I'll see what I can do with it later, no time right now.
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Will our characters be accepted or not here, or in the OOC?
I generally accept 75% of my players in the iCheck before moving forward with an OOC. I'm going to go over everything this evening when i get in with my son from his football practice.
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@Omega Man Tweaked the bio. It's mostly the same except that I included a bit where Cold was in Metropolis when Doomsday attacked. He helped some civilians and that finally convinced Batman of all people to give Snart a chance. Batman vouched for him to get a spot in the League, but made it clear that Snart was to be a "probationary" member until he proved himself to the others.
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ACCEPTED CHARACTERS:
@Me -- Sideways -- Titans
@bluetommy -- Human Bomb -- Titans
@Dead Cruiser -- Manhunter --Titans
@Endrance -- Silver Bolt -- Titans
@Avanhelsing -- Kid Solomon -- Titans
@NinaDivine -- Supergirl -- Titans
@rocketrobie2 -- Impulse -- Titans
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NPC/Mentors -- Robotman and Wonder Woman
@Weird Tales -- Polymer -- JLU
@Double -- Citizen Cold -- JLU
@Shard -- Evermore -- JLU ←---- should be a rich friend of the older Bruce Wayne
@Unknown100 -- Knight/Grail -- JLU
@The Angry Goat -- Warden -- JLU
I’m gonna go ahead and throw this out there in case past players are waiting around to submit CS’s… only gonna have six players on each team with a total of thirteen players including myself.
Also, as it seems to be a thing on rpguild… a hero dressing in more street style clothing is usually one person per team’s schtick. Anyone submitting an anime inspired visual will have to give me something more in terms of a superhero appearance. Shard’s Evermore character is a good example. In the extra bits there was battle gear that included a hood, mask, and chest piece. It’s cool if somebody wants the street clothes schtick, but go ahead and have a backup superhero suit in case. I’ll just pick somebody to be ‘that guy’ out of the lot who wants street clothes for their thing. This includes the accepted characters.
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@Me -- Sideways -- Titans
@bluetommy -- Human Bomb -- Titans
@Dead Cruiser -- Manhunter --Titans
@Endrance -- Silver Bolt -- Titans
@Avanhelsing -- Kid Solomon -- Titans
@NinaDivine -- Supergirl -- Titans
@rocketrobie2 -- Impulse -- Titans
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NPC/Mentors -- Robotman and Wonder Woman
@Weird Tales -- Polymer -- JLU
@Double -- Citizen Cold -- JLU
@Shard -- Evermore -- JLU ←---- should be a rich friend of the older Bruce Wayne
@Unknown100 -- Knight/Grail -- JLU
@The Angry Goat -- Warden -- JLU
I’m gonna go ahead and throw this out there in case past players are waiting around to submit CS’s… only gonna have six players on each team with a total of thirteen players including myself.
Also, as it seems to be a thing on rpguild… a hero dressing in more street style clothing is usually one person per team’s schtick. Anyone submitting an anime inspired visual will have to give me something more in terms of a superhero appearance. Shard’s Evermore character is a good example. In the extra bits there was battle gear that included a hood, mask, and chest piece. It’s cool if somebody wants the street clothes schtick, but go ahead and have a backup superhero suit in case. I’ll just pick somebody to be ‘that guy’ out of the lot who wants street clothes for their thing. This includes the accepted characters.
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Coolio, thanks.
Also, yes, I imagine Willow kind of admires Bruce Wayne.
Also, yes, I imagine Willow kind of admires Bruce Wayne.
Endrance Stardust Crusader
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So ready to play lol
Avanhelsing
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I’ll be making my Titan soon. Sorry I’ve been really tired.
By the way, if any of the Leaguers want to have faced Cold while he was still a villain, let me know and we'll talk. I was purposefully vague about his past encounters with heroes for a reason. In canon it's supposed to have been the Flash, but since there's no guarantee we'll have a Flash, I was intentionally vague in the bio so any one or more hero characters can fill the blanks in Flash's place.
Avanhelsing
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Player Name:
Avanhelsing
Primary Character:
Kid Solomon
Secret Identity:
Liam McNeil
Status:
Titans (Eventually the JLU)
Age:
17 years old
City:
He is based in San Francisco for now.
Day Job:
Running his family’s import export and being a student.
Powers:
Weaknesses:
"All Magic Comes with a Price, Dearie": His spells are powerful but they require an offering of something equal in value. If he wants to raise someone from the dead, he must sacrifice someone else's life for the person. The stronger the spell, the more costly the price. If the price is too high, the spell can take a bit of his life.
"One Cannot Rush True Magic": Liam needs time to set up his spells and if his magic is interrupted then it does not work or worse. The spell might backfire or cause something to happen. With more practice he could control this but for now it is a large issue.
Skills:
Liam can read and write in: Latin, Greek, Aramaic, and Hebrew. Despite his magic, he is quite good with his fists. Not going to punch out a powerful person but he would be good against regular thugs. His tutors thought it important that he can fight without his magic.
Appearance:
Liam will eventually need a better outfit but for now Spandex is not his thing. The Mask manages to hide his appearance unless he takes it off willingly.Even people who know him intimately cannot see through the illusion even if they see his tattoos.
