of short bursts of speed and failing to provide any form of long distance capacity, this Kekkei Genkai can be easily overpowered through the use of attrition tactics and long-range combat. If he's got the speed then long range won't matter since he can close the distance in a second anyway

|   Ｎｉｎｊａ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ:   |

Ａ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ
Blade of Wind okay

Ｂ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ
Flying Swallow okay

Ｃ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ
N/A

Ｄ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ
N/A

Ｅ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ
Academy Techniques

?ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ
Cloud Style: Crescent Moon Beheading B ran
Cloud Style: Deception Beheading C rank
Dancing Blade Risk okay C rank
Hazy Moon Night A rank, because of afterimages
Iai Beheading okay B rank
Iaido B rank
Killing Intent C rank
Swift Release: Shadowless Flight A rank

|   Ｃｕｓｔｏｍ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ:   |

Ｊｕｔｓｕ ｎａｍｅ
Souma's Original: Cloudy Sky, Hidden Moon

Ｒａｎｋ
B

Ｒａｎｇｅ
Close Range

Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ
A technique made from the observation of the Dance of the Crescent Moon technique - unreplicable by Souma due to him being unable to use the shadow clone technique - this technique relies on the most basic clone technique to create a sole clone overlapping with the user and then using the swift style to instantly move behind the enemy and behead they while they're distracted with the illusory clone.

Ｊｕｔｓｕ ｎａｍｅ

Souma's Original: Endless Moon

Ｒａｎｋ

S

Ｒａｎｇｅ

Close-Medium Range

Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ

A technique developed from mixing his swift style with the Iaido he learned through living with the Samurai, this monstrous skill uses the swift release to enhance the speed of the user's arms to an unbelievable extent for the span of three seconds, time that he uses to unleash up to 24 slashes coated with wind-based chakra, delivering an absurd damage not only to those directly in the range of the blade - that appears to be able to cut armour with an ease that can only be described as inhuman - but also to anyone directly behind them, as each cut produces a wind blade comparable to the wind release's Wind Cutter Technique.
The main disadvantage of this technique is that it puts strain in the user's arms, being unfit for being used without restraint.

|   Ｗｅａｐｏｎｓ:   |

Ｗｅａｐｏｎ ｎａｍｅ
Violent Moon

Ｗｅａｐｏｎ， ｔｏｏｌ， ｏｒ ｏｂｊｅｃｔ ｔｙｐｅ
Sword/Katana

Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ
A simple looking Katana with an equally simple pitch black sheath, the only special characteristic of this weapon is it abnormal sharpness: A result of Souma's excessive use of chakra augmentation, that ended up permanently infusing the sharpness characteristic of his wind release into the blade.

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I already have two applications for a jonin spot so consider this unlikely given you've already said you didn't want a hands-on character, dumbass.@Buddha

I changed my god damn mind, bitchtits.

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@BladeSS4 It still doesn't really explain why her mother was allowed to stay. Also I don't really understand why you went for the Hozuki clan specifically since you don't really use their jutsu or anything. You don't have to edit it in but maybe you can give me an explanation here?

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Since I've been craving for a Naruto RP since a while ago and you're searching for players, I could as well submit a character that I've been wanting to use since a while ago.

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Souma Uzuki

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Personalia

Information collected by the census office of Amegakure

“Geez. Such a bother”

|   Ｂｉｒｔｈｎａｍｅ:   |
Uzuki Souma

|   Ｎｉｃｋｎａｍｅｓ:   |
Nanashi (No Name); Sword-Style Thief; Battle Addict; Lazy Monster

|   Ａｌｉａｓ:   |
Crescent Moon Devil That's a mouthfulIt's considerably shorter in Japanese... Besides, most of the alias are a mouthful.

|   Ｓｅｘ:   |
Male

|   Ａｇｅ:   |
24

|   Ｂｉｒｔｈｐｌａｃｅ:   |
Konohagakure no Sato (Hidden Leaf Village)

