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Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by Tuujaimaa
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@Odin Bio is ready to be reviewed in the original post!
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@Tuujaimaa why you sounding so excited knowing damn well it's 1:17AM here and I ain't about to work for you. >:^)
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He's flamboyant u mong.
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Hello!

Figured I'd go ahead and post this now so you can see what you are working with.

I just need to add the History.

Cheers!

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There's that one weakness that needs to be added, but everything else seems to be adequately nerfed. The custom jutsu need to be listed under the ranking lists like Odin's. Other than that, everything seems up to par.


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@j8cob I'm not gonna do a full blown review right now but I'll just let you know ahead of time that when I do a full review I'm going to say that the storm release jutsu you made custom have too strong strengths and too weak weaknesses. Either that - or the jutsu are not clear in how much damage they do. Finger gun for example I get the feeling that it shoots all the way through you, but that's a) pretty damn fucking strong for a genin and b) dumb when you consider that the only way to dodge is with 'pre-emptive movement'.
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Okay, nevermind. The new Boruto ep that was supposed to be up today isn't up yet. I'll go review.
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Ok done.

I feel like this is more a joke application than a real one, so I just saved myself the suffering of commenting on things that made no sense. It's not even that I don't think you're a good writer -- it's that I believe you have fundamentally misunderstood the setting of the roleplay and the type of characters I am looking for. As much as I'd enjoy having an aloof moron character around, I don't think having your style of roleplay in the RP itself would benefit me as a GM and I don't think it'd benefit the other players.

So alongside rejecting it, I'll also suggest you move on and find another roleplay that is perhaps a little more comedic in nature.


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Edit and it'll be accepted, move it into the char bin when ready


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@OdinWell, this seems interesting. Mind if i pop on in or do you have to many people already?
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@OdinWell, this seems interesting. Mind if i pop on in or do you have to many people already?


Always have space for you Raijin!
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@OdinSweetness. Probably playing my smith boi from the last naruto rp of yours I was in, with the obvious tweaks.
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@Raijinslayer The one that makes metal constructs, or the one that made his own sword?
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Makes their own swords. I don't think i ever had a steel release charrie.
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@Raijinslayer I think I'm confusing that one with Renny, maybe. :thinking: Either way that sounds fine -- you know I'll review it and any issues we can iron release out anyway.
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@OdinThat pun was bad and u should feel bad.
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Done!

Hope it all checks out.

Cheers!

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Hmm. I might be interested in this.
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@Charmander We are starting the next monday at the very latest and possible earlier, so if you want in, you'll probably want to hurry at least slightly.
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