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A pair of in-progress NPC sheets for the villains of Everett's initial story arc



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You don't need NPC's to be approved.
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@Dedonus Ah, noted. Thanks ^_^;
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@Eventua@eravicis: NMS is having some internet issues because of his cat chewing wires. Once he's back online, we'll finish reviewing these applications.
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Before we accept your CS's, could you fix these minor points.

@Eventua: -Could you elaborate/specify what Mansa can turn to gold?
-We feel that you should remove his ability to use his powers on individuals who are only in his line of sight if he is using modern technology (e.g. computer screen, monitors, cameras, etc.).

@eravicis: -The max strength level is 100+. Could you set his strength level to 100+ if you mean for him to have a top-tier strength, even though your power description makes it seem he can lift 4x his body weight (which most definitely not be 5000 tons).
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Before we accept your CS's, could you fix these minor points.

@Eventua: -Could you elaborate/specify what Mansa can turn to gold?
-We feel that you should remove his ability to use his powers on individuals who are only in his line of sight if he is using modern technology (e.g. computer screen, monitors, cameras, etc.).


Oooh, of course!
I have made the requested changes as well as the stuff brought up on Discord, but have also added a possible bit of versatility whereby he may be able to reverse the effects of objects and materials he transforms, though he hasn't successfully done so yet.
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@Dedonus @nitemare shape Hello! When you guys get a moment, I'd like you to review the changes I made to my organization, as well as Eagle Eye as a character. I plan on writing in everyone else soon enough, as this is all a WIP. Anyone else who sees this post is more than welcome to give me critiques and pointers on what I need to improve! :D





























EDIT: I completed the rough draft of this CS so, uhm, NPC powers and backstories are listed now too. :)
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Before we accept your CS's, could you fix these minor points.

@eravicis: -The max strength level is 100+. Could you set his strength level to 100+ if you mean for him to have a top-tier strength, even though your power description makes it seem he can lift 4x his body weight (which most definitely not be 5000 tons).


Of course! I've gone ahead and made the appropriate edits. Please let me know if there's anything else you'd like me to edit.
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MUUAHAUHAHAHAH! It begins. New blood. Also Hi.
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Character you have created: Everett Williams

Alias: Mansa

Speech Color: #9f7d2e - Gentle Gold


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Pftt. Killing Eve and Barry are two new shows coming out about assassins. I had assumed it said Killing Eva and Berry. I was wait what? Since when was Eva and Berry a TV show? And why weren't we informed.
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Pftt. Killing Eve and Barry are two new shows coming out about assassins. I had assumed it said Killing Eva and Berry. I was wait what? Since when was Eva and Berry a TV show? And why weren't we informed.


idk seems like they stole our intellectual properties, man. can't just slightly change the name of our creations and them monetize them! we will not have it! I SAY WE WILL NOT HAVE IT, OH!
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My apologies for lack of posts, I have been extremely ill the last few days and am now in hospital expecting an operation soon. It's nothing dangerous, but I'm sure y'all can appreciate my creativity has taken something of a hit right now, dehydration and medication are a fun combination.

I will post once I'm back home with laptop access and feeling a little better. ^_^
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My apologies for lack of posts, I have been extremely ill the last few days and am now in hospital expecting an operation soon. It's nothing dangerous, but I'm sure y'all can appreciate my creativity has taken something of a hit right now, dehydration and medication are a fun combination.

I will post once I'm back home with laptop access and feeling a little better. ^_^


Rest easy now and see you around when you get back.
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Don't worry about posting, take care of yourself first. This is a game, we'll be here when you're feeling better.
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Nightmare keeps telling me I'm welcome back any time...so eff it, I'm starting up again. I will more or less be ignoring anything going on outside my little world unless one of y'all approach me with something, mostly because I don't want to get side tracked while I try and get a normal posting rhythm back. I'd also expect shorter (but hopefully more frequent) posts from me, rather than me trying to write novels and burning myself out like I have been.

