@Neo Is Delight Can you see if anything needed to change? Thanks

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Vladimir von Wolfgang

"There is no great genius without some touch of madness."

Name:

Vladimir von Wolfgang

Nickname:

Vlad, the Bloody Doctor, the Death Giver

Faction:

Pirates

Rank:

Doctor, Master Gunner

Age:

32

Gender

Male

Crime:

Killing and plundering, murdering hostages

Reputation

Known as "Bloody Surgeon" for most of his patients died due to extreme pain that lead to death. There was no problem with his skill as his patient wound are perfectly patched and secured. The problem is he forces his patient to suffer the pain of the whole process of surgery. But that was during when he is still on the mainland. In the sea, his brutality takes to a whole new level. When attacking an enemy ship, he prefers to incapacitate some survivor to only patch them up after the war. The patients will have to suffer having surgery without painkiller. Most of them died but there had been some exceptions. If the patient succeeds to survive the whole operation and starting to have signs of getting better, then he will just give them a simple and unpainful death. A bullet to the head. Thus, making his death list to be at least few pages long. But he will not do it to all those above him on the ship.

Height

6'1"

Weight

150

Appearance

Vlad is tall, but a little bit thin. He always comes to other as a man in a long black coat and covering his face with a bird-like mask. The coat and the mask show its owner attempt to maintain but failed with many places patched on his coat, cracks or broken pieces on the mask, and the smell of chlorine on his coat. He prefers to wear a lamellar with a gambeson underneath to provide maximum safety for himself.

Positive Traits:

• Intelligent
• Serious
• No mercy

Negative Traits:

• Sometimes lack of compassion
• Pessimism: Vlad tend to look at the bad sides before looking the good sides
• Over thinking

Personality Description

Sadistic, a little bit narcissistic, and clear traits of both sociopathic and psychopathic. He usually prefers to spend his time alone, mumbling, reading, or practicing his skill on a freshly dead corpse. This can be later on stored in a huge glass vial or just simply dumped into the sea. His favorite type of book is philosophy and autopsy.

Quirks

• Studying
• Thinking
• Unusual sleeping habit: Vladimir only need to sleep about four to five hours each day
• Love silent
• Odd way to show he is happy. Vlad usually laughs with one or both of his hand holding his mask, bent forward, and laugh until he doesn't find it to be funny anymore.

Specialties

• Extremely good at being a doctor.
• Good at using musket and flintlock
• Extremely good at autopsy: can maintain all internal organ and outside appearance of the corpse if needed
• Decent at close melee combat: He is better than the crew but weaker than his fellow teammates.
• Hierarchy of power: Vladimir will maintain his respect to his peers. This can be used to ask him favors like trading hostages, but it always came with a suitable price. The only person that could overpass his code is the Captain, receiving all of his respect does not require to make a deal with him.

Weaknesses

• Too strict to tolerate other peoples fault
• Not very good at socializing with other
• A little xenophobia to strangers. Unless Vlad is used to that person around, anything that is not allowed by his conscious will be considered as a possible threat.

Inventory

• A long black coat
• A bird mask
• 1 Musket, and a box of black powder, with bullets
• Lot of research tool. But not too highly advance.
• 2 boxes of surgical equipment.
• Lamallar
• Gabesome

Fears

• Losing any body parts
• Got sick by a disease that he could not identify, thus making him unable to cure it
• Fear of everything and himself is only a product of someone's dream

Secret:

He prefers to torture rather than saving. So for most people, he will not use painkiller or try to stop the blood flow to the area he is going to perform to achieve maximum pain.

Goal:

Kill, steal, plunder, stuff like that.

History:

Ok, we joined because we want to gain something. For you, it is gold and the same for me. So just know that if you could satisfy what I want, then there will never be a reason for you to doubt me.

Side note:
-Vlad has a black cat called Luna.
- Vlad prefer to call Captain as "Boss."

Because of freedom, and gold of course. Freedom to kill and experiment, and to be rich.

@Neo Is Delight Fix any faults that I can find, can you look over to see if there are anything that required to change? Thanks

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Vladimir von Wolfgang

”There is no great genius without some touch of madness.”

Name:

Vladimir von Wolfgang

Nickname:

Vlad, the Bloody Doctor, the Death Giver

Faction:

Pirates

Rank:

Doctor, Master Gunner

Age:

32

Gender

Male

Crime:

Killing and plundering, murdering hostages

Reputation

Known as "Bloody Surgeon" for most of his sick person died due to extreme pain that leads to death. There was no problem with his skill as his patient wound are perfectly patched and secured. The problem is he forces his patient to suffer the pain of the whole process of surgery. But that was during when he is still on the mainland. In the sea, his brutality takes to a whole new level. When attacking an enemy ship, he prefers to incapacitate some survivor to only patch them up after the war. The patients will have to suffer having surgery without painkiller. Most of them died but there had been some exceptions. If the patient succeeds to survive the whole operation and starting to have signs of getting better, then he will just give them a simple death. A bullet to the head. Thus, making his death list to be at least few pages long. But he will not do it to all those above him on the ship.

Height

6'1”

Weight

150

Appearance

Vlad is tall, but a little thin. He always comes to other as a man in a long black jacket and covering his face with a bird-like mask. He prefers wearing a lamellar with a gambeson underneath to provide maximum safety for himself.