|   Ｂｌｏｏｄｌｉｎｅ:   |
Unknown Bloodline

|   Ｒａｎｋ:   |
Jounin

|   Ｒｅｐｕｔａｔｉｏｎ:   |
 If asked to describe him, most of his acquaintances would resume his very being as "A lazy bastard with a monstrous talent for cutting anything that stands in his way", and that would be quite the accurate description for him. He is mostly recognized as an individual that shouldn't be messed up with yet can't be taken seriously, being overall seen as someone befitting of being called as a Wildcard.
Most of Souma's infame came from either the assassination of one of the seven mist swordsmen before he was even recognized as a jounin or from the fearsome reputation he created for himself while traveling as a missing-nin why would Amegakure take in a missing nin, which are known criminals? It is actually not an uncommon practice to ally with the enemies of your potential enemies in times of turbulence. Not hard to convince and are a fair way to increase your war potential - a direct result of him stopping to defy every single person that "carried a sword and looked strong" he found in his travels as a way of sharpening his skills with the sword. More importantly why would they take in a dude that thought killing people at random to test his skills was a good idea?I never mentioned killing though? If he massacred every sword wielder in his way he'd be considered away more dangerous. He merely dueled with anyone that picked his interest, not necessarily killing them in the process. A battle addict isn't necessarily a psycho.

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Psychology & History

From detailed inspection and investigation by Black Ops and medical personnel

“Do you really need to bother me right now? I was planning to sleep.”

|   Ｐｅｒｓｏｎａｌ ｂｉｏｇｒａｐｈｙ:   |
The start of the story of the young adult known as Souma is far from being uncommon or special, being shared by many others through the years since the start of the ninja era: He was an orphan. While this statement may seem a bit simple, it does resumes his youth perfectly in despite of being a simple word. He was nothing but an orphan like any other, abandoned at birth by parents that probably felt that leaving him behind would be safer - or maybe never cared for him, he couldn't know (Or care) - Souma was raised on Konoha's orphanage for most of his infancy, being regarded as an overall quiet child who hardly interacted with others or have any problem by most of his former caretakers - quite the accurate description, considering that he wasn't especially remarkable back then - but that would quickly change after his entrance in the academy. Pretty standard then

If asked now, he'd hardly know what exactly made him such an abnormal individual, but one thing was certain: it started in the academy. He doesn't know, even today, what exactly awakened his instincts in that place, but he know for certain that it happened in an instant: The quiet kid that he was back then instantly changed into one of the most promising future ninjas and undoubtedly the most troublesome one, being regarded as mischievous, lazy, fun loving individual and, above all, ridiculously talented individual. okay

Thinking deeply, the root of this sudden change was most certainly the person that started his training - and initiated him into the ways of a scoundrel - His foster father, Hayato Uzuki. If asked to describe him, Souma would most certainly choose the words "Carefree and Sharp", two seemingly unrelated adjectives that undoubtedly suited the man to an abnormal extent: Hayato was as much of a genius as Souma himself, being regarded as the strongest sword user in the whole village before he even reached his thirties - a man that loved the sword as much as he loved fun and imparted the same values in the youth that he loved as a son.

With all of that being said, it's hard to understand how Souma, that earned such a good life, managed to turn into an fool that rushed to join a war torn country before he even managed to get his first girlfriend - an understandable doubt that will be erased by the events that followed the quiet period of the boy's life.

It all started to crumble when he received the worst notice of his life at the age of 15 - six months before his chunnin exam: His father, Hayato Uzuki, had died by the hands of a member of Kirigakure's Seven Swordsmen, assassinated without a chance to react due to a stupid grudge held by the young swordsman. The worst part? He wasn't caught. Due to the alliance made between Konohagakure and Kirigakure, the wielder of the sewing needle was forgiven with just minor punishments for the sake of "not damaging the allied military forced even more". No need to say that, to the boy that only had Hayato as family from the very start, this was the highest treason possible. Kirigakure and Konohagakure are not allied in this AU, in fact they're at war when the IC startsI picked the villages at random due to lack of info, relies mostly in the fact that Konoha was the village that gave Bijuus to Kiri in the past according to the cannon. I can either change the villages or twist ir to make him one of the reasons for the war, whatever you like the most.

For the next month, the carefree smile that was often seen in the boy's face completely vanished, giving place to a gloomy expression and even gloomier attitude. This quickly changed in the following two months tough, as the boy gradually returned to his former self with some small changes: His eyes had a sharp gleam now, and his carefree smile gave a predatorial feel that only intensified with the passage of the months. By the time of his chunnin exam - that happened in conjunction with the hidden mist village as a way of sealing the treaty - the boy had already changed into a different yet similar person: The sheath that once covered his true self - his "blade" - was now a thing in the past.