BRIEF Bio:
Story Arcs:
The Price of Magic: Magic has a price and Liam has racked up a large debt. The Outsider holding the Debt is willing to ignore it for the proper sacrifice. Can Liam give up His morality for his own life? Should he live? (Solo/ Team)
Blood on the Neon Floor: Someone is kidnapping teenage club goers in Gotham and draining of every drop of blood. Liam believes that it is something to do with Black Magic but this is something he can’t do on his own. Liam's ex boyfriend was one of the victims and it felt personal. He needs all the help he can get and so he would swallow his pride and ask for help. (Team Up)
The Alignment: "When the stars were right, They could plunge from world to world through the sky; but when the stars were wrong, They could not live." : Someone is attempting to summon The Nameless One from the Source Wall. Summoning an Old God to Earth is never a good thing. It will take more than a single young Sorcerer to stop them. (Team Up)
Supporting Characters:
All Arcs: Giles Stonier: Liam's family butler. The older man's job is to teach his young charge about Magic as he had been ordered. The man never seems to age.
The Payment: Zurzazak (The one holding the Contract), anyone willing to help Liam not to lose his soul.
Blood on the Dance Floor: Doctor Gotham , his cult, and any team willing to help Liam stop them from causing mayhem in Gotham.
The Alignment: The Nameless One, and more but no spoilers.
Secondary Character:
Denny Colt: The Spirit (I have a modern twist idea for him.)
Additional Notes:
Liam prefers men over women and most certainly has a type of guy he likes. He has a weakness for the hero type of guy.
Avanhelsing
Primary Character:
Kid Solomon
Secret Identity:
Liam McNeil
Status:
Titans (Eventually the JLU)
Age:
17 years old
City:
He is based in San Francisco for now.
Day Job:
Running his family’s import export and being a student.
Powers:
- Magic: He needs to use spells to cast his magic but his magics are powerful. Due to his half homo-magi blood, he is quite the powerful sorcerer or some day he will be. Today he is just a decent sorcerer. He usually uses his spell book as a focus but in a bind, he can use his blood as a focus. His spells are varied so long as he can pay the required cost. Usually, animal blood will do.
- The Seal of Solomon (Summoning): Liam doesn't see calling outsider beings or demons to help him to do as a bad thing. A creature that can help him is a good thing. The Seal of Solomon allows him to do this. His Magic summons the creature from whichever place it came from and the Seal binds the creature to his service. Liam can only keep on creature at a time for now.
- Blood Magic : He is skilled at the use of blood magic. He can do more "dark" magics with his blood spells. Using this magic, he can place curses or weaken his enemies if he has time to set up.
Weaknesses:
"All Magic Comes with a Price, Dearie": His spells are powerful but they require an offering of something equal in value. If he wants to raise someone from the dead, he must sacrifice someone else's life for the person. The stronger the spell, the more costly the price. If the price is too high, the spell can take a bit of his life.
"One Cannot Rush True Magic": Liam needs time to set up his spells and if his magic is interrupted then it does not work or worse. The spell might backfire or cause something to happen. With more practice he could control this but for now it is a large issue.
Skills:
Liam can read and write in: Latin, Greek, Aramaic, and Hebrew. Despite his magic, he is quite good with his fists. Not going to punch out a powerful person but he would be good against regular thugs. His tutors thought it important that he can fight without his magic.
Appearance:
Liam will eventually need a better outfit but for now Spandex is not his thing. The Mask manages to hide his appearance unless he takes it off willingly.Even people who know him intimately cannot see through the illusion even if they see his tattoos.
BRIEF Bio:
The Wind Spirits sings the song around the ruins of an old Mansion in Gotham
Our wisdom flows so sweet. Taste and see.
TRANSMIT - initiate Gotham signal - RECEIVE - initiate the Solomon frequency - THINK OF THE CHILD - initiate the sob cadence - WITNESS - Kid Solomon.
Do you see the burnt mansion ruins over looking Gotham City, Sweetling? We do. We see everything in Gotham. Do you see the impossible claw marks on the door? Or can you hear the cries of anguish from the empty building? We can hear them crying and we know what happened. Would you like to know? We shall tell you the story.
Initiate the History Cadence
Liam Connor McNeil was born on the Eve of All Hallows (Halloween) and from that day forth he was far than normal. The McNeil's had been one of the prominent old families in Gotham and had always seemed to be oddly successful. When ever it seemed that their business was about to fail, they seemed to always bounce back and oddly a servant or two would disappear. It was was so ironic that they would lose a servant and get what they wanted? It is funny how things work out for the morally wrong?
This cycle of success and failure continued for years until eventually, one of his ancestors decided enough was enough. The family would no long sacrifice innocent blood for their own gain. The family was no longer richer than God and all His Angels but they were still wealthy enough to be considered the Upper Crust of the Gotham Elite. The gossip had always been that the McNeil's were an odd lot who never quite fit in. Their Import Export business was still profitable and they did a good deal of business with the Waynes and that made them rich.
Liam was born during a full moon an Halloween and that was seen as a good sign in his family's eyes. His parents were both magical and it appeared that Liam had more power than both of them from birth. Someday, he would lead the family and everything would be fine. From a young age, he was taught the lessons of magic and how to use it. These lessons were important to the young man. Then things got bad for the young man quickly.
Initiate the Trauma Signal
On his tenth birthday, things got worse for Liam. His parents tried to summon something that they did not control. The creature got loose when the wards broke. Then the screaming began waking Liam up from his sleep. We watched as the boy ran through the mansion as hellfire broke out around him. The screams would be with the boy till the day he died. We saw the boy go running out of the house while it was consumed in Hellfire. We watched as the ever faithful butler Giles came to the boy and pulled him away. The loyal servant took the boy away from the destruction and taught him magic all around the world. The boy did not return to Gotham for years. The city for the most part thought that he had died in the fire.