Anyway, I'll apologize now for doing this yet again.
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Ambassador Bingo Sheet
If an Ambassador posts has all five of these things, it is Bingo

1. Parisian Tourist Spot
2. She Opens a Portal
3. Odette Patronizes Someone or Makes an Ominous Threat
4. Fey Shenanigans
5. Affectionately regards Mandate

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Ambassador Bingo Sheet
If an Ambassador posts has all five of these things, it is Bingo

1. Parisian Tourist Spot
2. She Opens a Portal
3. Odette Patronizes Someone or Makes an Ominous Threat
4. Fey Shenanigans
5. Affectionately regards Mandate


Shouldn't there be 25 (or 24 with a free center space) for a bingo card? ;)
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<Snipped quote by DearTrickster>

Shouldn't there be 25 (or 24 with a free center space) for a bingo card? ;)


You have to get those five things in a row or single post to call BINGO, Ded. There's no cheatin'

Honestly given enough thought I could probably fill up a 24 slot bingo card with Odette and the shit she does.
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— JAI HALE —

ALIAS: Warbringer
SPEECH COLOR: e1a900
CHARACTER ALIGNMENT: Walking the Line
IDENTITY: Secret, but doesn't care if it becomes known.

P E R S O N A L I T Y


More often indifferent than any other kind of characteristic, he is a soldier at heart and that makes it difficult for him to open up to people. He usually analyzes those he meets first from their physical appearance to their body language and immediately gains an understanding of them from a glance. In a way, he resembles Sherlock Holmes for his memory and first-time impressions of those he meets and is observant of his surroundings given his upbringing in the military.
Otherwise, to those he considers comrades and brothers-in-arms, he is quite the individual with a knack for tinkering with a variety of toys, gadgets, and guns for his friends. Sometimes, his rather loner personality has him working in the garage from a variety of cars whether it is the classic 1976 Cobra Mustang to the brand new and age sports car of the 2015 Ferarri FF. Sometimes, if not cars, he works on motorcycles. Because of his interest in motor vehicles, he often makes friends by means of possible frustration toward putting together a car or figuring out the problems a car/motorcycle may have.
However, he is loyal to a fault and is willing to fight for those he considers worthy. (Like his comrades.) He values friendship and in turn, is kind, thoughtful, and considerate to those he deems friends. He is extremely honorable and respectful of those he meets, formalities and all. Because of how he reads a person at their initial meeting, this can change his behavior toward those he meets. He likes helping people and feels he is giving a little back when he does.
Romantically, he is one that is very much for subtle touches and expressions. He is awkward when expressing his feelings and does so in the form of physical affection as a way of making up for his lack of words. As a man who is in action, he believes actions is the best way to speak. He has been in love before and takes the actions of what one does to the heart.

UNIFORM:
Wears a simplistic helmet that encompasses all of his head of a sleek carbon-fiber-like material with subtle amber lighting around certain sections of the helmet. Otherwise, he doesn't really mind what he wears besides the mask and changes his clothes intermittently and as needed. The helmet itself has its own technical uses in terms of technology, able to help further analyze and read a situation without difficulty. The helmet itself is near indestructible, made of a material that is not of the planet, and is laced with traces of the mystic arts.


O R I G I N


When he turned 18 in the early months of 1942, he immediately enlisted in the United States Navy to try and put his troubled childhood and [PAST REDACTED] behind him. From there, it seemed simple enough as he was trained, the regimen giving the troubled teen a sense of comfort as his father and his grandparents had once done the same.
A year into training, he was selected by the higher up for the potential to succeed in a series of experiments that would help end the war. With nothing left to lose, Jai accepted.
Since then, the teen vanished off the planet as the government kept his history tightly under wraps. All they knew was that he was handed off to do many black op missions and always returned harder than before. He disappeared again and no one had heard a word from him since. However, some files had turned up that they had lost him altogether and was unable to be found for some time.
Now fast forward to present day, the soldier had resurfaced appearing slightly different, and yet looked the same as he did back then just shortly after his enlistment. And this time, his mission is the same as it always had been, but just like before, his lips are tightly sealed as to what the actual mission is. The one difference between then and now was that Jai had come back with what seemed to be enhancements that they've never seen before. There were some that could not be explained until they brought in his present-day partner, Leila. After that, Jai's information regarding his augmentations were all rumors.
Some say that he was knighted by the Queen and others said that he had met with Merlin, a person of mystery that they have been investigating. Others say that he had been blessed by the Fae and was greatly favored, despite the tech that had modified him. Due to his disappearance from any record (and perhaps even the planet), some say he was even abducted by aliens.
Whatever the case may be, Jai's time from the year he disappeared in 1945 to the present day where he appeared now had remained under heavy lock and key and no one was allowed to look… aside from a few select people.

