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Working on a character with Kinetic Energy Absorption with some ways to manipulate it. Nothing like Gambit, but you'll see.
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I'll do bullets so its easier on us all to read, for the sake of things.

1. I can always shift down to one turret, no big issue there. Build more as needed.
2. Non-lethal related weakness can play into the whole savior factor, but as for what you said regarding building level impacts, given that's a high end, near maximum output at the given moment for the suit, yeah, shut down and reboot would work well enough.
3. Lack of utility can be rectified during plot, as I noted she ran out of funds, as her father didn't leave her a lot to work with even then. I could also add more to the whole non-lethal weakness, as that could also be added up with "tries to avoid harming innocents as much as possible, hence why weapons are low end stuff." As a character mentality with her is that she's trying to avoid doing damage that's unneeded. Also why the cannon's maximum setting is still kind of low, in a sense. Considering she's sort of iron man, but a poor mechanic trying to get by between odd jobs and whatever being a hero nets in funds' iron man. Iron Man had an entire company at his back, same as Batman, kid's just got what her dad left her and whatever else she finds in junkyards.
4. I assume you mean super strong for the narrative? That's understandable.
5. Living battery can be easy, too much can make her woozy, or force her to sleep, or burn up a lot of calories, and force her to eat. Granted, her own carefulness would also make this an issue that can be overcome, usually.
6. That is true, but Iron Man himself once said he was just a man with a suit. What he didn't say at least at first was that he was also a billionaire. But I can understand the concern. Its all about brain over brawn with this character here, for the most part.
7. All in all, whole concept is just, kid wants to honor her father's memory, but also doesn't want to be in his shadow. If this thread lasts long enough, perhaps I'll go more into detail as to what happened exactly to her father, but that's for another time. Same for whatever adventures he got into as a hero before he retired, and notes on his nemesis.
8. I wouldn't worry too much, as we're all here to have fun(at least that's what me and the friends I suggested check out this thread wanted to do), so if for some reason, something I'm doing against odds causes actual issues, just tell me either privately or in the OOC, and I can adjust as needed.

I can make the minor tweaks before I post the finished version to the character thread, since you said, if I'm reading earlier right, its basically approved.
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So my CS is below. I'm flexible with pretty much everything if you want me to change anything.

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@CaptainSully This is very attractive looking CS but did you Even read the Zeroth Post?

EDIT: Change the teleportation to something else and I think you'll be fine.

EDIT 2: Also 'being human' isn't a weakness as there are non super-powered heroes who are simply human.
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I've got a WIP, mostly gotta work on her history, but her power set is pretty much set.



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@Reflection Looking good so far.
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@King Tai@Stern Algorithm@DocRock@Duoya

IC is open now, for you who are approved you can start posting.

Ive got a lot preparations for New years so I'll have to come in with a post a bit later. But feel free to star character developing.

You can puppet any of the 'mob' enemies/gangs for your RPing but if you want to take on a named villain let me know so I can puppet them.
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Gotcha, gonna be a bit busy on my end for a bit, and I'm working on Villain!Serene for Pitfalls, so I may take a bit. Plus stuff elsewhere. But yeah, expect something soon.
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@King Tai

I might have Embryon appear in Southside. I assume hospitals there are shittier than others, while also having a high influx of trauma patients and victims of violent crime, so the perfect place to pull off a mysterious miracle healer operation. But that would mean strange security footage of a pink, fleshy monster scouring the halls of the hospitals, like a Xenomorph.
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Oh god, that could give me an in.

I dunno. Trying to think of what to make my first post is tricky...
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@King Tai

I might have Embryon appear in Southside. I assume hospitals there are shittier than others, while also having a high influx of trauma patients and victims of violent crime, so the perfect place to pull off a mysterious miracle healer operation. But that would mean strange security footage of a pink, fleshy monster scouring the halls of the hospitals, like a Xenomorph.


Hey, no complaints here. In my mind, the hospitals are shittier than others. And that's if all the camera's are working lol. Would be an interesting reaction for Black Fury to see a pink looking alien being. He will initially trip out the first time seeing em.
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Tried to transmutate the character a couple of times, but I can't seem to get it under a slightly OP range. Sorry.
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@Duoya

Any chance you could use a hand there? Or you good on your own?
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@DocRock
If you want to hop in, I have no complaints.
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Right on, I'll just have to think of how to make the intro work, he's in Downtown, right? And it's night time, aye?
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Actually, after a reread, not sure why my character would be out that far, given they live in Downtown, lol. I didn't read the setting previously, my bad.
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@Animal
Yeah, its still going, if you haven't submitted someone yet, you should, it'll be fun-

That aside, I feel I could have picked a better color for the other person talking, but ech, didn't see till after.
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@Dynamo Frokane So, I think I'm done. I'm still trying to figure out what to put for Relationships. But otherwise, the character feels as good as they're getting.
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@Dynamo Frokane So, I think I'm done. I'm still trying to figure out what to put for Relationships. But otherwise, the character feels as good as they're getting.


Im keeping an eye on the 'hard light' stuff, that seems very powerful. Set in some limits about the size and the complexity of the hard light shapes.

Otherwise you're approved.
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