Initate the Now Signal
Now we see our Sweetling using his magic to try and fix Gotham. The Man in the Bat Suit can only fight crazies in masks. It takes the right kind of person to fight a ghost. The Man Bat cannot punch a ghost to death since it is a ghost and all that. We wonder if Kid Solomon can even be a hero despite his family's twisted past. Can someone with a wicked past be something good? Only time shall tell us.
Our wisdom flows so sweet. Taste and see.
TRANSMIT - initiate Gotham signal - RECEIVE - initiate the Solomon frequency - THINK OF THE CHILD - initiate the sob cadence - WITNESS - Kid Solomon.
Do you see the burnt mansion ruins over looking Gotham City, Sweetling? We do. We see everything in Gotham. Do you see the impossible claw marks on the door? Or can you hear the cries of anguish from the empty building? We can hear them crying and we know what happened. Would you like to know? We shall tell you the story.
Initiate the History Cadence
Liam Connor McNeil was born on the Eve of All Hallows (Halloween) and from that day forth he was far than normal. The McNeil's had been one of the prominent old families in Gotham and had always seemed to be oddly successful. When ever it seemed that their business was about to fail, they seemed to always bounce back and oddly a servant or two would disappear. It was was so ironic that they would lose a servant and get what they wanted? It is funny how things work out for the morally wrong?
This cycle of success and failure continued for years until eventually, one of his ancestors decided enough was enough. The family would no long sacrifice innocent blood for their own gain. The family was no longer richer than God and all His Angels but they were still wealthy enough to be considered the Upper Crust of the Gotham Elite. The gossip had always been that the McNeil's were an odd lot who never quite fit in. Their Import Export business was still profitable and they did a good deal of business with the Waynes and that made them rich.
Liam was born during a full moon an Halloween and that was seen as a good sign in his family's eyes. His parents were both magical and it appeared that Liam had more power than both of them from birth. Someday, he would lead the family and everything would be fine. From a young age, he was taught the lessons of magic and how to use it. These lessons were important to the young man. Then things got bad for the young man quickly.
Initiate the Trauma Signal
On his tenth birthday, things got worse for Liam. His parents tried to summon something that they did not control. The creature got loose when the wards broke. Then the screaming began waking Liam up from his sleep. We watched as the boy ran through the mansion as hellfire broke out around him. The screams would be with the boy till the day he died. We saw the boy go running out of the house while it was consumed in Hellfire. We watched as the ever faithful butler Giles came to the boy and pulled him away. The loyal servant took the boy away from the destruction and taught him magic all around the world. The boy did not return to Gotham for years. The city for the most part thought that he had died in the fire.
Initate the Now Signal
Now we see our Sweetling using his magic to try and fix Gotham. The Man in the Bat Suit can only fight crazies in masks. It takes the right kind of person to fight a ghost. The Man Bat cannot punch a ghost to death since it is a ghost and all that. We wonder if Kid Solomon can even be a hero despite his family's twisted past. Can someone with a wicked past be something good? Only time shall tell us.
Story Arcs:
The Price of Magic: Magic has a price and Liam has racked up a large debt. The Outsider holding the Debt is willing to ignore it for the proper sacrifice. Can Liam give up His morality for his own life? Should he live? (Solo/ Team)
Blood on the Neon Floor: Someone is kidnapping teenage club goers in Gotham and draining of every drop of blood. Liam believes that it is something to do with Black Magic but this is something he can’t do on his own. Liam's ex boyfriend was one of the victims and it felt personal. He needs all the help he can get and so he would swallow his pride and ask for help. (Team Up)
The Alignment: "When the stars were right, They could plunge from world to world through the sky; but when the stars were wrong, They could not live." : Someone is attempting to summon The Nameless One from the Source Wall. Summoning an Old God to Earth is never a good thing. It will take more than a single young Sorcerer to stop them. (Team Up)
Supporting Characters:
All Arcs: Giles Stonier: Liam's family butler. The older man's job is to teach his young charge about Magic as he had been ordered. The man never seems to age.
The Payment: Zurzazak (The one holding the Contract), anyone willing to help Liam not to lose his soul.
Blood on the Dance Floor: Doctor Gotham , his cult, and any team willing to help Liam stop them from causing mayhem in Gotham.
The Alignment: The Nameless One, and more but no spoilers.
Secondary Character:
Denny Colt: The Spirit (I have a modern twist idea for him.)
Additional Notes:
Liam prefers men over women and most certainly has a type of guy he likes. He has a weakness for the hero type of guy.
@Omega Man
I decided just to use my old guy from the old plot. Now that there isn’t 1000 magic users I can use him.
I do want to use him again.
Unknown100
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Working hard on my CS
Unknown100
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By the way, if any of the Leaguers want to have faced Cold while he was still a villain, let me know and we'll talk. I was purposefully vague about his past encounters with heroes for a reason. In canon it's supposed to have been the Flash, but since there's no guarantee we'll have a Flash, I was intentionally vague in the bio so any one or more hero characters can fill the blanks in Flash's place.
Uh, I think I would like that ;)
Endrance Stardust Crusader
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Player Name:
Avanhelsing
Primary Character:
Kid Solomon
Secret Identity:
Liam McNeil
Status:
Titans (Eventually the JLU)
Age:
17 years old
City:
He is based in San Francisco for now.
Day Job:
Running his family’s import export and being a student.
Powers:
- Magic: He needs to use spells to cast his magic but his magics are powerful. Due to his half homo-magi blood, he is quite the powerful sorcerer or some day he will be. Today he is just a decent sorcerer. He usually uses his spell book as a focus but in a bind, he can use his blood as a focus. His spells are varied so long as he can pay the required cost. Usually, animal blood will do.