HERO TYPE:
Brick / SOLDIER.

A modified human who had undergone experimentation and very specific modifications to be made as a super soldier.

POWER LEVEL:
C. World Level

P O W E R S


■ Genetic Makeup - Due to Jai being modified and generally played with in terms of genetics, his body was pushed to the extreme and beyond of its current normal human capabilities. Needless to say, his body adapted and grew from said modifications.
■ Enhanced Hearing and Smell - To be able to detect any dangerous of gas and surprise attacks, Jai has been modified to have enhanced hearing and smell. The range is extremely overwhelming to an ordinary human, but for Jai, it is anything within a two-mile radius. He is able to adjust his senses accordingly and rifle through the "white noise" to find sources of danger or points of interest.
■ Incredible Durability and Stamina - With the experiments and specific body modifications, Jai is extremely durable and powerful in terms of his durability. He is able to take quite a bit of damage without flinching and is able to keep up, if not surpass, even the toughest of warriors. In fact, he is able to even be on par with quite a vast variety of supernaturals. He's also very resilient to fatigue and exhaustion and doesn't show signs of it after long and an ardous amount of time and stress.
■ Inhuman Strength - His strength is rather undefined as no one really knows his limits. It is perhaps near limitless given the tech and the body modifications that had been done to his genetics.

■ Rapid Regeneration - The regeneration speed is rapid and efficient enough that a gunshot wound of a typical 9mm pistol would heal within seconds of penetrating the skin.
■ Robotic Eye - His blue eye has the capabilities of monitoring and observing those in his general vicinity of his own selection. With a conscious thought and a blink, he can switch between his vision from "normal" view to infared, night vision, thermal, distance magnification of 80x, x-ray, and facial recognition. There's an interface that only he can see that catalogues (each expression and minute detail of their face and person) and monitors the people he is interacting with: their heart rate (thanks to his excellent hearing), physical attributes of what they're wearing, body sizes and measurements, inflections, and body language.
■ Superior Intellect - An intuitive and knowledgeable "young" man, he's extremely observant of those he finds to be of interest with photographic memory. Conversations and various topics have him quite proficient in it, and is eager to talk if the need arises. He also is able to glance through anything once and have apt knowledge and application of it.
■ Parkour - Due to his capabilities of quick agility, he's able to scale buildings and jump around (sometimes even over) them with no trouble. If it means getting to the location at hand over the rooftops than the streets, then he would.
■ Military Training - Due to his enlistment, Jai is trained to be a well-rounded soldier in all manners of combat whether it's close-range or distance.
■ Gun Handling, Use & Knowledge
■ Hand-to-Hand Combat
■ Gathering Intel
■ Espionage
■ Infiltration
■ Battle Warfare, Tactics, & Strategy
■ On-Field First Aid


A T T R I B U T E S


HEIGHT: 6'4" / 193 cm.
WEIGHT: 215 lbs. / 97.8 kg.
STRENGTH LEVEL: 100+ tons.
SPEED/REACTION TIMING LEVEL: 100+ MPH when he's hyper focused.
ENDURANCE AT MAXIMUM EFFORT: 5 hours.
AGILITY: 20X Human level.
INTELLIGENCE: Genius.
FIGHTING SKILL: Mastered.
RESOURCES: Large.


