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Kalleth Let me tell you / a story friend...

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Rune_Alchemist Absolute Depravity

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@Zelosse

made the changes.

Anything else?~
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Ima just re-add this character here. Basically a copy and paste, but the layout is good (I think).

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Put em through.
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Tim Wasteland Wanderer

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I'm interested in joining, if you'd have me.
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Please, tell me if anything needs to be changed or explained or whatever. I'm still sorta new to this, so sorry if he's a bit OP.

... Or not OP enough, considering his level and backstory... You know what I mean.
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Name:
Alister Orvheim

Creator's name:
Annabelle Thompson

Creator's Screenname:


Age: 18

Gender: Male

Level: 100

Race: Demi-god

Racial Class(es):
-Virtue of Hope(15)
-Divine Beauty(5-Maxed)

Job Classes:
-Armored Mage(15)
-Summoner(15)
-Shield Mage(15)
-War Wizard(15)

Personality:

Background: Alister Orvheim was created as a Floor Guardian for Ardent Heralds, by the player RisenHerald, to serve and protect the Ardent Heralds under all costs. Alister's primary duty was to defend the guild hall and it's denizens without falter, as well as to protect those adventurers and questing parties who passed through. Alister was also made to serve as a beacon for the new players and those who saught refuge, which is why his appearance in undeniably attractive and comforting and why his smile seems to lift the hearts of all who see it. However this is also do to his design being somewhat selfish of RisenHerald, who wanted to make a likeness of her younger brother who died at the age of five, and this is why Alister acts like a child at times, because while he was programmed and made to be an older representation.. RisenHerald left much of her bother's younger personality in Alister.

Alister's secondary duty was to always care for those in need, but not as a doctor would care for the sick, more so in the way a mother cares for a saddened child. Alister was always the emotional aide, the pep talk, the morale boost, he was the reason people kept on going. If there was ever someone down, or depressed, or generally in any mood other than a good one, Alister came with a spring in his step and that smile to ensure that each and every soul felt like a feather gently wafting on a warm summer's breeze. This is was both an intended result and a side-effect of his creator's original design, as she intended him to be her morale support and emotional aide most of all, but didn't want to be selfish. Ali, the one she often referred to as "brother-like" and treated like a member of her family, was made to be the most upstanding of people possible. It is written in his code, that no price is too much, in the vow of protecting and aiding those who deserve proper help, care, and hope.

Alister would lay down his life in the service of Ardent Heralds, in the name of RisenHerald, in the duty of being a guiding light.

Items: Coming Soon.

Abilities/skills: Coming Soon.
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@Kalleth Remove the disarm from the weapon and turn Just desserts into an ac5ivate. I'll let you choose which attack you want to take rather than have every strike be your choice.
The helmet buff seems silly considering that ingame you'd know who your party was regardless of seeing their face or not. Might want to cinsider using your General class to give you such a team buff skill.

@Tim gauntlet should only increase damage output by 2/3x and only for a duration before some kind of cooldown is required. Change it and you're accepted.

@ManoftheNorth So far so good. Finish up items/skills and we'll decide.
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Oh, cool! You got it!

Is this better?
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@Tim accepted
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Just waiting on a few others to get their cs up and then IC goes live
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Spriggs27 Most likely a Synth

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@Zelosse

Is this okay?


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Darked13 Just Archene / Really Just Archene

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And here goes my app! @Zelosse


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(Just ignore this, delete it perhaps)
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@Spriggs27 looks fine. Accepted.

@Darked13 accepted. Put your cs in the character tab.

@Crusader Lord I'm hesitant to allow a world champion character simply because of how ludicrously strong they seemingly are. The magic purge on your axe is also a bit strong, if only because I can't keep track of whats 9th tier or below every time you're fighting something worth fighting. There is also a matter of just how many job classes you've obtained, with multiple specialties that clash with each other.
Weapons master seems like you wouldn't need bow master, shooter or sniper but not both, etc.

I was honestly hoping your character would excel in one direction but have faults in others, but it does honestly seem like you made a character that can take the fight any way you want and not struggle. Defensive magic, dispelling effect, long range sniping and scouting, phys damage buffs and defensive perks, etc. Something has to go.
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And here, a fun thing I've done.


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@Zelosse (just ignore this now)
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@Zelosse Alright, new idea!



Name: Mira Keiths

Character Name: Kira Moonchaser

Age: 23

Gender: Female

Level: 100

Race: Dark Elf (humanoid)

Class:

-Astral Mage: 15

-Zodiac Scion: 10

-Kabbalahist: 10

-Master of the Sephira: 5

-Etc: 60





Personality: A relaxed and casual individual, someone willing to fully indulge their lusts and hedonistic tendencies as they see fit and so please, but who focuses with raw determination thon those things she puts her mind to. She has a photographic memory that has proven well with spell memorization and recalling details about various places and occurrences, though there are some things she wishes she could forget. she can swing either way with good or evil, to her it all depends on the situation and context. She prefers that sort of neutrality, though she easily can go about pursuing her desires and ends without batting an eye. Get her sincerely invested into something, though, and she can become incredibly defensive and ferocious over said person or thing. Yikes.

Background: Mira was a middle-class girl in the USA who had a carefree attitude in regards to what others might think of her, the type of determined person who is difficult to talk down from what they set their mind to doing. Avid member of the swim team from middle through high school, she always kept fit and healthy, but regardless was always a video gamer and anime watcher with a passion personally. In particular, when it came to video games, she took a liking to YGGDRASIL as a teenager. She made a simple Dark Elf, so as compared to other kinds of races in the game she had lower starting stats, but from the start after looking a guides and such she had an idea for what she wanted.

She ground out her character’s levels and equipment and stats over the course of several years to her specifications, sometimes guild-hopping to get supplies and groups to get into raids or fight world bosses/enemies. She became a common face recognized by many guilds when an offensive magic user was needed for events or dungeons or such things. Though in the end, her persistence to build her character paid off. She took an initially arcane path in “Astral Mage”, allowing access to a mix of arcane and divine magic in this very basic job class and use of a tarot deck in certain spells. She then took the next step up, Zodiac Mage, then finally took on the ability to craft golems with her next two class, and with the ability to make golems and draw upon divine magic in some form now she passed the requirements to get the Kabbalahist class which specifically drew upon and manipulated divine power for its use in spells and constructs (albeit only golems).

This all finally led to collected a set of 10 gold rings, each a rare drop from the members of the world bosses known as the “Ten Great Angels of the Tree of Life” or “Ten Archangels of the Sephira”. This gained her the rare job class “Master of the Sephira”, further boosting her golem-crafting abilities and magical power greatly. In the end, she became a specialist at making golems, as between the rings she acquired and her job classes she could create very strong golems from pretty much anything around her and the channeling of divine power. Further, by having taken a lengthy but seemingly “cheat” route to draw upon divine and arcane power using the stars, and not have to worship gods directly like Clerics, she bears a mixed but useful arsenal of spells from the arcane and divine spell pools.






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@Zelosse Typing this from work on mobile very fast.

Tried ro mak a focused magic user mainly doing golems, bit of arcane/divine mix with some unique spells otherwise.

rushed a bit. Sorry bout that. :(

I hope I didn't make a hot mess this time arpund.
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