- The Seal of Solomon (Summoning): Liam doesn't see calling outsider beings or demons to help him to do as a bad thing. A creature that can help him is a good thing. The Seal of Solomon allows him to do this. His Magic summons the creature from whichever place it came from and the Seal binds the creature to his service. Liam can only keep on creature at a time for now.
- Blood Magic : He is skilled at the use of blood magic. He can do more "dark" magics with his blood spells. Using this magic, he can place curses or weaken his enemies if he has time to set up.
Weaknesses:
"All Magic Comes with a Price, Dearie": His spells are powerful but they require an offering of something equal in value. If he wants to raise someone from the dead, he must sacrifice someone else's life for the person. The stronger the spell, the more costly the price. If the price is too high, the spell can take a bit of his life.
"One Cannot Rush True Magic": Liam needs time to set up his spells and if his magic is interrupted then it does not work or worse. The spell might backfire or cause something to happen. With more practice he could control this but for now it is a large issue.
Skills:
Liam can read and write in: Latin, Greek, Aramaic, and Hebrew. Despite his magic, he is quite good with his fists. Not going to punch out a powerful person but he would be good against regular thugs. His tutors thought it important that he can fight without his magic.
Appearance:
Liam will eventually need a better outfit but for now Spandex is not his thing. The Mask manages to hide his appearance unless he takes it off willingly.Even people who know him intimately cannot see through the illusion even if they see his tattoos.
BRIEF Bio:The Wind Spirits sings the song around the ruins of an old Mansion in Gotham
Our wisdom flows so sweet. Taste and see.
TRANSMIT - initiate Gotham signal - RECEIVE - initiate the Solomon frequency - THINK OF THE CHILD - initiate the sob cadence - WITNESS - Kid Solomon.
Do you see the burnt mansion ruins over looking Gotham City, Sweetling? We do. We see everything in Gotham. Do you see the impossible claw marks on the door? Or can you hear the cries of anguish from the empty building? We can hear them crying and we know what happened. Would you like to know? We shall tell you the story.
Initiate the History Cadence
Liam Connor McNeil was born on the Eve of All Hallows (Halloween) and from that day forth he was far than normal. The McNeil's had been one of the prominent old families in Gotham and had always seemed to be oddly successful. When ever it seemed that their business was about to fail, they seemed to always bounce back and oddly a servant or two would disappear. It was was so ironic that they would lose a servant and get what they wanted? It is funny how things work out for the morally wrong?
This cycle of success and failure continued for years until eventually, one of his ancestors decided enough was enough. The family would no long sacrifice innocent blood for their own gain. The family was no longer richer than God and all His Angels but they were still wealthy enough to be considered the Upper Crust of the Gotham Elite. The gossip had always been that the McNeil's were an odd lot who never quite fit in. Their Import Export business was still profitable and they did a good deal of business with the Waynes and that made them rich.
Liam was born during a full moon an Halloween and that was seen as a good sign in his family's eyes. His parents were both magical and it appeared that Liam had more power than both of them from birth. Someday, he would lead the family and everything would be fine. From a young age, he was taught the lessons of magic and how to use it. These lessons were important to the young man. Then things got bad for the young man quickly.
Initiate the Trauma Signal
On his tenth birthday, things got worse for Liam. His parents tried to summon something that they did not control. The creature got loose when the wards broke. Then the screaming began waking Liam up from his sleep. We watched as the boy ran through the mansion as hellfire broke out around him. The screams would be with the boy till the day he died. We saw the boy go running out of the house while it was consumed in Hellfire. We watched as the ever faithful butler Giles came to the boy and pulled him away. The loyal servant took the boy away from the destruction and taught him magic all around the world. The boy did not return to Gotham for years. The city for the most part thought that he had died in the fire.
Initate the Now Signal
Now we see our Sweetling using his magic to try and fix Gotham. The Man in the Bat Suit can only fight crazies in masks. It takes the right kind of person to fight a ghost. The Man Bat cannot punch a ghost to death since it is a ghost and all that. We wonder if Kid Solomon can even be a hero despite his family's twisted past. Can someone with a wicked past be something good? Only time shall tell us.
Story Arcs:
The Price of Magic: Magic has a price and Liam has racked up a large debt. The Outsider holding the Debt is willing to ignore it for the proper sacrifice. Can Liam give up His morality for his own life? Should he live? (Solo/ Team)
Blood on the Neon Floor: Someone is kidnapping teenage club goers in Gotham and draining of every drop of blood. Liam believes that it is something to do with Black Magic but this is something he can’t do on his own. Liam's ex boyfriend was one of the victims and it felt personal. He needs all the help he can get and so he would swallow his pride and ask for help. (Team Up)
The Alignment: "When the stars were right, They could plunge from world to world through the sky; but when the stars were wrong, They could not live." : Someone is attempting to summon The Nameless One from the Source Wall. Summoning an Old God to Earth is never a good thing. It will take more than a single young Sorcerer to stop them. (Team Up)
Supporting Characters:
All Arcs: Giles Stonier: Liam's family butler. The older man's job is to teach his young charge about Magic as he had been ordered. The man never seems to age.
The Payment: Zurzazak (The one holding the Contract), anyone willing to help Liam not to lose his soul.
Blood on the Dance Floor: Doctor Gotham , his cult, and any team willing to help Liam stop them from causing mayhem in Gotham.
The Alignment: The Nameless One, and more but no spoilers.
Secondary Character:
Denny Colt: The Spirit (I have a modern twist idea for him.)
Additional Notes:
Liam prefers men over women and most certainly has a type of guy he likes. He has a weakness for the hero type of guy.