W E A K N E S S E S


■ Magic - This ranges for spells cast from to the type of magic used. On Jai's person, there is a certain amount of defensive spells that would only activate when his life is in danger or at risk of death. Once activated, the spells do not come back until the next day or after a night's rest. Otherwise, he's susceptible to the elements magic.
■ Bullets / Knives - Shoot him enough times, and he'll actually die. Bullets can still hurt and penetrate him and injuries caused by any sort of sharp edge of a knife or dagger would still cut him.
■ Electrical Magnetic Pulse (EMP's) - While this would be specific to the type of tech Jai has, it would make his robotic eye and other electric-based weapons on hand that he has to cease functioning. This would force him to rely on his instincts and training. This would also render the technology in his helmet and his eye to become obsolete until he can get it fixed or about an hour has passed since the initial EMP blast.


S U P P O R T I N G C H A R A C T E R S


■ Leila Taylor - His go-to partner when he's on missions. Ever since he's resurfaced from wherever he had disappeared to, Leila was his assigned partner. However, she's mostly referred to as his backup, given his abilities and often uses her latent abilities as a Mystic to help Jai offensively from a distance. She also provides Jai with his tech, gear, and upgrades whenever he goes on missions. Sometimes, she might just be nice enough to help him with computer tech and hacking if need be.
■ Leo Hale - Jai's only remaining family relative and his younger brother. Currently missing and Jai has yet to discover his existence.
■ R - The person in charge that Jai and Leila report to.


Do you know how to post pictures on RPG boards?:


S A M P L E P O S T


The yellow Manila folder slid across the sleek and black wooden table to a devastatingly handsome man of his late twenties. At least, it can be assumed so when he made a confident smirk with most of his face shrouded in darkness. The only thing that could be almost seen was the piercing bright cerulean irises that seemed to gleam in the dark. He leaned back and picked up the folder, revealing a headshot picture of a young man with olive colored skin and dual-colored irises: one a deep sky blue and the other a burning amber. Another photo shifted underneath the initial picture, the young man appearing to be in the middle of training and the gun he held pointed at whatever his target was at the moment.
"This is Jai Hale." The one who had slid the folder to the man in the suit clarified. "He's the soldier."
The man tapped a finger to his chin, his sharp gaze perusing the neatly put together papers that addressed the particulars of how Jai himself was structured. There was more research documentation regarding the parts of the soldier question. Unknown parts, modifications, and fascinating scientific annotations regarding the work done to him was observed and sketched. There was still too many questions that was to be investigated, but a higher-up had ordered a cease-and-desist on the investigation of the soldier "project" that was once theirs.
"What you hold in your hand there is the only physical copy of his entire file, unredacted," the other man continued to explain.
The man shifted the folder again and a slim, slender rectangular black shape slid into view and dropped into his lap.
Without prompting, the other man spoke again. "It's all of the remaining digital copies of the soldier, sir."
Long and slender fingers lifted the sleek flash drive to his eye-level, looking it over with scrutiny as it twirled lightly. "And I'll assume that this is truly all of his information?" His voice was deep, a silky smooth tone that spoke briskly, and without inflection. "You understand that if there is anything wrong or I find out that there are other copies, that this would be the end for you?"
The man—dressed in a pressed suit of stark black and white shades compared to the seated man's monochromatic shades of greys and blacks—began to sweat nervously, a cold sweat perspiring visibly on his forehead. He dabbed it with a handkerchief that he pulled from his breast pocket and stuffed the sad grey thing back into its place.
"Y-Yes, sir," he managed to respond. To further emphasize his subservience to the man seated, he bowed. "That is all of the documentation of the soldier."
There was a lingering and stifling pause that hung in the air while the man waited for the response.
"Good."
~ o — o — o — o ~

Bang, bang!
The shots fired rang in the empty shooting range and the soldier adjusted his stance when the buzzer went off, signaling the end of the initial round of shooting. Setting down the gun, he greeted the silently approaching partner of his.
"Good afternoon, Leila."
Her brow lifted, no longer seemingly surprised by his awareness of her approach. "Afternoon, Jai." She crossed her arms. "I take it you read the files?"
He made a minute nod and reached forward for the target paper that showed his shots. "We're going to Lost Haven to investigate the activity there."
Leila nodded. Still, her brow remained raised. "Are you ready?"
His lidded gaze looked over his results before setting it neatly down on the table in front of him and displaying a gaping hole in the spot where it should have had a head and a chest. "Always."


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