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Full Name: Dalry Soumers

Known as: Ry

Species: Human

Gender: Female

Age: 33

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Vocation: Cleaner, nanny, anything that pays and lets her work.

History: Dalry was a member of the UWLA since she was sixteen, lying about her age and signing up, she served for twelve years, though in all that time, she only ever achieved the rank of Corporal. She was a follower, not a leader. Even the privates under her, she viewed more as friends together in a team than underlings. She was a well liked ally, and a damn good soldier. And then the Nomad came.

Her first ever mission face to face with them was her last. It was a massacre. She'd never seen anything like it. Dalry survived, but when she came back, she was broken. Even the doctors had never seen PTSD this bad. She was a gibbering wreck to such an extent that it took a year and a half of treatment and therapy before she was discharged and given a pension, as well as a room to herself in a hostel on RX3248. It's a quiet life, though she has had a hard time finding work due to her nervousness and mental state. She cannot deal with people in a professional manner lest she break down with no warning. She cannot work in any job where it would be inappropriate if her hands or feet started to judder uncontrollably without warning. She even briefly tried a soldier's role but the moment a gun was placed in her hand, she screamed and emptied the whole clip into a wall screaming "NOMADS!"
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@CatharynI think it's a childhood thing for me... I wanted to be a "military woman" /kind of a direct translation from my language/ when I grow up... so naturally now I'm going for the soldier characters... Plus, women in uniform I could do security... My other concept is a bit more hazy and was something in the vein of a sort of weapons expert/gunnery sergeant...


Alright, well write it up and let us see. If its not going to work we can always move some stuff around and find you the right role

I've finished my CS for 0984-Thebes, RX's resident consultant AI. Go check him out and let me know what you think!
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@Silver Carrot Nice CS SC, just one thing to note is that The Nomad is a single entity. It creates and controls vast armies of ships and personnel but they are all slaved AIs and other manner of horrendous biological weaponry. I will elaborate on this today, giving Ry a name of something other than The Nomad to shoot at but apart from that it all looks fine.
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@Catharyn

She doesn't know that
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@CatharynWell shoot! Now I got this bug in my head and it won't go away unless I just go for it... Since I've always been a fan of Guyver's design and concept art... I kinda thought of making a biomechanoid species using the guyver's appearance as a visual and submit a species CS and if you guys approve it, use it for my character... I've been also digging through pinterest and google images for other similar art concepts cuz I don't want to simply copy and paste the guyver visual... If y'all have some ideas...

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@Silver Carrot

Ah i see. In that case, accepted!

@ihinka

Hmm, what do you mean by a bio-mechanoid? Are the characters in those pictures alive or are they mechanical? I'm reluctant to include species which come armour plated as it tends to start a power creep. Could you give me a bit more info on Guyver and the bits you want to keep please?
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@CatharynNot armor plated per se... Only instead of skin as ours it would be some sort of synthetic polymer alloy... which if slightly more durable then our skin is by no means armor... Let’s say more durable against slashing weapons but still vulnerable to penetrating ones... And the way I imagine it... there will be softer, less durable spots... like joints and stuff.

They are, for all intents and purposes both alive and mechanical... I don't know how to explain it... If you're familiar with Farscape...

Similar to this in concept of biomechanical... http://farscape.wikia.com/wiki/Moya
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@ihinka Ok, i'm open to the whole bio/mechanical symbiosis idea. You will need to sell it to me though, drawing on your own original ideas based on the links here. My primary focus is making sure your character fits into the universe and is not overpowered, so as long as those conditions are met there is definitely scope for something like this

I suggest you start the CS with core details and get them signed off before spending hours on appearance etc.

@Silver Carrot i forgot to mention, could you please repost your CS in the Char tab? All character sheets must be in there so when i come to compiling the final roster the process is quick and simple.
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@CatharynOkay, thanks... I'll get on it
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Okay . Thought everyone would like a taste of what some of the colony tech looks like, here's one of the multi-purpose tankers which operate on RX:


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@Elevation I'm in the Air Force. AKA easy street. :p

@Catharyn Well, as with what @Ozymandias said, evidently it is not based on the US military. (Sorry for trying to hijack that, I didn't realize warrant officers are NCOs in the British military.)

Still working on a CS, and got work to go to, so I'll try to get it up by the end of the day.
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@TheMadAsshatter Ah right. Yeah there is a fair bit of mish-mashing going on behind the scenes and most of it is intentional I'm going to put down the other two rank structures today, shouldn't take long.

Cool, let me know if you need anything!
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I'll be trying to get my CS up later. And I wonder if we can have multiple characters. My two characters that I intend to implement are Nelson Schor, a lieutenant on the Scythian, and Alexander Mahan, an admiral or fleet admiral (I have yet to decide). Nelson is the main character in my IC posts, who I will try to upload his CS soon, while Alexander plays a rather passive role, as he is the one assigning Nelson to the Scythian, and he sometimes make transmissions like giving him specific orders. I'm also reserving Alexander for something larger-scoped. So can I make multiple characters, and if I do can I make a character for such a small role?
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I'll be trying to get my CS up later. And I wonder if we can have multiple characters. My two characters that I intend to implement are Nelson Schor, a lieutenant on the Scythian, and Alexander Mahan, an admiral or fleet admiral (I have yet to decide). Nelson is the main character in my IC posts, who I will try to upload his CS soon, while Alexander plays a rather passive role, as he is the one assigning Nelson to the Scythian, and he sometimes make transmissions like giving him specific orders. I'm also reserving Alexander for something larger-scoped. So can I make multiple characters, and if I do can I make a character for such a small role?


Yeah multiple characters are alright as long as certain conditions are met; namely that you can properly play all of them without overall loss of cohesion. Schor sounds fine as a 1st character, however you will need to PM me what you have planned for Mahan. This is because the dispatch of the Scythian is the doing of Naval Intelligence who are free to commandeer practically any of the Navy's assets that they choose.

Also, i've started a tab for The Nomad on the OP, will finish it tonight.
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If you have a character in mind that is basically a backup to a main character, you can just write them into the narrative as you would an NPC rather than making a whole other CS for them
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Here I go! Hope you like it

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@Conscripts The character is provisionally accepted, but like you said the last paragraph and your relationship to Mahan could be subject to change. Nice CS!

@ihinka We'll see what @ozymandias says but i like this species application. You've toned down all the pointy appendages and focused on the SEEM being a biological spacesuit of sorts. Reminds me of the Quarians of Mass effect. Good job!
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@CatharynYey... It was kinda what I was going for... I wanted to work with the Guyver visual but did draw inspiration from Mass Effect, Farscape, The Children of Dune and other such sources

I will forever regret not being able to romance Tali with femshep T_T
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As Cathy says, provisionally accepted. Since this RPs initial planning we've intended the ship's captain to be an NPC, since he's essentially a tool of the Intelligence, basically under pain of death to follow orders from the agents aboard, which can be awkward for someone to RP. If you're cool with that, go ahead.

Here I go! Hope you like it



Fully accepted from me, cool species!
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