@Omega Man
I decided just to use my old guy from the old plot. Now that there isn’t 1000 magic users I can use him.
I do want to use him again.
oooh i'm so excited for your character. I was just talking to KL about using one of my supporting characters (eventually) as part of some Justice league dark situation some day since she's obsessed with magical/paranormal events... It would be cool if she heard some "whisperings" about yours (when you get accepted), although i want her to end up doing more like african black magic (voodoo). Anyways this idea is far removed tho so ignore me gushing lmaoo.
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I'd like to play this character instead, if possible. He shares similarities with Willow. This was the original character I was considering.
Player Name
@Shard
Public Identity
Raziel Lunaris has no secret identity.
Status
Justice League.
Age
Raziel is unsure of his actual age. However, he appears to be in his early twenties, or late teens.
City
Metropolis.
Day Job
Raziel is a full-time hero.
Species, (includes powers.)
Non-Power Weaknesses
🌕Technology
Raziel is quite conservative, and is technologically inept.
🌕Firearms
He refuses to use them, and frankly doesn’t know how to.
🌕Flamboyance
Raziel is a swordsman. His abilities do not allow for flashy displays, and he cannot cause explosions with his mind.
🌕Soda
Yes, he is addicted to it.
Skills
🌚 Swordsmanship.
🌚 Martial Arts.
🌚 Acrobatics.
Appearance
Once your eyes come to greet this figure, they would be met by a pale shape, indeed. Standing slender and thin, at no more than the average height of five feet and seven inches, this creature appears to carry with him a sense of honor and nobility. Is it assertiveness? A position of self-awareness? Raziel armorers himself with professionalism, an aura of calm and harmony surrounding this peculiar individual. Matched only by the silence of his footsteps, Raziel Lunaris speaks with an assertive, yet relaxed tone. He does not find a need in making himself heard, beyond the initial attempt. One could perhaps consider this an act of arrogance. Though, if we are to shift our attention to the young man's physical appearance, one will quickly note a thick mop of raven hair atop his head. Strands proceed down in a set of bangs, somewhat obfuscating the obsidian gaze which in turn would appear to pierce an onlooker's glare. Flawless, almost unnaturally so, Raziel possesses chalk white skin without sight of a single blemish brought forth through age, nor conflict.
He seems to have grasped the mature age of twenty winters to claim, and moves with steps comparable to that of a silent shadow. With a straight back and a curious gaze, he can often be seen analyzing a sight in silence. Working out the machinations in his head, Raziel often sees it fit to consider his words before uttering them to any who might hear.
His body is of the slender type, indeed. There does not appear to be any visible muscles to view, would you gaze upon his naked shape. Rather, much like a dancer, his frame is lithe and graceful, not at all belonging to one who wields a blade. Indeed, a person might, in fact, find it disturbing how this gentleman, for that is what he is, meets your gaze with a fixed sight of his own. Never yielding, never relenting, those obsidian orbs resting above a small nose will retain their target with harmonic bliss to accompany the assertiveness.
A smile is often seen upon his lips, though quite somber in nature. It is almost as if it remains, solely as a courtesy to others, an otherwise splendid compliment to his unnatural beauty. Of course, one claims that beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder, but Raziel possesses an aura of almost effeminate splendor, rather than a masculine presence. Indeed, he has often been mistaken for a woman, in the past, a notion he finds quite hilarious.
Personality
Accompanying this creature's otherworldly presence is a personality to match. Relaxed, calm and professional, Raziel treads forth with a sense of zeal in each step. He is unrelenting, though not obnoxious in the way this is portrayed. No, Raziel Lunaris reflects the grace provided by Knights of a long forgotten tale. He is polite indeed, but merciless in execution. The gestalt speaks with words considered most peculiar in this day and age, echoing his image of a creature certainly of a bygone age. He is chivalrous, make no mistake, his heart quite golden, but with this comes a sense of a justice brushing against the most poetic kind. The dragon requires a masterfully placed stroke to be felled, and it shall be so. Raziel does not believe in the ever-repeated process of spiriting a criminal towards the confines of a prison. Those who aim to pick up arms in an attempt to cause harm have sealed their fates in the action.
Now, we are to delve deeper. Raziel Lunaris is quite an affectionate romantic. No, an affectionate individual as a whole. Not only poetic in speech, but also in action, he sees to an embrace much like a language in itself. Is it to instill a sense of positivity in a dark situation? Yes, indeed. He is not above enjoying a movie with friends, laughing at a joke or sharing a drink. Indeed, Raziel adores conversation, especially of a more philosophical nature.
Raziel is loyal, unwavering and vigilant. He is a modern-day knight, and those he considers friends are family and soul mates. He wastes no time before spilling blood in the name of his beliefs. Though, do not consider this young man rash or impulsive. Rather, he is the opposite. Carefully assessing a situation before acting, Raziel is as willing to wield his tongue's razor edge as he is ready to draw a sword. It all comes down to what his opponent shackles to the consequences of their actions.
On the flip side, Raziel abhors firearms and modern-day weaponry. He sees it as a far step from honorable means of combat, and does not hide the opinion behind any level of silk or glamour.
Bio
Raziel's past is clouded in mystery, indeed. Where did he come from? How old is he? These are answers he appears reluctant in answering. Yes, Raziel is, as one can quite clearly tell, by far older than he appears. If only by a decade or a century, however, is difficult to tell. While unknown to most, there are those who know of the Order he served. The Obsidian Rose, a secretive order of quite old-fashioned crime fighters, they maintained a strong presence in Brittan. Indeed, Raziel Lunaris is, in fact, the only Obsidian Knight to remain, and has traveled the world for many years to exact the justice once decided by the order he so zealously served.
