@Angry Player@pandapolio
Alright, I'm going to try and word this nicely. I apologize in advance if I cause offense, as that's not what I'm intending.
Now, I'm going to be blunt. Incredibly blunt.
Those submissions are outright denied.
So, all in all, there's just so much missing and lacking... They need a lot of work as it stands.
I'm not sure if you all looked into the OP, but a lot of information and all can be found there on page one and in the 0th post.
Alright, I'm going to try and word this nicely. I apologize in advance if I cause offense, as that's not what I'm intending.
Now, I'm going to be blunt. Incredibly blunt.
Those submissions are outright denied.
- There's no history section.
- There's no proper descriptions of what you've got as is.
- If you're going to use an image, please tag it under the proper coding, which I'll include below.
- All in all, there's like 32 lines in there. That's way too short for me to even consider accepting.
- I'm going to have to axe the duplicate powers, unless Reg overrides me. Similar is fine, but the exact same isn't.
- Weaknesses are... I'll let Reg talk on that.
- The mutation is probably going to have to go, in all honesty, but Reg will need to decide that.
- I can tell you right now, the Clairvoyant would utterly demolish these characters over their abilities alone, which I can't exactly say much on because there's almost no information to figure out what exactly they do.
So, all in all, there's just so much missing and lacking... They need a lot of work as it stands.
I'm not sure if you all looked into the OP, but a lot of information and all can be found there on page one and in the 0th post.
