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Everyone's favorite necromantic bard is back again, now with 100% more benchmarks.

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Alright, here is Tessa, with the updated style (I had to go back an iteration to find my benchmarks)

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@Stern Algorithm @Tojin

I think everything is kosher enough. Didn't notice any issues reading the sheets.
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HokumPocus RATS WE'RE THE RATS WE ARE THE RATS

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@HokumPocus

Your CS seems serviceable. I see no issues with it unless Supes does. Feel free to stick it in where it belongs.

@Eviledd1984

Same rules apply to all my RPs, but yeah, we've got a shiny 'apply' button and everything.
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@HokumPocus Welcome to the crew!



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Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by Eviledd1984
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@Inkarnate

Okay will get my CS sheet hopefully done today, Do you guys have jackets?
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so how's it goin everybody? anybody bring snacks?
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@Eviledd1984

Outside of issues with adhering to the formatting of the sheet, there’s actually a lot of issues me and Maxx seemed to recognize.

I can summarize this into several key points:

Tone. Your character is not written as a protagonist or even a deuteragonist. While characters who can be typified as “edgy” are more than acceptable for the cast, they need to inherently good-natured and have the ability to mesh with the character roster. This means having a sociability, even if they at times can be confrontational or disliked. The people who treat the chaos of their new existence and new consequences as a means to be a worse person than they were are more suitable to enemies for the cast to overcome rather than being comrades-in-arms.

Incomplete Application. There are missing or invalid fields. You list only one domain, suggest a profession like raider (which I honestly don’t see how it could be a profession in-game), list an incomplete array of benchmarks, and so forth.

Invalid Appearance. People in Pariah Online do not design an avatar, they are represented by their inner self and psychology. I find a pale-faced, vampire-fanged ghoul to be not something that makes a lot of sense and I’m not particularly keen in accepting it. I’ve accepted gender changes, age changes, and some minor things, but I think this one is a whole different level that isn’t appropriate for what I am looking for.

So with that noted, I’m just going to have to reject the application. I’m sorry.
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It's okay,sorry to bring a bother.
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After Sola and Xiro -- or any random inquirers who fit -- do the thing, I think I'll get us moving. Maybe I'll do it earlier. We'll see.
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Posted the finalized version of Eaudenil in the CS tab.
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Lili is officially on the roster. Welcome to the squad!
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If anyone wants me to make post header sets let me know.
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can you make me one
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Can I give Tessa a visual armor upgrade?


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lolwut
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@Inkarnate @ComradeMaxx
Here is my sheet for your review!


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Edited a lore hiccup where the OP said its been three days and not seven days since the 'if you die in the game you die for real' event. This contradicted what was established in the opening post.
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