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@BlackRose, here here's a quick tip: start a new paragraph whenever a different character speaks.

For example, instead of:

Sena checked the wagon before sighing "yes i see the immense amount of harm that poor child would of caused by stealing a single fruit from our supplies... he was likely starving Rin you needed be so cruel!". Rin tried to retort when one of the merchants with dark hair spoke up "Not at all my little lady the urchins around here are a constant annoyance!, if you allow them an inch they'll take a mile! i am always complaining to the guards to increase the security here but alas my words fall on deaf ears every time!" an an older graying merchant looks to the other "if it were up to you Alric half the city would be locked in the dungeons and only nobility allowed to walk the markets".


You could use:

Sena checked the wagon before sighing "yes i see the immense amount of harm that poor child would of caused by stealing a single fruit from our supplies... he was likely starving Rin you needed be so cruel!"

Rin tried to retort when one of the merchants with dark hair spoke up "Not at all my little lady the urchins around here are a constant annoyance!, if you allow them an inch they'll take a mile! i am always complaining to the guards to increase the security here but alas my words fall on deaf ears every time!"

An older graying merchant looks to the other "if it were up to you Alric half the city would be locked in the dungeons and only nobility allowed to walk the markets".


It's easier to read and it also helps identify who is supposed to be speaking.
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@SanaChanAre you still accepting?
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currently homeless, unable to rp as it is the last thing on my mind and waiting to find an open wifi is dumb.
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Yikes, that sounds pretty serious. I hope you resolve those goings on soon!
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Oh my gosh! Yes, focus on finding yourself a place to stay! Sending lots and lots of good vibes your way!
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@Almalthia That depends I guess on what type of character you plan to introduce!
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So, apparently Gareth's sword would actually be classified as an arming sword, not a longsword. Because longswords were two handed.

Anyways, what's going on here? Is the thread dying? Who are we waiting on to post?
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I think we are waiting for other RPers' responses or at least @SanaChan?
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I was waiting for some others to post, but I guess I'll go ahead and reply again
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Sorry sorry! I've kinda let the holidays get away from me. I can probably write something quick up after work
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I was waiting for some others to post, but I guess I'll go ahead and reply again


I was kinda hesitant to make a post in response to the Emperor. I felt like whatever I would write would be redundant and repetitive given what my character said in my first post.
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Reading over @Not Fishing's post again, I think it would kinda make sense if the Emperor had at least a few of his soldiers coming along with our little band. It wouldn't have to be many, but like, maybe a dozen or so. To give the trek a feeling of 'bigness' I suppose. It would also provide our little band with an opportunity to take casualties and losses to make things seem more 'intense' and 'real', without actually killing off any of the player characters.
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Personally, I was waiting for @SanaChan to state whether my CS was accepted or not, after making the changes that were requested.
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*quietly looks in*

Just saying Hi all! :)
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Reading over @Not Fishing's post again, I think it would kinda make sense if the Emperor had at least a few of his soldiers coming along with our little band. It wouldn't have to be many, but like, maybe a dozen or so. To give the trek a feeling of 'bigness' I suppose. It would also provide our little band with an opportunity to take casualties and losses to make things seem more 'intense' and 'real', without actually killing off any of the player characters.


Yeah, I was actually going to have Gareth verbally voice his concern in the next round of posting, after everyone declares their allegiance. That way he can see just how desperate the need for reinforcements is if anybody backs out.
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Alright, question:

I know Gareth has already been introduced with his equipment and all that, but since the RP is still just getting started...

...is it fine if I make Fury into a proper two-handed longsword, and his shortsword into an ordinary arming sword? He would still have his shield, but he'd only use it with his back-up sword. Overall it's a minor change.
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@SanaChan as we get further into this RP- do you want me to come up with a 'spells' list for Emil? Or do you trust me not to go OP-crazy-godmode with the magic flinging?
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The Emperor most definitely is planning on bringing some of his own men- the Empress would lock down the city before she let him entertain the idea.

I'm fine with the sword change, it's not a big deal.

And I trust you not to not go OP, and I'll PM anyone that I feel is going over the top on anything like that.
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I'll get a post up this Thursday or Friday. Think I'll have Adjantis take the carriage. No reason for him to have any previous horseback riding experience.
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Sorry it took so long, Had a busier than expected weekend and working overtime all this week.
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