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@Letter Bee

Ashton now fits more in line with the rest of the non-natives. Flame does as well, and his backstory is an improvement. The fact that they are still lovers could pose a problem, but I'm willing to give you the benefit of the doubt on that. So long as they aren't exclusively interacting with each other all the time.

I am still unsure if I'm going to award a magical boy transformation to both of them. A transformation DB would be quite rare (even among Dbs, which are suppose to be rare), and awarding a second one to ashton's boyfriend feels like something that is more rare than winning the power ball lottery. That's one in a hundred-and-seventy-five-million for anyone wondering. Also to keep in mind that how the character behaves and trains will determine the type of DB he gets. Like Ashton will probably get his “ideal image” if he has an ideal he's constantly striving for. Maybe Flame could have something that serves the same purpose but is a bit different, as he seems more arrogant and probably doesn't have an ideal form. I still say that donning actual costumes would be the easiest way to accomplish this.

However, they are both accepted. You may post them in the character tab.

@FamishedPants

We talked about his ability to learn, so that's fine.

I see you only lowered one of his scores below C like I asked, which is ok. But because Alistair is starting with two elements, he is going to see growth much slower than the other non-natives, and even some of the natives. This is to account for the extra magical discipline he's learning.

But Alistair Archibald is accepted. You may post them in the character tab.

@Erode

I think you know what the class section is for, and I'd like it filled out correctly.

I believe Alice gave you the rundown on your strange magic set up, so if you insist to continue this route, all I can say is that you've been warned,

Everything else appears to be in order however.

@Phonic

Looks good. Fredehildr “Frede” Merogasque is accepted. You may post them in the character tab.

@Seirei No Hai

Gris Ayt Forye may be posted in the character tab now.

Elque Ayt Forye looks good. Much like with Letter Bee's characters, it is not ideal that you have two characters that know each other so well. But if they aren't always together this shouldn't be a problem. You can post her in the character tab as well.

Since the RP hasn't started yet, I'm going to hold off on giving people more than 2 characters until we see how everything is.




Boom, more accepts!

I noticed a few non-natives forgot to include return by death as an abstract magic. Make sure to add that to your sheets.
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@BrokenPromise

I misread the original review as having C average, so I lowered both to D. But I'll move my app over to character tab, then. Ahrigato.
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First character of two!


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Gris Ayt Forye may be posted in the character tab now.

Elque Ayt Forye looks good. Much like with Letter Bee's characters, it is not ideal that you have two characters that know each other so well. But if they aren't always together this shouldn't be a problem. You can post her in the character tab as well.

Since the RP hasn't started yet, I'm going to hold off on giving people more than 2 characters until we see how everything is.


Don't worry about it. Gris is like that one NPC who rarely goes out and Elque is the adventurer type
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@Cu Chulainn

Father Jameson Walker is accepted, you may post him in the character tab. I'm actually interested in seeing how he handles a world that doesn't worship his god.

@FamishedPants

Alright. As I've said before, the stronger you start, the slower you'll grow.

@Seirei No Hai

It's not a pressing concern of mine, but I just thought I'd mention it.

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Done.

Now gimme that guardian boiiiii. @BrokenPromise
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@Althiel Irene Thenille Arcadia is accepted. You may post her in the character tab. I'll see about making an NPC before the RP goes up.




First IC post will likely go up sunday/monday EST time. So for those of you still working on CS, there's still time.
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@liferusher looks good to me! Butter ball Aki is accepted. You may post her in the character tab.
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@BrokenPromise (O_O) Wow this place exploded in numbers fast.

I am curious about here, so i, er, have a couple questions if that is ok.

1. Is there any more room? I suppose potentially in the non-native realm of things. XD

2. I do have another question too, though. Any limits on the flow and such of non-natives?

Thank you for your time. ^^;
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@Crusader Lord Questions are fine. Better to ask than to not ask.

1: I'm actually not too picky about natives or non-native character ratios at this point. There should be objectively more natives anyway, being that this is their world.

2: I go by a case by case basis, and it depends on what you want to do with your character. Genuinely speaking, your "average" score should be around the C level, but depending on what you want to do with the character, I would let you start with a higher or lower average depending on your character. Like I made Famished drop his score to D/D because he wanted to start with two elements. Though if your character was a paraplegic, we could justify making them magically gifted as a trade off for their lack of movement. But also keep in mind that the weaker a character is, the faster they scale up. so characters with low scores are most likely going to be the first ones to acquire authorities or other powers before everyone else.

I'm a bit less restrictive when it comes to natives, but they don't start with return by death. I'm okay with most stuff as long as it doesn't go too far above the current power scale. But again, weaker natives will get cool stuff faster. But it's a bit harder to really balance natives because there are factors like their race, how wealthy they are, if they're going to help or oppose the non-natives, etc.
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@BrokenPromise I'm definitely interested in this!

Quick question- can flow and life energy improve over time?

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Here's a cs for you to consider as well,

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@Guy0fV4lor@Crusader Lord

Aaron and Aerith are both accepted, you may post them in the character tab.

I have decided to close the RP off for now, as we are getting up there as far as our player count is concerned. The RP will still be open to those who are working on their sheets. (you know who you are)

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@Red Alice

Frederica von Freytag is accepted, move her over to the character tab.




First post is up, you may begin posting...now.

For Non-natives:


Father Jameson Walker , Alistair Archibald, and Flame Brooks are at the location marked “starting location.”

Nobuhiro Nishioka, Chieko Okawa, and Aerith Hastings are located in suttling's basin, Exact location is probably somewhere under the “suttlings” text.

Aaron Yang, Hilda Gunnarsson, Yuuki Kimura, and Ashton Andrews are in the golden quarter. For simplicity, we'll say they're in the middle of the road with “golden quarter” written across it.

For natives:


Priestella is far from a calm little city. It's apparent that the local bandits have become far too strong for the local law enforcement, and aid has been specifically requested from the king's army to come and clean house. But they won't arrive for another month or so yet. Priestella is on lock down, and only certain privileged people have permits that allow them in and out of the city. An example of some people who might have such permits would be travailing merchants, licensed adventurers, etc.
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