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it was a joke, I got rid of it though
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Ok
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I think I've just about finished it, let me know if there are any problems.
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Three things:
First, please add some paragraph breaks to your text, the combination of no breaks and centered aligned text is very unpleasant and difficult to read.

Second, please clarify the nature of the illusion move, it is too vague for my liking.

Last, I would say the hard light ability is two separate moves, one for the shield and the other being for the magic missile attack.

You will be accepted once these three things are resolved.
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Alright, more or less finished my CS I think! I want to add an image later, when I have the time to draw one up, but for now I've written some simple appearance details. Hopefully I covered everything and did well!


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@Starberries
accepted

@Sapphire
separate hard light into two moves with one replacing an existing move, and you're accepted
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Sorry for my absence. I got rejected to a promotion that I worked since October at, this week, and I was not feeling..."roleplayish",I 'll have a CS when possible. Family meeting this weekend so I'll be busy but I think I can manage a good CS tomorrow night (it's 8:26 here) if not, I'll have it Monday done :)

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Ok

Good luck on your stuff
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Went and added a portrait to Aldrin's CS in the Characters tab. I feel satisfied now, haha.
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@Sapphire
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Im not sure if I'm happy with this concept yet..

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Then please alert me when you post a rewrite or a new character if you're not satisfied.

Now for this submission here are some things to resolve before it would be accepted:

  • Regarding that backstory, given that there are Chups with horns running around it's not a big issue for a horned human to be running around. At worst he'll be confused for one even if he isn't one.
  • "Commune with the wild" would go into skills, rather than be an entry in "moves"
  • Please elaborate the nature of your summon(s)
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@ShwiggityShwah@sntabe@Lumiere@Eisenhorn@Tenma Tendo@Starberries@Sapphire

Here's the plan, it's gonna be a calm slice of life scene of everyone just doing stuff and then after a round or two I'll be starting off the plot.
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I need help forming the Bio/History. I don’t know what would fit in, and what’s overstepping boundaries.
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Welcome aboard!

Anyway I might withhold posting an additional amount of time for the sake of letting you complete your character and dropping her in.
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You can keep going with the RP. I can just join the party along the way. Like a video game character
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ok
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Accepted
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@Eisenhorn

Need a reply before I can. Otherwise I'll just have post in response to the rest.
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