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Hidden 6 yrs ago 6 yrs ago Post by chiclerat
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@Blackstripe Thank you! I read over it all before posting. I love how in-depth the world building you've done is. :D
@Bluetommy I'll definitely check it out, thank you!

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@Blackstripe Thank you! I read over it all before posting. I love how in-depth the world building you've done is. :D
@Bluetommy I'll definitely check it out, thank you!

-- Should I post my application in this thread? I just noticed there was another tab for characters.


Yeah post it in here for review and once it is reviewed and accepted you can move it to the character's tab (shortened to CS here on the site).
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Ok so I no metahumans aren't around till 2019 but this character is just so beautiful and I think he's really cool so please have this be ok.


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@Compulsive86Alright, since he was staying off the radar it should be fine. Metahumans could appear before 2019, they were just very, incredibly rare and rather weak. Since your character fits both of those, I think it should be fine to accept him. :P
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@Compulsive86Alright, since he was staying off the radar it should be fine. Metahumans could appear before 2019, they were just very, incredibly rare and rather weak. Since your character fits both of those, I think it should be fine to accept him. :P


*begins to dance* YAY
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Below is a sheet for his possible nemesis, the gist is an Amazon version of Lex Luthor. I intend on treating her more as an NPC than a character I would do alot of individual posts for. I just like to have a CS to cover all the bases.

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@CaptainSully Alright, we've discussed it in Discord.

A few things. In the old thread, we had a previous Superman who went inactive. In-Universe, we had his character die during the One Week War, and his DNA has been used since, so he's still considered part of our RP's "Canon". Please, if you would, read over it: roleplayerguild.com/posts/4414078

As you can see, he was a bit of jerk himself.

He was killed by a Titan during the war, as I said. Now he came to Earth during Krypton's civil war, whereas your character didn't leave until the planet's destruction, so your character could have just arrived at a later date than his. I don't think there'll be too much conflict in the lore between you two.

Where the problems begin, however, is the killing antihero thing.

See, antiheroes are fine at the lower tiers, where they can't potentially do too much damage or ruin too many people's days. They can also hide their activities much more easily, since they're operating on such a smaller scale. In the case of your character, however, he would be viewed as a major threat and probably find himself under attack by the likes of Lady Arcana, Captain Quantum, Raymond, Velocity, and many other powerful heroes who wouldn't tolerate his actions.

Against all of that, he would be taken down pretty quickly.

So all I really want from you is to basically tone the antihero stuff way down. After all, the last Kryptonian was kind of an asshole too, and he died rather unceremoniously. Wouldn't that maybe make Leo want to give everyone a better impression of his people?
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Powerhouse Street Tier

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Anyone mind telling me what's going on at this exact moment? Or maybe some suggestions in where to jump in?
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Anyone mind telling me what's going on at this exact moment? Or maybe some suggestions in where to jump in?


We just need Blackstripe and Blazion to finish up another quick post, and then people are free to start posting.
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Sorry! It's easy to forget that not everyone are discord junkies like us. We just needed to get the opening little segment detailing everything that's been happening in the world out of the way. However, it is now done.

Feel free to post openings to your characters!
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@BluetommyLooks fine to me, approved.
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@Blackstripe Yeah I see.

Would attempts to force confessions through fear be acceptable? Not saying torture but implied threats of violence like dangling a thief from the ledge of a building. Basically he’d be more Batman than anti-hero in his approach, using fear to get convictions while avoiding murder.

If that’s still too out there and you want him to be even closer to the DC clean cut version of Superman than I’ll go with that.
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@CaptainSullyWell, I wouldn't reject your character if that's the route you really wanted to go, just so long as he stopped at threats.

Honestly, though, we're kind of drowning in edge at the moment. Lots of anti-heroes. We already have a Batman who kind of fills the whole "through fear" angle too. So while (if your heart's set on a darker Superman) I won't say no, I'd honestly love a more clean cut one.

My own character, Lady Arcana (basically Captain Marvel/Shazam) is in a bad place in her life right now, and could really use some inspiration, so he wouldn't be unappreciated. :3
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@Blackstripe Yeah I’ll make the switch, no problem. 25 years old but a bit childish and generally light hearted. Maybe somewhat Goku-esque if you’re at all familiar with Dragonball in terms of his personality.

Got the Mrs around tonight so likely won’t be able to edit until tomorrow.
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@CaptainSullySure, sounds interesting.
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Here we go, let me know if I need to change anything at all. Also I'm not sure how to make my post look all cool with the button to open it up to be longer or whatever.

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Name:
Khalathrax, Lord of Chaos, The First Fallen

Origin city/Planet:
Unknown Tribe of Humanity, Earth-148

Hometown:
The Tower of Khalathrax, situated in the centre of the Lands of Blood and Fire

Sex:
N/A

Race:
Once Human, now a Lord of Chaos

Height:
Prime Form: Estimated between 40 to 50 feet high.

Weight:
N/A - Nobody really knows how much Khalathrax 'weighs', considering the Lord shapes their body according to their whims.

Age:
Nobody knows, perhaps not even the Lord themselves.

Birth Date:
Nobody knows, perhaps not even the Lord themselves.




Icon:
Khalathrax's Icon is the most ancient and powerful of all the symbols of Chaos; the Star of Chaos, also known as the Eight-Pointed Star.


Personality:
Khalathrax is best summed up in a single word; rage. Fuelled by little more than primordial anger, fury and bloodlust, Khalathrax will stop at nothing to slake their ever-growing thirst for violence, destruction and death. Khalathrax despises those who would seek to stop their reign of terror, and even other forces of Chaos that may attempt to intercede for their own benefit often find themselves the target of the First Fallen's unstoppable fury. With a bellow, Khalathrax directs their forces ever onward, over the ruined husks of buildings, the blood-soaked ground stained with the vitae of those who thought they could stop a Lord of Chaos in their prime. There is no mercy. There is no remorse. All Khalathrax knows is to kill, maim, and burn. Khalathrax will stop at nothing until they are Lord of the Ashes... and from Earth, the dominion of Chaos will spread through the Cosmos, and the stagnation of Order will finally give way to the unending slaughter of Chaos.

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Biography:

Character History/Origin:




Nemesis:
The Lords of Order

Allies:
The Lords of Chaos

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@chicleratLooks good, accepted.
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