The first stages were so ridiculously easy for the boy that they almost felt like a joke. It was more than clear for him that, had they been in war times, he could already be a jounin with his level of proficiency, but at the moment it didn't matter. His only priority was getting the right spot in the finals - something that was easily done through having contact with one of the responsibles for the event. His target?  It was obviously the mist swordsman's kid, a fairly talented boy around his age that the killer of his father regarded as being even more important than his own life. 

It isn't hard to predict what happened next: Souma toyed with the boy to an unbelievable extent without even revealing his Kekkei Genkai, trapping the spawn of his enemy in a way reminiscent of a cat playing with the rat held under his paws until the father of the poor mice couldn't hold back his anger anymore, stepping into the arena to stop the fight. The result? He finally used his Kekkei Genkai - something that he discovered months ago but never had the opportunity to show to anyone, as he was waiting for his foster father to return home before making the reveal - taking the unsuspecting swordsman by surprise and, consequently, managing to behead the man in front of his son before he could react to his attack with a smile in his face - for the first time in the last six months, he truly felt alive. This is even more reason for Amegakure to never take him in, since he's unpredictable and apparently keen on murdering superiors. It doesn't really make any senseThe guy was not only a Shinobi from other village but the person who killed his father, rather that killing a superior it's killing a possible ally of your village due to personal grudge.

Of course the story couldn't end like this, and he was captured by the Shinobi of his village and escorted to face judgement for his sins - a laughable display of fake righteousness orchestrated by the same guys that forgave the man who killed his father. That being said, this specific judgement never happened: the boy managed to escape by making use of a thin blade hidden under his skin, killing the guards in the process and being put into the bingo book as an A Rank criminal. More reason not to take him in

For the following 5 years, Souma lived as a wanderer - using his status as a wanted criminal by the authorities of the two hidden villages to easily enter into the territories of their enemies as he traveled the world, using his time solely to collect new techniques of handling the sword while having fun in the process until 2 years ago, when a woman who called himself as the shadow of the rain (Amekage) stopped him, praising his skills and requesting him to join her So the Amekage, right after her inauguration into the position of power, decided that the best way to cement her rulership was to take a known A rank criminal, who had killed both shinobi of his own village as well as shinobi from other villages in peacetime?A minor info gathering would let clear that it was done under personal grudge, and doing so when he was still a 15 year old boy makes it clear that he has the ability to reinforce the village. As for the time, it is supposed to be an act taken as soon as she became the kage, securing strong individuals loyal to her - a common practice in a place who has coups as a tradition. - request to which he replied with an answer befitting of his personality: "Sure, if you manage to beat me I can do that." And an extra comment that would bring pride to his foster father: "But if I win, you're going to be my wife".

The result? He's still single and is now one of Amegakure's jounin.

|   Ｆａｍｉｌｙ ｂｉｏｇｒａｐｈｙ:   |
Being an abandoned orphan, Souma never had - and never had any special desire to - the opportunity of meeting his parents. His foster father, however, was a member of the Uzuki family, a family known for their attainments in the use of the Konoha-Ryu, and naturally had some blood ties that still live in Konoha - Albeit none that Souma cared about enough to meet after leaving the village.

|   Ｆａｍｉｌｙ ｔｉｅｓ:   |
Hayato Uzuki | Foster Parent | 32 by the time of his death, Konohagakure, Former Shinobi and the man responsible for Souma's love for the way of the sword.

|   Ｄｒｅａｍｓ ａｎｄ ｆｅａｒｓ:   |
Souma isn't the kind of guy to think deeply about the future, having the sole objective of enjoying his life while continuously enhancing his sword style. His biggest fear is being sealed or imprisoned mainly due to the implication having to stay alive without any opportunity of having fun.

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Combat Reports

From detailed reports from previous missions and academy sparring matches

“My speciality is cutting people until they stop moving. I can also cut animals and things though”

|   Ｆｉｇｈｔｉｎｇ ｓｔｙｌｅ:   |
Souma's fighting style is fairly direct, being mainly reliant on directly fighting the enemy at close range through the mixed use of his sword arts and Kekkei Genkai, overpowering anyone in his way through the use of a mix of his excessive speed and his masterful handling of swords. 
At long range, he mainly relies on the few long distance techniques he knows and shurikenjutsu to distract the attention of his foes and force them out of their hiding spots, giving him the opportunity of getting close to them and finishing the fight through the use of his sword.

|   Ｋｅｋｋｅｉ ｇｅｎｋａｉ － ｂｌｏｏｄｌｉｎｅ ｌｉｍｉｔ:   |
Ｋｅｋｋｅｉ ｇｅｎｋａｉ ｎａｍｅ
Jinton - Speed

Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ
Swift Release is a combined nature transformation kekkei genkai that can be used to move with instantaneous speed so like body flicker technique? There's a reason I banned body flicker technique for combat so...I'd rather say that it is like opening the fifth of the eight gates for a short time but only enhancing speed if i had to make an analogy... Still, it's pretty similar to body flicker in practice. I can probably change that if you want., granting the user an advantage over opponents with more strength than speed, such as users of Chakra Enhanced Strength. This nature therefore renders the user invulnerable against most taijutsu. It is unknown what elements this nature entails.

