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Working on posts to bring in Alan and Agron. Also, @Caits Soren is finally done :)
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Still not happy with it... But but I think it's the best I can do for now
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I have a few issues...

First off, let me start, breaking the forth wall, is not an option here, the only Exception is the child of Deadpool- in this case, Vicier has this child, and is in the process of making it. I understand you do forget things in posts, but this:

"To show what he was talking about, he picked up his suitcase (that went unmentioned earlier, but was totally there the whole time) and opened it up"

Could easily have been written like this:

"To show what he was talking about, he picked up his suitcase, from where he had left it earlier, and opened it up."





Second, I know this is casual, and that while it is still considered laid back, I moved this casual because I wanted more skill, and quality to posts. I'm so proud of those that came here with me from the old roleplay, and I'm looking forward to see the advancement they have.

I'd like to see everyone grow a bit in posting, even myself- I've come a long way in under a year, and I've still got a long way to come.





Thirdly, While we are working on a Bruce post, I'd like a majority of characters posted in, and all of mine and my Co-GMs. I'd like everyone to have a chance to have their characters introduced before this so do keep in mind that the students will be at the front gates until this happens. and be wary of the time- not a great amount of time is passing at the moment.





And finally...

"the best group in the RP currently and I will fight you if you say otherwise"

I will fight anyone who does this sort of thing again. Yes, I know it might be funny and everything, but it is disrespectful to others. To every other writer in the roleplay, and that is a big no no for me.

I will not have disrespect.

I will not have people feeling like they aren't making a good enough character to be considered for "the best group".





If you have any concerns, please do not hesitate to come to me.


Both of those things that you mentioned were just jokes, but I'll edit those both out if you want me to. I promise it won't happen again.

Also, you didn't answer my question about changing my character's alias earlier.
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@Simple Unicycle
I didn't, no, because I was getting to it. And then I... got angry. So I didn't.

I'll be getting to it shortly.
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Again, sorry about the things in my post (if that's what made you angry, that is; and even if it wasn't, then I'm still sorry about it). I'll edit those out shortly.
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oh, it was a number of little things that mounted up. Not strictly anyones fault...

Anyway, I'm doing stuff now.
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Okay.

Where do I start?

Ah. Yes. the Alias.

Rorschach. That is an established alias, used by someone known, correct? She wouldn't be able to use that. I have stated, several times, that Alias's have to be completely new, with the exception of a few, who have already come to talk to me about it, (and yes, this includes you, @Simple Unicycle, hey, killed two birds with one stone!)

Second.

"In her quest, she dragged dirty politicians and corrupted businessmen into the spotlight, murdered countless hired criminals and thugs, and destroyed warehouses full of illegal products."

I'm not against the students murdering people in their past... hell, one of mine has... albeit accidentally. But This, along with a few other things, tells me that Katie has already established herself. She wouldn't, it seems, need the academy in anyway. And technically, if she was a well known face... she might have been forced to sign the treaty too. Thereby making her retired, and her secret identity revealed.

Thirdly.

"Her thinking was that, while the school would be attended by the next generation of superheroes, it would also be attended by the next generation of supervillains. And maybe, just maybe if she can pull them from the ground before they bloom, she can save hundreds of lives."

The school is not there to stop villains from becoming villains. It's there to teach each student how not to destroy the world and how to use their powers in a way that the world, which is still recovering, won't be put at severe risk. Once the teachers, or indeed a fellow student found out katie's intentions,, she'd be booted so far from the school she'd probably end up in another world.

And then there is Barca, who'd just blackmail her.




I don't begrudge her knowing how to fight and use her abilities, but to me, this is an established character with no room left to grow.
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Alright then, thanks for answering my question. I can add an actual personality to my characters sheet though, right (just kind of bugging me that he has likes and dislikes but no actual personality)?
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Yes you can that is my fault I kinda deleted the personality by accident and ya... it's in the coded sheet now
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@Caits
Alright, I'm not going to argue with you, because I have something to fix all that. I came up with it while walking my dogs. Those two are simply adorable bastards, two dachshunds, and they help me come up with, like, half of my ideas. Anyway, I was walking through the neighborhood, and I actually felt that something was missing from Katie, but I wasn't sure what. And, as it does, my mind started to drift a tad. Now, I love both of my dogs, in case you hadn't noticed, but the two are very different. One's brown, the other's black with white spots. One's lazy, one's extremely outgoing. One's a blithering idiot and the other is an absolute genius. But they get along perfectly well. And it was then, as the two sat there, pissing on flower bushes, that I came up with something that could make her more of an interesting character: Dissociative Identity Disorder, better known as Multiple Personality Disorder.

