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Oh, lol.
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I don't mind filling the position and make both sheets if you are willing to accept me of course. If @PaulHaynek also wishes to partake then perhaps we can compete with character concepts that will fit the roleplay?
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@CrystalApple: I'm trying to avoid a similar situation as the last iteration of this RP, where things got a bit messy due to people playing one character rather then a Servant and a Master.

Unfortunately, only one of you will be able to sign up, and since you seem willing to do both I'm leaning towards you. ^^;
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Ahh I see, well hopefully let's see what PaulHaynek says first but I'm quite interested with the Caster that I have in the works



Whut.... Nothing here... Uhh...

[Edit: Are Servant Sheet PMed? I see a few that are out in public view]
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@CrystalApple: I was originally going to keep it to PMs, but it wasn't working out. Feel free to post your sheet publicly.
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Don't you worry @VitaVitaAR-sempai! Me and @CrystalApple will be the bestest duo this side of the Nasuverse.
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@PaulHaynek: Please keep in mind that I really wanted to avoid people only playing one character, as that got kind of messy last time.
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Then I humbly resign my position to @CrystalApple.
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Hopefully my master is fine, a tad interesting using the magecraft that I am going with but hopefully he's all good! ^.^

And then here is my Servant!

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@CrystalApple I've got to say that that mage is weird, that backstory and skill set are even less magus like than Shirou at his lowest magecraft knowledge point. A family that is both as eclectic as that and willing to train all of their children is very unusual to say the least, unless they are like gen 1 or 2 and are trying to take a shot at everything until they can establish their own tradition, because it's impossible to pass a Crest under such conditions, especially when the crest itself wouldn't contain anything worthy the effort to pass it forward.

However, I loved that choice for Caster. If she gets approved, I like to pair her up with my Master. Literally, there could be no better choice for Emilia than an obscure artist Servant like that. The two of them would probably be a weak duo but they would have a lot of synergy.
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@CrystalApple: I'd like to begin by stating that origin is largely unnecessary unless the character in question is aware of their origin. In which case it can provide abilities but also wholly engulfs their being and renders them incapable of doing anything but following their origin.

Or at least it makes it nearly impossible difficult to resist.

His image is a bit nonindicative since you don't know what he looks like from the front, too.

As for abilities, runes are fine and all but exclusively focusing on runes isn't exactly what I would necessarily think of when I consider a skilled and accomplished Nasuverse mage. At least when it comes to modern magi. Runes are certainly a part of some magi's repertoire but it's a bit limited.

As for your Servant, while nothing is technically wrong with her, I have to say I'm a bit concerned by how limited she is. Not that she's badly written, that's not the case, but I'm worried about her underperforming even for a Caster, which wouldn't end up very fun to write.
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Sorry for disappearing, I'll make changes to my character's backstory since it does seem wildly everywhere with what the family is trying to do. However, with my character being the youngest of the siblings, I didn't intend for him to receive the magic crest.

As for the limitations on my magus' abilities, his usage of runes will allow him to replicate many other schools of magecraft with them so they will be very versatile if you would allow that. In compensation for only having Runes, he is more knowledgeable in how to use them for a variety of different purposes.




As for my servant, if @Kol is willing to pair up with caster then that is fine. I'll send you a revised version that will hopefully allow her to somewhat even out the playing field though so, in the end, you see it later as well. It should be done later tonight if everything goes to plan! ^.^



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Yeah, I'm willing to. I've been looking to partner Emilia up with either a Caster or Assassin preferentially and your choice of Caster is pretty much perfect for her. As long as your character is accepted by the GMs, you can count on me.

Also, if you allow me to say something. It would be more beneficial for your Master if they had at least some knowledge of general Magecraft, or at least Formalcraft alone. With just Runes you can't even feel active spells or even cast a proper Summon Servant ritual since that's supposed to be Formalcraft spell.

The most interesting thing that would keep your character's flavor is going through the Rin route and being a generalist, with a single defining trait. In the case of your character substitute jewels for runes and you got yourself a rune mage that's not incapable of using other forms of magic.

This is just a suggestion but I guess that it is more in line with the implied spirit of your CS as opposed to the wording that make it seems like your character can't do any magic at all out side of weak runes.
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@CrystalApple: I was going to make some recommendations, but really @KoL handled that for me. ^^;
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@CrystalApple: Incidentally as soon as your bios are finalized we can get going!
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Pardon for taking so long, I shouldn't have procrastinated on those deadlines or set them up in the first place if I couldn't reach them. The two sheets are done for the most part though, with my Magus:

  • Faceclaim was changed along with the description of his appearance as well
  • Skills left the same except for motorcycle bit added
  • Backstory was slightly altered to allow more cohesion between the family, but still surrounding the aspect of rune magecraft. They do not have a clear specialization outside of runes
  • The abilities section was mostly kept the same, but involved 'General Magecraft' to cover the other basic skill a magus should have. I feel that the 'generalist' aspect would come from the runes since it is overwhelmingly diverse




And then here for my Servant:

  • The preexisting skills were left the same, but Information Erasure was given for a tad of flavor
  • Nannerl Notenbuch was given a simple mental interference effect that captures the attention of those listening
  • Kingdom of Back is a reality marble resulting from her childhood and the denial of her opportunity to reach the same height as her brother. Hopefully, this one is fine due to the limitations given to it since its more for flavor. If not i'll just cross it out as a sealed Noble Phantasm and we can get the show moving after ironing any remaining kinks



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@CrystalApple: Hmm...

I think Information Erasure is a bit out of place.

That being said I like the idea of a skill that functions to make people think of her music and believe she's someone else rather then anything else. Maybe give her a unique skill that works like that? You don't need to change the description, just the name.

Otherwise I see no issues and people can start finalizing pairs!
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Changed the name to [ Performance of the Ephemeral ] instead of the previous one, so hopefully, that is fine! May I post the two of them in the Character tab? Quite excited to start now ^.^

@KoL

Would you like our pairing to be official then?

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@CrystalApple: Go ahead!
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Sure. I was waiting for that.

Emilia and Anna may not be that strongest pair but they'll make up for it with compatibility through the roof.
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