This Kekkei Genkai mostly acts as a supplementary skill for Souma's use of Kenjutsu - field that he appears to favour to an abnormal extent. If he favors it to an abnormal extent then would he have time left to learn and practice ninjutsu?Hardly. That's the main reason for him having such a poor arsenal in despite of being a jounin and relatively old. I mean, even the Jutsu that he has are more focused on supporting his sword wielding.

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Souma mostly uses this Kekkei Genkai in conjunction to his sword techniques, giving him the opportunity of easily overpowering his enemies ay a close distance due to the absurd speed provided by it.

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Being only capable of short bursts of speed and failing to provide any form of long distance capacity, this Kekkei Genkai can be easily overpowered through the use of attrition tactics and long-range combat. If he's got the speed then long range won't matter since he can close the distance in a second anywayBeing fast isn't the same as being intangible, you can't simply ignore a freaking fire ball coming to your face by relying on speed. Even if he could use the Kekkei to move in the necessary speed to reach distant enemies in an instant - something that I can't see happening sincerely - he wouldn't have the stamina left to effectively overpower them.

|   Ｎｉｎｊａ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ:   |

Ａ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ
Blade of Wind okay

Ｂ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ
Flying Swallow okay

Ｃ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ
N/A

Ｄ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ
N/A

Ｅ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ
Academy Techniques

?ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓWill correct it as soon as I finish with my justifications
Cloud Style: Crescent Moon Beheading B ran
Cloud Style: Deception Beheading C rank
Dancing Blade Risk okay C rank
Hazy Moon Night A rank, because of afterimages
Iai Beheading okay B rank
Iaido B rank
Killing Intent C rank
Swift Release: Shadowless Flight A rank

|   Ｃｕｓｔｏｍ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ:   |

Ｊｕｔｓｕ ｎａｍｅ
Souma's Original: Cloudy Sky, Hidden Moon

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B

Ｒａｎｇｅ
Close Range

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A technique made from the observation of the Dance of the Crescent Moon technique - unreplicable by Souma due to him being unable to use the shadow clone technique - this technique relies on the most basic clone technique to create a sole clone overlapping with the user and then using the swift style to instantly move behind the enemy and behead they while they're distracted with the illusory clone.

Ｊｕｔｓｕ ｎａｍｅ

Souma's Original: Endless Moon

Ｒａｎｋ

S

Ｒａｎｇｅ

Close-Medium Range

Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ

A technique developed from mixing his swift style with the Iaido he learned through living with the Samurai, this monstrous skill uses the swift release to enhance the speed of the user's arms to an unbelievable extent for the span of three seconds, time that he uses to unleash up to 24 slashes coated with wind-based chakra, delivering an absurd damage not only to those directly in the range of the blade - that appears to be able to cut armour with an ease that can only be described as inhuman - but also to anyone directly behind them, as each cut produces a wind blade comparable to the wind release's Wind Cutter Technique.
The main disadvantage of this technique is that it puts strain in the user's arms, being unfit for being used without restraint.

|   Ｗｅａｐｏｎｓ:   |

Ｗｅａｐｏｎ ｎａｍｅ
Violent Moon

Ｗｅａｐｏｎ， ｔｏｏｌ， ｏｒ ｏｂｊｅｃｔ ｔｙｐｅ
Sword/Katana

Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ
A simple looking Katana with an equally simple pitch black sheath, the only special characteristic of this weapon is it abnormal sharpness: A result of Souma's excessive use of chakra augmentation, that ended up permanently infusing the sharpness characteristic of his wind release into the blade.

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@Buddha Can you please clarify your opinions about the justifications/questions made as an answer to your corrections? It'll make the correction of the sheet considerably easier.