These are, however, new times. The knight's exploits were not difficult to notice by the JLA, and his methods were far from what one might consider that of an anti-hero. Though he worked alongside the JLA as an extended hand for some time, Raziel eventually joined the organization as he saw it much like a modern development of what he once considered his home order.
Ressurected by a dark magician, the very beginning of Raziel's past drew him little more than a bodyguard, until such time as his master was killed by another wielder of magic. From that point on, Raziel was freed from the control of his creator.
Supporting Characters
Walter Dennise – Butler.
Extra
Raziel claims to be an alien. He keeps it a closely guarded secret, that he is, in fact, a risen dead.
I'd like to play this character instead, if possible. He shares similarities with Willow. This was the original character I was considering.
Player Name
@Shard
Public Identity
Raziel Lunaris has no secret identity.
Status
Justice League.
Age
Raziel is unsure of his actual age. However, he appears to be in his early twenties, or late teens.
City
Metropolis.
Day Job
Raziel is a full-time hero.
Species, (includes powers.)
Notes
🌑 A resurrected creature, brought back to life through the use of highly powerful necromancy. These creatures are bound to their necromancer until the latter dies.
🌑 A revenant has no memory of their lives. However, they do have a free will and full understanding of their surroundings. Despite this, a revenant is forced to obey their master until the latter passes on.
🌑 These creatures are most often used as bodyguards.
🌑 To create a revenant, several life sacrifices are required.
Appearance
🌒 Revenants are pale and possess black eyes.
🌒 They are scrawny, and somewhat sickly looking.
🌒 A Revenant has small claws at the end of their fingers, rather than ordinary nails.
🌒 Additionally, a Revenant has sharp, pointy teeth.
Power
🌓 A revenant possesses the power to automatically regenerate from any amount of damage, granted a set of restrictions. This regenerative process is almost instantaneous and regrows severed limbs if it comes to such. This also prevents a revenant from aging, entirely.
Power - Weaknesses
🌗 The more a revenant heals, the more tired they get, which leads to eventual fainting.
🌗 Cutting the nape in a revenant's neck instantly kills them, severing the contact between their brain and spine.
🌗 Damaging a revenant's brain will lead to memory loss after the regeneration process.
🌗 While on blessed ground, a revenant cannot heal. If killed on blessed ground, if the nape on their neck isn't cut, they will return to life upon removal from holy soil.
🌗 Damage caused by holy and blessed weaponry requires a night's sleep to fully heal.
🌗 Cauterizing the stump of a severed limb before regeneration takes hold, will prevent that limb from growing back, until the cauterized flesh is removed.
🌗 Drowning a revenant will kill them due to shutting off oxygen to the brain.
🌗 A Revenant is sensitive to light. While not on the level of a vampire, the sun causes them discomfort.
🌗 Holy symbols similarly causes them discomfort and are distracting.
Features
🌙 A revenant does not require nourishment. Their regeneration keeps their body healthy.
🌙 Revenants possess physical prowess comparable to peak human capabilities.
Limitations
🌘 A revenant requires sleep, like any mortal.
🌘 They also require air, and are subject to exhaustion.
🌘 Revenants have a free will, but are also subject to emotions and everything that comes with it.
🌘 While under the control of a necromancer, a revenant is aware of their actions, but have no way of disobeying.
🌘 Eating will cause the revenant to convulse and very painfully puke the food. They can, however, drink liquids.
🌘 Revenants are completely unable to use any kind of magic, except passively enchanted items. They cannot activate enchanted items such as wands.
🌘 A revenant is susceptible to both a necromancer's ability to control undead, and a sorcerer's ability to control living minds.
🌘 Silver is a deterrent for Revenants and burns their skin upon contact. This damage cannot regenerate on the spot but requires a night’s undisturbed rest.
🌑 A resurrected creature, brought back to life through the use of highly powerful necromancy. These creatures are bound to their necromancer until the latter dies.
🌑 A revenant has no memory of their lives. However, they do have a free will and full understanding of their surroundings. Despite this, a revenant is forced to obey their master until the latter passes on.
🌑 These creatures are most often used as bodyguards.
🌑 To create a revenant, several life sacrifices are required.
Appearance
🌒 Revenants are pale and possess black eyes.
🌒 They are scrawny, and somewhat sickly looking.
🌒 A Revenant has small claws at the end of their fingers, rather than ordinary nails.
🌒 Additionally, a Revenant has sharp, pointy teeth.
Power
🌓 A revenant possesses the power to automatically regenerate from any amount of damage, granted a set of restrictions. This regenerative process is almost instantaneous and regrows severed limbs if it comes to such. This also prevents a revenant from aging, entirely.
Power - Weaknesses
🌗 The more a revenant heals, the more tired they get, which leads to eventual fainting.
🌗 Cutting the nape in a revenant's neck instantly kills them, severing the contact between their brain and spine.
🌗 Damaging a revenant's brain will lead to memory loss after the regeneration process.
🌗 While on blessed ground, a revenant cannot heal. If killed on blessed ground, if the nape on their neck isn't cut, they will return to life upon removal from holy soil.
🌗 Damage caused by holy and blessed weaponry requires a night's sleep to fully heal.
🌗 Cauterizing the stump of a severed limb before regeneration takes hold, will prevent that limb from growing back, until the cauterized flesh is removed.
🌗 Drowning a revenant will kill them due to shutting off oxygen to the brain.