Sure, it's a bit of a cliché, but that doesn't necessarily mean that it's bad. It wouldn't be supernatural or anything, it would just be two personalities fighting over her body: Katie Kovacs, and Rorschach (or whatever alias gets decided on). This way, she wouldn't just be a copy of a character like she sort of is now, but she'd be her own person, one that can grow. Perhaps she's completely against her alternate personality's tendency to kill, and that's why she signed up for the academy: as damage control.

So yeah, I'd have to make major edits to my CS, and I probably wouldn't have it back up until tomorrow, and you might not want it because it might be hitting too close to actual, real world issues, but I think that it might be able to work. What do you think?
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@Caits
Alright, I'm not going to argue with you, because I have something to fix all that. I came up with it while walking my dogs. Those two are simply adorable bastards, two dachshunds, and they help me come up with, like, half of my ideas. Anyway, I was walking through the neighborhood, and I actually felt that something was missing from Katie, but I wasn't sure what. And, as it does, my mind started to drift a tad. Now, I love both of my dogs, in case you hadn't noticed, but the two are very different. One's brown, the other's black with white spots. One's lazy, one's extremely outgoing. One's a blithering idiot and the other is an absolute genius. But they get along perfectly well. And it was then, as the two sat there, pissing on flower bushes, that I came up with something that could make her more of an interesting character: Dissociative Identity Disorder, better known as Multiple Personality Disorder.

Sure, it's a bit of a cliché, but that doesn't necessarily mean that it's bad. It wouldn't be supernatural or anything, it would just be two personalities fighting over her body: Katie Kovacs, and Rorschach (or whatever alias gets decided on). This way, she wouldn't just be a copy of a character like she sort of is now, but she'd be her own person, one that can grow. Perhaps she's completely against her alternate personality's tendency to kill, and that's why she signed up for the academy: as damage control.

So yeah, I'd have to make major to my CS, and I probably wouldn't have it back up until tomorrow, and you might not want it because it might be hitting too close to actual, real world issues, but I think that it might be able to work. What do you think?


Reminds me of Jekyll and Hyde... o.o

But aside from that, I do believe we already have two or so characters with DID, Griffen and Zach are one and I believe Harley Quinn and Jokers kid and the Deadpool spawn (who has 3 personalities) which will be coming in shortly.

Not saying it's a bad idea, just saying we could use a bit more variety in this rp. If you want, you can always send me a PM and I can help you with her - I believe that she has a lot of potential, but as you said, a bit of work
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@Framing A Mooseummm... we actually have a student with DID or MOD so I don't think that would be an issue...not a GM or anything... just giving you a heads up.
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I would just like to stress that you can't enter the school yet, just the grounds
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Still thinking about how to adapt Kagerou as a student. I feel like I've made some progress but still missing some key pieces.
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I kinda want to see if Barca does anything in response to Cole
So I'll wait for a Barca post ^.^
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I'd like to join this rp

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Oh hey, another female to join the ranks. :P
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@Scarifar here's another male

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Hey mate, I'd love to say welcome aboard, but... I've never heard of these titan's in either the DC or the Marvel worlds. Now, i might be ignorant about some of the heroes and villians across these worlds, but I've been talking with my co-Gms and neither of them know of them either.

I did do a quick google search, and only came up with that crius is actually a titan of justice.

Which I'm not sure where that leaves us...

but The characters have to be children from heroes or villians from DC or Marvel. Or, in the case of some of the characters, completely new metahumans, like my Tobias.
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Just throwing in my opinion in here as well, as somewhat well-versed with comic lore both DC and Marvel, the only times that Greco-Roman Titans are ever mentioned are through either Thor and Hercules or Wonder Woman respectively from their own stories derived from mythological roots. And really the only Titans that are mentioned at all are mostly the more well-known ones, i.e. Kronos, Prometheus and Atlas. So..

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