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@Buddha Can you please clarify your opinions about the justifications/questions made as an answer to your corrections? It'll make the correction of the sheet considerably easier.@Spanner

Alright, first off, some of my comments are not meant to be 100% serious.  I don't really care about the callsign for instance, so that it's a mouthful doesn't really matter.

I picked the villages at random due to lack of info, relies mostly in the fact that Konoha was the village that gave Bijuus to Kiri in the past according to the cannon. I can either change the villages or twist ir to make him one of the reasons for the war, whatever you like the most.

True, but there's a reason they're at war. I could've clarified it but opted to do it in the IC, because otherwise I'd have to give away the main antagonist already and I'd prefer not to do that. 

But in short; there's a war between Kirigakure and Konohagakure at the moment, however that only started some.. one year ago? So it's possible that he's from Kirigakure. However, them being allied after the first war seems unlikely to me. I'd also opt to change the villages (or just leave the alliance bit out? Whether you're allied or not, during peacetime you'd want to avoid killing shinobi of another village, especially in an exam). A single shinobi being the reason for a war seems a bit much, especially if he went rogue anyway. 

A minor info gathering would let clear that it was done under personal grudge, and doing so when he was still a 15 year old boy makes it clear that he has the ability to reinforce the village. As for the time, it is supposed to be an act taken as soon as she became the kage, securing strong individuals loyal to her - a common practice in a place who has coups as a tradition.

There are plenty of strong shinobi in Amegakure though, and for a village that is relatively small and has been the underdog for a long time (and thus at risk of invasion) I'd say that taking in a wanted criminal is more of a reason to get invaded than a reason to strengthen herself. I see where you are coming from but I don't think the con's would outweigh the pro's in this case. 

I'd rather say that it is like opening the fifth of the eight gates for a short time but only enhancing speed if i had to make an analogy... Still, it's pretty similar to body flicker in practice. I can probably change that if you want

Which is a bit too much. In practice, it's too much like body flicker. In fact, it's unknown currently how swift release is even different from body flicker;

How this nature differs from the common Body Flicker Technique, aside from speed difference, is unknown. It is possible that Swift-natured chakra is being applied to the Body Flicker, which is a general skill, to produce this effect.Narutopedia

I'm not against him being really speedy, but there's something about instant movement that is cheesy in a fight. 

Also, having a jonin going around zooming between enemies finishing them all off seems like it'd force the students to just kinda.. sit back and watch. Cool in theory, but for an RP, it's not that good.

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Alright, first off, some of my comments are not meant to be 100% serious.  I don't really care about the callsign for instance, so that it's a mouthful doesn't really matter.@Buddha
That was pretty clear tho? I wasn't really answering seriously, even felt tempted to insert a shush in the end.
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True, but there's a reason they're at war. I could've clarified it but opted to do it in the IC, because otherwise I'd have to give away the main antagonist already and I'd prefer not to do that. 

But in short; there's a war between Kirigakure and Konohagakure at the moment, however that only started some.. one year ago? So it's possible that he's from Kirigakure. However, them being allied after the first war seems unlikely to me. I'd also opt to change the villages (or just leave the alliance bit out? Whether you're allied or not, during peacetime you'd want to avoid killing shinobi of another village, especially in an exam). A single shinobi being the reason for a war seems a bit much, especially if he went rogue anyway.@Buddha
Rather than the reason, I thought about having him as one of the triggers to the war. Like, there was already a reason but he acted to give a justification to the start of the war. Franz Ferdinand's Shinobi version.

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There are plenty of strong shinobi in Amegakure though, and for a village that is relatively small and has been the underdog for a long time (and thus at risk of invasion) I'd say that taking in a wanted criminal is more of a reason to get invaded than a reason to strengthen herself. I see where you are coming from but I don't think the con's would outweigh the pro's in this case.@Buddha
Fair enough. I'll go ahead and change this specific part to make him more suitable for the role.

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Which is a bit too much. In practice, it's too much like body flicker. In fact, it's unknown currently how swift release is even different from body flicker;

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I'm not against him being really speedy, but there's something about instant movement that is cheesy in a fight. 

Also, having a jonin going around zooming between enemies finishing them all off seems like it'd force the students to just kinda.. sit back and watch. Cool in theory, but for an RP, it's not that good.@Buddha

 Well, i Don't see him as being that active to start with. Going around killing weaklings with cowardly attacks hardly suits a battle addict like him - there's nk thrill on it. Still, I can take out this technique and make him an user of se form of chakra strengthening or some variation of the eight gates of wonder.

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