🌗 A Revenant is sensitive to light. While not on the level of a vampire, the sun causes them discomfort.
🌗 Holy symbols similarly causes them discomfort and are distracting.
Features
🌙 A revenant does not require nourishment. Their regeneration keeps their body healthy.
🌙 Revenants possess physical prowess comparable to peak human capabilities.
Limitations
🌘 A revenant requires sleep, like any mortal.
🌘 They also require air, and are subject to exhaustion.
🌘 Revenants have a free will, but are also subject to emotions and everything that comes with it.
🌘 While under the control of a necromancer, a revenant is aware of their actions, but have no way of disobeying.
🌘 Eating will cause the revenant to convulse and very painfully puke the food. They can, however, drink liquids.
🌘 Revenants are completely unable to use any kind of magic, except passively enchanted items. They cannot activate enchanted items such as wands.
🌘 A revenant is susceptible to both a necromancer's ability to control undead, and a sorcerer's ability to control living minds.
🌘 Silver is a deterrent for Revenants and burns their skin upon contact. This damage cannot regenerate on the spot but requires a night’s undisturbed rest.
Non-Power Weaknesses
🌕Technology
Raziel is quite conservative, and is technologically inept.
🌕Firearms
He refuses to use them, and frankly doesn’t know how to.
🌕Flamboyance
Raziel is a swordsman. His abilities do not allow for flashy displays, and he cannot cause explosions with his mind.
🌕Soda
Yes, he is addicted to it.
Skills
🌚 Swordsmanship.
🌚 Martial Arts.
🌚 Acrobatics.
Appearance
Once your eyes come to greet this figure, they would be met by a pale shape, indeed. Standing slender and thin, at no more than the average height of five feet and seven inches, this creature appears to carry with him a sense of honor and nobility. Is it assertiveness? A position of self-awareness? Raziel armorers himself with professionalism, an aura of calm and harmony surrounding this peculiar individual. Matched only by the silence of his footsteps, Raziel Lunaris speaks with an assertive, yet relaxed tone. He does not find a need in making himself heard, beyond the initial attempt. One could perhaps consider this an act of arrogance. Though, if we are to shift our attention to the young man's physical appearance, one will quickly note a thick mop of raven hair atop his head. Strands proceed down in a set of bangs, somewhat obfuscating the obsidian gaze which in turn would appear to pierce an onlooker's glare. Flawless, almost unnaturally so, Raziel possesses chalk white skin without sight of a single blemish brought forth through age, nor conflict.
He seems to have grasped the mature age of twenty winters to claim, and moves with steps comparable to that of a silent shadow. With a straight back and a curious gaze, he can often be seen analyzing a sight in silence. Working out the machinations in his head, Raziel often sees it fit to consider his words before uttering them to any who might hear.
His body is of the slender type, indeed. There does not appear to be any visible muscles to view, would you gaze upon his naked shape. Rather, much like a dancer, his frame is lithe and graceful, not at all belonging to one who wields a blade. Indeed, a person might, in fact, find it disturbing how this gentleman, for that is what he is, meets your gaze with a fixed sight of his own. Never yielding, never relenting, those obsidian orbs resting above a small nose will retain their target with harmonic bliss to accompany the assertiveness.
A smile is often seen upon his lips, though quite somber in nature. It is almost as if it remains, solely as a courtesy to others, an otherwise splendid compliment to his unnatural beauty. Of course, one claims that beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder, but Raziel possesses an aura of almost effeminate splendor, rather than a masculine presence. Indeed, he has often been mistaken for a woman, in the past, a notion he finds quite hilarious.
Personality
Accompanying this creature's otherworldly presence is a personality to match. Relaxed, calm and professional, Raziel treads forth with a sense of zeal in each step. He is unrelenting, though not obnoxious in the way this is portrayed. No, Raziel Lunaris reflects the grace provided by Knights of a long forgotten tale. He is polite indeed, but merciless in execution. The gestalt speaks with words considered most peculiar in this day and age, echoing his image of a creature certainly of a bygone age. He is chivalrous, make no mistake, his heart quite golden, but with this comes a sense of a justice brushing against the most poetic kind. The dragon requires a masterfully placed stroke to be felled, and it shall be so. Raziel does not believe in the ever-repeated process of spiriting a criminal towards the confines of a prison. Those who aim to pick up arms in an attempt to cause harm have sealed their fates in the action.
Now, we are to delve deeper. Raziel Lunaris is quite an affectionate romantic. No, an affectionate individual as a whole. Not only poetic in speech, but also in action, he sees to an embrace much like a language in itself. Is it to instill a sense of positivity in a dark situation? Yes, indeed. He is not above enjoying a movie with friends, laughing at a joke or sharing a drink. Indeed, Raziel adores conversation, especially of a more philosophical nature.
Raziel is loyal, unwavering and vigilant. He is a modern-day knight, and those he considers friends are family and soul mates. He wastes no time before spilling blood in the name of his beliefs. Though, do not consider this young man rash or impulsive. Rather, he is the opposite. Carefully assessing a situation before acting, Raziel is as willing to wield his tongue's razor edge as he is ready to draw a sword. It all comes down to what his opponent shackles to the consequences of their actions.
On the flip side, Raziel abhors firearms and modern-day weaponry. He sees it as a far step from honorable means of combat, and does not hide the opinion behind any level of silk or glamour.
