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Good IC posts, guys. Just be aware for future reference of characters knowing too much about the Naval Intelligence characters. Technically they don't exist, no one knows about them, so be aware of being too omniscient
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I made a small edit to my character. Just changed the picture out to one that I feel better represents her face.
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Ah she's a little less frightening now
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Good IC posts, guys. Just be aware for future reference of characters knowing too much about the Naval Intelligence characters. Technically they don't exist, no one knows about them, so be aware of being too omniscient


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Good posts guys! looking forward to my next one
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@Catharyn@Ozymandias I'm actually planning for Mel and Ro to brake off pursuit, but I might change my mind depending on what you guys come up with I do actually want them to just get situated and negotiate some sort of permanent employment
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Been a good while since I wrote so I may need to edit some things especially flavor wise but you know, just tell me and ill work on it.
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Hey @drallinix! Its good to see you and omg is it good to get more of the old gang back together! I'm at work at the moment but i will have a look at your species idea as soon as i'm able.
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Been a good while since I wrote so I may need to edit some things especially flavor wise but you know, just tell me and ill work on it.


Looks good to me! How large calibre are these 'extreme large calibre' weapons? So long as it's not anime level, it's all good!
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Looks good to me! How large calibre are these 'extreme large calibre' weapons? So long as it's not anime level, it's all good!


No, nothing that big, more like they can fire a 50 caliber rifle as easily as a human could fire a normal hunting rifle, they're above human strength, but not like lift tanks or anything.
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Awesome, sounds good! Go ahead with a character :)
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@drallinix I've read the Verox over and i agree with @Ozymandias; its a good species and it's accepted by me but i have one small request to make. Could we please expand the line: 'All resemble the wolves of earth' with more detail? By that i mean more of what makes them different from wolves apart from being larger and having opposable thumbs. I want you to really paint a picture of how they look, primarily because its an evolutionary impossibility that they look exactly the same as Earth Wolves. Apart from that all the civ stuff is accepted, let me know if you have any questions
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Will do, ill get to editing.
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@drallinix Might I make an OCD suggestion Separate the castes in paragraphs... I got a little confused which was which and who was in... The only thing I got for sure was that females are on top... But that's just my matriarchal self coming out to play
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Just added a tab for The Scythian on the OP. Its unfinished as of yet but should be completed shortly!

@Catharyn@Ozymandias I'm actually planning for Mel and Ro to brake off pursuit, but I might change my mind depending on what you guys come up with I do actually want them to just get situated and negotiate some sort of permanent employment


Okay, well Loken and Clara will be heading off to the science station to check out the excavation site. Clara doesn't actually handle day to day running of the colony so you'll want to talk to either chief of security (controlled by @starlance and currently watching the food line disintegrate into a restless mob) or the colony director who is in his office and guarded by agents Black and White.

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@Catharyn I'll see if I'll continue following, but most probably they'll track back... I came up with something last night, before falling asleep and I want to explore it a bit

I sent Jack and BB to track Miranda down... As for Clara... I was thinking more of a side arrangement with the scientists... not with the colony as an entity... Since I didn't want the four of them to join the security of the colony in any official capacity, but rather be freelance. Still, since Clara is otherwise occupied Ro and Mel'll probably try the Director next...
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Sounds good @ihinka
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The Marines and I can do the honors of turning your small crew away since were guarding Clara and Loken.
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@ElevationWell, shoot... They were going to turn back on their own... And now I don't know how Ro's gonna be able to convince Mel not to follow the more and more suspicious looking group
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@ihinka

Oh terribly sorry :D now I guess we'll have to see where this goes.
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@ElevationNo, no... this is fine... I'll have to modify my previous idea, but there will be some tension
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