Positive Traits:

• Intelligent
• Serious
• No mercy

Negative Traits:

• Sometimes lack of compassion
• Pessimism
• Over thinking

Personality Description

Sadistic, a little narcissistic, and clear traits of both sociopath and psychopath. He usually prefers to spend his time alone, mumbling, reading, or practicing his skill on a fresh corpse. This corpse can be later stored in a huge glass vial or just simply dumped into the sea. His favorite type of book is philosophy and autopsy.

Quirks

• Studying
• Thinking
• Unusual sleeping habit: Vladimir only need to sleep about four to five hours each day
• Introvert

Specialties

• Well-known surgeon
• Good at using muskets and flintlocks
• Decent at close melee combat: He is better than the crew but weaker than his fellow teammates.
• Hierarchy of power: Vladimir will maintain his respect to his peers. This can be used to ask him favors like trading hostages, but it always accompanied by a suitable price. The only person that could overpass his code is the Captain, receiving all of his respect and does not require to make a deal with him.

Weaknesses

• Too strict to tolerate others' fault
• Not very good at socializing with other
• A little xenophobic to strangers.

Inventory

• A long black coat
• A bird mask
• One musket, a box of black powder, and bullets
• Experiment tools
• Two boxes of surgical equipment.
• Lamellar: A subtype of laminar. "While Laminar armor was not always made of leather, it was not uncommon. Laminar armor is an armor made of horizontal, overlapping rows of scale plates made of various material. It was popular throughout the Middle East and Asia. If you think of Japanese foot soldier, or a Roman foot soldier's armor often called lorica segmentata, this is it. It's hard to distinguish the difference between Lamellar and Laminar, being essential also made of horizontal rows of plates. However, they were often laced together and not overlapping, and this armor was often worn over padding underneath. So this would be the type a Japanese foot soldier would wear, yet not what a Roman one would wear. So essentially, it could be considered a subtype of Laminar. "(Medival Arms and Armor: Historical Guide to Warfare and Context )
• Gabesome: "It was used either on its own, or under chainmail/plate armor, the Gambeson was a thick jacket that could doubly serve for a winter coat. It was made by what we call 'quilting' (the process of sewing two or more layers of fabric together to make a thicker padded material), and its inner layers were filled with various things, such as wool or horsehair. Due to how thick the Gambeson was, it was surprisingly good at protection, though of course men often needed heavier armor to get the job done." (Medival Arms and Armor: Historical Guide to Warfare and Context )

Relic: Vial of Change

Injecting this vial into any living being will grant it the power to create a chemical that causes hallucination and further increase the sensitivity of the brain. This product when inserting into others can increase their regeneration but will cause extreme pain as a side effect. The pain is strong enough to knock a person faint and wake them again. But after a prolonged exposure to the chemical, the patient can be immune to the pain.

Fears

• Losing any parts
• Got sick by a disease that he could not identify, thus making him died
• Fear of everything and himself is only a product of someone's dream

Secret:

His deepest regret was to cure all those that had devastated his family

Goal:

It is fun to torture others without getting killed by the government. And get rich, of course.

History:

My past is for my own, so back off ok?

Side note:
-Vlad has a black cat called Luna.
- Vlad prefer to call Captain as "Boss."

@Scarescrow

I have a continuity question about your character. If he doesn't like to be around people. Prefers to spend time to himself. Why did he choose to join a pirate ship on a boat full of people?

Well, give me a better reason then. Should I give him the goal to save everyone, to donate to poor people? No, because it is stupid. He is a pirate, no matter what. He kills and steals from the weak. That is what pirates are. NOT saving, taking. Agree that there are good pirates, but there is a reason for this to be tag as "18+" right? Plus, I don't see my character as a good person. The world is corrupted enough it wouldn't mind having another. And besides, he is a normal people, who will never know when he is going to die. So, tell me? What reason should I give for him? What honorable reason should I just for his action of killing and plundering? Just tell me. I'm open for it.

On a second note, I know you are a co-GM and you have power near the GM, but that is not the right thing to say others character as redundant. It is my work, my character creation. You could say he has errors, but it is not for you to tell it is shallow. I knew you could create a better character, and that is great. You are better than me, so I could learn something from your writing. But on my side, he is as good as I could create. So yeah, again, I'm open to constructive comment, but not decry. If you could @AngelofOctober

And you ask

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Just flat out because he wants to kill. Of course, you could say than "why don't he lived on an isolated island or somewhere outside the reach of human civilization?" The answer is easy for me if you can't think of it yet because he wants to kill, simple as that. He could not control his urge to kill. And how many people would come to a place there are no town or cities had established? The answer is almost none. And I would think my character would die by the fifth month due to hydration and starvation even before meeting the crew.

So yeah, that is my reason. Just waiting for you to have any glorious goal suggestion for him for me to add on.
@AngelofOctober

@Neo Is Delight What is the timeline we are in? What is the ship name? And where are we at?

Meanwhile, discussing with her on discord in about a day I worked on some God Lores, some extra demon lores, some secret plot stuff.
@AngelofOctober

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You deceitful backstabbing wretch. Forming alliances before the RP begins are we?

On another note, can I be the captain?