Bio
Raziel's past is clouded in mystery, indeed. Where did he come from? How old is he? These are answers he appears reluctant in answering. Yes, Raziel is, as one can quite clearly tell, by far older than he appears. If only by a decade or a century, however, is difficult to tell. While unknown to most, there are those who know of the Order he served. The Obsidian Rose, a secretive order of quite old-fashioned crime fighters, they maintained a strong presence in Brittan. Indeed, Raziel Lunaris is, in fact, the only Obsidian Knight to remain, and has traveled the world for many years to exact the justice once decided by the order he so zealously served.
These are, however, new times. The knight's exploits were not difficult to notice by the JLA, and his methods were far from what one might consider that of an anti-hero. Though he worked alongside the JLA as an extended hand for some time, Raziel eventually joined the organization as he saw it much like a modern development of what he once considered his home order.
Ressurected by a dark magician, the very beginning of Raziel's past drew him little more than a bodyguard, until such time as his master was killed by another wielder of magic. From that point on, Raziel was freed from the control of his creator.
Supporting Characters
Walter Dennise – Butler.
Extra
Raziel claims to be an alien. He keeps it a closely guarded secret, that he is, in fact, a risen dead.
Economical Standing
Raziel Lunaris is quite rich. Actually, he is filthy rich. Raziel has a lot of money.
Habits
Speaking in a flowery language.
Being edgy.
Being fabulous.
Likes
Soda.
Whiskey.
Conversation.
The waltz.
Masquerades.
Swords.
Duels.
Dogs.
Wolves.
Dislikes
Guns.
Obnoxious people.
Loud people.
Rudeness.
Vulgarity.
Dishonor.
Weapon
Raziel is in the possession of a sword by the name Obsidian Edge. This weapon is quite peculiar, as its blade appears sharp to what seems like a supernatural extent. Additionally, this weapon maintains its edge, even throughout the myriad of uses it has seen.
Gear
Pets
Raziel has a massive wolf who follows him closely. If asked, he will claim that Midnight and Raziel have known eachother since the canine was a pup. (Midnight is by no means a combat pet.)
Home
Raziel Lunaris is quite rich. Actually, he is filthy rich. Raziel has a lot of money.
Habits
Speaking in a flowery language.
Being edgy.
Being fabulous.
Likes
Soda.
Whiskey.
Conversation.
The waltz.
Masquerades.
Swords.
Duels.
Dogs.
Wolves.
Dislikes
Guns.
Obnoxious people.
Loud people.
Rudeness.
Vulgarity.
Dishonor.
Weapon
Raziel is in the possession of a sword by the name Obsidian Edge. This weapon is quite peculiar, as its blade appears sharp to what seems like a supernatural extent. Additionally, this weapon maintains its edge, even throughout the myriad of uses it has seen.
Gear
Pets
Raziel has a massive wolf who follows him closely. If asked, he will claim that Midnight and Raziel have known eachother since the canine was a pup. (Midnight is by no means a combat pet.)
Home
<Snipped quote by Double>
Uh, I think I would like that ;)
Okay. Ya have anything in mind?
I'm tempted to straight up steal the CW Captain Cold because Wentworth Miller is awesome.
"Make the plan,
execute the plan,
expect the plan to go off the rails,
...throw away the plan."
I'll try not to though. Can't guarantee I won't at least steal a quote or two.
Could be good to discuss prior relationships between characters as a whole. Would also be fun to write down a character relationship sheet, eventually.
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@Double
Do it! He was bar none the bet part of any series he was in. Yes I am still bitter about what happens.
Do it! He was bar none the bet part of any series he was in. Yes I am still bitter about what happens.
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@Avanhelsing Kid Solomon is definitely accepted. Can't wait to see more of him in the universe. He'll definitely be 'that guy' in the Titans who wears street clothes. That's just too good of a look not to use with all of the tats. I think that was one of the reasons I didn't try and use Constantine in the last game as a primary, your magic guy just seemed too cool for me to step on any toes.
@Shard I wouldn't mind the character change but of the two I like Evermore 10x more. The rich guy backstory and possible friendship with Bruce Wayne, his limited power set, as well as the look with the hood and face mask are all just well put together and something I can really work with in the game.
@Double I definitely might use a C or D list rogue as a villain for my Secondary, as soon as I figure out who that will be LOL. Right now I've got Replicant as part of Sideways story similar to his introduction in the comics.
This would be a good idea once the IC gets going and our characters interact a bit.
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@Shard I wouldn't mind the character change but of the two I like Evermore 10x more. The rich guy backstory and possible friendship with Bruce Wayne, his limited power set, as well as the look with the hood and face mask are all just well put together and something I can really work with in the game.
2 Titans spots left.
3 JLU spots left.
3 JLU spots left.
@Double I definitely might use a C or D list rogue as a villain for my Secondary, as soon as I figure out who that will be LOL. Right now I've got Replicant as part of Sideways story similar to his introduction in the comics.
Could be good to discuss prior relationships between characters as a whole. Would also be fun to write down a character relationship sheet, eventually.
This would be a good idea once the IC gets going and our characters interact a bit.
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1x Thank
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@Omega Man
THANK YOU! I literally chose that pic cause the tats looked old fashioned and very magic with k. I wanted him to look both modern and old at the same time. The idea was the tats could help him with his magic. I would have been fine with Constatine. Lord knows we had more magic than most in the first one and John Constatine would have been a fun mentor for Liam. Regardless, I would love him to the the street clothes dude and I am so happy to be back!
THANK YOU! I literally chose that pic cause the tats looked old fashioned and very magic with k. I wanted him to look both modern and old at the same time. The idea was the tats could help him with his magic. I would have been fine with Constatine. Lord knows we had more magic than most in the first one and John Constatine would have been a fun mentor for Liam. Regardless, I would love him to the the street clothes dude and I am so happy to be back!
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