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@Innue Did a CS. I could roleplay as a bounty for other players, roaming around. I could have a faction of mercenaries of my own maybe?
Since I didn't see a CS here I constructed something myself.

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I'll see what I can do, been a while since I've done anything like this but why not pay attention.
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Full disclosure the histories won't make sense in this context. But I thought I'd throw these two character sheets out to see what was thought of the rest of it with the lack of an official RP CS up yet. I can change anything/nothing - doesn't bother me too much. Might even just change everything. I just want to get a grasp of what the GM team is looking for in a character sheet.

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@Write Both characters would be perfectly suited. Some adaptions may need to be made to reflect some of the changes that happened in the world, but that is a simple matter.

Also, just by chance your Uchiha's first picture is the same as one of my characters - Xu Shui Yi. Although, she isn't in this universe. Just a funny coincidence.
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@Bishop For a character of that status, he'd probably need a significant power increase to work at that level. Conceptually I have no issue with it. I'll do a closer look through once I get the thread up and can provide additional guidance then.
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@InnueWhat? He is a beast already. Maybe I didn't write it but his skin and body is dense metal. Effectively making him invulnerable to common weapons. Even chakra infused weapons have a hard time leaving a scratch. I might've debuffed him in some way to make him fair to the others. I expected the extreme opposite of what you said. Anyway, when you open the OOC I'll post an update version of him removing the handicaps that I placed.
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@Bishop Innue is actually correct to a certain extent tho? I mean, he's already OP asf but the simple fact that he wastes lots of energy gives him an enormous disadvantage against some specific enemies - As an example, Oinins using the Secret Technique: Mist Rain or pretty much anyone that can drain chakra - making it hard for him to he effectively in the top 10.
That being said, he seems to be OP as fuck against taijutsu and normal Ninjutsu users. The guy is practically an EVA with chakra...

P.s. I'm rather curious about how genjutsu would affect him rn
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@Spanner I have debuffed the ever living shit out of him in hopes of not being called an "op" character. And if I removed all those things that I added to lower his level he would be a sort of Madara with 10 tails Level immunity to things just without the jutsus.
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@Spanner I have debuffed the ever living shit out of him in hopes of not being called an "op" character. And if I removed all those things that I added to lower his level he would be a sort of Madara with 10 tails Level immunity to things just without the jutsus.


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I agree that this would be remarkably traumatizing. Better to leave it as it is.
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@InnueWhat? He is a beast already. Maybe I didn't write it but his skin and body is dense metal. Effectively making him invulnerable to common weapons. Even chakra infused weapons have a hard time leaving a scratch. I might've debuffed him in some way to make him fair to the others. I expected the extreme opposite of what you said. Anyway, when you open the OOC I'll post an update version of him removing the handicaps that I placed.


You may want to clarify some of those strengths then, as I definitely wasn't reading that level of power from that character. And I'm a bit different than most people in determining power from strengths and weaknesses.

I'll also do a closer read once the thread is up to make sure I wasn't just skimming too much.
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  • Can move and rotate his limbs freely at his joints as long as it isn't obstructed by the rest of his body.
  • Can easily reattach a severed limb and heal it instantly. By consuming chakra he can heal every damage instantly.
  • As he is made from a biologic metal, his body is immune to normal weapon attacks/physical attacks in general and could possibly receive minor scratches from chakra infused weapons, but it also makes him heavy. The weight doesn't slow him down as his power is also greater than most, comparable to the 7th Gate, the Gate of Wonder. Only high powered S-ranking spells and forbidden spells with high destructive power can injure him.
  • Has an advanced digestion system which can process almost everything and get the maximum energy out of it. Can consume raw chakra radiating from someone, by directly eating them or absorbing a jutsu. Eating harmful substances is ineffective.
  • His breathing apparatus is also modified so that it filters all the harmful substances that could pose a threat to his body. It can smell the chakra of someone and upon registering their chakra once he can easily track them later on. This also extends to knowing how much chakra someone has left and if a chakra consuming ability has been cast recently or if it is still in effect. It can filter the water to obtain oxygen.
  • Besides transforming his body, his organs and brain was also affected. The parasite has merged with his brain making him immune to every genjutsu ability. He can simply not perceive any genjutsu's effects.


These were my initial powers. I go crazy with everything in the start but I eventually tone it down(a lot) to fit in with the RP.@Innue
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@Bishop Yep I read that part, still potentially seeing him needing a power boost, but I'll leave that up to you if you aren't comfortable. I still see a large variety of techniques that he would be able to be hurt/hindered by - even in the taijutsu and ninjutsu realms.

Definitely could be obnoxious for Wind Release people though. I think they and depending on the taijutsu user would have the hardest time.
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@Innue So... can I use my initial dream powers?
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@Bishop I see no reason why not at this time.
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That's... OP as fuck. Only the strongest Jutsu of my character could somehow damage - Well, more like trap - it.
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@Spanner Please, I sill didn't add the first thing I wanted for this character on my dream build of skills and abilities. The power to transform and reorganize his body on a molecular level to anything. Shape shifting. Now try that on for size besides all these other ones.
But I'm a reasonable man so I won't have to force you to battle that abomination.

Edit: Shape-shifting to the point of preserving the initial mass and texture of the person. Think this.
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Man, whenever the character is officially accepted I'll definitely have to read it, if only to see how these strengthes and weaknesses play out.

@Bishop did you have a village in mind for him? Or is he meant to be a missing nin? If he's meant to be a missing nin, it could be interesting to partner him with some others. I know I definitely have two who wouldn't mind working alongside what amounts to a somewhat "immortal" metal monster of great durability and somewhat significant power (again, haven't read the CS yet, so I'm not going to make many statements about his ACTUAL "power level" as it were).
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@Bishop I'd be fine with transformation techniques on that given an adequate description and restrictions/clarifications on usage.

@Spanner Yeah, it really depends on the character. One of my higher level characters would have a lot of issues, while one of my lower level wouldn't. What level was the character you had in mind and what was the specialization of techniques (ninjutsu, gen, etc) and elements?
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@Innue Edited something on my upper post. So basically he becomes a swirling mass of ever changing material which could take any shape and bend and attack in anyway while moving with extreme speeds bouncing from left to right to any direction effectively catching anyone off guard with it's erratic movement and behavior and general unpredictability.

@yoshua171 Nope, he is a missing monster. They probably tagged him as an escaped scientific abomination of a failure to creature the perfect soldier...

Basically yeah, a missing-nin. And you don't have to read all the cs. Just go to the combat section and read there. But only the skills and special traits. If I'm allowed to shapeshift as I have in mind, just ignore the signature moves for now.
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Hello! I'm here wondering, are you accepting towards newer players? I've always loved Naruto and a roleplay in it's universe, alternate or not, seems pretty exciting. Especially this one.

However, I'm very unexperienced in the whole aspect of 'character's power level' and all that - if so, I would prefer to play a... 'underpowered' archetype of a character which can progress later if this story allows such. It does seem like the story is OR will become very chaotic and weaker characters wouldn't have much of a chance, so I'm unsure.

Thanks for the attention and apologies for bothering!

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